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I was introduced to the world we all know and love by a former of student of mine a couple of months ago. How naive was I to believe that she was just a girl in love with her boyfriend Edward Cullen. Four books,  a movie, and countless fanfics later, I know exactly who Edward Cullen is. :)


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Summary:

Edward leaves Bella, much like the beginning of 'New Moon', however, this time, they are all human and there is quite the twist.  Why did Edward leave Bella?  And what secret is Bella keeping when he leaves?

Can they make a nightmare turn into a dream?

THANKS TO EMERALD_ROSALIE FOR THE ABOVE BANNER AND ATHENALOVE FOR THE BELOW.

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 61 Completed: Yes Word count: 155064
[Report This] Published: April 14, 2009 Updated: August 05, 2010


Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

You definitely have not made it any better...but it was a necessary chapter nontheless.



Author's Response: Alas, it was necessary, if difficult. There is a ray of hope in the next chapter. Thank you for reviewing.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: November 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 45 - Here's to Hoping

I think Carlise came up with a great alternative plan. I also agree that Edward would willingly banish himself for Bella. He is just that kind of person.



Author's Response:

I am sure Edward would, although Carlisle may have wanted to ask him first :(  Still, it was a good plan for any number of reasons.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings

I am sooooo happy there was some good that came out of this. Little baby Swan-Cullen is just what they need to help them get through what is happening to poor Bella. Maybe you really do believe in happy endings!



Author's Response:

I honestly do!

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30 - Little Girls

You did a wonderful job (yet again). You can continue to bounce up and down like Alice would after Bella accepted an invitation to go shopping.

I loved how you made baby Swan-Cullen have his copper hair and her chocolate doe eyes (their most identifiable characteristics--clumsiness doesn't count quite yet). I also loved how you had Edward call her little love. Great idea having Charlie listen in--now he knows Edward's intentions were honorable.



Author's Response:

Eavesdropping is usually not of the good, but, in this case, it was more effective than any conversation that Charlie and Edward could have had.

Little Love.  ::: sigh ::: Part of that came from his pet name for Bella, and part came from the fact that I call my son that!  Still, I thought it fit with the story.

Thanks for reviewing!

 

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

I am far too invested in this story to leave it...so you are stuck with me. I can't wait to find out what Edward names the baby!



Author's Response: I am so glad you are sticking with me! The name is in the very next chapter! Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32 - Classics

I should have totally seen what you were going to name the baby! It makes total sense! Bella would probably love it too. Hell, I even like the name. It has a nice ring to it.

I really liked the interactions between Edward and Esme and Edward and Charlie. They seemed to be sweet, personal moments. The comment about naming babies everyday was classic...like Elizabeth (lame joke, I know)



Author's Response: Lol! I am glad you liked the name! And both Esme and Charlie are really stepping up their game here to try and be thwe parents they feel they should have been all along. Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

You brought back the sadness again. I'm glad that Bella is fighting her way back. It has been so long since we last heard from her (otherwise it would be like new moon from Ocober to January). Oh well, at least it isn't as sad as it was before.



Author's Response:

At least now there is hope, right?

Thanks so much for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

Yay she's really awake! The scene was just how I imagined it. I thought that it was kind of funny how she was still worried that Charlie was going to be so mad at her. How could she not know that he is just so happy to know that she is alive and doing well? I can't wait for edward and bella in the same room!



Author's Response:

LOL!  It's just a gut reaction.  She wakes up and suddenly she's confronted with so much - including running away from her dad.  She just hasn't had the chance too really think yet and realize he's going to be happier that she's alive than angry she ran away.

Edward and Bella in the same room - it's coming.

Thank you for the review!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36 - Throw the Truth

I'm glad Bella wasn't mad at Angela for telling the Cullens. It could have gone either way if it was anyone else. It seems like the next couple of talks are going to be really tough on Bella.



Author's Response: I think Bella wanted to tell them herself, but just didn't have it in her by the time dhe got the courage. In away, Angela's actions are a relief to Bella. Now, however, Bella has a lot to deal with now! Thanks so much for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 37 - Don't Give Up

I just want to see them (Bella and Edward and Elizabeth) happy and healthy in the future.

This was a good chapter...even if it wasn't the talk we all were waiting for, it was realistic, which was your aim. I definitely wouldn't want to deal with Edward yet myself if I was Bella.



Author's Response:

I am glad you understand why I am going down this path.

Thank you so much for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

Good conversation. I'm glad that everything is on the way to being okay with them. It seems like everyone is going about their own way to make edward look better. Now please get us to THE conversation soon!

Happy b-day early! I can't believe that you are almost 18. You have this maturity in your writing that made me peg you older than what you really are.



Author's Response:

I am so sorry that there was a misunderstanding on my age.  My birthday is the 18th, but I'm well older!  LOL!  MUCH!

I am glad you felt I did the converstaion justice!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

Wow, you are sure creative when it comes to finding ways to avoid THE conversation. Happy late b-day....even if you aren't 18 ;)



Author's Response: Lol! I am not avoiding! I promise! It will all make sense in due time! Thank you so much for patiently waiting!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears

Are you sure that Edward and Bella will talk in the next chapter? Maybe Bella and the custodian need to iron out some issues first (hehe). I'm just kidding. I'm not bitter; I am just anxiously waiting for the moment when they will get back to each to each other again.



Author's Response:

LOL!  I understand.

They will see each other in the next chapter.  That I can promise...

Thank you for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together

Their first interaction was very sweet and beautiful. I totally called it when I said that they wouldn't have the conversation yet. However, I have to give you credit for not bringing in the janitor (haha). Can't wait for the next chapter...



Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith

I'm happy with this chapter. Real things happened and real conversations were had. I would still like the conversation with Edward and Bella though...but you are doing a very good job of stalling. It's not even making me anxious anymore. I'm just trying to see how long you will be able to hold out. I'm rooting for you to drag this out as long as you can...hehe. 8D



Author's Response:

I honestly am not purposely stalling... this is just the story that I hear in my head!  It's so hard because it seems like she's been awake for months, but it's only been about 48 hours.  That's a lot to take in in such a short time!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: November 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 43 - The Highway

You better have your laptop behind the steel reinforced door because you aren't allowed out until you give us the happy ending (hehe)! Thanks for the much anticipated talk. I thought that everything would be okay when Bella let him talk first. I though that he would be able to convince her of his love for her...apparently he couldn't make her trust him....you believe in happy endings!!!! I can't believe she was able to say that she didn't want him in the end.



Author's Response:

Ah, this isn't about love or about wanting someone.  It's about trust (which you mentioned as well).  Trust is what enabled her to say that.

Thank you for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: November 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 44 - Fight

I'm glad Jasper is stepping up. Before he seemed to be there to add more drama that wasn't related to Bella and Edward. Now he has some great  advice. Hopefully edward will listen. That tackle sounded awesome.



Author's Response:

Jasper knows how to get his point across like nobody’s business!  He is exactly what Edward needed at this time.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: December 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See

you DO believe in happy endings! Thanks. I am sorry about the story ending, but I'm glad that it is going to end on a high note...at least it seems that way as of now.



Author's Response:

I do!  I do!

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: December 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49 - The Vase

I'm glad that te vase is slowly getting glued back together now. If it han survive it, it will be stronger than ever.



Author's Response:

I am so glad you felt that the vase analogy worked!

 

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: December 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50 - My Forever

I loved the ending! It was perfect and sweet and resonated with permanence.



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!

 

Have a wonderful holiday!

 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Summary:

What if Bella had went back to Phoenix after Edward left her? What if Laurent had found her and Jake and the other wolves weren’t around to protect her? My version of New Moon. Picks up after Edward and the rest of the Cullens leave Forks.


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Carmen, Charlie, Edward, Eleazar, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jacob, Jasper, Kate, Laurent, Phil, Quil, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 9647
[Report This] Published: April 15, 2009 Updated: September 15, 2009


Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Try and Catch me Now

Poor Bella and Edward. Of course he deserves what she did to him because...you know. I hope the family goes after her and explains the situation. An eternity is a long time to go without love.

 

 
Fractured Hearts by cfmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2410]
Summary:

We've all turned the pages on the four blank months in New Moon. Edward left Bella in the woods and told her didn't want her anymore; his arrogance expected that she would just move on with her life. What he never expected was that she wouldn't be able to move on any more than he would. An angry Bella is something he couldn't fathom. What he didn't take into account is that Bella believes that true love is worth fighting for, and she's going to fight to keep Edward and her family. The Cullen abandonment hurt her deeply, but she's turned that pain into rage. What will happen when Bella decides to let them know she's not willing to let them walk away and leave her behind? How will they handle one mere human girl that's extremely pissed off, and willing to do whatever takes to bring them back? The saying "hell hath no fury like a woman scorned" has never rang more true. Bella's angry and on the warpath. Not even a clan of vampires will be able to stop her.

Fractured Hearts

"My heart may have fractured when he left me, but I adamantly refuse to let it shatter. I'm stronger than that, and I'm ready to get nasty. This is going to be a side your family has never seen out of me. I hope you're prepared, because when I'm done taking your stupid, arrogant brother down a few notches, I'm coming after you. Yes, you heard me correctly. You may be small, fast, and graceful, but I'm filled with enough rage at this point to go vampire on your pixie, ballerina ass!"  ~Bella - Chapter 2: Voicemails

Special Thanks to achelle131 for the amazing banner!


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Laurent, Quil, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: The Dirty, Horny Girls Chronicles
Chapters: 30 Completed: No Word count: 225614
[Report This] Published: April 16, 2009 Updated: October 25, 2010


Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: May 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Circle the Wagons

can't wait to see what happens next...



Author's Response:

You and me both. Bella's not giving it all up to me yet. She only letting me see a little a time. She's really become a stubborn little thing. ;)

Thanks for the read and review. I appreciate each and every one.

Much love,

~Lisa

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Blood Doesn't Make a Mom

I loved how sweet and tender this chapter is. I'm glad that Bella has something to turn to that she can call her own (like Edward and his music).



Author's Response:

Awww, thank you so much. The response to Mom!Esme getting the chance to shine has been overwhelming and it just warms my heart that people have liked it so much. I'm also thrilled that everyone is liking the fact that Bella has a previously unrevealed talent that is all her own. Thank you so much for your dedication to this story and for leaving me comments along the way. I always appreciate it.

Much love,

~Lisa

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Invisibly Shaken

I liked how Bella's picture of Edward was the one from the forest. It showed him just how much she really truly saw that day and that he shouldn't be so quick to make assumptions about Bella just because she happened to be human.

As for the Mike incident, I thought it was rather sweet that he was watching out for her. However, being the mindreader that Edward is probably does give Edward the right to treat Mike like that. I thought that Bella handled the Mike situation the best way she knew how.



Author's Response:

Thanks. Yes, Bella has always seen more than Edward realized. It's rather ironic considering he feels that a mere human couldn't possibly see and feel the way that he does. Oh, how wrong our poor Edward is - and I'm glad he's finally realizing it. As for Mike, well, I think he usually gets a bad rap. He's not a bad guy, he just isn't ever going to be the guy for Bella. It's not really his fault, but I love that he tried to warn off Edward. His desire to get the chance to "kick the pretty boy's ass" had me cracking up quite a bit. Thank you so much for continuing to read and leave your thoughts. My readers are the best - and I'll never tire of my appreciation to your dedication to the story.

~Lisa

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Turning Stone into Silly Putty

I really enjoyed Alice's conversation with Bella. It made me a little sad when Alice wanted to see the artwork. The teasing she told Bella to do worked like a charm. The underwear message was very creative. I loved how it just shocked everyone...again. I really like playful Edward.



Author's Response:

It made me a little sad when Alice asked to see Bella's drawings as well. We know that she's seen them, but like she told Bella - it isn't the same as having Bella show them to her. I don't like sad Alice, but luckily she bounces back fairly quickly. ;) I'm glad you enjoyed the message panties. They seem to be fairly popular and Emmett asking Bella "what's the message of the day?" is his new favorite pasttime so I'm sure we'll see more message panties in the future. Thank you so much for your continued dedication to not only reading my story, but also leaving a review. I never tire of reading them.

~Lisa

 




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