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Penname: BellaS [ Contact]
Real name: B
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I was introduced to the world we all know and love by a former of student of mine a couple of months ago. How naive was I to believe that she was just a girl in love with her boyfriend Edward Cullen. Four books, a movie, and countless fanfics later, I know exactly who Edward Cullen is. :)
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Summary: Bella Swan moves to Forks, Washington in middle school after the tragic death of her mother. Jasper Hale had recently lost his father and began to distance himself from his best friend, Edward Cullen. Bella and Jasper meet and bond over their loss and become best friends, leaving Edward in the dust. As junior year of high school begins, Edward hates Bella for corrupting his ex-best friend and for just being a bitch. Unfortunately, Edward's sister, Alice, decides that she wants to reach out to Bella and become her friend. Edward is dragged on for the ride and discovers more things about Bella Swan...and himself. Canon Couples eventually but a little non-canon in the beginning.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: No
Word count: 97047
[Report This] Published: April 05, 2009 Updated: January 06, 2010
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Plans
Bob Saget is one funny mo-fo
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Sleepover
Loving this story. I'm glad Edward and Emmett got caught. I am a bit peeved at you b/c Bella has yet to tell Alice about hers and Jasper's relationship... update soon! Author's Response: The relationship will be revealed soon but it's kinda personal. Bella really doesn't want anyone to know, even Alice. Even though she's friends with Alice, she is not ready to tell her everything, especially something so...personal. Bella holds things in. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Letting Go
omg!!! I hope they don't get in a fight. I think that they will exchange heated words, Bella will show up, beg for them to stop...and hopefully Edward will find out that she wants to be with him too.Please don't drag it out...and upate soon!! I hate cliffhangers. *arrggh!*
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Unprepared
Thanks for updating so quickly...now I don't have to hunt you down! (:
Poor Bella. It looks like she's going to be in for a tough night. Jasper and Edward too. I wonder if Jasper will eventually discover Alice. Is Alice doing all this so that she could e with him?
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Time
Why did Edward look concerned and angry? Did he happen to overhear all the things Bella said about him?
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Soon
I'm glad that Edward is so mature and handled his confrontation (if you can even call it that) with Alice very well. I hope that he figures out what to do with Bella soon...and that Alice will open Jasper's eyes that there is more to life than Bella Swan
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Just Talk
I totally knew where you were going with the whole wet shirt business. Nicely played! I'm glad Bella and Edward are going to go for it...poor Jasper. I hope he discovers a cute little pixie soon.
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Explanations
Many things to talk about here.
First, Lost totally pwns. Last season was ridiculously good. Lord of the Flies, however, sucks balls!
Second, I'm glad that Bella and jasper were able to work things out. If Jasper admits that seeing Edward and Bella seemed natural, then could he have perhaps been confused about his feelings for her? Or is he just rising above it?
Third, what happened to Jasper's mom? Did she die? B/c just when Jasper and Bella split up (in the snese that they aren't as close any more) something happens to his mom. I hope he turns to Alice!
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Secrets
I was amazed by the fact that Charlie was supporting Kathleen emotionally all those years. It seems out of character for him since he comes across as unemotional, but maybe it is different (from his interaction with Bella) b/c that stemmed from his responsibility as a cop. Edward was so logical and really helped Bella through it. I just wish he and Jasper could become friends again. Jasper really needs Edward in his life.
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: I Want You
Green Day rocks! hehe. I know that wasn't what you were looking for but I saw them last night and they were amazing!
Btw, I also put my hair into a ponytail using a brush and it does take more than 2 minutes.
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 23: Special
Charlie's gift was just too special and considerate.
I can't believe that Alice made such a scene about Bella being with Edward. Nevermind...it is Alice after all. Anything is possible with that girl.
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 24: Awkward
Alice and Jasper's future relationship is going to be tough on both Edward and Bella since they are obviously rooted for the opposite team. I don't care what happens though, as long as they are all happy together.
Summary:
Edward left Bella, forcing his family to stay away from her. Six years onwards, the Cullens are a mess without Bella and Emmett decides to get away from his angry, angst ridden family and let loose. What he finds in the meanest biker bar in Seatle will send shockwaves through his entire family.
All canon couples!
Categories: New Moon Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes
Word count: 112765
[Report This] Published: April 07, 2009 Updated: December 04, 2009
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: May 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...
Great chapter, can't wait to see what else Izzy dishes out! Please make Edward suffer awhile before they get back together.
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: May 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Poor, Poor Edward Cullen
WOW! update soon please! Can't wait to see how she tortures him...
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: May 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Dying Again
omg! best chapter yet. please update soon!!!!!
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: May 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Izzy Comes Bearing Gifts
I can't imagine bad-ass Izzy with proper Edward...I guess you are going to have to update soon so that we could find out :)
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: May 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Edward Enjoys His Torture.
I can't believe you updated so soon. I loved how Edward finally had his epiphany moment. Now he could definitely move on and pursue Izzy.
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: November 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37:The Lost are now Found
Don't worry about leaving since you are stopping at a good place. Congrats on your latest adventure with kid #3. I bet it's going to get a little crazy! I loved how everyone thought he moved on...suckers!
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: June 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Red Like Human Blood
She finally realizes that she loves him...too bad it's too late!
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: June 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16:A Bloodied Kiss
I love how your mind works too. This is definitely a better version of Edward!
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: June 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World
omfg! Carl and Kirk being wolves was totally unexpected..but awesome. Can't wait for the update. I love your story. Author's Response: Kirk is not a shape shifter! Izzy would have noticed if he was!
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
Your Izzy is such a bad-ass! Now on to the showdown with the newborns and Laurent.
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20:Charlie
I liked how you made their reunion so sweet. It was so obvious that they loved each other even after all the years of silence.
I still can't believe that Bella got away! I really can't imagine what is going to happeb next...so I guess I'll just have to beg you to post the next chapter soon. PLEASE!
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21:De Ja Vu Reversed
Was that Bella's ultimate revenge? Apparently, it worked. It seems that even though E knew that she loved him, tose words he said still hurt. Can't wait for the update.
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22:JB Man of Mystery!
I'm glad everything worked out. I'm sad for Carl..but it was still cool to see that Bella kicked Victoria's ass!!!
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