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Penname: mrsgunsage [Contact]
Real name: My bitches from Drunk Chat Tuesdays call me guns
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Member Since: May 02, 2009
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I'm a part time accountant, full time wife and mommy.  My hubby and I have been blessed with a beautiful daughter and a precious infant son.


I used to write incessantly back in high school and college, even going so far as to have several poems and short stories published... but life got in the way and I fell out of the habit.  As with most talents, when you don't use it, you lose it.  I always regretted the loss of the words...


Being on maternity leave when my son was born in March of 2009, and then having my hours cut to part time left me with a LOT of time on my insomniac hands, and I started reading all of the wonderful stories here at Twilighted.


Somewhere in a sleep deprived fog I was listening to a Heidi Newfield song and had an overwhelming desire to start writing again... and my first fanfic story idea was born.  I've since started a second story, and I'm alternating back and forth on getting them written. 


I'm hoping to have the first one finished and start submitting soon, but I have to go back and do a massive rewrite on three chapters because PPD kind of took the story places it wasn't meant to go.


 


Twilight-wise... I am an E/B girl all the way.  I just realized that in everything I have written or am working on, if Nessie isn't part of the story then Jacob is the bad guy.  Sorry wolf=packers... no Furry love here.


 


**I have a curse.  I have these awesome stories, I get 20 or so chapters in and then I can't finish.  Still trying.  I know I promised to alert a few people if I ever got to the point of posting...**


 


**Well, I'm still trying to get over the speedbumbs in Unrequited, but my other multi-chapter needs massive reworking.  The post partum depression that initially derailed me did too much structural damage to that story and I need to basically start over on it.  I think I'll wait til after Unrequited is being posted though...  It's all just a big mash in my head.**


 


**I think I made a breakthrough in my multi-chap!  WooHoo, go me!  So recap... Multi-chap that is about 75% done now, another one that is languishing until I can figure out how to fix all of the damage my PPD caused it, and three one shots that I work on when I get stuck on chapters.  Good thing I only sleep three hours a night or I'd never get anything done!  GO TEAM INSOMNIACS!**


 


PS:  Just in case anybody wonders... I have a hard time reviewing a story before it's complete.  I can love it with a fiery passion and still not be able to reveiw it effectively.  If I'm reading a story of yours, be patient with me... you'll hear from me at some point I promise!!!!!!


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Summary:

 

Bella meets Edward when he picks up his nephew from her Pre-K class and the sparks fly.  As their feelings for each other grow, Edward has a prior commitment that he is convinced must be seen through. A commitment that is effectively keeping them apart. Are there some complications that even the strongest hearts can't overcome? Can they resist the one thing they can't have--Each other?

To get to the prize, they'll have to survive the temptation of one another, in this emotional waiting game.

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Stephenie Meyer owns any Twilight characters and Twilight plot lines that may appear in this story.  The remainder is my original work.    No copying or reproduction of this work is permitted without my express written authorization.  Copyright 2009 by Brits23.
 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Kate, Rosalie, Sam, Tanya
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Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 124914
[Report This] Published: March 25, 2009 Updated: December 16, 2009


Reviewer: mrsgunsage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I can't wait to see how things resolve with the crazy bizznatch.

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen is Big Man on Campus at his high school in Port Angeles. Bella Swan is a quiet, sarcastic, marches-to-the-beat-of-her-own-drummer girl at Forks High. A part-time job brings them together, and an unlikely friendship and surprising feelings develop. Neither is brave enough to do anything about it, however, and they part ways when Edward heads off to college. Their paths cross again after a year of no contact, and Edward is determined to not only rekindle their friendship, but to man up and actually do something about his ever-present feelings for Bella.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 144739
[Report This] Published: April 02, 2009 Updated: October 08, 2009


Reviewer: mrsgunsage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I've been dying to hear the prom story since it first got borught up...

Can't wait for the next update!!



Author's Response:

I tried, I really and truly did, but I just couldn't make the first half of the prom story work for this chapter. It really needs to come from Bella's POV. So next chapter, I promise. :)

 
Reviewer: mrsgunsage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

AWWWWWW!  That was just so them.



Author's Response:

I thought so, but it's nice to know others share my view on that. Thank you so much! :)

 
Summary:

 

Edward left Bella, forcing his family to stay away from her. Six years onwards, the Cullens are a mess without Bella and Emmett decides to get away from his angry, angst ridden family and let loose. What he finds in the meanest biker bar in Seatle will send shockwaves through his entire family.

 

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Categories: New Moon Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes Word count: 112765
[Report This] Published: April 07, 2009 Updated: December 04, 2009


Reviewer: mrsgunsage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play

That was totally righteous!

 
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Date: July 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20:Charlie

Happy belated birthday!

I'm glad Bella mended things with Charlie and I hope she gets to go all psycho-lycan-tooth-weilding-badass on Laurent soon!

 
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Date: July 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21:De Ja Vu Reversed

AWW!  Congrats on the bebe!  I just had my FINAL kidlet in March and I'm finally back to pre-fat LOL!

OK, back to the story...   Ooooo, Alice is mad!  I hope she rats him out to the rest of the Cullens and we get a chapter of "everybody hates on Edward and makes him feel like a giant ass" goodness.

 
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Date: August 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25:Cotton is Calling

I never got that whole "it has to be painful to prove you're a virgin" thing either. 

Most little girsl in the last several decades grew up riding bicycles, playing strenuously, and using tampons.  Things like that tend to deal with the hymen BEFORE the age where sexs becomes an issue.

I actually found it refreshing for somebody to write a scene like that withouth the whole blubbering pained virgin in it.

 
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Date: August 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26:Sweets After Sex

Have fun on your vacay!  Can't wait for you to get back and update again.;

 
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Date: September 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29:Strangers In The Night

Are the Volturi turning her?  I mean, the titanium in her heart had to be a needle of venom, but DAMN IT WHO ARE THEY?????   YARHG!

 
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Date: September 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Ashes to Ashes

OK... now knowing the Denalis are involved... my guess was Kate and Garrett at the hospital.  That could explain the red eyes if Garrett hadn't yet fully converted to being a vegetarian...

 
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Date: October 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32:Explanations

WOOOO!  That was awesome.  I wouldn't have guessed Tanya, but I knew something was rotten in Denmark after the last chapter.

 
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Date: October 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34:New Life

Damnit, I want somebody to tackle me into the snow and fuck me sensless too.  Can I have your Edward for a few weeks?

 
Reviewer: mrsgunsage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37:The Lost are now Found

I have loved every step of this crazy journey, and I can't wait for the sequel!!!!

 
Guarding Edward by katmom Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1578]
Summary:

  Guarding Edward

 

A stalker is trying to get close to Edward Masen, a green-eyed 24 year old concert pianist.

 He hires Elite Guardians to keep him safe from the one who is hunting him.

 Bella Cullen is the owner/operator of the company.  She's also a 110 year old vampire.

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  In the MYSTIC AWARDS:

GUARDING EDWARD WON FIRST RUNNER UP IN THE

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Story that makes you feel all warm and fuzzy!


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Other Character, Rosalie, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 48 Completed: Yes Word count: 200265
[Report This] Published: April 07, 2009 Updated: August 30, 2010


Reviewer: mrsgunsage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35~~New Life~~

Well, hopefully Jake doesn't decide to throw a wolf tantrum and sulk about Edward's transformation... never know with him though.



Author's Response:

A *Wolf Tantrum*...that might be interesting!  I think that Paul would wish for that...

Thanks for reading, and the lovely stars!

Kathie

 
Reviewer: mrsgunsage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36~~Preparations~~

YEA!!  Seth is the best non-vamp character and I've always loved him.  I'm glad he gets to be included for a little bit.



Author's Response:

He really is, isn't he?  He gets a bit more *air time* in the next chapter too...

Thanks for reading...and those lovely stars!

Kathie

 
Reviewer: mrsgunsage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue 1.0 Edward

SQUEAL!!!!!!  I thought this would be all over and done with... and dnow there are several epilogues... Christmas in September!!!



Author's Response:

Love CHRISTMAS IN SEPTEMBER!  Your next package, which will be ALICE, should be up in the next couple of days!

Thanks for reading...and those lovely STARS...

Kathie

 
Reviewer: mrsgunsage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 40: Epilogue 3.0 Rosalie

I love how you've written Rose thorugh this whole thing.  She's strong and feisty without the undertones of bitter bitch.  This was a great look into her POV.



Author's Response:

Oh, thank you so much!  *Strong and fiesty*...I like that!

Emmett's Christmas should be in the line-up this evening, and posted soon thereafter.

Thanks for reading, and those lovely stars!

Kathie

 
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Date: September 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 41: Epilogue 4.0 Emmett's Christmas

That was so awesome!  I loved the present he set up for Edward, that was great!!!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed his gift to Edward...he really is a sweet guy!  Thanks for those lovely stars too!

PSA:

Yes, I'm going to copy and paste this into each and every review that I answer today...shameless self promotion you know:

 

Here is the link to the MYSTIC AWARDS...GUARDING EDWARD is up in the CUTE CATEGORY...for a story that makes you feel all fuzzy and warm inside...

 

http://themysticawards.webs.com/vote.htm

 

The voting goes through TODAY and I'd really appreciate your vote!

 

Esme will be up next...she wants to brag on her new sons...and their imprints!  She also wants to tell us about how EVERYONE got a little taste of tainted blood...in the name of solidarity...ah, the fun continues!

 

Thanks, so much, for reading and reviewing...and voting if you chose to do so!

 

Kathie

 

 
Reviewer: mrsgunsage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 42: Epilogue 5.0 Carlisle

Sometimes I can just picture Carlisle as an old fashioned Mad Scientist.  I haven't read the story referenced in you AN, but I like the way you're desensitizing Edward to blood.



Author's Response:

AH, Carlisle as the MAD SCIENTIST! I can see that very clearly!  Glad you think that the desensitizing is working...

Yes, I'm going to copy and paste this into each and every review that I answer today...shameless self promotion you know:

 

Here is the link to the MYSTIC AWARDS...GUARDING EDWARD is up in the CUTE CATEGORY...for a story that makes you feel all fuzzy and warm inside...

 

http://themysticawards.webs.com/vote.htm

 

The voting goes through TODAY and I'd really appreciate your vote!

 

Esme will be up next...she wants to brag on her new sons...and their imprints!  She also wants to tell us about how EVERYONE got a little taste of tainted blood...in the name of solidarity...ah, the fun continues!

 

Thanks, so much, for reading and reviewing...and voting if you chose to do so!

 

Thanks, also, for the lovely rating...

 

Kathie

 

 
Reviewer: mrsgunsage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 44: Epilogue 7.0 Jasper

YES!  We need the Jake POV before the final epilogue!

 

I think it's cool that Jasper wants to undergo the aversion process too.  Even though he had pretty good control in your story, it's nice to know he just wants to be sure...



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, and those love stars, MrsGunsage!

Another vote for Jacob...he's going to be sharing with Vee...she has a few things she wants to say too!

Jasper is such a cool guy, wanting a bit more of the aversion therapy! 

Kathie

 
Reviewer: mrsgunsage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Epilogue 8 Jacob and Vee

That was awesomeness!  I am sad to hear there will only be two more though... this is one of my very favorites.

 
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Date: April 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Epilogue 9.0 Edward

As always YAY!!!

I'm really sad the next epi is it though.  This is my feel good story of choice.  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you MrsGunsage!

I'm rather sad myself...but I hope to make the LAST one really good...

Kathie

 
Reviewer: mrsgunsage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 47: The Final Epilogue

*crying too hard to be coherent*

That was a great ending, but sad.



Author's Response:

Oh...I'm sorry!  But glad you thought it was "great"!

Thanks for reading and those stellar stars!

Kathie

 
Reviewer: mrsgunsage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 48: FGB Auction Chapter

YAY!!!  I loved seeing EG get one last case in, and it was pretty cool that Mick got to join them.  :)



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it, MrsGunsage!  Those prompts made me laugh...and worry about how I was going to get them all into the story...LOL

Thanks for reading, and those lovely stars!

Kathie

 
Summary:

Three months after Edward leaves Bella is still a zombie. She has not yet developed a friendship with Jacob. But one day she finds a human Edward at her door. How does their relationship handle Edward's newfound humanity? 

Another Edward turning human story, but it's different. Things still can never be easy for love. AU. 

Rated NC-17 for underage drinking and later on, violence. No detailed lemons. 

But fluff galore. 

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"The doorbell rang once again and I turned the knob to greet the person. I don't know what happened after that. I only remember a pair of beautiful emerald green eyes looking directly at me."

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Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: No Word count: 60446
[Report This] Published: April 08, 2009 Updated: April 22, 2010


Reviewer: mrsgunsage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Hangover Kisses

They should go to the zoo!  Edward can see all the critters without wanting to eat them and I bet it could be pretty funny if some thought went into it....

 




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