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Penname: KelseyJane [Contact]
Real name: Kelsey
Status: Member
Member Since: April 27, 2009
Website: www.Twitter.com/KelseyJR
Beta-reader: Yes

Hey, I'm KelseyJane, thanks for checking out my page. I am 24. I live in Oregon. My favorite book of the Twilight series is Eclipse. I love to write but most of my stories are for my own enjoyment.


Come follow me on twitter @KelseyJR


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Okay, so everyone has their own perspective on what a vampire looks like and what one can do, here is my brand of vampire:



  • Unlike Twilight, I do not think vampires glitter. They burn.



  • My vampires burn in direct sunlight but in cloud cover they can go out with only it bothering their eyes and a slight tingle to their skin.



  • Their eyes change color as they get hungry.



  • They are only a few degrees cooler than the average human.



  • They do bleed. But only for a minute or so. It runs slow and clots quickly.



  • They have fangs that come out when they smell blood and retract when they are done feeding.


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Links for Ever The Same


Elle's Tattoo:


http://www.unlimitedperfumes.com/images/ch-823_250w.jpg


Imagin the sun is blue without the face and only the 3 yellow stars continuing the circle.


Elle's dress in Chapter 9


http://www.imdb.com/media/rm2914031872/tt0454945


The one that Amanda Bynes is wearing


Elle's dress with Jacket in Chapter 9:


http://bynes-source.net/gallery/displayimage.php?album=158&pos=3


Edward's shirt in Chapter 9


http://shop.nordstrom.com/S/3016282/0~2376777~2374609~2374623~2374685?mediumthumbnail=Y&origin=category&searchtype=&pbo=2374685&P=1


Elle's outfit in Chapter 12.


Imagine the shirt a dark green with those jeans.


http://www.urbanoutfitters.com/urban/catalog/productdetail.jsp?itemdescription=true&itemCount=10&startValue=71&selectedProductColor=&sortby=&id=16084972&parentid=W_APP_CAMIS&sortProperties=+product.marketingPriority,-product.startDate&navCount=444&navAction=poppushpush&color=&pushId=W_APP_CAMIS&popId=WOMENS_APPAREL&prepushId=


Cassie's outfit in Chapter 12


http://www.urbanoutfitters.com/urban/catalog/productdetail.jsp?itemdescription=true&itemCount=60&startValue=1&selectedProductColor=&sortby=&id=16268815&parentid=W_APP_TEES_GRAPHIC&sortProperties=+product.marketingPriority,-product.startDate&navCount=111&navAction=poppushpush&color=&pushId=W_APP_TEES_GRAPHIC&popId=WOMENS_APPAREL&prepushId=


Alice's outfit in Chapter 12


With a white denim jacket over the top and her black flats


http://shop.nordstrom.com/S/3011961/0~2378467~2378483~6023104?mediumthumbnail=Y&origin=category&searchtype=&pbo=6023104&P=1


Rosalie's outfit in Chapter 12


It's the outfit with the blue jacket.


http://www.urbanoutfitters.com/urban/catalog/productdetail.jsp?itemdescription=true&itemCount=10&startValue=1&selectedProductColor=&sortby=&id=16144172&parentid=W_APP_VESTS&sortProperties=+product.marketingPriority,-product.startDate&navCount=486&navAction=poppushpush&color=&pushId=W_APP_VESTS&popId=WOMENS_APPAREL&prepushId=


Elle's dress in Chapter 22.


Color: Lapis


http://www.davidsbridal.com/webapp/wcs/stores/servlet/ProductDisplayView?storeId=10052&catalogId=10051&categoryId=-49998974¤tIdx=62&subCategory=-49998976|-49998975|-49998974&catentryId=6097279&sort=


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Reviews by KelseyJane
 
Fortune's Fool by Lee Cullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 68]
Summary:

The Cullens move to yet another town and meet a new and somewhat odd girl, she becomes something different for each member of the family: Alice loves her, Edward can't figure her out (but will become obsessed with her non the less), Emmett shares a hidden and forgotten past with her, Esme thinks she's found another daughter, Rosalie is deadly jealous…

But whatever impact she has on any of the Cullens, the impact made on her own life is much greater.

I always wondered what would happen if Edward lost the tight rein on his control. So I wanted to explore deeper into his vampire nature.


Categories: AU Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 13743
[Report This] Published: April 24, 2009 Updated: June 16, 2009


Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: May 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3- Collisions and Realizations

Of course Rose has to flip out over Jaime. But what do you expect? I like seeing how Edward fantasizes about her. The whole neck thing is hot. I think that's my favorite part in this chapter. Good job!



Author's Response:

The neck thing- I guess that's what vamps would fantasize about, right? I'm glad you liked it!

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: May 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4- Hitler vs. Beyonce

Haha, Spike! I loved him! I was so disappointed when I found out that his british accent isn't real. Sorry if I ruined it for you. I love how Jaime is obsessed with vampires. Haha, how perfect is that?! Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Ha ha, I knew. You can actually tell whenever he is talking with Giles. Giles' accent is legit, and there is a difference. Heart the Spike, he is the anti-Edward, isn't he? Ha ha

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: May 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5- Never Underestimate

Whoa. Okay, did not see that coming. Darn Rose! But for someone who is into vampires as Jaime is, making she'll get a kick out of it. Never know with her. Good chapter.



Author's Response:

He he, Jaime will get a kick out of it... eventually. She has to go through some major dark sutff first.

Thanks for the review as always, KJ! You make my day!

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: June 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6- Flames of Hell

Damn Rosalie. I wonder what Edward's gonna do to her once everything is cleared up. That and what the hell Jaime is gonna think when she comes around. Very good. Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Hey KJ! I wish I could post the next chapter sooner. But I got distracted with another story and I still need to get the next chapter to my betas, so it's going to take a bit. But I'm concentrating on this now!

Oh, if you are interested in the topic, the other story I'm working on is about gangster Edward, it's called Lords of the Gangland. I hope you can check it out, I'd love your opinion!

Thanks for the review, as always!

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: June 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7- Purgatory

So Jaime makes it. I wonder why Alice says that she's odd. Great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens when she wakes up!



Author's Response:

Heeeeeeeey KJ! Well, she was odd as a human ;)

I'll try to post the next chapter as soon as possible!

 
Equilibrium by muchamas Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 63]
Summary:

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Edward is intelligent and relatively condescending to anyone that isn't part of his inner circle. 

Enter Bella, beautiful, also intelligent, and up for any challenge Edward throws her way.

Can he let go of his past and accept her... his equal? And, more importantly... can she?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 35248
[Report This] Published: April 25, 2009 Updated: September 08, 2009


Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One - Boredom.

That is hilarious! I love the way you made Jasper! That's awesome! I like it so far. It should be interesting when Bella comes into the picture.

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: May 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two - Bella Needs a Boy

Yay, Emmett. That's so cute that Bella and Emmett are friends. Thats awesome. I wonder what Rosalie's gonna think? Is she gonna be her normally bitchy self or actually nice for once? Only time will tell.

I really like how you portray the characters. well, main charachters like Bella and the Cullens. They're so cool in their own way. Good job hun. I really like this story so far.

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: May 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three - Introductions

I love this story so far. The personalities you put into the characters is amazing. I love it. I'm guessing that I should check out the book Justine? Is it that good? Great job so far!



Author's Response:

Well thank you! It makes me all smiley to know that so many people are digging this so far. 

And since you've commented on it, I feel I should explain the Justine bit to anyone who's never heard of it.

Justine... is... extremely dark. It's not for everyone, it's probably not for most people. The finalized version is highly disturbing and graphic, and the dear Marquis was imprisoned for the last decade (plus) of his life for writing it. Even by today's standards, it's incredibly vulgar. 

In some ways referencing Justine is a teeny tiny bit of foreshadowing (spoiler! yay!).  

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: June 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four - Beautiful People.

i don't know if I have said this before, but I love Bella's confidence and sexiness. All the characters amuse me. Hehe, I like how you made Jasper into a drinker. That's awesome. And of course Rosalie has to hate Bella. Great chapter hun! Can't wait for more!

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: June 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five - NSotB.

Hehe, I like the fact that he is so captivated by her that he can't help but be an ass to her. and yet she feels the same way about him and actually tries to get his attention. Cute chapter, I like it! Can't wait for more!

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: August 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six - NSotB Pt. II

I missed this story. I'm glad you updated! Being a woman sucks sometimes. Ugh. Great chapter hun! It's good to know they are making some progress!

 
Summary:

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Ditched by her friends, and desperately seeking out a bathroom, Bella stumbles onto something she shouldn’t have.

 

 

When Bella meets Edward, she realizes there’s more than a thin line between love and lust. There’s so much she never knew about desire, but even more that she never about herself.

READ WITH CAUTION: LEMONS, DRUG USE & LANGUAGE

Don't be mislead by the prologue - there's nothing bland about the plot!

 

Disclaimer: Stephenie Meyer owns all things twilight!

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Gianna, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Leah, Mike, Other Character, Phil, Renee, Rosalie, Tyler, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 13314
[Report This] Published: April 27, 2009 Updated: June 17, 2009


Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: May 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Good intro chapter. I find it interesting that she makes a friend and kisses him in a span of what, 2 hours? But then again, it's jacob so you automatically feel comfortable around him. Good job.

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: June 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: New Girl

That's an interesting twist. Street racing in forks. I like it. Reminds me of Fast and the furious which in turn, reminds me of Paul Walker. Mmmm...Hehe. Good chapter hun!

 
Branded by Oleander Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 654]
Summary:

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After fifteen year-old Bella Swan and her older brother Emmett lose their parents in a tragic accident, Bella's life takes a horrific turn for the worse. Once Emmett discovers the secret she's been keeping, he moves them from Phoenix to Forks to live with their Godparents Carlisle and Esme Cullen, and their children, Edward and Alice.

Can a move to a new town help heal Bella, who has deemed herself ruined and unfixable? Can the love of a new family break through the scars of her past?

***This story contains explicit language, violent scenes, sexual situations, and angst***

Thanks to the wonderful ReaderGoof for the banner!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, James, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 76531
[Report This] Published: April 28, 2009 Updated: November 06, 2009


Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: May 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Damn. James sure is two sided. Great intro chapter. I wonder what exactly happens when Emmett finds out what his best friend is doing to his baby sister. Good job!



Author's Response:

Thanks KelseyJane!  Glad you enjoyed it.  Hopefully there'll be more to come.

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: May 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow. I want to live there! Good chapter. Can't wait for more!

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: June 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Good chapter. I'm happy with any length you choose for the chapters. Although, I expected Emmett's reaction to who was abusing her and for how long to be greater than it was. But good chapter none the less. Good job.



Author's Response:

Thanks Kelsey Jane.  There's more Emmett reaction to the whole sordid situation in coming chapters.

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: June 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow, I didn't see that coming. She was raped. Wow. On top of everything else. Now she just needs to learn to heal. Good chapter hun!



Author's Response:

Thanks KelseyJane.

Bella's had rough go and you're right, she needs to learn to heal.  I hope you'll stay tuned.  :)

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: July 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Good chapter. I like the fact that you brought in Rosalie's rape into the story. I wonder if Bella will end up getting surgery to get rid of the word on her stomach. Good job hun!



Author's Response:

Thanks KelseyJane!  Rosie needed her moment to "shine."  It was long overdue.  :) 

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: July 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I don't think they got together too soon. For them I think it's perfect. Them admitting that they love each other could have been two soon. But it's your story hun, don't let anyone tell you different. Good chapter.



Author's Response:

Hi KelseyJane,

Thanks for the love!  I agree that them confessing their love was a bit soon, but they are teenagers, and I don't know about you, but I fell in "love" almost instantly (every five minutes) when I was a teenager.  ;)

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: July 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This story is starting to get sickly sweet. It's a good story, don't get me wrong, it just seems like everything is too perfect, like something bad is gonna blow up in their face. I don't know, that's just the vibe that I get and I'm sure I'm dead wrong about it. What I'm trying to say is, good chapter.



Author's Response:

I hope I won't have to start including insulin with this story.  ;)  Trust me, hun, it's not all the land of honey and milk.

 
Pretending by lindseyfair Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 505]
Summary:

Edward and Bella have known each other since birth. After one moment at a party just months before their college graduation, Edward sends them on a journey that begins with a little pretending. Where it ends? No one knows. NC-17 for language and sexual content. AH/AU/OCC

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 52003
[Report This] Published: May 03, 2009 Updated: March 24, 2010


Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: May 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Just the Beginning

Great intro chapter! I love how they're comfortable around each other and yet secretly want each other. Their pretending will definitely be interesting. Great job. By the way, I love the banner! That is my favorite photo shoot they did.

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: May 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Discoveries (V)

Whoa, I did not see that coming. Bella and Emmett fooling around with each other. I see why they did it and would totally be up for it myself. Hehe. I wonder how they keep it from being awkward between the two. Great chapter. I like how because people think they are actually dating that they are learning little secrets about each other from different people. Love it!

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: May 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Dreams Come True (V)

So I am officially in love with this story! I love everything about it! It's gonna be interesting and exciting whenever they decide that they actually want to date for real and that they actually love each other. Great job!

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: May 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Sexting (V)

This story freaking rocks! i love how close they are! It's too freaking cute! Can't wait for more!

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: June 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: The First Twenty-four Hours

Okay, one more question to add to your list if it's already been explained. If it hasn't and it's still in the story somewhere, I'll suffer in silence but what did Rose mean about Edward and Jacob knowing about her?

Other than that, great chapter! Can't wait for more!

 




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