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Penname: BellaS [Contact]
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Member Since: April 30, 2009

I was introduced to the world we all know and love by a former of student of mine a couple of months ago. How naive was I to believe that she was just a girl in love with her boyfriend Edward Cullen. Four books,  a movie, and countless fanfics later, I know exactly who Edward Cullen is. :)

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Reviews by BellaS

Bella has been with Jacob for four years and everyone thinks they have the perfect relationship. Their friends and family expect an engagement any day, but Bella is having second thoughts. A story about old love, new love, and friendship.

Canon pairings. Slightly OOC. Rated for later chapters.


banner no sleep


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 76222
[Report This] Published: March 22, 2009 Updated: June 05, 2009

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Yes! I love you!!! Thank you for giving Bella such an easy (though probably painful) way out. Btw, he's pretty cocky to bring a girl home when it's the first time he's cheated on his gf...asswipe!

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

rambling Edward is so cute. It brings him back down to mortal level.

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I'm so proud of how Bella handled everything. It probably helped that she wasn't in love with him anymore when she caught him.

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

That was a great edward speech at the end. Apparently I like insecure edward.

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Ruh roh is right. Who knew that Bella's superhero story might actually be slightly based on reality. Can't wait to find out the Tanya connection.

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Wow. I have to admit that I was secretly hoping that jake would show up. I just wanted him to see edward and Bella and how happy they were and run away with his tail between his legs. When he started texted her again, I knew trouble wasn't far off. Both of them are stupid and I think that they both owe each other an apology.

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Yay! They made up like grown ups, by talking things out.

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Epilogue

Thanks for not having Bella and Edward rushing off to get married. How you had them in the epi is very them, taking things slow.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading No Sleep! I'm glad you liked the end, so many stories end with an engagement or a wedding, but that wouldn't have made any sense for these characters. I thought it was enough that they were moving forward together. I'm glad you agree :) Thanks for your reviews!

Girl Afraid by agoraphobiantic Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 329]

Edward moves to Forks with his father during his senior year, where he meets Bella Swan. Gorgeous, confident, and non-malicious hater extraordinaire. She hates Edward, for no apparent reason, and an already unpleasant life at Forks becomes unbearable.

But there's more to her than Edward guessed at, and more to her antagonism than meets the eye...

*Banner by the generously talented m81170, who is made of awesome.

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 64264
[Report This] Published: March 22, 2009 Updated: August 16, 2009

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - First Sight aka "I Hate You"

Edward was really funny. First with the tennis ball and later thinking about the possibility of Bella murdering a cat so thatt she could stuff it into some poor girl's locker!

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - "Dead Fish"

what is wrong with Bella?

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - "In Twos"

Lauren and people vain like her totally deserve what Bella did...but it was still messed up.

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Blood Type aka "Bella Faints at the Sight of Blood"

You were so clever with the confederate flag comment. It was really funny. As for Bella's's so sad!

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Mind over Matter aka "Murphy's Law"

After knowing what she did with James, I don't think I could be with her (if I was a dude).

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Epilogue: An Occasion aka "The Part That Comes After"

The story got so seriously interesting at the end that I just had to stay up and finish it.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading it. I'm really glad you liked it! This story was incredible to write, and I'm so glad I did because of readers and reviewers like you. I hope you'll read and like my other story, too! ^^

Summary: Feature


*Takes place during New Moon in an alternate universe.

On March 16, 2006,  the World changed, and everything and anything that the Cullens ever cared about was lost. They had to find their own way in this New World. Edward never wished to exist in a world where Bella didn't.  Unfortunately, his family desperately needed him, so he'd stay to help them.   And by doing so, he hoped to redeem himself for his failure to save the one creature he couldn't protect. 

With rumours in the South of humans feeding off the living and stealing people from their beds, the Cullens have a responsibility to protect the ones they can from those monsters in the night.  This was Edward's last chance to fight for his soul and his salvation.  He would finally be ready to face Judgement day and be deemed worthy enough to be with Bella once again.  Or would something or someone change the path he was destined to go down?  Faith, hope and love are powerful things, and Edward is about to find out just how powerful they are.


Yes... this is the story that is set during a post-apocalyptic nuclear war. Just try the Prologue to get a feel for it before passing judgment. You might be surprised. Warning: There is violence and disturbing images the further the story goes along.

Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Series: None
Chapters: 39 Completed: Yes Word count: 315697
[Report This] Published: March 24, 2009 Updated: March 25, 2012

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: May 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: To Err is Human, To Forgive Divine

I'm glad victoria's dead, but what about Bella? I refuse to believe that she is dead.

Author's Response:

All is not what it seems.


New chapter will be out tonight.  THanks for sticking with me!

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Fortune Favors the Brave

Best chapter to date. You portrayed Rosalie in such a different light... and it worked. It was such a heart-wrenching chapter. Please update soon. Edward has to find Carlisle.

I'm glad you jump back and forth with the time frames. Otherwise I would be super anxious right now.

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: The Darkest Hour is Just Before the Dawn

Yay! Emmett's back...I'm worried about what he has seen. I hope that he would be able to overcome it all.

And poor Carlisle. It makes sense why he feels so guilty. I wonder how they will convince him to come back.

Author's Response:

It's true....I wonder what brings Carlisle back.  ;)  Soon, it will be revealed soon.

Emmett will have his time as well... and maybe that has something to the whole big picture too.  Thanks so much for stickng with me and my crazy posting schedule... I know it's frustrating!


Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: None So Deaf as Those Who Will Not Hear

It's amazing to see Edward step up and take charge in the search for Carlisle and helping the family come together again, which is kind of weird because in one of the earlier chapters that takes place in the present, he still wants to kill himself. I don't know whether or not Bella will ever come back (although I really hope she does), but I have to say that I read every chapter as if it was like the middle of new moon--really quickly and anxiously. I would skip ahead if I could...sigh.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  I am getting all my ducks in a row, I have 4 chapters in the pot ready to go.  Been working like crazy since I got back from Twicon.  I'll be updating tomorrow (Sunday) and then every Sunday after that until I run out of chapters. 

THanks so much for sticking with me.  I know this format is super frustrating!!  :)


Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: All Things Must Pass

I wholeheartedly agree with your fanfic recommendations. Trust in Advertising left us with a crazy cliffie, I hope that she updates soon. As for you, I am so happy to know that you will be updating the next 4 weeks. yay! I can't take it anymore, will Bella be coming back? I will read it regardless, but I really want to know.

Author's Response:

Oh.. TiA! I got to read the first quarter of next weeks chapter and 'trust me' it's good!

Bella.... hee hee. We will learn soon. ;) that's all I can say!  Thanks for being patient with me!

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: A Problem Shared is a Problem Halved

You really did update today! Yay!

I hope that Alice gets her harvest festival. People need something fun and different to break the monotony in their lives. As for Emmett and his comment about them moving in the future, I hope that it isn't true. I want them to all be happy and stable, which translates to tem staying in Forks. Thank you so much for answering my question about Bella, it was greatly appreciated. :)

Also, I can't wait to find out how Edward got carlisle away from the hospital and what made Jasper feel better.

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Faith Keeps the Man Who Keeps his Faith

This story keeps getting better. Is it weird that the most emotionally charged part of this story was when Emmett killed the lion? I almost cried!

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Music Has Charms to Soothe the Savage Beast

How is it possible to leave us with two cliffies in one chapter??? Two really important and very interesting cliffies!!! Aaargh!!!!

Thanks for letting us know that you will be updating next week. I was scared that you would be out of chapters by now.

Author's Response:

I know!  I am sorry.

This next chapter will be the last of the ones I had "half" written, so after Sunday, I have NO idea what the update schedule will be.

Thanks again for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: To Understand All is to Forgive All

I'm sorry last week sucked for you. If it makes you feel better, you wrote an awesome chapter! yay! Bella is back...with a new alias, but it's still her. So Bella was able to meet up with jasper and now jasper and Edward will be on their way to her. Edward doesn't have to try to end himself anymore. I am so excited to see where this goes. have a fruitful writing time until you are done with this story. See you at canadian thanksgiving and not at regular thanksgiving!

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Pt2 - Forewarned is Forearmed

Thank you for updating. I have really grown to love this fic. It must have been so gross for him to witness all that he did and then have to pretend like he actually liked Maria...eww. Update when you can. i can't wait to hear about Phoenix.

As fot the thing that Jasper didn't want to tell Edward about Bella and Garrett, are they (B and G) together?

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Patience is Bitter, But Its Reward is Sweet

Poor Jasper. I'm so proud of him for controlling his bloodlust that he resorted to rats to stay on track. I can't believe that after all that happened and everything he did for her, Edward was going to not see her.



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