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Penname: readergoof [Contact]
Real name: Becca
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Member Since: April 30, 2009
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Hi,


Like most others I found Twilighted in search of more after the Twilight series left me wanting. I fell in love with a few authors and their stories and history was made.


That was roughly over a year ago and now I had made so many friends here I can say my life is fuller now. And quite busier.


As some email or PM me, "Yes, I am that readergoof who makes the banners."


You can check out my art at http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=27&t=5683


Form there you can link to my Facebook Public Banner Photoalbum.


Thanks, Becca


 


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Reviews by readergoof
 
Wishing Star by Mystic_Ice24 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 4548]
Summary:

WRITTEN REWRITTEN REWRITTEN REWRITTEN

After her parents are killed in a plane crash, a young girl is rejected again & again by foster families for being too old. She wishes on a star nightly, but will she find what she seeks? Will the Cullens be that family?

NC-17 for later chapters. Warning" Violence, and sexual aggresion may be part of this story.

Winning Summary:

"I wish I may, I wish I might, have the wish I make tonight."  With that one hope Isabella Swan faces life as best as she can.  The tragedy of her parents' death, leaves her alone in a system where her age leaves her undesirable for adoption.  That is until one day two people come into her life offering her a chance at hope.  The Cullen family takes to Bella like a long lost sister.  What happens when Bella is taken from the Cullens by a lost relative?  Will Bella's hopes be destroyed?  What happens when fate steps in years later to reunite Bella with the one's she loved and who loved her so long ago?

Bella knew what she would say, "Don't you want to be my sister?"

 

 

Thanks to Mrs C for the above Banner and my beta readergoof for the below Banner!Wishing Star Banner Readergoof

Thanks to Sleforever for below banner!

Wishing Star Banner Sleforever


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 40 Completed: No Word count: 137752
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2008 Updated: April 12, 2011


Reviewer: readergoof Signed
Date: June 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Wishing

Okay. I just read through the story up to this point and really LOVE it. Yes the characters and the basics are the same, but your take is really original. I like you started them so young that way you can have a long storyline. *PLEASE let it be so* So I say write on McDuff you have a new avid reader. Thanks

 
Reviewer: readergoof Signed
Date: June 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Homecoming

okay missy you ave sum splainin' do to WHAT WHEN WHY HOW WHO HUNH?

Yes yes yes the story is great but wow. Left side now approaching from nowhere. I think a felt a slap to my face. *pout*

I hope she finds them soon.  Pretty please with Robert on top. As he should be!

*fingers crossed*

 

 
Reviewer: readergoof Signed
Date: June 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: College

AAhhh! man! you had to go and bring frickin Tanya and James into this story. I'll wait it out though. Bella needs her family.

 
Reviewer: readergoof Signed
Date: June 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: United

i need more please hurry

 
Reviewer: readergoof Signed
Date: April 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Christmas

oh I have lots of favorite lines but this cracked me up

“Do you think an alligator ate her real head and that’s a robot’s?”

 
Reviewer: readergoof Signed
Date: June 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Reunion

I'm sssooooooooo 'appy they're together again!!! YEAH

I'm pissed. You had Tanya and James go to Bella's house too. BITE ME



Author's Response:

Bare it and share it.

 
Reviewer: readergoof Signed
Date: November 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Joys of the Season

I thought this chapter kicked ass

 
Reviewer: readergoof Signed
Date: June 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Surprise

esme and carlise?

You should kill off james ans tanya

 
Reviewer: readergoof Signed
Date: July 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Family

I cant help I/m in love with this story

 
Reviewer: readergoof Signed
Date: July 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: England

Poor Bella. I think the best part was hearing everyone's thoughts. It made it more real. We got to share the shock and horror. Plus it was a great Edward moment. the shiny prince.

 
Reviewer: readergoof Signed
Date: August 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Say What?

what a evil bitch you have created. please sic rosalie on his sorry ass.

 
Reviewer: readergoof Signed
Date: August 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Outtake - Say What? - Special ReWrite

No i don't hate you but my God 8 more chapters of the bitch

 
Reviewer: readergoof Signed
Date: August 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Barbeque

There is a phrase my friends and I say when we don't like someone: Die Tanya Die! (Now we don't actually wish death to that person, but you get the point.)

I would like a chance to edit for you. I graduated a major in botany. I am editing one story on fanfiction - "The Lost Princess," and am the creater of approximatelt thirty banners by now. Um.. I think.

If nothing else check out my banners I would be happy to assist if you need one in the future. Here's the link:

http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=27&t=5683

Thanks Becca aka readergoof

 
Reviewer: readergoof Signed
Date: August 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Next Day

Well I did get to preread the chapter but I am still gonna review becasue it was great. You write a mean lemon and all the Tanya trashing was pure classic sarcastic bliss.

 
Reviewer: readergoof Signed
Date: September 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Halloween

Ah come on not even me. *pout*

Though the chap was terrif for a scary Halloween

 
Reviewer: readergoof Signed
Date: September 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Aftershock

Chica this was a terrific after chap I felt the pain will reading it

 
Reviewer: readergoof Signed
Date: October 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: The End's Beginning

YEA!!!! I still love it and you.

 
Reviewer: readergoof Signed
Date: April 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Revelations and Mornings After

still love it

 
Reviewer: readergoof Signed
Date: October 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Secrets

Did I tell you this was a favorite Chap of mine. And its because (this sounds awful) you can physically feel Bella's despair. You make that emotion real and raw. In it's on way it's beautiful.

 
Reviewer: readergoof Signed
Date: February 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Revelations

I vote summary #2.

Can't wait for the next installment, and I really did enjoy Esme's POV.

Also, I keep forgeting to ask what you thought of the banner I made you?

 
Reviewer: readergoof Signed
Date: September 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Goodbyes

Hey chica! Of course I read the chapters once they are posted cause I don't know what you will or wont keep, and which of my off handed comments you deem worthy of including. And this chapter it seems Tigger one. **giggles like a 4yr old**

Your diffrntly gonna have to shout out to Branlc - read her review and you'll understand.

 

MWAH!!

 
Reviewer: readergoof Signed
Date: October 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Just Duckie

Yes I have a facebook page. Here's a link to a public banner album.

http://www.facebook.com/album.php?aid=2047216&id=1155923630&l=dbd4273c8b

Sorry about being so long with the next chapter but had a fight with my blood sugar and it was winning but all's good now. And I guess subconsciencly I needed to read this because there were so many possible changes you might have made and I needed to now where it was going.

You'll have it in a day or two.

Smootches

 
Reviewer: readergoof Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Truths Revealed

have i mentioned lately that I love this story?

no?

well i do



Author's Response:

LOL!  You get to read it before it goes up!  I enjoy the review though!  And, you're an excellent beta!

 
Reviewer: readergoof Signed
Date: April 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Lives Altered

Still think its funny how Bella "knows" so much about everyone except Edward

 
Reviewer: readergoof Signed
Date: July 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Confrontations

so happy your back babe

 




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