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Penname: BellaS [ Contact]
Real name: B
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I was introduced to the world we all know and love by a former of student of mine a couple of months ago. How naive was I to believe that she was just a girl in love with her boyfriend Edward Cullen. Four books, a movie, and countless fanfics later, I know exactly who Edward Cullen is. :)
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Summary: Womanizing Edward is in a cover band with his brother and best friend, who are pissed that Edward has managed to send their last three lead singers heading for the hills with his tendency to fool around carelessly. Emmett and Jasper decide to create a "no intra-band dating" rule.
But what happens when a gorgeous, talented brunette walks into the audition? Will Edward adhere to his bandmates' new rule, or will he pursue what's now off limits? OOC Edward/Bella. Rated for DIRTY HUMOR and lots of future LEMONY GOODNESS. Canon pairings.
(thanks to Evilangel6714 for the banner!!!)
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: Always Human
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes
Word count: 171702
[Report This] Published: April 10, 2009 Updated: April 11, 2010
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
EEwwww...Alice felt her brother's boner...gross.
Bella's story was pretty funny.
panty dropper is a fair assessment of Edward and his abilities. It's kind of weird that Edward's never had anyboy in his own bed, but it kind of makes sense too. Hs bed is probably sacred to him, so why bring just any skank back, right?
Shower sex story was hilarious. Especially since everyone else heard about it and didn't know it was him.
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I soooo knew they were going to kiss. When you have forbidden fruit...well, it's impossible to not take that bite! Edward was so sweet here!
I know at least one way it is painful for Edward to not be able to teach her...hehe
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
I like your writing style and music...you are awesome!
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
I couldn;t have came up with a better (or grosser) idea to get Bella in Edward's bed myself. Used condom in bed is disgusting.
I'm glad Edward was able to chase James away. I hope he stays away!
I am really looking forward to reading bpov.
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Jake is such an ass! I'm just glad Bella put a stop to everything so that she could run back to edward and be his...forever!
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
You made very nice lemonade...especially for your first time, Edward was so sweet, It was cute how you made both Cullen brothers tell B that they love her.
As much of an ass Jake is, I am happy for the voicemail. It will help Bella move on.
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Yay! They have finally been found out. Is Alice going to be nice about it or will she hold it over their heads?
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
Please don't have sub pop say no to having him there with her. I don't want him to resent her growing fame and have them break up. Your Edward and Bella are perfect!
Author's Response: i wouldn't say they're perfect, but...i'm glad you think they are!
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
Thanks so much for not having Bella cheat on edward. As for the signing thing, I can see why so many people get ripped off. $30,000 is a lot of money, especially if they (the labels) are taking a risk on unheard talent however, those people (performers) could be potentially making a gazillion dollars. I just wish it was a fair world.
Something I would definitely like to see would be edward proposing. Maybe on stage whie they are on tour.
Can't wait to find out who the girl is. Leah?
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
You are awesome. You make it funny and sweet all at the same time. I have so many comments to make. First, I'm glad Bella's secret boyfriend's wife and real-life bf's mother didn't get upset. Second, it was so funny when Bella was dreaming about edward and their daily escapades in the middle of the living room. Third, I didn't know that boys could have Orlando Bloom phases. And lastly, that was quite a bombshell about Jake's gf dropped. Author's Response: haha, can i address the orlando bloom comment first? haha -- in my head, seth is definitely gay. i feel like it's one of those things that goes unacknowledged in the books--so...my seth is perfectly capable of having an orlando bloom phase, haha. but anyway, i'm glad you enjoyed it :) and thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
Stupid Lauren for almost ruining it. I can't believed she drugged him.
I'm happy that they are engaged. yay! I agreed with Edward's strategy of not planning it out and just letting it happen. I thought that he was going to propose on stage.
I was proposed to in Italy on top of one of the many cathedrals we visited. I was shaking so much that I barely made it back down to the ground (t was almost 600 steps to the top). Author's Response: yeah...lauren is the worst word i could possibly think of. roofies are NOT cool, kids. also, that's an amazing setting for your own proposal. i'm jealous :)
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
wtf? how did they end up in jail?
I love this story and am sad to see it come to an end. I love the fact that their relationship did have that circular note to it--with the bathroom floor being the scene of the crime.
My favorite part was when Carlisle was really excited about his hot new daughter in law.
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
I can't even begin to imagine how embarrassing it must have been to know that your boss knows about the extracurricular activities that go on after hours. yikes.
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 33: Epilogue
Thanks for the mini "sequel." I can't believe that you had Esme walk in on them in the bathroom...of course their first time as a married couple would be in there. What's up with you and bathrooms?
I can't wait to read your next story!
Summary: What if Edward wasn't single when he met Bella? Will he stay with his mate out of loyalty and obligation or will he take a chance and pursue true love? AU for the first book.
I had always viewed my existence since changing into a vampire as being like a starry night; mostly darkness but with a few scattered bright spots. I had thus far only been able to escape the tedium and misery of this life with a modicum of sanity due to the rare occasions that I was able to make my mate happy.
That was before. Before the Gods of Fate had intervened and made a mockery of my existence, chewing it up and spitting out the pieces. Before Bella Swan had moved to town and I proved unable just to leave her alone. Before my relationship with my mate violently combusted in an act of sadistic pleasure. Now, the storm clouds had rolled in and blocked out all the stars, and my life was a grey, depressing mess.
Rated for some swearing and lemons later on.
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: No
Word count: 81934
[Report This] Published: April 13, 2009 Updated: July 28, 2009
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: June 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
Great chapter...for a minute there, I was afraid that Edward would have to leave too. I'm glad that's not the case.
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: May 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Will Emmett and Rose get together in your story eventually?
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: May 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
can't wait to read the rest. Rosalie took the news surprising well. I though she would have had a fit and ignored him or get him excited then leave him high and dry. can't wait for Rosalie to start pursuing current Emmett and see how the dynamics change.
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: May 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Emmett's pov was a nice change of pace. Still can't wait for Edward to dump Rosalie for Bella. I wonder how that would work out. Would they still stay together as a family with their new mates (if it goes in that direction)?
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: June 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
I can't handle it when you post teasers...it's just too good and makes me want more right away. Update soon please...and make edward happy!
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: June 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
finally...now on with e/b
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: June 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Please update soon! I'm soooo happy they broke up. On with E/B!
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: June 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Can't wait to see how Rose explains why she isn't eating.
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: June 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Overkill or not, I am glad it finally happened. Rosalie finally gets Emmett! Yay!
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
Em rocks!
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
That teaser...can't wait to see the circumstance that has Charlie saying that!
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