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I was introduced to the world we all know and love by a former of student of mine a couple of months ago. How naive was I to believe that she was just a girl in love with her boyfriend Edward Cullen. Four books,  a movie, and countless fanfics later, I know exactly who Edward Cullen is. :)


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Summary:

What if Edward wasn't single when he met Bella? Will he stay with his mate out of loyalty and obligation or will he take a chance and pursue true love? AU for the first book.

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I had always viewed my existence since changing into a vampire as being like a starry night; mostly darkness but with a few scattered bright spots. I had thus far only been able to escape the tedium and misery of this life with a modicum of sanity due to the rare occasions that I was able to make my mate happy.

That was before. Before the Gods of Fate had intervened and made a mockery of my existence, chewing it up and spitting out the pieces. Before Bella Swan had moved to town and I proved unable just to leave her alone. Before my relationship with my mate violently combusted in an act of sadistic pleasure. Now, the storm clouds had rolled in and blocked out all the stars, and my life was a grey, depressing mess.

 

Rated for some swearing and lemons later on.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: No Word count: 81934
[Report This] Published: April 13, 2009 Updated: July 28, 2009


Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

I can't afford to read your teasers anymore...they're just too successful making me anticipate what will happen next.

I do not envy either of them. I can see and agree with both povs regarding the change. I'm glad you are the one writing the story. I just get to sit back and enjoy what you have decided for them.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Nice teaser. I can't help but feel bad for Edward with the marriage thing, however, they weren't meant to be together. Rosalie and Emmett do belong together...they are only doing what they should have done a long time ago (as rosalie pointed out).

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I am so happy that Emmett and Rose are happy. I can't wait for the next chapter. What are they planning on doing? Will Bella just run away?

 
Summary:

Edward leaves Bella, much like the beginning of 'New Moon', however, this time, they are all human and there is quite the twist.  Why did Edward leave Bella?  And what secret is Bella keeping when he leaves?

Can they make a nightmare turn into a dream?

THANKS TO EMERALD_ROSALIE FOR THE ABOVE BANNER AND ATHENALOVE FOR THE BELOW.

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 61 Completed: Yes Word count: 155064
[Report This] Published: April 15, 2009 Updated: August 06, 2010


Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: May 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 - Like This

Please have Angela coontact Emmett soon...



Author's Response:

It is coming.  I haven't forgotten...

Thank you for reviewing.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27 - No

You believe in happy endings. You believe in happy endings You believe in happy endings You believe in happy endings You believe in happy endings You believe in happy endings You believe in happy endings....



Author's Response:

I believe in happy endings.

I believe in happy endings.

I believe in happy endings.

I believe in happy endings.

I believe in happy endings.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: May 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 - Enough

Wow...nice cliffhanger. Please update soon.



Author's Response:

It is, kind of, isn't it?  I don't mean it, but each voice cuts itself off naturally so the next can start.  But it will be up soon! 

Thank you for the review!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: May 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage

I hope that Emmett gets the email from Angela soon. The next POV will be either Emmett or Angela....



Author's Response: Ah, the next chapter is a little different, but I have not forgotten about Facebook! Thank you for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: May 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 - Social Networking

Thanks for updating so quickly. can't wait till 9 PST!



Author's Response: Lol! It is coming! Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: May 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11 - Man of Action

Please do your happy dance...loved the chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next. I think that it will be Alice's pov.



Author's Response:

YAY.  Happy dancing away.  Thank you for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: May 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story

Great chapter! I think I am more excited about the next chapter than when I was waiting to read the Emmett/Angela convo. Please work your magic and update soon!



Author's Response: The next chapter should be soon! Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: May 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13 - Grandfather

I think that it will be Bella and Carlisle. Now please update soon. I HAVE to know what happens next!!!



Author's Response:

I am sure it will be up soon!

Thank you for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: May 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

I hope everything turns out okay. Poor Bella and baby. The good news is that when Edward sees her in the hospital, she can't run away. They will have to talk about their issues. I think that it will be Carlisle and Charlies' pov next.



Author's Response:

It'll be okay.  I promise.  Just a bumpy ride.

Thank you for the review!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: May 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary

I can NOT believe you left it like this! Too bad for me that I enjoy your story so much that I will have to just wait impatiently like everyone else for the next update. Please do it soon. I NEED to find out how Edward is going to react and how their reunion will go.

Author's Response:

Oh, the ending of the next chapter is more evil.  But Edward does find out!

Thank you so much for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: June 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile

Please post NOW!!! I have to know what Edward's reaction is.



Author's Response:

LOL!  I submitted it last night.  Thank you for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

You definitely have not made it any better...but it was a necessary chapter nontheless.



Author's Response: Alas, it was necessary, if difficult. There is a ray of hope in the next chapter. Thank you for reviewing.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: November 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 45 - Here's to Hoping

I think Carlise came up with a great alternative plan. I also agree that Edward would willingly banish himself for Bella. He is just that kind of person.



Author's Response:

I am sure Edward would, although Carlisle may have wanted to ask him first :(  Still, it was a good plan for any number of reasons.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings

I am sooooo happy there was some good that came out of this. Little baby Swan-Cullen is just what they need to help them get through what is happening to poor Bella. Maybe you really do believe in happy endings!



Author's Response:

I honestly do!

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30 - Little Girls

You did a wonderful job (yet again). You can continue to bounce up and down like Alice would after Bella accepted an invitation to go shopping.

I loved how you made baby Swan-Cullen have his copper hair and her chocolate doe eyes (their most identifiable characteristics--clumsiness doesn't count quite yet). I also loved how you had Edward call her little love. Great idea having Charlie listen in--now he knows Edward's intentions were honorable.



Author's Response:

Eavesdropping is usually not of the good, but, in this case, it was more effective than any conversation that Charlie and Edward could have had.

Little Love.  ::: sigh ::: Part of that came from his pet name for Bella, and part came from the fact that I call my son that!  Still, I thought it fit with the story.

Thanks for reviewing!

 

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

I am far too invested in this story to leave it...so you are stuck with me. I can't wait to find out what Edward names the baby!



Author's Response: I am so glad you are sticking with me! The name is in the very next chapter! Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32 - Classics

I should have totally seen what you were going to name the baby! It makes total sense! Bella would probably love it too. Hell, I even like the name. It has a nice ring to it.

I really liked the interactions between Edward and Esme and Edward and Charlie. They seemed to be sweet, personal moments. The comment about naming babies everyday was classic...like Elizabeth (lame joke, I know)



Author's Response: Lol! I am glad you liked the name! And both Esme and Charlie are really stepping up their game here to try and be thwe parents they feel they should have been all along. Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

You brought back the sadness again. I'm glad that Bella is fighting her way back. It has been so long since we last heard from her (otherwise it would be like new moon from Ocober to January). Oh well, at least it isn't as sad as it was before.



Author's Response:

At least now there is hope, right?

Thanks so much for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

Yay she's really awake! The scene was just how I imagined it. I thought that it was kind of funny how she was still worried that Charlie was going to be so mad at her. How could she not know that he is just so happy to know that she is alive and doing well? I can't wait for edward and bella in the same room!



Author's Response:

LOL!  It's just a gut reaction.  She wakes up and suddenly she's confronted with so much - including running away from her dad.  She just hasn't had the chance too really think yet and realize he's going to be happier that she's alive than angry she ran away.

Edward and Bella in the same room - it's coming.

Thank you for the review!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36 - Throw the Truth

I'm glad Bella wasn't mad at Angela for telling the Cullens. It could have gone either way if it was anyone else. It seems like the next couple of talks are going to be really tough on Bella.



Author's Response: I think Bella wanted to tell them herself, but just didn't have it in her by the time dhe got the courage. In away, Angela's actions are a relief to Bella. Now, however, Bella has a lot to deal with now! Thanks so much for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 37 - Don't Give Up

I just want to see them (Bella and Edward and Elizabeth) happy and healthy in the future.

This was a good chapter...even if it wasn't the talk we all were waiting for, it was realistic, which was your aim. I definitely wouldn't want to deal with Edward yet myself if I was Bella.



Author's Response:

I am glad you understand why I am going down this path.

Thank you so much for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

Good conversation. I'm glad that everything is on the way to being okay with them. It seems like everyone is going about their own way to make edward look better. Now please get us to THE conversation soon!

Happy b-day early! I can't believe that you are almost 18. You have this maturity in your writing that made me peg you older than what you really are.



Author's Response:

I am so sorry that there was a misunderstanding on my age.  My birthday is the 18th, but I'm well older!  LOL!  MUCH!

I am glad you felt I did the converstaion justice!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

 




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