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I was introduced to the world we all know and love by a former of student of mine a couple of months ago. How naive was I to believe that she was just a girl in love with her boyfriend Edward Cullen. Four books,  a movie, and countless fanfics later, I know exactly who Edward Cullen is. :)


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Reviews by BellaS
 
Summary:

It's been three long years since Edward left Bella, and things within The Cullen family have changed epically. After Edward's final stand off with Victoria, Emmett is left heartbroken and alone. A chance vision sends him back to Forks, and into the healing arms of the one person he never expected. Why fight with fate?

 

 New Moon AU - Bella/Emmett.

 


Categories: New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Eleazar, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Irina, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Kate, Laurent, Leah, Marcus, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: Emmett Stories
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 64433
[Report This] Published: January 13, 2009 Updated: February 22, 2011


Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - The Luckiest

I have to concede...Edward and Len together is not 100% wrong...more like 50%. I usually find myself staying away from stories that have Edward with someone other than Bella...so please ease into it slowly for my sanity! As for Emmett and Bella...I'm happy as long as they're happy. Update soon.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Run

Even though I read your a/n, I didn't realize that you were going to make Bella pregnant. I get why you gave us that warning. I'm kind of excited to see how this will all turn out...as long as it isn't like BD.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Stand By Me

Emma or Ella is a good combo of both names.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Mess I Made

Still hate edward and I still don't want him happy. Emmett is right though, he would be a dick if he let Ilene go.

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen is an Army brat, who has his entire life planned out perfectly, and can't wait to get out of this utterly dull town of Forks, WA. But then a whirlwind in the form of Bella Swan enters his life and before long, he can't imagine his life without her. Will he sacrifice his chance at what could be a beautiful life with her? And is Bella willing to make that same sacrifice... AU/AH, possibly some OOC

Rated for situations and lemons later on...

 

©2009 kyla713. All rights reserved worldwide.

ABC

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 121063
[Report This] Published: January 17, 2009 Updated: September 10, 2009


Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Your Embarrassing 'Something'

I love sassy Bella! The kiss sounded absolutely amazing...totally first kiss material. I'm glad that Edward whipped out the electric organ and nothing else. For a minute there, I was scared that Alice was right.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Black Knee-Length Dress

Edward's stupid...but I can kind of see where he and Bella are coming from and why they don't want to ruin their friendship.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Avoidance

I know this is horrible, but I kind of want Bella and Jake to hook up while edward is away. Edward has been handling the situation horribly and maybe when he realizes that Bella won't be waiting around forever, he will wake up and do somethig about it.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Welcome Back

Edward should have just told her the truth. I hope James doens't attack her or something.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - The Fairytale Life

thanks for not making James skeezy!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Moody and a Little Emotional

roh roh!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Bella's B-day Part 1

Please get rid of james now!!! And duh, it's the song from the movies (fromt eh night he told her to use the ladder anytime she wanted).

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Bella's B-Day Part 2

Okay, so I was totally wrong about the song...but it could have happened. That was a really sad story about Bella and her mom. I'm glad she still has Charlie...let's dump james so she can have edward too.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Awakenings

Yay! He's gone...and his stupid red head too (no offense to all the other red heads out there)

 

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - The Big Date

Laser tag is totally legen...wait for it...dary (how i met your mother)

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Decisions

Is he joining the army because he wants to do it, follow in his father's footsteps, or because it is the only thing that would take him away from Forks?

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Dinner at the Cullens

Although I can see Edward's point, I am totally on team Bella.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Number 326

Girls can be so horrible to one another. No wonder guys can get away with anything.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Merry Christmas, Baby

oh no!!! there goes Charlie being nice to Edward!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Building Up A Future

I'm glad that you will be continuing the story. Will they make it? What happens to Alice and Jasper? Des Emmet really marry Rose? I hope that you really mean it and that the sequel is all ready up and running!



Author's Response:

The first chapter of the sequel was just posted on fanfiction.net tonight and will be up and running on Twilighted soon I hope. Thank you so much for your reviews. I appreciated every single one of them.

~Dawn

 
Summary:

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Thanx to the beautiful Anne Cullen for the banner!

 

Picking up from Edward's leave in New Moon, Bella never rescued Edward, Edward never came back, but somebody did ... 

 This story is set five years after that sad day Edward left Bella in the woods.

For years Bella searches for Edward, eager to tell him her new found secret.  As Bella gives in to her fears, that Edward really is gone, she runs into her past in the least likely place.  Only to find out, her past has a secret to tell as well.

 

"The smell of the worn book had distracted me from the wonderful aroma that had engulfed the room.  It had subdued my venom, had forced me back into a human-like state, my inner monster slowly crawling back into his darkened hole.  I swallowed one last time, and decided to glance at this glorious teacher.  Obviously he was a man of impeccable taste.  I might actually enjoy Senior Literature this year.  

I glanced up quickly from under my eyelids, my amber eyes focusing on a lanky form in front of me.  I froze.  

… Oh shit. "

 

 

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jane, Marcus, Mike, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 31919
[Report This] Published: January 20, 2009 Updated: October 30, 2009


Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: May 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Wolf Claws

Please update soon!!! Can't wait to find out what happened.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Bottle Caps

Welcome back!!! I didn't have the heart to remove you from my faves. I absolutely love this story. WHy didn't Edward come back to her after he was changed back (do I need to go back to a previous chapter)?. Was she gone already? I can't wait to find out what happens next!

 
Summary:

 

Bella is an aspiring writer, who doesn't have time to date. In an act of desperation, Bella tells her mom, she has a boyfriend. Now Bella must hire a boyfriend for the holidays. Will Bella find that she likes her pretend world better than her reality?

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 64982
[Report This] Published: January 21, 2009 Updated: February 25, 2010


Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: June 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6-Crystal

This story is much more better than the wedding date. It seems more sincere and honest and sweet...I like it!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: June 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13- It's Over-

That was a great resolution. Side note: I like how you make your recommendations about other fanfics, howeverm when I go to check them out, most of them don't exist. Are they on ff? btw, you are totally right about trust in advertising. I stayed up til almost 3 in the morning last night reading it...way worth it! (as is yours)



Author's Response:

I do read a lot of stories on FF. I post my story there first, as it takes a bit for this to be valadated, so yeah, you might find some pnly on FF. I will try to specify.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14- Back to Reality-(VJ)

They are just too cute!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Celebrate

I was wondering what happened to you! I'm glad you're okay. I like the nickname...dr. mmmm. very nice!

 




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