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I was introduced to the world we all know and love by a former of student of mine a couple of months ago. How naive was I to believe that she was just a girl in love with her boyfriend Edward Cullen. Four books,  a movie, and countless fanfics later, I know exactly who Edward Cullen is. :)


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Summary:

 

Bella meets Edward when he picks up his nephew from her Pre-K class and the sparks fly.  As their feelings for each other grow, Edward has a prior commitment that he is convinced must be seen through. A commitment that is effectively keeping them apart. Are there some complications that even the strongest hearts can't overcome? Can they resist the one thing they can't have--Each other?

To get to the prize, they'll have to survive the temptation of one another, in this emotional waiting game.

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Stephenie Meyer owns any Twilight characters and Twilight plot lines that may appear in this story.  The remainder is my original work.    No copying or reproduction of this work is permitted without my express written authorization.  Copyright 2009 by Brits23.
 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Kate, Rosalie, Sam, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 124914
[Report This] Published: March 26, 2009 Updated: December 16, 2009


Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: November 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Poor Carlise. I was wondering what they were going to do about the buttons...or lackthereof. I'm glad Melissa got to walk in on them. That put her in her place. Laid Bare sounds great!



Author's Response:

lol, thanks so much for your review. Laid Bare will be posted in a few days! :)

 
Par Amour by ArenGoLucky Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 270]
Summary:

For par amour, I loved her first ere thou. -Chaucer; What if Myspace's Artist/Artist interview with Rob Pattinson & Hayley Williams was not the first time they met? What if there was much more? A love story for the ages. Rated M for LEMONS.


Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: No Word count: 125940
[Report This] Published: March 29, 2009 Updated: March 22, 2011


Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I loved how Hayley teased Rob about the Goblet of Fire. I would totally do that too. It would have been so funny if Nikki pulled out Twilight afterwards :)



Author's Response:

that would be funny!  omg...an entire robathon w/ him watching?  that would be hilarious!  thanks for the review!  wanted to let you know i've just posted 24 over on ff...will be submitting it to twi here in a minute!  but i've started a blog just for par amour...i love my reviewers so much and i want y'all to get to know one another too.  i'm posting all things rob and hayley!  so come check it out...here's the link: http://arengoluckysparamour.blogspot.com/?zx=cccc6523b09b7b32

much love!

AGL

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I have to admit that it is kind of weird that she can drink alcohol but can't handle nyquil. Rob was really sweet taking care of her.

I am worried about when they start shooting Twilight. Kristen and Rob have amazing chemistry. Good thing Nikki will be there.



Author's Response:

i am totes like that.  i can drink w/ the best of them, but give me some nyquil, and i'll throw it up.  blech~and i can't handle it.  i'll be bouncing off the walls at full speed!  so no cold meds for me. 

i loved how he was w/ her.  kind of fatherly when he had to be, but sweet and tender too.  *sigh* i love him. 

thanks for the review!  i love it!

much love~AGL

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

This is so ridiculously sad! *tear*



Author's Response:

awww...hun, it will all work out in the end, i promise!  come here, let me hold you...okay, better now?  LOL

love ya!  btw...do you have a twitter?  i'm arengolucky...if you do, look me up!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 14 pt 2

The whole car scene was just too funny!



Author's Response:

so glad you thought so!  i get tired of writing the sad stuff.  i know it's necessary, but i'd rather be funny.  had to break up the angst, kwim?

love ya!  mwah!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 16

It kind of sucks that they both were only dreaming of each other.
What a scene it must have been when Rob fell in the pool!



Author's Response:

i had so many peeps hatin on me for that!  but in a good way!  i needed them to be together in some capacity, so that's the only way it fit.  mmm...wet rob?  yes please!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

What is going on? Another dream!!!



Author's Response:

MUAUAUAUAUAU!  I'M EVIL!!!! 

love ya!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I'm so proud of Rob for going to the showcase even though it was hard. He's such a good guy.



Author's Response:

i think he needed to go, because it was important...for her, but also for him.  one day when they get back together, it will mean a lot to her, i'm sure that he was there.  he loves her deeply and he couldn't miss out on her big night! 

love ya!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

This format was really cool (the q and a). It was a nice change of pace.



Author's Response:

thanks! it was ridiculous to write!  the doc wouldn't format right...it was a nightmare!  but at the last minute, it worked!  thanks for the review!

love ya!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

The journal seemed so truthful and heartfelt...Hayley totally needs to work on her issues. How can she not just run to him after reading it?



Author's Response:

i know right?  if that was me, i'd have gotten in my car and found him!  you couldn't have held me back!  thanks for all your sweet reviews!  you kinda rock my socks!

mwah!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

so I am finally all caught up and get left with this cliffie...which is an awesome one. Why is he so mad? He should be happy that she finally realizes that she really truly wants him. Update soon!

Btw, I don't read stories outside of Edward and Bella, but yours was really good. I forgot who recommended it. I'm glad I listened.



Author's Response:

i am so flattered!  that means a lot to me! 

i'm submitting the next chapter in a sec, so it should be validated and posted next week at the latest!  be on the look out!

love ya!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

This was another great chapter. I could feel the emotions rolling off Rob. He asked some really good, really real and honest questions. I'm proud of him not running right back to her right away and trying to make her understand what sher did to him.



Author's Response:

so glad you liked it babe...i feel like they've both grown up a little thru this.  hayley more than rob, but still...he needed to mature as well.  happy you could feel the emotions.  that's the best compliment i could get. 

i will have another update soon!  love ya!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

It was such an "awww" moment when he asked his question...



Author's Response:

aww...i'm glad you liked his question.  i got a lot of differing opi's on that one.  some wanted him to give her more of a hard time...but he loves her and she loves him.  as hard as it will be, they really just want to be together.

thanks for the read and review!

much love! AGL

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I loved how light-hearted this chapter was. It was so funny how they both didn't broach the subject of the KoL concert until it was the day of the concert. It would have been even funnier if Rob got to meet the guys backstage too...after proclaiming his love for caleb.

I'm proud of the two, especially Hayley, for how much they have grown. It seems like they are in a much healthier relationship.



Author's Response:

i think they are definitely in a better place.  sometimes it takes deep heartbreak to force you to grow up. 

and i'm glad to be back to the light-hearted stuff too.  it feels like i can breathe again!  i don't like angst, but i know sometimes it's neccessary. 

thanks for the read and review! 

much love~AGL

 
Summary:

Alice and Bella are in high school, and to celebrate the commencement of their junior year, Alice is throwing an end of the year party. After much begging, she gets Bella to attend. Unfortunately, someone spiked the drinks, and Bella gets drunk. She ends up being seduced by a beautiful bronze haired boy, who she can't remember ever seeing before. A couple weeks later, her mother, Esme, announces that she's remarrying. Bella's going to have a new stepbrother. This stepbrother is none other than the handsome stranger she fell in love with at Alice's party. And to top it off, she discovers that she's pregnant...  

Rated NC-17 for teenage drinking-nothing explicit

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Nessie, Other Character, Renesmee, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No Word count: 44596
[Report This] Published: March 30, 2009 Updated: July 19, 2010


Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: May 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Meeting

Please keep your promise and update in 53 minutes...



Author's Response:

lol, as soon as the chapter gets validated, it will be up. and i am entering it in the queue in about an hour, so...you should have it before the weekend is over.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: May 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Confrontation

You are such a tease! How could I do anything else but wait impatiently for the next chapter to find out the outcome between Bella and Carlisle's argument? Can't what. Please write fast and update soon!



Author's Response:

teasing is fun...lol

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: At Last!

Jess is such a bitch. I would wish that she would get pregnant too, but I wouldn't want her future fictional kid to have to deal with her...

 

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Confusion

Rosalie's situation makes me wonder about how many kids are in her same situation.



Author's Response:

yeahhh, i saw something online about that, and that's where i got the idea...i figured it was something that happened int he real world, so i thought it would add some kind of connection to the real world

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: California

I thought that this was a great chapter. It seemed to flow well and I definitely was able to follow the story.

I love the fact that Bella and Edward are getting along so much better now...and that she is starting to believe that he actually loves her. Mike and Kate were great, Irina, not so much.



Author's Response:

we all hate irina...hahaha



Author's Response:

we all hate irina...hahaha

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Epiphany

I love the fact that Bella fell asleep on Alice for half an hour on the phone and Alice never hung up. Man that girl can talk. As for beating Edward up, did they do that because they thought that he wasn't being honest about his feelings for her or is it something more?



Author's Response:

they beat edward up because he knocked up bella, and since bella is like a little sister to both of them, they, in typical big bro fashion, beat up edward to make him "regret" his actions

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Revelation

That totally sucks for Edward! He did the right thing and has now upset Bella...again! Poor guy can't catch a break! Update when you can and don't worry about replying. Just work on the story.



Author's Response:

thank you for understanding. and yeah, edward's life sucks. but doesn't it always???

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Memories

this is extremely sad. I feel so badly for him. Obviously, this was the reason why he acted out.

I hope you did well on your psats.



Author's Response:

oh i did. i got 97 percentile. and that's when i'm taking it for practice and not for real.

 
Broken Doll by RowanMoon Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1439]
Summary:

Young woman, back to us, walking into the forest.

 

Nominated for Best Supernatural in The Silent Tear Awards!

           Voting ends June 20.

 

Please check out the other stories and vote for your favorites;

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~Nominated for Best AU in the Shimmers Snowflake Quarter 2010.~

 

Nine years has passed since Edward left her cold and alone on the forest floor. She has become familiar with the darkness and has relied upon Jacob to be her warmth and light.  After nearly a decade of living in the shadows of others, a crushed and broken Bella wanders off into the forest in search of the place where everything had gone wrong. 

She's known the cold bite of Ice.  She runs from Fire's all consuming intensity. What she finds on her jilted journey will change the way she remembers both forever. 

 

~summary by the fabulous Spaniard, talented author of Purgatory and North Star Rising.

 

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes Word count: 101571
[Report This] Published: March 31, 2009 Updated: May 27, 2010


Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: June 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

This story is so good. Please update soon. I can't wait to read about the confrontation between the Blacks and Bella.



Author's Response:

Thanks B!  I can't wait to give you that confrontation.  I wrote it 3 weeks ago and it's burning a hole in my file folder.  I sent it in for validation today, so once Redchevy approves it to make sure it doesn't epically suck, it will be up.

 

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: June 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Great confrontation. Cab't wait to read what happens next...will Jacob run and Bella hunt him down? Or will he be stubborn Jacob and stay?...Update soon!



Author's Response:

For some reason the song "Should I stay or should I go now" rolled around in my head.   hee hee!  Jacob listens to Bella.  Wouldn't you?  :)

Thanks for the review!  Chapter 15 is in my Beta's hands right now...hopefully will have it up in a week.

 

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen is Big Man on Campus at his high school in Port Angeles. Bella Swan is a quiet, sarcastic, marches-to-the-beat-of-her-own-drummer girl at Forks High. A part-time job brings them together, and an unlikely friendship and surprising feelings develop. Neither is brave enough to do anything about it, however, and they part ways when Edward heads off to college. Their paths cross again after a year of no contact, and Edward is determined to not only rekindle their friendship, but to man up and actually do something about his ever-present feelings for Bella.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 144739
[Report This] Published: April 02, 2009 Updated: October 08, 2009


Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

They couldn't have had a better reunion.

 




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