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I was introduced to the world we all know and love by a former of student of mine a couple of months ago. How naive was I to believe that she was just a girl in love with her boyfriend Edward Cullen. Four books,  a movie, and countless fanfics later, I know exactly who Edward Cullen is. :)


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Reviews by BellaS
 
Summary:

What if Edward wasn't single when he met Bella? Will he stay with his mate out of loyalty and obligation or will he take a chance and pursue true love? AU for the first book.

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I had always viewed my existence since changing into a vampire as being like a starry night; mostly darkness but with a few scattered bright spots. I had thus far only been able to escape the tedium and misery of this life with a modicum of sanity due to the rare occasions that I was able to make my mate happy.

That was before. Before the Gods of Fate had intervened and made a mockery of my existence, chewing it up and spitting out the pieces. Before Bella Swan had moved to town and I proved unable just to leave her alone. Before my relationship with my mate violently combusted in an act of sadistic pleasure. Now, the storm clouds had rolled in and blocked out all the stars, and my life was a grey, depressing mess.

 

Rated for some swearing and lemons later on.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: No Word count: 81934
[Report This] Published: April 13, 2009 Updated: July 28, 2009


Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: May 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Will Emmett and Rose get together in your story eventually?

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: May 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

can't wait to read the rest. Rosalie took the news surprising well. I though she would have had a fit and ignored him or get him excited then leave him high and dry. can't wait for Rosalie to start pursuing current Emmett and see how the dynamics change.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: May 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Emmett's pov was a nice change of pace. Still can't wait for Edward to dump Rosalie for Bella. I wonder how that would work out. Would they still stay together as a family with their new mates (if it goes in that direction)?

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: June 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I can't handle it when you post teasers...it's just too good and makes me want more right away. Update soon please...and make edward happy!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: June 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

finally...now on with e/b

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: June 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Please update soon! I'm soooo happy they broke up. On with E/B!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: June 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Can't wait to see how Rose explains why she isn't eating.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: June 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Overkill or not, I am glad it finally happened. Rosalie finally gets Emmett! Yay!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Em rocks!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

That teaser...can't wait to see the circumstance that has Charlie saying that!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

So I totally took that teaser for the last chapter out of context. Poor Bella and Charlie. I can;t believe that Bella took off to Alaska. I can;t even begin to imagine how Bella even found the Denalis...unless Alice helped her.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

I can't afford to read your teasers anymore...they're just too successful making me anticipate what will happen next.

I do not envy either of them. I can see and agree with both povs regarding the change. I'm glad you are the one writing the story. I just get to sit back and enjoy what you have decided for them.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Nice teaser. I can't help but feel bad for Edward with the marriage thing, however, they weren't meant to be together. Rosalie and Emmett do belong together...they are only doing what they should have done a long time ago (as rosalie pointed out).

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I am so happy that Emmett and Rose are happy. I can't wait for the next chapter. What are they planning on doing? Will Bella just run away?

 
Summary:

Edward leaves Bella, much like the beginning of 'New Moon', however, this time, they are all human and there is quite the twist.  Why did Edward leave Bella?  And what secret is Bella keeping when he leaves?

Can they make a nightmare turn into a dream?

THANKS TO EMERALD_ROSALIE FOR THE ABOVE BANNER AND ATHENALOVE FOR THE BELOW.

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 61 Completed: Yes Word count: 155064
[Report This] Published: April 15, 2009 Updated: August 06, 2010


Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: May 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 - Like This

Please have Angela coontact Emmett soon...



Author's Response:

It is coming.  I haven't forgotten...

Thank you for reviewing.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27 - No

You believe in happy endings. You believe in happy endings You believe in happy endings You believe in happy endings You believe in happy endings You believe in happy endings You believe in happy endings....



Author's Response:

I believe in happy endings.

I believe in happy endings.

I believe in happy endings.

I believe in happy endings.

I believe in happy endings.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: May 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 - Enough

Wow...nice cliffhanger. Please update soon.



Author's Response:

It is, kind of, isn't it?  I don't mean it, but each voice cuts itself off naturally so the next can start.  But it will be up soon! 

Thank you for the review!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: May 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage

I hope that Emmett gets the email from Angela soon. The next POV will be either Emmett or Angela....



Author's Response: Ah, the next chapter is a little different, but I have not forgotten about Facebook! Thank you for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: May 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 - Social Networking

Thanks for updating so quickly. can't wait till 9 PST!



Author's Response: Lol! It is coming! Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: May 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11 - Man of Action

Please do your happy dance...loved the chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next. I think that it will be Alice's pov.



Author's Response:

YAY.  Happy dancing away.  Thank you for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: May 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story

Great chapter! I think I am more excited about the next chapter than when I was waiting to read the Emmett/Angela convo. Please work your magic and update soon!



Author's Response: The next chapter should be soon! Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: May 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13 - Grandfather

I think that it will be Bella and Carlisle. Now please update soon. I HAVE to know what happens next!!!



Author's Response:

I am sure it will be up soon!

Thank you for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: May 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

I hope everything turns out okay. Poor Bella and baby. The good news is that when Edward sees her in the hospital, she can't run away. They will have to talk about their issues. I think that it will be Carlisle and Charlies' pov next.



Author's Response:

It'll be okay.  I promise.  Just a bumpy ride.

Thank you for the review!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: May 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary

I can NOT believe you left it like this! Too bad for me that I enjoy your story so much that I will have to just wait impatiently like everyone else for the next update. Please do it soon. I NEED to find out how Edward is going to react and how their reunion will go.

Author's Response:

Oh, the ending of the next chapter is more evil.  But Edward does find out!

Thank you so much for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: June 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile

Please post NOW!!! I have to know what Edward's reaction is.



Author's Response:

LOL!  I submitted it last night.  Thank you for reviewing!

 




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