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I was introduced to the world we all know and love by a former of student of mine a couple of months ago. How naive was I to believe that she was just a girl in love with her boyfriend Edward Cullen. Four books,  a movie, and countless fanfics later, I know exactly who Edward Cullen is. :)


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Reviews by BellaS
 
Summary:

 

Edward left Bella, forcing his family to stay away from her. Six years onwards, the Cullens are a mess without Bella and Emmett decides to get away from his angry, angst ridden family and let loose. What he finds in the meanest biker bar in Seatle will send shockwaves through his entire family.

 

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Categories: New Moon Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes Word count: 112765
[Report This] Published: April 07, 2009 Updated: December 05, 2009


Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24:...and The Truth Blows

The first half of the chapter was so different from all the other chapters. It showed Bella needing the Cullens; almost like she has finally accepted them as family again. The banter was fun and light hearted. My favorite part was when Esme dissed Bella.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25:Cotton is Calling

I can't believe that Izzy waited for edward...Bella must be hidden underneath that rough exterior. I'm glad that emoward is buried deep, deep down....and I don't know anybody that experienced pain their first tie either.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25:Cotton is Calling

Ii meant time, not tie :)

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26:Sweets After Sex

Your fic is one of the only ones that I have read that is consistently funny. I loved the interaction between carlisle and Esme, but my favorite part was when Em actually kicked a bear's ass. Now I get why you werelaughing in your a/n. Have fun on your vacation!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: November 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36:Boy Scouts(TB)

I love the fact that the cullens believe that edward is crazy with grief and is hooking up with Tanya now. I mean, do they know Edward, like at all? They should have sensed something was up. As for the Sandra bullock movie, his best excuse was Emmett? Really? I would have bought it if he said Jasoer b/c he's emo like that, but not Em...

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27:Izzy is Lost Forever

I can't believe that you dropped such a bomb on us after having been gone for so long. I was wondering why they were even bothering taking her to the hospital. They should have just changed her where she was, but then again, where would the fun be in that?

No idea where this is going except that Izzy will be changed and they will live happily ever after.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28:Limbo

So it seems that Edward just bit her at the end of the whole goodbye scenario. If that's the case, why were Emmett's arms warm when he hugged her?

Btw, that whole scene was really sweet and incredibly sad.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29:Strangers In The Night

wtf??? I have no choice but to trust you since I am not creactive enough to come up with my own theory about what the eff just happened.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30:Stolen

I am definitely on the confused side. I don't handle subtiety (is that how it's spelled?) very well. you will have to spell (haha bad pun) it out for me (the situation not the word). Update soon!

So is Bella really dead? I never thought of it as a possibility. I just assumed she faked died and the Cullens were pretneding. Now I'm assuming that the body snatchers will bring her back to life.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Ashes to Ashes

So I definitely don't think that Tanya and Edward hooked up (even though you made it seem like that) because not only has he always spurned her advances, but also b/c his soul mate just died and knowing how edward is a glutton for punishment, he would have been blaming himself for the whole ordeal.

I think that Tany somehow discovered a changed Bella in the Alaskan wilderness. That's the only explanation that would take into account his lack of pain

 

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32:Explanations

This chapter totally rocked. Not only did you finally explain what the heck was going on, but Izzy came back better than ever...and unbreakable. I like the whole Tanya twist. I'm kind of scik and tired of hating her.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33:Izzy Learns To Hunt

Edward's coming!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: November 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34:New Life

So edward didn't know when tanya demanded that he come up.If that is the case, why is it that he was acting so weird at the funeral?

 
Summary:

What if Edward wasn't strong enough to resist the temptation of Bella's blood, the first time they met? What if, instead of leaving, he changed his mind and went to her house to kill her?

 

What if Alice got to them in time to stop him, but not in time to keep Bella human?

 

Rated NC-17 for probable violence and smut in later chapters. I'm pretty sure it will end up E/B, but might take a long while to get there.


Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 97229
[Report This] Published: April 08, 2009 Updated: February 17, 2010


Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Temptation

Alice was awesome in this chapter. Thanks for having her redeem herself. As for Bella's speech, I hope you have Edward come up with something fabulous to convince her of his love for her.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Proposal, Engagement, Union

Great job. You resolved the situation in the best possible way. Thanks for not dragging it out.



Author's Response:

Aw, I'm not cruel enough to draw that situation out for another chapter... quite!

Glad you enjoyed it!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Truth

Yay. Edward will soon know that Bella's favorite thing about being...you know, is Edward. Please be sure to include his finding out/reaction in the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Oh, not to worry, I wouldn't skip Edward finding out for the world! It is coming up right at the start of the next chapter.

Glad you're enjoying it

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Tabula Rasa

I know I feel better after all the apologies.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Discord

Can't wait to find out about the hijinks!

Alice's pov made it known exactly how she was feeling about Bella. Thanks for that. I really didn't understand what her problem was until then.

 
Summary:

Three months after Edward leaves Bella is still a zombie. She has not yet developed a friendship with Jacob. But one day she finds a human Edward at her door. How does their relationship handle Edward's newfound humanity? 

Another Edward turning human story, but it's different. Things still can never be easy for love. AU. 

Rated NC-17 for underage drinking and later on, violence. No detailed lemons. 

But fluff galore. 

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"The doorbell rang once again and I turned the knob to greet the person. I don't know what happened after that. I only remember a pair of beautiful emerald green eyes looking directly at me."

Thank you to readergoof for the AMAZING banner!!!!! 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: No Word count: 60446
[Report This] Published: April 09, 2009 Updated: April 22, 2010


Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: First Dates

I liked this chapter too. It showed the human/teenage side of Edward who apparently is also very responsible.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Scary Discoveries

I can't even begin to imagine how edward thinks he would be able to protect Bella without the help of his family. He would stand no chance alone. I'm kind of wondering whether or not Edward would become a vampire again. This last scene seems to be leading to that point.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: December 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Goodbyes

WOW! I can't believe Rose took off like that..  I always knew she was selfish but deep down I always thought that family was first. Emmett became a bigger man than I have ever imagined him to be. He handled it really well and I feel so sad for him. Stupid Rose!

 
Off Limits by lexiecullen17 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3312]
Summary:

Womanizing Edward is in a cover band with his brother and best friend, who are pissed that Edward has managed to send their last three lead singers heading for the hills with his tendency to fool around carelessly.  Emmett and Jasper decide to create a "no intra-band dating" rule. 

But what happens when a gorgeous, talented brunette walks into the audition?  Will Edward adhere to his bandmates' new rule, or will he pursue what's now off limits?  OOC Edward/Bella.  Rated for DIRTY HUMOR and lots of future LEMONY GOODNESS. Canon pairings.

(thanks to Evilangel6714 for the banner!!!)

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
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Series: Always Human
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 171702
[Report This] Published: April 11, 2009 Updated: April 11, 2010


Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I'm all finally caught up and I get left with a cliffie? Whose the man in the office? What does Marcus want with them? There better be no threesomes or Bella hooking up with Felix for any reason.

Congrats on your new job! Update soon!



Author's Response:

apologies!  although, i did appreciate all of your reviews in catching up :) all your questions will be answered in good time...and i promise: no threesomes or bella hooking up with felix.  i love me my e/b :)

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Edward is in so much trouble! I'm really liking this story so far. Can't wait to press the next button!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I loved the fact that Bella totally ranted to Alice about Edward and didn't even know that he was her brother.

can't wait for drunk Bella around pms Edward.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

EEwwww...Alice felt her brother's boner...gross.

Bella's story was pretty funny.

panty dropper is a fair assessment of Edward and his abilities. It's kind of weird that Edward's never had anyboy in his own bed, but it kind of makes sense too. Hs bed is probably sacred to him, so why bring just any skank back, right?

Shower sex story was hilarious. Especially since everyone else heard about it and didn't know it was him.

 




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