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I was introduced to the world we all know and love by a former of student of mine a couple of months ago. How naive was I to believe that she was just a girl in love with her boyfriend Edward Cullen. Four books,  a movie, and countless fanfics later, I know exactly who Edward Cullen is. :)


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Summary:

 

Bella meets Edward when he picks up his nephew from her Pre-K class and the sparks fly.  As their feelings for each other grow, Edward has a prior commitment that he is convinced must be seen through. A commitment that is effectively keeping them apart. Are there some complications that even the strongest hearts can't overcome? Can they resist the one thing they can't have--Each other?

To get to the prize, they'll have to survive the temptation of one another, in this emotional waiting game.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Kate, Rosalie, Sam, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 124914
[Report This] Published: March 25, 2009 Updated: December 16, 2009


Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

So that was hot .

the qute from friends is: Drunk enough that I know I want this. Not so drunk that you should feel guilty about taking advantage.”

This convo takes place in London after Ross' wedding to Emily.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

It would have been totally funny (and unrealistic) if Bella got crapped on too after she started laughing at Edward.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

There was one point in this story that was so funny that I laughed out loud and then drooled! That was really funny!!!

Awww...they love each other. They're in trouble now!



Author's Response:

laughing and drooling? Sweet! Thanks! :D

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

They have some crazy ass willpower to be able to stop even though they have all theaat chemistry.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: December 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue

Thanks for the great ending. You fooled me a little bit with Charlie getting married, but it was cool. As for the babies, mmy mom has nieces older than she is. Weird, huh?

My favorite part was when Masen walked down the aisle as a bear.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Teaching little kids is serious business. Tanya knew coming in that she didn't like kids in that age group yet she took the job anyways. She should have known better. As for Bella, it isn't her fault, yet she blames herself. I see her point, but people like her need to realize that the blame lies solely on the person responsible for that action (Tanya in this case). Why do good people always blame themselves and the guilty party could care less?

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Yay! I cannot WAIT for the next chapter!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I have to agree with Edward that the first break up after the theater was too easily for someone crazy like tanya to accept. I cannot believe that she had the audacity to show up at Chuck e cheese. That was unbelievable.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Tanya is crazy! I was scared for a second there that she was going to kidnap Masen. Thank goodness that was not the case. She only wanted to ruin their first night together, which was undeniably hot.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Yes, you and Tiff need to go deep in hiding...witness protection style. You can come out when you update, but make sure Tiff stays there until she finishes writing Breaking Bella.

OMG! This story totally took a whole new crazy turn. I know Bella is this great person, but she is not a whore and is kind of stupid for thinking so. She can't honestly believe that Tanya and Edward were really together and Bella and Edward made an honest effort to control themselves. UPDATE soon!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Tanya POV

Wow. tanya is one crazy delusional bitch!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Yay! He made it! I can't wait to see edward and renee together. i also will be anxiously waiting for what Kate has to say. Please keep your word and update soon. The chapter is perfect! Jus tsubmit the damn thing!!! (hehe)

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I loved how he referred to her as my girl when talking to Kate. I think that they made a good decision when they decided to drop the charges.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Still as good as ever. Sorry that you were sick, but the bright side is that you didn't die...yay!

Renee crushing on Carlisle was pretty funny.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: November 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Poor Carlise. I was wondering what they were going to do about the buttons...or lackthereof. I'm glad Melissa got to walk in on them. That put her in her place. Laid Bare sounds great!



Author's Response:

lol, thanks so much for your review. Laid Bare will be posted in a few days! :)

 
Par Amour by ArenGoLucky Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 270]
Summary:

For par amour, I loved her first ere thou. -Chaucer; What if Myspace's Artist/Artist interview with Rob Pattinson & Hayley Williams was not the first time they met? What if there was much more? A love story for the ages. Rated M for LEMONS.


Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: No Word count: 125940
[Report This] Published: March 29, 2009 Updated: March 21, 2011


Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I loved how Hayley teased Rob about the Goblet of Fire. I would totally do that too. It would have been so funny if Nikki pulled out Twilight afterwards :)



Author's Response:

that would be funny!  omg...an entire robathon w/ him watching?  that would be hilarious!  thanks for the review!  wanted to let you know i've just posted 24 over on ff...will be submitting it to twi here in a minute!  but i've started a blog just for par amour...i love my reviewers so much and i want y'all to get to know one another too.  i'm posting all things rob and hayley!  so come check it out...here's the link: http://arengoluckysparamour.blogspot.com/?zx=cccc6523b09b7b32

much love!

AGL

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I have to admit that it is kind of weird that she can drink alcohol but can't handle nyquil. Rob was really sweet taking care of her.

I am worried about when they start shooting Twilight. Kristen and Rob have amazing chemistry. Good thing Nikki will be there.



Author's Response:

i am totes like that.  i can drink w/ the best of them, but give me some nyquil, and i'll throw it up.  blech~and i can't handle it.  i'll be bouncing off the walls at full speed!  so no cold meds for me. 

i loved how he was w/ her.  kind of fatherly when he had to be, but sweet and tender too.  *sigh* i love him. 

thanks for the review!  i love it!

much love~AGL

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

This is so ridiculously sad! *tear*



Author's Response:

awww...hun, it will all work out in the end, i promise!  come here, let me hold you...okay, better now?  LOL

love ya!  btw...do you have a twitter?  i'm arengolucky...if you do, look me up!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 14 pt 2

The whole car scene was just too funny!



Author's Response:

so glad you thought so!  i get tired of writing the sad stuff.  i know it's necessary, but i'd rather be funny.  had to break up the angst, kwim?

love ya!  mwah!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 16

It kind of sucks that they both were only dreaming of each other.
What a scene it must have been when Rob fell in the pool!



Author's Response:

i had so many peeps hatin on me for that!  but in a good way!  i needed them to be together in some capacity, so that's the only way it fit.  mmm...wet rob?  yes please!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

What is going on? Another dream!!!



Author's Response:

MUAUAUAUAUAU!  I'M EVIL!!!! 

love ya!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I'm so proud of Rob for going to the showcase even though it was hard. He's such a good guy.



Author's Response:

i think he needed to go, because it was important...for her, but also for him.  one day when they get back together, it will mean a lot to her, i'm sure that he was there.  he loves her deeply and he couldn't miss out on her big night! 

love ya!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

This format was really cool (the q and a). It was a nice change of pace.



Author's Response:

thanks! it was ridiculous to write!  the doc wouldn't format right...it was a nightmare!  but at the last minute, it worked!  thanks for the review!

love ya!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

The journal seemed so truthful and heartfelt...Hayley totally needs to work on her issues. How can she not just run to him after reading it?



Author's Response:

i know right?  if that was me, i'd have gotten in my car and found him!  you couldn't have held me back!  thanks for all your sweet reviews!  you kinda rock my socks!

mwah!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

so I am finally all caught up and get left with this cliffie...which is an awesome one. Why is he so mad? He should be happy that she finally realizes that she really truly wants him. Update soon!

Btw, I don't read stories outside of Edward and Bella, but yours was really good. I forgot who recommended it. I'm glad I listened.



Author's Response:

i am so flattered!  that means a lot to me! 

i'm submitting the next chapter in a sec, so it should be validated and posted next week at the latest!  be on the look out!

love ya!

 




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