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Penname: BellaS [Contact]
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I was introduced to the world we all know and love by a former of student of mine a couple of months ago. How naive was I to believe that she was just a girl in love with her boyfriend Edward Cullen. Four books,  a movie, and countless fanfics later, I know exactly who Edward Cullen is. :)


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Reviews by BellaS
 
Summary:

They were both seeking the same thing: An end. What neither of them expected to find was something to live for, something that would entirely change the way they viewed this life that had broken them.

Hope.

Mistakes were made and promises broken. Now they need to pick up the pieces and learn to live after chasing death for so long.

I don’t want to break this spell. This delicate, fragile mess that we’ve woven from our pasts is all we have. All I have.”

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 25805
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2008 Updated: August 05, 2009


Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Resolution

wow. go bella. I'm glad she said what needed to be said. It stopped the vicious cycle.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Boston

Yay! I was scared that it wasn't going to go well and make Rose slip backwards.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: October 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Proclamation

I'm glad that Edward was so self-confident that it didn't worry him when she said no. It was really cute that she asked him.



Author's Response:

Wow, sorry for my lack of response! I haven't been on here in too long. I'm so glad you enjoyed this and recognised the similarities/parallels between Edward and Bella. 

Thank you again,

-Shanabella.

 
Unwanted by bloodredlust Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1577]
Summary:

Edward couldn't bear to watch his beloved Bella being torn apart from the inside by his baby… so how might things have turned out for our favourite couple if he had taken the steps to ensure Bella’s survival, rather than let his spawn kill her. Very dark, Angsty little 'what if' story.

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A HUGE thankyou to Emerald-Rosalie for the amazing banner.  I love it!


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes Word count: 85602
[Report This] Published: December 29, 2008 Updated: September 15, 2009


Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: June 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Divine

This story is so good. So many unexpected things happened, but it all flowed nicely and made sense. Please update soon. I want to find out if this baby is more human than vampire (and what you will name him).

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: June 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Endure

Yay Jasper...I don't know why I didn't think of Jasper sooner!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Miracle

It was a sweet ending. You will definitely need to clarify what JJ's abilities are. Thanks for sharing your story!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 29: Alterations

This chapter was definitely a good surprise. It was so...erotic. I never envisioned a change like that, but after reading your version, I'm kind of upset at myself for not thinking of it. It made perfect sense. Everything she did, she did because she loved him...

 

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: September 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

I have to say that I am not usually interested in any story post Breaking Dawn, much less one that focuses on the next generation of Cullens. Howeverm the story you paint makes it sound so interesting--especially JJ. I am definitely on board.

 
The Blood Crystal by Melolabel Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 132]
Summary:

When Angela is kidnaped by a rogue Vampire, Bella embarks on a whirlwind adventure to save her friend. When she becomes lost in the rainforests of Peru, who will come to her rescue? And what is the Blood Crystal?

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Categories: AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Ben, Caius, Carlisle, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Heidi, James, Jane, Marcus, Rosalie, Victoria, Zafrina
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 51670
[Report This] Published: December 30, 2008 Updated: April 24, 2009


Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This is so much than biology class. I mean, he is stuck in an airplane! Thank goodness for Alice and her ability!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I loved the little shout out you gave yourself (New Frontier). It was pretty cool that you had Bella inadvertently save them via Mike/Miguel.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Bella's power seems awesome, but she is going to have to be very careful with it, especially if it is as easy as saying "I wish"...

I'm glad Bella made it just in time to save Angela and Ben.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Great ending. I'm happy that Victoria was taken cre of. I thought Bella's threat to Emmett was hilarious!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for all your great reviews!  I think the threat to Emmett was probably one of my favorite lines too.

 
Lucky Charm by profmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 508]
Summary:

Bella and Edward were secret best friends during one of the best periods of Bella's life.  Their friendship has waned.  When they are forced back together, untold secrets are revealed.  When the truth is out there, will anyone feel lucky?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Jessica, Lauren, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 78205
[Report This] Published: December 30, 2008 Updated: April 13, 2009


Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: The Dance

First off, I'm kind of glad that Charlie got hurt (as long as he gets better) b/c that will get Bella to move back to Forks/Seattle.

Second, what happened between Bella and Mike prom night? I know they hooked up, but it couldn't have been very good if she is calling it the incident.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: July 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Epilogue

Very happy ending. I thought that Edward's art was a little weird, but hey, who I am to judge. It's what brought them back together. I came to appreciate Rosalie, Lauren , and especially Alice a lot more as the story progressed.

You did an amazing job juxtaposing Bella's recovery from depression and Edward's downward spiral.

 
Out of Her Head by Blue25 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2754]
Summary:

Bella Swan moves cross country to take a teaching job, trying to escape the man who broke her heart. Edward Cullen is the school's music teacher with secrets of his own. Bella and Edward find themselves thrown together trying to work through their issues and unexpected feelings for each other.

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Completed: Yes Word count: 272412
[Report This] Published: January 01, 2009 Updated: June 26, 2009


Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: June 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32

I loved how you threw a little nod at himym (that show rocks). Is JS Jessica? I always assumed it was a guy until Bella blabbed...

 
Summary:

The much anticipated sequel to A Lesson in Release.  Jasper has won the girl of his dreams and they are beginning a new life together at college.  But what happens when fate intercedes?  Will he be able to hold onto her or will fate return her to Edward?

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Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: The Lessons Saga
Chapters: 49 Completed: Yes Word count: 171842
[Report This] Published: January 09, 2009 Updated: October 29, 2009


Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: November 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 49: Alt Ending Chapter 20

I liked the original ending. Thanks for giving Bella back to edward.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: November 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24: Confessions Part I

Yay!  I really hope that fate is on Edward and Bella's side!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: November 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 44: Epilogue: Guys' POV

Yay for felix

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: November 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 42: Nona

Wow. Another shocker! A good one though. Thanks for getting it resolved so easily. Much better than BD.

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: November 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 40: Morta

OMG!!!!!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: November 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 39: My Name is Adrian Michael Peters

Stupid Jasper! What did he do? I thought every one was safe and going to live happily ever after...

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: November 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 38: After All

I can't believe they got married just like that...what about Jasper? He can't fight for her now. She's a married woman!

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: November 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 37: At Last

Wow. I had no idea that Edward was going to propose too...

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: November 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Motorcycles

So what's esme's position on who should get Bella? Why would she make both bedrooms super romantic?

 
Reviewer: BellaS Signed
Date: November 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: Pick Up Trucks

It has been awhile since I have read your last story, so I feel like I am starting all over again. I am very team edward right now and hope that he wins her back...poor Jasper... Now I have to go back to the other story to find out what happened.

 




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