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Penname: KelseyJane [Contact]
Real name: Kelsey
Status: Member
Member Since: April 27, 2009
Beta-reader: Yes

Hey, I'm KelseyJane, thanks for checking out my page. I am 24. I live in Oregon. My favorite book of the Twilight series is Eclipse. I love to write but most of my stories are for my own enjoyment.

Come follow me on twitter @KelseyJR


Okay, so everyone has their own perspective on what a vampire looks like and what one can do, here is my brand of vampire:

  • Unlike Twilight, I do not think vampires glitter. They burn.

  • My vampires burn in direct sunlight but in cloud cover they can go out with only it bothering their eyes and a slight tingle to their skin.

  • Their eyes change color as they get hungry.

  • They are only a few degrees cooler than the average human.

  • They do bleed. But only for a minute or so. It runs slow and clots quickly.

  • They have fangs that come out when they smell blood and retract when they are done feeding.


Links for Ever The Same

Elle's Tattoo:

Imagin the sun is blue without the face and only the 3 yellow stars continuing the circle.

Elle's dress in Chapter 9

The one that Amanda Bynes is wearing

Elle's dress with Jacket in Chapter 9:

Edward's shirt in Chapter 9

Elle's outfit in Chapter 12.

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Alice's outfit in Chapter 12

With a white denim jacket over the top and her black flats

Rosalie's outfit in Chapter 12

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Elle's dress in Chapter 22.

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Reviews by KelseyJane

Edward never came back. But that's okay, because Bella Swan is doing fine. Her life has been vampire free for four years and, while it was rough at first, she's content with her new life. That is, until a certain vampire casually walks back into her life. Can Bella accept the lessons that life is trying to teach her? Or is her future doomed to be dictated by her past?

Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Jasper
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 74546
[Report This] Published: August 11, 2010 Updated: January 03, 2011

Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: March 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Gotta love Emmett! Of course he is the most rational one of the bunch. Love him!

Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: March 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Bella is amazing. Plain and simple. Awesome chapter!

Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: March 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13


Oh my god, that was amazing! I went back and read it 3 times now, it's just so perfect! "You don't get to dictate what I do anymore!"

Perfect! Couldn't have been any better!

Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: March 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Ahhh there you go Bella! Now's the time to show Edward how you've changed! Stand up to the asshole!

lol great chapter!

Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: March 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Aww their first kiss! err kiss-es! I love it. I don't think it was too soon at all! Great job. Now to get ready to face the cullens!

Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: March 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I love the way you have kept everything so canon. Jasper especially. This is one of the best canon Jaspers I've read.

The only canon I didn't like was the sparkling, but that's just cause I'm selfish and I would have changed it cause I believe vampires burn not glitter.


Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: March 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Loved the chocolate bit! That was cute, and it's always nice when Jasper smiles!

Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: March 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I've been reading this on my phone, which for some reason, does not let me write reviews. So now I have to go back to the chapters I wanted to comment on. Here we go!

In my eyes, I thought this was a little too soon for this to happen. I was hoping to interact with Chrissy and Danny a little bit more, but alas, this isn't about them, but still it's sad to see them go. But it's still a very good chapter!

Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: March 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ooo I like angry Jasper! Somehow makes him more appealing! lol great intro! Love that there's just enough background as to where she's been and then jasper coming into the picture. Great job!

Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: March 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Someone's been taking pointers from Edward about being a hypocrite and making her decisions for her.

Come on Jasper, Edward is not a good role model! you should know that!

Great chapter, I'm really interested in what Jasper's thinking with all of this! Things that make you go 'hmm'


She admittedly loathed him. But secretly, she desired something more. When a single instance grants them the opportunity to be in each others company, they find themselves in a tangle of fur and stone. RxJ, One shot. Rated M.

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Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Jacob, Rosalie
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5092
[Report This] Published: October 04, 2010 Updated: November 03, 2010

Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: November 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Fur and Stone (Oneshot)

The best part of breaking dawn was Rosalie and Jacob. They were so feisty and fun, I love it! And you captured exactly the way they were. You portray Rosalie perfectly. Great lemon, great story!

Author's Response:

You have NO idea how much I appreciate your comment. I spent a lot of time working on this. It was pretty difficult to keep it within character. I'm very glad you enjoyed it and I thank you for the review.



After their bizarre encounter her first day in biology, Bella was certain that Edward Cullen was the most intriguing aspect of dreary Forks. Until she met his brother. Jasper/Bella

Warnings: Sexual Situations and Underage Drinking


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Billy, Charlie, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Rosalie, Victoria
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 27215
[Report This] Published: December 04, 2010 Updated: December 14, 2010

Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: March 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Shoot the Sky

Wow, this is the longest one shot I've ever read. And I love it!

I love how you incorporated everything, Victoria and James, Jake and his friends, it's great, and all in one little package. It wasn't all rainbows and bunnies, they actually had a fight or two they had to get over.

Oh! and that line "If I wanted you any more than I already do, I'd burn the whole world down just so you'd be the only thing in it." I love it! Do you mind if I steal that? I would credit you of course!

Author's Response:

I apologize for taking so long to respond to this review. I don't frequent Twilighted like I used to. That's no excuse, though.

He. Yeah. It is a long o/s. Orginally it meant to be MUCH shorter. Then it grew and I didn't want to break it up.

All relationships have their bumps. I tried to incorporate that into the story to make their relationship more real and more worthwhile.

Uh, I'd rather you didn't use that exact sentence. It's sort of become the defining line of the story. But I'm glad you're so fond of it!

Thank you!

The Almost by shelbielyncullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 54]




The Almost is a tale of what could have been. However, many people forget who these characters really are, and what it feels like to be seventeen. So accompany me on this multiple point of view adventure, as we are taught about life and lessons from the almost-loves.




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Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 26084
[Report This] Published: February 08, 2011 Updated: June 15, 2013

Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: April 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Electricity

Shhh! Don't tell anyone but I'm at work reading this! Haha Love Emmett! They are so fun and cute, I love it! Love love love her little interaction with Jasper! Mmmm threesomes...yes please! Haha SO glad Emmett is much more understanding than Edward.

So excited to see where this story takes us! *coughjaspercough*

Author's Response:

Hey! Don't be giving away clue just because you get to see chapters before they go up! Don't make me cut you off! Thank you for reading and I'm really glad you like it :)

Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: May 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Emergency

Really woman! You leave it there!? Seriously?! Gahhh!

Author's Response:

Oh hush Kels! You know that as soon as the next chapter's written you'll get to read it first! And you already know how the story is going to end so :P!!

Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: May 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Unfair

Well shit, that's quite a turn isn't it? There it is! Bah bam!
Wonder what her conscious is gonna do to her later...

Author's Response:

Well shit, it is huh?! I'm not sure if you read my story re-born, but you'll quickly learn that my characters do not have a conscience.


Jasper bets that Emmett can't go a full hour without laughing. Emmett never backs away from a bet. Jasper never loses them.

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Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Emmett, Jasper
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2744
[Report This] Published: February 24, 2011 Updated: March 01, 2011

Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: March 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

Hahaha that was cute! I love Jasper, and Emmett is just too funny!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!

Emmett and Jasper paired together getting up to no good is SO fun to write (and think about!). I can imagine this kind of thing happening.

Paula x


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Alice laughed. "Why the hell would I want you?"

"Why are you staring at my pants?"


Alice is the new girl at school, ready to start afresh. Jasper is the notorious laid-back trouble maker with more suspensions than people think he can count.

On her first day, Alice and Jasper cross paths and world war three is declared in the cafeteria over a ball and a lack of a pair of them. 

Jokes will fly, and egos will be deflated, but everyone soon starts to agree that it is only a matter of time before they end up together.

That is, if they don't kill each other first.


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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlotte, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Mike, Peter, Rosalie
Series: Eternal Hope: The Alice and Jasper Archive
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 38692
[Report This] Published: April 05, 2011 Updated: December 01, 2013

Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: July 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Shots

I gotta say, this story intrigues me. I like that Jasper brings out a new side of Alice and Jasper is secretly a really smart guy but knows how to have fun. I like it.

Author's Response:

You basically hit the nail on the head with their characterisation... I was trying to make them fun and engaging characters. Fingers crossed that I've done that...

Anyway, I intend on using Jasper's intelligence for good.

And by good, I mean evil.



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