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Real name: B
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Member Since: April 30, 2009

I was introduced to the world we all know and love by a former of student of mine a couple of months ago. How naive was I to believe that she was just a girl in love with her boyfriend Edward Cullen. Four books,  a movie, and countless fanfics later, I know exactly who Edward Cullen is. :)

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Reviews by BellaS


Edward left Bella, forcing his family to stay away from her. Six years onwards, the Cullens are a mess without Bella and Emmett decides to get away from his angry, angst ridden family and let loose. What he finds in the meanest biker bar in Seatle will send shockwaves through his entire family.



All canon couples!

Categories: New Moon Characters: None
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes Word count: 112765
[Report This] Published: April 07, 2009 Updated: December 05, 2009

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: May 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Izzy Comes Bearing Gifts

I can't imagine bad-ass Izzy with proper Edward...I guess you are going to have to update soon so that we could find out :)

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: May 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Edward Enjoys His Torture.

I can't believe you updated so soon. I loved how Edward finally had his epiphany moment. Now he could definitely move on and pursue Izzy.


Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37:The Lost are now Found

Don't worry about leaving since you are stopping at a good place. Congrats on your latest adventure with kid #3. I bet it's going to get a little crazy! I loved how everyone thought he moved on...suckers!

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: June 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Red Like Human Blood

She finally realizes that she loves him...too bad it's too late!

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: June 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16:A Bloodied Kiss

I love how your mind works too. This is definitely a better version of Edward!

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: June 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World

omfg! Carl and Kirk being wolves was totally unexpected..but awesome. Can't wait for the update. I love your story.

Author's Response:

Kirk is not a shape shifter! Izzy would have noticed if he was!

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play

Your Izzy is such a bad-ass! Now on to the showdown with the newborns and Laurent.

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20:Charlie

I liked how you made their reunion so sweet. It was so obvious that they loved each other even after all the years of silence.

I still can't believe that Bella got away! I really can't imagine what is going to happeb I guess I'll just have to beg you to post the next chapter soon. PLEASE!

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21:De Ja Vu Reversed

Was that Bella's ultimate revenge? Apparently, it worked. It seems that even though E knew that she loved him, tose words he said still hurt. Can't wait for the update.

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22:JB Man of Mystery!

I'm glad everything worked out. I'm sad for Carl..but it was still cool to see that Bella kicked Victoria's ass!!!

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

Yay! Yay! Yay! I so did not see this coming. Tanya isn't so...bad here...I guess. I really liked it when she said that she couldn't believe that she ever liked him. Classic!. I didn't get the epiphany...but I don't care b/c Edward and Izzy (not Bella) are together. yay!

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24:...and The Truth Blows

The first half of the chapter was so different from all the other chapters. It showed Bella needing the Cullens; almost like she has finally accepted them as family again. The banter was fun and light hearted. My favorite part was when Esme dissed Bella.

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25:Cotton is Calling

I can't believe that Izzy waited for edward...Bella must be hidden underneath that rough exterior. I'm glad that emoward is buried deep, deep down....and I don't know anybody that experienced pain their first tie either.

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25:Cotton is Calling

Ii meant time, not tie :)

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26:Sweets After Sex

Your fic is one of the only ones that I have read that is consistently funny. I loved the interaction between carlisle and Esme, but my favorite part was when Em actually kicked a bear's ass. Now I get why you werelaughing in your a/n. Have fun on your vacation!

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: November 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36:Boy Scouts(TB)

I love the fact that the cullens believe that edward is crazy with grief and is hooking up with Tanya now. I mean, do they know Edward, like at all? They should have sensed something was up. As for the Sandra bullock movie, his best excuse was Emmett? Really? I would have bought it if he said Jasoer b/c he's emo like that, but not Em...

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27:Izzy is Lost Forever

I can't believe that you dropped such a bomb on us after having been gone for so long. I was wondering why they were even bothering taking her to the hospital. They should have just changed her where she was, but then again, where would the fun be in that?

No idea where this is going except that Izzy will be changed and they will live happily ever after.

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28:Limbo

So it seems that Edward just bit her at the end of the whole goodbye scenario. If that's the case, why were Emmett's arms warm when he hugged her?

Btw, that whole scene was really sweet and incredibly sad.

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29:Strangers In The Night

wtf??? I have no choice but to trust you since I am not creactive enough to come up with my own theory about what the eff just happened.

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30:Stolen

I am definitely on the confused side. I don't handle subtiety (is that how it's spelled?) very well. you will have to spell (haha bad pun) it out for me (the situation not the word). Update soon!

So is Bella really dead? I never thought of it as a possibility. I just assumed she faked died and the Cullens were pretneding. Now I'm assuming that the body snatchers will bring her back to life.

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Ashes to Ashes

So I definitely don't think that Tanya and Edward hooked up (even though you made it seem like that) because not only has he always spurned her advances, but also b/c his soul mate just died and knowing how edward is a glutton for punishment, he would have been blaming himself for the whole ordeal.

I think that Tany somehow discovered a changed Bella in the Alaskan wilderness. That's the only explanation that would take into account his lack of pain


Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32:Explanations

This chapter totally rocked. Not only did you finally explain what the heck was going on, but Izzy came back better than ever...and unbreakable. I like the whole Tanya twist. I'm kind of scik and tired of hating her.

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33:Izzy Learns To Hunt

Edward's coming!

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: November 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34:New Life

So edward didn't know when tanya demanded that he come up.If that is the case, why is it that he was acting so weird at the funeral?


What if Edward wasn't strong enough to resist the temptation of Bella's blood, the first time they met? What if, instead of leaving, he changed his mind and went to her house to kill her?


What if Alice got to them in time to stop him, but not in time to keep Bella human?


Rated NC-17 for probable violence and smut in later chapters. I'm pretty sure it will end up E/B, but might take a long while to get there.

Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 97229
[Report This] Published: April 08, 2009 Updated: February 17, 2010

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Temptation

Alice was awesome in this chapter. Thanks for having her redeem herself. As for Bella's speech, I hope you have Edward come up with something fabulous to convince her of his love for her.



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