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I was introduced to the world we all know and love by a former of student of mine a couple of months ago. How naive was I to believe that she was just a girl in love with her boyfriend Edward Cullen. Four books,  a movie, and countless fanfics later, I know exactly who Edward Cullen is. :)

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Edward Cullen is an Army brat, who has his entire life planned out perfectly, and can't wait to get out of this utterly dull town of Forks, WA. But then a whirlwind in the form of Bella Swan enters his life and before long, he can't imagine his life without her. Will he sacrifice his chance at what could be a beautiful life with her? And is Bella willing to make that same sacrifice... AU/AH, possibly some OOC

Rated for situations and lemons later on...


©2009 kyla713. All rights reserved worldwide.



Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 121063
[Report This] Published: January 17, 2009 Updated: September 10, 2009

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Decisions

Is he joining the army because he wants to do it, follow in his father's footsteps, or because it is the only thing that would take him away from Forks?

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Dinner at the Cullens

Although I can see Edward's point, I am totally on team Bella.

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Number 326

Girls can be so horrible to one another. No wonder guys can get away with anything.

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Merry Christmas, Baby

oh no!!! there goes Charlie being nice to Edward!

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Building Up A Future

I'm glad that you will be continuing the story. Will they make it? What happens to Alice and Jasper? Des Emmet really marry Rose? I hope that you really mean it and that the sequel is all ready up and running!

Author's Response:

The first chapter of the sequel was just posted on tonight and will be up and running on Twilighted soon I hope. Thank you so much for your reviews. I appreciated every single one of them.





Thanx to the beautiful Anne Cullen for the banner!


Picking up from Edward's leave in New Moon, Bella never rescued Edward, Edward never came back, but somebody did ... 

 This story is set five years after that sad day Edward left Bella in the woods.

For years Bella searches for Edward, eager to tell him her new found secret.  As Bella gives in to her fears, that Edward really is gone, she runs into her past in the least likely place.  Only to find out, her past has a secret to tell as well.


"The smell of the worn book had distracted me from the wonderful aroma that had engulfed the room.  It had subdued my venom, had forced me back into a human-like state, my inner monster slowly crawling back into his darkened hole.  I swallowed one last time, and decided to glance at this glorious teacher.  Obviously he was a man of impeccable taste.  I might actually enjoy Senior Literature this year.  

I glanced up quickly from under my eyelids, my amber eyes focusing on a lanky form in front of me.  I froze.  

… Oh shit. "




Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jane, Marcus, Mike, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie, Victoria
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 31919
[Report This] Published: January 20, 2009 Updated: October 30, 2009

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: May 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Wolf Claws

Please update soon!!! Can't wait to find out what happened.

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Bottle Caps

Welcome back!!! I didn't have the heart to remove you from my faves. I absolutely love this story. WHy didn't Edward come back to her after he was changed back (do I need to go back to a previous chapter)?. Was she gone already? I can't wait to find out what happens next!



Bella is an aspiring writer, who doesn't have time to date. In an act of desperation, Bella tells her mom, she has a boyfriend. Now Bella must hire a boyfriend for the holidays. Will Bella find that she likes her pretend world better than her reality?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 64982
[Report This] Published: January 21, 2009 Updated: February 26, 2010

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: June 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6-Crystal

This story is much more better than the wedding date. It seems more sincere and honest and sweet...I like it!

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: June 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13- It's Over-

That was a great resolution. Side note: I like how you make your recommendations about other fanfics, howeverm when I go to check them out, most of them don't exist. Are they on ff? btw, you are totally right about trust in advertising. I stayed up til almost 3 in the morning last night reading it...way worth it! (as is yours)

Author's Response:

I do read a lot of stories on FF. I post my story there first, as it takes a bit for this to be valadated, so yeah, you might find some pnly on FF. I will try to specify.

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14- Back to Reality-(VJ)

They are just too cute!

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Celebrate

I was wondering what happened to you! I'm glad you're okay. I like the nickname...dr. mmmm. very nice!

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: November 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16- My Heaven-

I'm glad that Edward is real...for Bella's sake. hehe. Thanks for the update. Don't try to make everyone happy. Just write the story as you envisioned it. If people don't enjoy it, it will be their loss. Do your thing...and update sooner--like once every two to three months. j/k I had to comment on the update fail :)

Aro's Heir by SubtlePen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1916]

Aro's Heir


Edward, Bella and Alice are drawn into a no-win scenario in Volterra after Edward's attempted suicide-by-Volturi in the Palazzo dei Priori .  Aro confronts Edward to make an impossible choice, with Alice as Aro's unwitting accomplice.  How will Edward's choice affect his reunion with Bella, and what future can they hope to salvage in the aftermath?

Story begins in New Moon, during Chapter 21, "The Verdict," but enters the AU when Aro reads Alice's mind...

AU, but canon through New Moon, with canon pairings.

~*~ warning ~*~  story contains very dark themes, including a sexual assault in the first chapter.  if this subject is a trigger for you, please do not continue. 

If you are a survivor of sexual abuse and need assistance, please contact RAINN

Disclaimer:  I do not own the Twilight series, nor any of the characters created by Stephenie Meyer. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.

Twilighted Supervisory Beta: psymom        Twilighted Validation Beta: Lion_in_the_Land


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 95553
[Report This] Published: January 29, 2009 Updated: November 26, 2012

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 08, 2009 Title: Aro's Heir

This chapter was definitely worth the give us more please.

So do Jane and Alec know that Bella is pregnant yet? I hope Alice's vision doesn't come true.

Author's Response:

more is in the works....

jane and alec know BxE are married, but the pregnancy reveal will be in chapter 15.  which of alice's visions are you most afraid of?

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 13, 2009 Title: Aro's Heir


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Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 13, 2009 Title: Aro's Heir

I say we give Jane a chance. Sure she didn't do anything before, however, she put a stop to Alec's madness when she didn't have to. That should accout for something. As for Jake, I'm cool with him.

Author's Response:

yay!  yes - jane has her work cut out for her, but she made a huge leap siding with the cullens over her own brother...

love me some bff jake.

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: December 07, 2009 Title: Aro's Heir

I can't wait to see what happens next. Apparently, the Volturi will be coming very soon since they don't believe Jane. The babies are born and healty, but what about Bella? Update soon please!

Author's Response:

hee hee ...  you're a careful reader.  but - there's a little dischord between the 3 - perhaps they won't be able to agree for a while on what to do next?  Marcus and Caius are hesitant to act...


more soon!

Change of Heart by LuvCullens Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 855]

Bella, has spent her life hating and loving the arrogant Edward Cullen. When she returns to Forks after ten years, will she fall for Dr Black, or will Edward see that he wants her to have a change of heart?

Thanks to heatherdawnc for her amazing banner work.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 201161
[Report This] Published: January 29, 2009 Updated: February 11, 2010

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Yay! Edward IS smart. I think he kissed her on was definitely unplanned. Maybe he wanted to make her feel better and not rejected. Maybe to see how it would feel...He was never really interested in her unitl he saw her again for the first time at the hospital, right?

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19(s)

Great cliffhanger! Kids say the darndest things! Totally loved this chapter. Hopefully now that Bella knows edward isn't doing so well, she will be convinced of his feelings for her.

As for the jacob situation, I think you did a wonderful job with that. He knew that she really didn't want much from him (after the kiss at the gala), so although it was a jerk move to be with Tanya, he technically wasn't in the wrong. I'm happy that they will be friends.

I even liked your version of Tanya. She seemed like such a sweet, strong woman.

Please upate soon. I have to know everyone's reaction to Emma's comment.

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20(s)

Favorite conversation was between Alice and Bella. She went from sad to happy in no time at all (like me).Now if Bella could be honest about her feelings to Edward...

Author's Response:

Thanks for your review, can you see me? I am happy dancing. All things will happen in due time, trust me.

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22(s)

I knew it was James stalking her...we all did! :)

It was so sweet that Bella had to go to Edward to get to sleep. I'm glad that Edward knows that she has always loved him. It seems like she is really ready for them to get closer.

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

yay! Thank goodness he was selfish! It was really stupid for Bella to leave it up to fate like that, but I'm assuming that that's how most people are. I probably would have done the same thing.

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25(s)

I'm so glad that Edward was at the door and not James! Whew!

Are you a so-cal girl too? Or has in-n-out branched out more than I thought?

I think that edward is just surprised to find out about Bella's track record. However, it wouldn't stop him. He would be supportive and take things slow.

Author's Response:

Thanks for your reviews. Yes I am a so cal girl born and raised in the SF VAlley. How bout you?

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I can't believe that she wasn't mad about the phone thing. And she totally has a point with the Jake thing too.


Author's Response:

Wow, you're the first person to say that. I thought she was valid but I think you and I are the only ones that see that. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: November 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I can't believe you left it like that!!! At least you can't use the "My family was sick" excuse this time....hehe. UPDATE! Hopefully Edward didn't ruin it all.

Author's Response:

I know, I know, but I need you guys to want more so you will keep coming back for more. I won't use the excuse again, even though my kids are still sick. I will update by Thanksgiving. I will not tell what happens with Edward in the next chapter, but we will see a side of him we haven't seen. ;) Thanks for reviewing.

Haunted Memories by SheeWolf85 Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 127]

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Edward leaves Bella for her own safety and tries to forget her. The rest of the Cullens stay behind to protect her and Bella’s friendship with Alice continues. Bella is determined to do what she must to be able to be with Edward again. As Alice searches Edward’s future to find him again, they realize that he does not want to be found.

Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No Word count: 60855
[Report This] Published: January 30, 2009 Updated: July 03, 2009

Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: May 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I really like the different approach. Wouldn't it be harder to get them back together because she would always be afraid of him (unless she became a vampire herself)? Also, is he becoming more human now that he has stopped feeding? Can't wait to read more.



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