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Penname: BellaS [ Contact]
Real name: B
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I was introduced to the world we all know and love by a former of student of mine a couple of months ago. How naive was I to believe that she was just a girl in love with her boyfriend Edward Cullen. Four books, a movie, and countless fanfics later, I know exactly who Edward Cullen is. :)
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Summary:  
*Takes place during New Moon in an alternate universe.
On March 16, 2006, the World changed, and everything and anything that the Cullens ever cared about was lost. They had to find their own way in this New World. Edward never wished to exist in a world where Bella didn't. Unfortunately, his family desperately needed him, so he'd stay to help them. And by doing so, he hoped to redeem himself for his failure to save the one creature he couldn't protect.
With rumours in the South of humans feeding off the living and stealing people from their beds, the Cullens have a responsibility to protect the ones they can from those monsters in the night. This was Edward's last chance to fight for his soul and his salvation. He would finally be ready to face Judgement day and be deemed worthy enough to be with Bella once again. Or would something or someone change the path he was destined to go down? Faith, hope and love are powerful things, and Edward is about to find out just how powerful they are.
Yes... this is the story that is set during a post-apocalyptic nuclear war. Just try the Prologue to get a feel for it before passing judgment. You might be surprised. Warning: There is violence and disturbing images the further the story goes along.
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 39 Completed: Yes
Word count: 315697
[Report This] Published: March 24, 2009 Updated: March 24, 2012
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: Patience is Bitter, But Its Reward is Sweet
Poor Jasper. I'm so proud of him for controlling his bloodlust that he resorted to rats to stay on track. I can't believe that after all that happened and everything he did for her, Edward was going to not see her.
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: November 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 23: Faint Heart Never Won Fair Lady
Yay! yopu posted in less than a month's time. This is one of the most awesomest fanfic around...now that Bella is back. I hope they work things out soon. Garrett's pretty cool.
Summary:
Bella meets Edward when he picks up his nephew from her Pre-K class and the sparks fly. As their feelings for each other grow, Edward has a prior commitment that he is convinced must be seen through. A commitment that is effectively keeping them apart. Are there some complications that even the strongest hearts can't overcome? Can they resist the one thing they can't have--Each other?
To get to the prize, they'll have to survive the temptation of one another, in this emotional waiting game.
Show and Don't Tell.
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Kate, Rosalie, Sam, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes
Word count: 124914
[Report This] Published: March 25, 2009 Updated: December 16, 2009
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I loved how you made uncle e walk into the doorway. It made him seem much more human-like...and hopefully easier for Bella to approach.
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I'm glad Jake's gay. It takes him out of the triangle. Can't wait for Bella and Edward to hook up...I don't want to read about her humping couch cushions.
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
They danced! but what was the pain in his eyes all about?
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Why didn't Bella hear them out? Now it will lead to hurt confusion later. So is Tanya and Edward living together? Something is going on with them that isn't good, but he obviously is stuck with her for the forseeable future. See can't be pregnant b/c she will be taking over for Angela...
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Tanya i not cut out to be a kindergarten teacher...as for Masen, he is totally adorable--changing the topic like that.
I hope that Tanya doesn't find Bella's number.
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
I forgot to ask last chapter...does Tanya have the Fran/Janice laugh too?
So apparently Jake is flaming gay...I thought he was covert gay (because of the man's man comment--apparently he is interior decorator gay)...either way he still rocks b/c he got Edward to come over.
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
At least Tanya isn't pregnant. Now let's dump her!!!
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Jasper and Emmett did a great job of cockblocking. As for Tanya...is it ad that I want some more drama???
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
I love Esme...and I'm so happy for Alice and Jasper. A for Edward being godfather, he's right, it's only fair...Emmett got Masen.
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
I loved Bella and her sewing oats comment.
As for the "little did I know" commet, is Tanya waiting outside the apartment doing reconn b/c I think she just might be crazy enough to do that. I hope it doesn't lead to a show down at school though.
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
So that was hot .
the qute from friends is: Drunk enough that I know I want this. Not so drunk that you should feel guilty about taking advantage.”
This convo takes place in London after Ross' wedding to Emily.
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
It would have been totally funny (and unrealistic) if Bella got crapped on too after she started laughing at Edward.
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
There was one point in this story that was so funny that I laughed out loud and then drooled! That was really funny!!!
Awww...they love each other. They're in trouble now! Author's Response: laughing and drooling? Sweet! Thanks! :D
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
They have some crazy ass willpower to be able to stop even though they have all theaat chemistry.
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: December 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue
Thanks for the great ending. You fooled me a little bit with Charlie getting married, but it was cool. As for the babies, mmy mom has nieces older than she is. Weird, huh?
My favorite part was when Masen walked down the aisle as a bear.
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Teaching little kids is serious business. Tanya knew coming in that she didn't like kids in that age group yet she took the job anyways. She should have known better. As for Bella, it isn't her fault, yet she blames herself. I see her point, but people like her need to realize that the blame lies solely on the person responsible for that action (Tanya in this case). Why do good people always blame themselves and the guilty party could care less?
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Yay! I cannot WAIT for the next chapter!
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
I have to agree with Edward that the first break up after the theater was too easily for someone crazy like tanya to accept. I cannot believe that she had the audacity to show up at Chuck e cheese. That was unbelievable.
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Tanya is crazy! I was scared for a second there that she was going to kidnap Masen. Thank goodness that was not the case. She only wanted to ruin their first night together, which was undeniably hot.
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Yes, you and Tiff need to go deep in hiding...witness protection style. You can come out when you update, but make sure Tiff stays there until she finishes writing Breaking Bella.
OMG! This story totally took a whole new crazy turn. I know Bella is this great person, but she is not a whore and is kind of stupid for thinking so. She can't honestly believe that Tanya and Edward were really together and Bella and Edward made an honest effort to control themselves. UPDATE soon!
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: Tanya POV
Wow. tanya is one crazy delusional bitch!
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Yay! He made it! I can't wait to see edward and renee together. i also will be anxiously waiting for what Kate has to say. Please keep your word and update soon. The chapter is perfect! Jus tsubmit the damn thing!!! (hehe)
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
I loved how he referred to her as my girl when talking to Kate. I think that they made a good decision when they decided to drop the charges.
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