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Penname: BellaS [Contact]
Real name: B
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Member Since: April 30, 2009
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I was introduced to the world we all know and love by a former of student of mine a couple of months ago. How naive was I to believe that she was just a girl in love with her boyfriend Edward Cullen. Four books,  a movie, and countless fanfics later, I know exactly who Edward Cullen is. :)


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Reviews by BellaS
 
Summary:

After college, best friends Bella, Rosalie and Alice have a run-in with their past. . .and maybe their future? A farcical, romantic comedy with a healthy dose of angst.  Nominated for Best Romance & Best Edward Characterization (Incomplete) at the Twilight Awards.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes Word count: 144638
[Report This] Published: June 20, 2008 Updated: December 29, 2008


Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

omg!!!! I was glad to find out that you gave the disease known as tanya to someone else (not Edward)...but to find out that she was Emmett's wife. Holy f-ing cow! Very unexpected.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

This is the craziest chapter of famfic I have ever read. I had a feeling that Edward was a bad seed...but noooo, I was convinced reading Edward's pov that he was invested in the rellationship. Are the Cullens sticking together out of familial duty? I can't imagine they all came in just to tear those poor girls apart. And what's up with Edward knowing that Emmett was going to dump Rose on the streets???

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Okay, so Edward just has commitment issues, but that still doesn't explain how he knew Emmett was going to dump Rose that morning.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Yay!!!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Jasper did a great job. I'm glad he finally opened up to her. No onto E/b's reunion.

 

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Finally. yay for the happy ending.

 
Summary:

 

Bella Swan spent the first two years of her life in Forks developing a friendship with Jacob Black that finally turned into something more.  As she begins her senior year of high school, a new family moves to town and Bella slowly begins to question the path she thought her life would follow.  Sometimes there is a difference between what you think you need and what you never knew you wanted.  Takes place during the timeframe of New Moon and Eclipse.  J/B at first, but eventually E/B. 

 

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: No Word count: 170230
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2008 Updated: July 19, 2009


Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: May 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Pumpkins

This was perhaps the cutest conversation I've read between Bella and Edward.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: May 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Monster

I thought that you did a great job with this chapter. Sure, it was drama-filled, but you did it in a good way. I'm glad that you made Bella actually stand up for herself and tell Edward off (even if it wasn't true).

PS. Can't wait to read about Bella dumping Jacob! (even though he is very sweet)

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 35: Kissed

Good luck with your wedding. I have 5 more months until mmy own.Yay! I know how stressful it can be...so please update when you have time.

 
Wishing Star by Mystic_Ice24 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 4552]
Summary:

WRITTEN REWRITTEN REWRITTEN REWRITTEN

After her parents are killed in a plane crash, a young girl is rejected again & again by foster families for being too old. She wishes on a star nightly, but will she find what she seeks? Will the Cullens be that family?

NC-17 for later chapters. Warning" Violence, and sexual aggresion may be part of this story.

Winning Summary:

"I wish I may, I wish I might, have the wish I make tonight."  With that one hope Isabella Swan faces life as best as she can.  The tragedy of her parents' death, leaves her alone in a system where her age leaves her undesirable for adoption.  That is until one day two people come into her life offering her a chance at hope.  The Cullen family takes to Bella like a long lost sister.  What happens when Bella is taken from the Cullens by a lost relative?  Will Bella's hopes be destroyed?  What happens when fate steps in years later to reunite Bella with the one's she loved and who loved her so long ago?

Bella knew what she would say, "Don't you want to be my sister?"

 

 

Thanks to Mrs C for the above Banner and my beta readergoof for the below Banner!Wishing Star Banner Readergoof

Thanks to Sleforever for below banner!

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 40 Completed: No Word count: 137752
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2008 Updated: April 12, 2011


Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: November 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Joys of the Season

Ding dong the witch is gone!!! lalalala....Thank you! I loved how it all went down. How did Tanya actually believe that she was going to get away with the James comment? That was stupid. I'm glad Bella punched her. I can't believe that all the girls attacked her later...that was hilarious. The best part was when Rose called the cops on her.

Poor Edward. When they say love is blind, it sure was in his case!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: June 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: United

omg! you have to update like...now! I am seriously hooked on this story. How are they going to react to her question???

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: June 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Reunion

Thanks for updating so quickly! I can rest easier now...I enjoyed how you presented each pov--it was very insightful. I also like your version of James and Rose (they are so much easier to accept). Please don't make James into a psycho stalker! (and please have Edward and Bella discover eachother's love soon!) Can't wait for you to get rid of Tanya!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: June 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Surprise

Who's at the door? and Edward needs to dump Tanya

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Family

Let's have Edward find out the real Tanya!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: England

I think we can all agree that we are done with Englad (and Tanya) and ready for Edward and Bella to get together.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Say What?

Oh no he didn't! I can't believe he proposed to her! Bitch! I hope that James and Bella go out and make Edward jealous. Update sooN!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Outtake - Say What? - Special ReWrite

I don't really feel better b/c this outtake is exactly what he did to Tanya the chapter before. However, I forgive you b/c Tanya is gone 8 chapters from now. Yay!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Planning

I can't wait to see what their plan is! I am so behind whatever they have planned. Update soon!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: August 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Barbeque

Just a couple of more chapters to go before tanya is gone. As for Bella not telling the others about James, I can't help but feel that it's going to come back and bite her in the ass.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Halloween

So many things to comment on!

First, we all know that emmett is NOT wearing anything underneath.

Second, James is crazy! It's scary that a lot of guys are probably like him. They delude themselves intoo thinking that girls want them too, but are just playing games...

Third, who's at the door? You better update soon so that we can find out.

Fourth, great job on getting Tanya with the peppers...and then hiding the evidence.

Fifth, why can't Jasper and Emmett be in on the fun and games (against Tanya)?

Very mean cliffie! I hope that Edward finds them! Maybe then he will be able to pull his head out of his ass, wake up, and realize that he loves Bella!

 

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Aftershock

I'm glad that everyone busted in on James before anything really happened. I hope Edward finally realizes what Tanya really is and leaves her to be with Bella. Sorry about the virus, but get Office on your computer and update soon!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: The End's Beginning

Edward is so dense; he doesn't deserve to be with anyone. Thank goodness he's starting to wake up and realize that Tanya is bad news.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Secrets

Okay, now why did Tanya think that saying what she said without any blackmail material was going to work? They obviously don't like her and it is 3 to 1. What chance did she have? I can't wait for Edward's reaction!

 
These Dreams by jbluvs2sing Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 954]
Summary:

It's been three years since the day Edward left Bella in the woods...she is moving on but is still plagued by nightmares from time to time. Will someone from her past help her get through her difficult times? What danger lies ahead for her? Will her dreams eventually come true? Please read and review!

Dream sequences based on the hit song by Heart.

Thanks to the fabulous Mrs.C for the banner!

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Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 70891
[Report This] Published: August 14, 2008 Updated: April 05, 2009


Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Poor Bella, after she was able to give herself to Jacob, he imprinted...one someone else. Even though he was still there for her, it is definitely not in the same capacity.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This is either Edward or Jasper's pov. Will Bella end up as a student in the class?

 




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