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Penname: KelseyJane [ Contact]
Real name: Kelsey
Status: Member
Member Since: April 27, 2009
Website: www.Twitter.com/KelseyJR
Beta-reader: Yes
Hey, I'm KelseyJane, thanks for checking out my page. I am 24. I live in Oregon. My favorite book of the Twilight series is Eclipse. I love to write but most of my stories are for my own enjoyment.
Come follow me on twitter @KelseyJR
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Okay, so everyone has their own perspective on what a vampire looks like and what one can do, here is my brand of vampire:
- Unlike Twilight, I do not think vampires glitter. They burn.
- My vampires burn in direct sunlight but in cloud cover they can go out with only it bothering their eyes and a slight tingle to their skin.
- Their eyes change color as they get hungry.
- They are only a few degrees cooler than the average human.
- They do bleed. But only for a minute or so. It runs slow and clots quickly.
- They have fangs that come out when they smell blood and retract when they are done feeding.
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Links for Ever The Same
Elle's Tattoo:
http://www.unlimitedperfumes.com/images/ch-823_250w.jpg
Imagin the sun is blue without the face and only the 3 yellow stars continuing the circle.
Elle's dress in Chapter 9
http://www.imdb.com/media/rm2914031872/tt0454945
The one that Amanda Bynes is wearing
Elle's dress with Jacket in Chapter 9:
http://bynes-source.net/gallery/displayimage.php?album=158&pos=3
Edward's shirt in Chapter 9
http://shop.nordstrom.com/S/3016282/0~2376777~2374609~2374623~2374685?mediumthumbnail=Y&origin=category&searchtype=&pbo=2374685&P=1
Elle's outfit in Chapter 12.
Imagine the shirt a dark green with those jeans.
http://www.urbanoutfitters.com/urban/catalog/productdetail.jsp?itemdescription=true&itemCount=10&startValue=71&selectedProductColor=&sortby=&id=16084972&parentid=W_APP_CAMIS&sortProperties=+product.marketingPriority,-product.startDate&navCount=444&navAction=poppushpush&color=&pushId=W_APP_CAMIS&popId=WOMENS_APPAREL&prepushId=
Cassie's outfit in Chapter 12
http://www.urbanoutfitters.com/urban/catalog/productdetail.jsp?itemdescription=true&itemCount=60&startValue=1&selectedProductColor=&sortby=&id=16268815&parentid=W_APP_TEES_GRAPHIC&sortProperties=+product.marketingPriority,-product.startDate&navCount=111&navAction=poppushpush&color=&pushId=W_APP_TEES_GRAPHIC&popId=WOMENS_APPAREL&prepushId=
Alice's outfit in Chapter 12
With a white denim jacket over the top and her black flats
http://shop.nordstrom.com/S/3011961/0~2378467~2378483~6023104?mediumthumbnail=Y&origin=category&searchtype=&pbo=6023104&P=1
Rosalie's outfit in Chapter 12
It's the outfit with the blue jacket.
http://www.urbanoutfitters.com/urban/catalog/productdetail.jsp?itemdescription=true&itemCount=10&startValue=1&selectedProductColor=&sortby=&id=16144172&parentid=W_APP_VESTS&sortProperties=+product.marketingPriority,-product.startDate&navCount=486&navAction=poppushpush&color=&pushId=W_APP_VESTS&popId=WOMENS_APPAREL&prepushId=
Elle's dress in Chapter 22.
Color: Lapis
http://www.davidsbridal.com/webapp/wcs/stores/servlet/ProductDisplayView?storeId=10052&catalogId=10051&categoryId=-49998974¤tIdx=62&subCategory=-49998976|-49998975|-49998974&catentryId=6097279&sort=
Please let me know if the links aren't working
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Summary: Edward Cullen is a hot, bad, gangsta fella who is a new kid in the Chicago underworld. But refusing to pay his respects to the big, ruling Godfather, his arrival is not welcomed. Bella is said Godfather’s estranged daughter who fled his father’s world in an attempt at a normal life.
Both men keep clashing and bumping heads, Edward’s power grows rapidly, men are tired of the old regime, and so a sort of gangster war ensues. Bella is caught in the mayhem when she becomes a prisoner in the hands of her father’s most hated enemy and rival. With Bella as a prisioner, Edward knows her father will have no choice but to do as he is told.
But does Edward have other motives to capture Bella?
**There is rape involved in one of the later chapters. If that topic offends you, please do not read**

Thanks to the awesome Caius for my banner! I absolutely love it!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No
Word count: 56590
[Report This] Published: June 06, 2009 Updated: June 14, 2010
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: July 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8- Jealousy
Of course Edward has another play thing. Why wouldn't he? I would've done the same thing as Bella. It's fun destroying a room!
Haha. I didn't even notice I didn't comment about who you wrote it about. Now that i'm thinking about it, I could see Gerard as a gangster. Although, Edward makes it seem so much sexier. How does that happen?!
Great chapter hun! Author's Response: Ha ha ha, yes, I'm sure it would be a blast to destroy a room Edward so carefully decorated himself! He had a cow over it, btw.
Oh yeah, Edward is the superior bad-ass gangster here, no competition!
Thanks! ;)
P.S. I don't want to do it cuz I'd hate leaving everyone hanging like this, but I so miss my other story, KJ! And I simply do NOT have the time for two stories... I miss Jaime!
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: July 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9- Surrender
Whoa. I did not see that coming! I like that he surrendered to her, and that he's fighting with himself on what he feels for her, if anything. Hehe, 4 kids and a june wedding, I like that. I wonder if Charlie found him and that's what's going on...
If you want, pause this story for a while and continue your other story. Do you have anything written for it? I miss jamie too but I am loving this story! Author's Response: I have the next chapter for FF. I miss Jaime too, so much. But thing is, I get the stories confussed if I work on both at the same time. But I am so much in the mood for vampires lately, so I might pause this one for a bit (a bit!).
Thanks for the support and for reading, KJ!
Seen any vampire movies lately? Hey, are you a TrueBlood fan?
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: July 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10- Regret
Great chapter! I'm curious as to that Sarah knows and what exactly is at the chapter. Could it be Edward?! Haha, great chapter hun! Author's Response: Thanks hun! Have I rec'd The Hunter to you? I'm sure I have, but it is just getting sooooo awesome. And you, my vampire girl, would love it!
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: August 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11- Precedent
Wow, so even Joe thinks that Edward loves Bella. But then...why would he murder her if he was in love with her. I do hope she gets some answers out of him! Very good chapter hun! I can't wait to see how Edward is doing in the next chapter and what all has been done to him! Author's Response: Oh, we'll se Edward and the state he is in... but I don't think I'll get much into exactly what was done to his during his captivity, too much violence, I think!
I'm glad you liked the chapter, even with no Edward in it. I do miss him terribly, but I loved writing about his terrible past.
Thanks KJ, you rock!
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: August 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12- Trust
AHHHHH God woman, you can't leave me like that! Come on! Even my cliff hangers aren't that baed! Grr, you better have a good reason for doing that! Hehe, in other words, good chapter hun. Very riveting. Author's Response: I know, KJ! Why do you guys put up with me and my stupic cliffhangers I just can't seem to stop delivering! Ha ha. Glad you still liked it though :)
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: August 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13- Escape
Wait, you'll tell me what Edward asked Bella? When did he ask her something? I'm confused, but then again, that's not hard to do. Great chapter hun! It's interesting to know that Louis is covering for Bella too.
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: September 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14- Family
Eeeeeek! Edward? Really?! Aww. Is it real? Is Bella really pregnant? All of these questions and no little 'next' button to answer them...Great chapter hon! I love Alice
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: September 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15- Reunion
Oh all of his injuries hurts my heart. Ugh. I feel so bad. Oh man. Another great chapter. I loved the delicate moment that hung in between them, so sweet. I'm excited to see what happens here on out. Author's Response: You are such a good friend! Always reading and reviewing!
I'm almost done with this story, and then... off to read yours! I've read soooo few fics lately. Only The Office and The Hunter and that's just because I can not help myself!
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: September 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16- Catastrophe
Wow. So she really is pregnant? How did we not know about this until Alice said something? Hmm. That sucks that he left but then, really, how could he stay? Great chapter hun!
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: October 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17- Fare well
Fuck man. Am I reading this right? That Edward is gonna be like vampire Edward and pretty much commit suicide by going back to Charlie? I hope Bella gets to him in time. Awesome chapter!!
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: February 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18- War
WHAT?! No, no, no, no, no. This can't be! Although, with this story, I would understand if they didn't completely get their happy ending and ended up dying in each others arms instead. It would fit with the whole story. But very well done. I like the way you had Bella realize she was shot. Great chapter!!
Summary: Emmett has teased Edward and Bella about their quiet sex life and framkly they have had enough. What do they young couple do to get Emmett to cringe and run screaming for the hills?
Bella is a vampire...Nessie does not exist.

Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 2179
[Report This] Published: June 06, 2009 Updated: June 08, 2009
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: September 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Hahaha, that was awesome!
Summary: For just one day every decade the Cullen family opens things up in the bedroom. AU lemon-fest. Canon and non-canon pairings, but no permanent splitting of canon couples.
This story contains very adult themes and includes F/F slash in earlier chapters and some M/M slash later.
This story earns its NC-17 rating folks!!

A big thank you to DiamondHeart for her guidance (read Moonshadow!), and to my beta, MsKathy!
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No
Word count: 42169
[Report This] Published: June 14, 2009 Updated: August 09, 2009
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: March 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Introduction
Now this looks interesting! Great concept to it and a good intro chapter!
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: March 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Carlisle
Very well done! I like that Bella was shy at first but then she got turned on and let herself go. I always thought, if it wasn't Edward and Bella, it would be Edward and Alice. They seem to fit. Great chapter!
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: March 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Carlisle and Alice
Wow. That. Was. Hott!! It's all I can say! Can't wait for Jasper and Emmett! Oh God, Emmett. Mmm
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: March 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Jasper a.k.a Back to the Sexin'
That was awesome. Loved the part with Emmett "I almost raped you!" Too freaking funny! I'm still smirking about it. Great chapter!
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: March 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Jasper, part deux
I love Jaspers mind so that was really awesome. I love that he called her dirty talk lame. That made me laugh. Great chapter. I should really go to bed. it's now 3 amn and yet I can't stop reading this...
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: March 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Emmett
Aww I don't like Emmett to be sad. I'm glad that Bella was able to *ahem* cheer him up. haha. Great job!
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: March 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Edward
Interesting. Can't say I'm surprised that Edward turned Rosalie down. He is Edward after all, but a part of me thought he might go for it, just this once. Great chapter
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: March 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Edward and Jasper
Wow that was a great little story! Although, can't say there were many little things in it. Ok, lame joke. Anyway, great ending to the story. I was kind of hoping that was gonna happen. I might follow you on twitter. my name is KelseyJR.
Summary: What happens at Charlie's wedding is hot and unforgettable for Bella Swan. Charlie's best man has her moaning and melting everywhere from her father's living room to the coat closet at the rehearsal dinner. But great no-strings-attached sex suddenly becomes complicated. And what will happen when Bella meets someone else who just happens to be the best man's son?

Thanks to Leslie (red delicious) for the awesome banner!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Esme, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes
Word count: 112144
[Report This] Published: June 19, 2009 Updated: April 21, 2010
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: July 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Damaged Man
Great chapter! I was beginning to wonder when you were gonna update this! I'm so glad you did, this was a really cute chapter, I liked it! Carlisle's POV would be interesting. I think it would be kind of fun, but its whatever you wanna do with your story! Great chapter hun!
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: November 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Babysitting Edward Cullen
Noo! This story can't end soon! It's too damn good! I am so stoked every time this is updated! Hmm, now what is Bella going to do. Hmm. I love Bella and Alice's relationship, they are too fun. Great chapter!
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: July 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Coming Home
I can tell this story is gonna be really good! Great intro hun!
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: July 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Oh, Dr. Cullen!
Hahaha, I am totally loving this story. It's so fun and fresh and a little naughty. Perfect! Great job hun!
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: July 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen
Damn, just them making out is freaking hott! I love how Bella's getting really frustrated, it's cute! Great chapter!
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