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Penname: BellaS [ Contact]
Real name: B
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Member Since: April 30, 2009
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I was introduced to the world we all know and love by a former of student of mine a couple of months ago. How naive was I to believe that she was just a girl in love with her boyfriend Edward Cullen. Four books, a movie, and countless fanfics later, I know exactly who Edward Cullen is. :)
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Summary: Summary: AU. A powerful group of humans know of the existence of vampires and werewolves and strict rules are in place for the uneasy coexistence between the three kinds. Transforming humans without tacit permission is banned and all violators and victims are ordered destroyed. Bella was attacked when she was eight years old but miraculously survived. She returns to Forks during her junior year in high school and encounters the Olympic Coven. Against her will, she is drawn to Edward Cullen and into the dangerous world of shifting loyalties and deadly intrigue.
Thanks to JO (Cullenitis) for the AWESOME banner!
Thanks to another JO (sleepyjo at ffnet) for reading and editing the first 13(!) chapters.
Please direct your thanks to her for saving you from the whiplash that is born from my confused tenses and wonky grammar.
Categories: AU Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes
Word count: 73297
[Report This] Published: March 15, 2009 Updated: January 10, 2010
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: First encounter
So apparently, both Edward and Alice's gift don't work on her. I wonder if the Cullens will get in trouble for her being a vampire b/c of all the laws surrounding it.
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: I see you
can't wait for their first interaction!
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Unraveling the mystery
That was some crazy background info you came up with. I thought that it was amazing what they found out about Bella just by playing around with her. It's kind of ironic b/c Bella thinks she is being stealth when in actuality whatever information she gets, it is b/c the Cullens let her have it.
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Bonds
Your story is like the tv show Lost in the sense that so many questions arises after reading a chapter. But yours in the end is better b/c you won't leave me hanging for 7 seasons, or in this case chapters, before you finally start answering them.
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: In the name of synchrony
Wow. This chapter turned out differently than I imagined. With all the biting and venom exchanged, will Bella successfully turn into a vampire now?
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Something different
I cannot wait for the meeting. Edward is an ass in this story and I feel so bad for Bella b/c she's stuck in the middle. Maybe when they fall in love with each other, loving Edward will make his presence known.
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: A dangerous precedent
Edward is such an ass to Bella. Why?
As for offering himself to the Volturi to save Esme from destruction, what happened there?
Summary:  Seeking to escape a dangerous memory from her past, Bella moves to Forks her junior year with every intention of getting a fresh start. With a little self-assurance and a whole lot of attitude, she shakes things up at Forks High without even intending to. When a mysterious new student turns her world upside down, will Bella have the strength to resist him, or is she destined to repeat her old mistakes? Will he be able to save her when the past catches up with her?
Rated NC-17 for criminally hot cars, graphic sex, and language...
Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes
Word count: 82359
[Report This] Published: March 15, 2009 Updated: July 23, 2009
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - The Longest Day
how did James find her...scary!
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - The Circus
First Carlisle, then Emmett..two funnies in one chapter!
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Dynamics
Up until the whole James part, this chapter was sooo funny. I wished I could have been there when Bella took Emmett down.
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Push
Seriously, what is Edward's deal? For some one who appreciatres literature, he sure is lacking in the communication department.
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - The Fall
You are such an awesome writer. Seriously. You have me so interested that I cannot begin to think about sleep until I am done with this story (It's 1:20 am).
I'm glad that Edward and Jake are on friendly terms...purple crayon was definitely emasculating (but cute). I hope she circles yes!
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Boyfriend
animal, tornado, bank, amusement park...omg are you trying to kill me!!!
Bella did a fine job of cockblocking herself with the Tanya comment.
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Mistakes
Poor Bella. Knowing Edward, he probably thought that she wasn't a virgin. I really hope that he isn't using that as an excuse to "hit it, then quit it."
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - The Bitch is Back
dun dun dun...who do the footsteps belong to? I hope Edward because that would be romantic as hell. If not Edward, that would leave James and we all know what a psycho he is.
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Breakable
when will these two finally admit that they are made for each other!
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Resolution
Great almost ending. I will definitely be waiting for the epilogue. I thoroughly enjoyed your story and am sad to see it end. You have an amazing way with words...and I'm glad Tanya, Lauren and Jessica got what they deserved.
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
What a great ending to the story. They're going to Dartmouth!
btw, loved the comment about calling Carlisle daddy! hilarious!
Summary: When her marriage began to fall apart, she ran into a beautiful stranger on the streets of London. Can he show her how love should be and help her move on?
A HUGE thank you to Falconcranelove for the amazing banner!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Garrett, Jacob, Jasper, Kate, Leah, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes
Word count: 154680
[Report This] Published: March 16, 2009 Updated: October 25, 2009
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: November 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Bring Me Down
YAY!!!!!
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: November 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Kiss and Say Goodbye
I know your stance on affaira, but I really do believe that Bella and Edward are getting what they deserve. I want them to be happy, but in the right way. I know Bella has issues with divorce, blah blah blah, but you can only be miserable for so long...right? Poor edward.
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: November 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 24: You Make My Dreams Come True
I really enjoyed this story. there was so much angst and pain...it was pretty awesome. I liked how you resolved it and how it ended. Yay! They were able to shut Jake up, get married and have kids. Thanks for sharing.
Whatever happened to you? Did you get accepted into grad school in London? Did you become an alcoholic? Whatever it is, I hope that you are having a wonderful time. Find what you love and do it for the rest of your life. I know it's scary being in that transitional stage, but it gets better...I promise :)
Summary: 
All told from Edward's POV, The Acclimation Diaries, chronicles Edward’s struggles with learning to control himself and taking things one step at a time as he acclimates himself to Bella sexually in preparation of their impending wedding night. Can he keep his desire in check or will he snap?
A companion story for my one-shot, “Show Me”
TAD Banner by: falconcranelove
Indie Banner by: AngstGoddess
Categories: Eclipse, Post-Eclipse, Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes
Word count: 84817
[Report This] Published: March 19, 2009 Updated: September 19, 2009
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Coming Home
Emmett and Rosalie were so great in this chapter--from the bed to the breakfast to the hug. I hope that Edward takes into consideration Emmett's version of Edward's trifecta...and do it on/in the Vanquish! Author's Response: Edward says, you'll have to stay tuned to find out the last piece of the trifecta ;-) Thank you for reading bb!! *MWAH*
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: It's Time
Great job so far. *fist bump* I'm glad that you plan to continue writing this until the change occurs. Author's Response: Thank you much babes *fist bump* Please stay tuned!! *MWAH*
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: The Honeymoon; Part One
I definiitely enjoyed Edward's vernacular...it made the chapter more light and carefree. Author's Response: Thank you so much! *MWAH*
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: The Honeymoon; Part Two
It's so sweet when she came out of the room with the cherry outfit on and just knew that he would like it... "because I know you" Author's Response: Thank you, bb! That was one of my favorite parts to write. *MWAH*
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