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Penname: BellaS [Contact]
Real name: B
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I was introduced to the world we all know and love by a former of student of mine a couple of months ago. How naive was I to believe that she was just a girl in love with her boyfriend Edward Cullen. Four books,  a movie, and countless fanfics later, I know exactly who Edward Cullen is. :)


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Reviews by BellaS
 
Summary: Feature

Seeking to escape a dangerous memory from her past, Bella moves to Forks her junior year with every intention of getting a fresh start.  With a little self-assurance and a whole lot of attitude, she shakes things up at Forks High without even intending to.  When a mysterious new student turns her world upside down, will Bella have the strength to resist him, or is she destined to repeat her old mistakes?  Will he be able to save her when the past catches up with her?

Rated NC-17 for criminally hot cars, graphic sex, and language...

 

 


Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 82359
[Report This] Published: March 15, 2009 Updated: July 23, 2009


Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Boyfriend

animal, tornado, bank, amusement park...omg are you trying to kill me!!!
Bella did a fine job of cockblocking herself with the Tanya comment.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Mistakes

Poor Bella. Knowing Edward, he probably thought that she wasn't a virgin. I really hope that he isn't using that as an excuse to "hit it, then quit it."

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - The Bitch is Back

dun dun dun...who do the footsteps belong to? I hope Edward because that would be romantic as hell. If not Edward, that would leave James and we all know what a psycho he is.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Breakable

when will these two finally admit that they are made for each other!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Resolution

Great almost ending. I will definitely be waiting for the epilogue. I thoroughly enjoyed your story and am sad to see it end. You have an amazing way with words...and I'm glad Tanya, Lauren and Jessica got what they deserved.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Epilogue

What a great ending to the story. They're going to Dartmouth!

btw, loved the comment about calling Carlisle daddy! hilarious!

 
You Found Me by brighteyes87 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 729]
Summary:

When her marriage began to fall apart, she ran into a beautiful stranger on the streets of London. Can he show her how love should be and help her move on?

 

A HUGE thank you to Falconcranelove for the amazing banner!

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Garrett, Jacob, Jasper, Kate, Leah, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 154680
[Report This] Published: March 16, 2009 Updated: October 25, 2009


Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: November 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Bring Me Down

YAY!!!!!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: November 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Kiss and Say Goodbye

I know your stance on affaira, but I really do believe that Bella and Edward are getting what they deserve. I want them to be happy, but in the right way. I know Bella has issues with divorce, blah blah blah, but you can only be miserable for so long...right? Poor edward.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: November 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: You Make My Dreams Come True

I really enjoyed this story. there was so much angst and pain...it was pretty awesome. I liked how you resolved it and how it ended. Yay! They were able to shut Jake up, get married and have kids. Thanks for sharing.

Whatever happened to you? Did you get accepted into grad school in London? Did you become an alcoholic? Whatever it is, I hope that you are having a wonderful time. Find what you love and do it for the rest of your life. I know it's scary being in that transitional stage, but it gets better...I promise :)

 
Summary:

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All told from Edward's POV, The Acclimation Diaries, chronicles Edward’s struggles with learning to control himself and taking things one step at a time as he acclimates himself to Bella sexually in preparation of their impending wedding night.  Can he keep his desire in check or will he snap?

 

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A companion story for my one-shot, “Show Me”

TAD Banner by: falconcranelove

Indie Banner by: AngstGoddess

 


Categories: Eclipse, Post-Eclipse, Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 84817
[Report This] Published: March 19, 2009 Updated: September 19, 2009


Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Coming Home

Emmett and Rosalie were so great in this chapter--from the bed to the breakfast to the hug. I hope that Edward takes into consideration Emmett's version of Edward's trifecta...and do it on/in the Vanquish!



Author's Response:

Edward says, you'll have to stay tuned to find out the last piece of the trifecta ;-)  Thank you for reading bb!!  *MWAH*

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: It's Time

Great job so far. *fist bump* I'm glad that you plan to continue writing this until the change occurs.



Author's Response:

Thank you much babes *fist bump*  Please stay tuned!!  *MWAH*

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: The Honeymoon; Part One

I definiitely enjoyed Edward's vernacular...it made the chapter more light and carefree.



Author's Response:

Thank  you so much!  *MWAH*

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: The Honeymoon; Part Two

It's so sweet when she came out of the room with the cherry outfit on and just knew that he would like it... "because I know you"



Author's Response:

Thank you, bb!  That was one of my favorite parts to write.  *MWAH*

 
Summary:

Bella has been with Jacob for four years and everyone thinks they have the perfect relationship. Their friends and family expect an engagement any day, but Bella is having second thoughts. A story about old love, new love, and friendship.

Canon pairings. Slightly OOC. Rated for later chapters.

FINALIST IN THE INDIE TWIFIC AWARDS! CATEGORY: BEST AU HUMAN-COMPLETE.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 76222
[Report This] Published: March 22, 2009 Updated: June 05, 2009


Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I like Edward's nickname of Dr. McDoMe, it's better than Carlisle's Dr. FuckMe in Breaking Bella (which is an awesome story).

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Yes! I love you!!! Thank you for giving Bella such an easy (though probably painful) way out. Btw, he's pretty cocky to bring a girl home when it's the first time he's cheated on his gf...asswipe!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

rambling Edward is so cute. It brings him back down to mortal level.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I'm so proud of how Bella handled everything. It probably helped that she wasn't in love with him anymore when she caught him.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

That was a great edward speech at the end. Apparently I like insecure edward.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Ruh roh is right. Who knew that Bella's superhero story might actually be slightly based on reality. Can't wait to find out the Tanya connection.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Wow. I have to admit that I was secretly hoping that jake would show up. I just wanted him to see edward and Bella and how happy they were and run away with his tail between his legs. When he started texted her again, I knew trouble wasn't far off. Both of them are stupid and I think that they both owe each other an apology.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Yay! They made up like grown ups, by talking things out.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Epilogue

Thanks for not having Bella and Edward rushing off to get married. How you had them in the epi is very them, taking things slow.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading No Sleep! I'm glad you liked the end, so many stories end with an engagement or a wedding, but that wouldn't have made any sense for these characters. I thought it was enough that they were moving forward together. I'm glad you agree :) Thanks for your reviews!

 
Girl Afraid by agoraphobiantic Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 329]
Summary:

Edward moves to Forks with his father during his senior year, where he meets Bella Swan. Gorgeous, confident, and non-malicious hater extraordinaire. She hates Edward, for no apparent reason, and an already unpleasant life at Forks becomes unbearable.

But there's more to her than Edward guessed at, and more to her antagonism than meets the eye...

*Banner by the generously talented m81170, who is made of awesome.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 64264
[Report This] Published: March 22, 2009 Updated: August 15, 2009


Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - First Sight aka "I Hate You"

Edward was really funny. First with the tennis ball and later thinking about the possibility of Bella murdering a cat so thatt she could stuff it into some poor girl's locker!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - "Dead Fish"

what is wrong with Bella?

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - "In Twos"

Lauren and people vain like her totally deserve what Bella did...but it was still messed up.

 




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