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Penname: KelseyJane [Contact]
Real name: Kelsey
Status: Member
Member Since: April 27, 2009
Website: www.Twitter.com/KelseyJR
Beta-reader: Yes

Hey, I'm KelseyJane, thanks for checking out my page. I am 24. I live in Oregon. My favorite book of the Twilight series is Eclipse. I love to write but most of my stories are for my own enjoyment.


Come follow me on twitter @KelseyJR


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Okay, so everyone has their own perspective on what a vampire looks like and what one can do, here is my brand of vampire:



  • Unlike Twilight, I do not think vampires glitter. They burn.



  • My vampires burn in direct sunlight but in cloud cover they can go out with only it bothering their eyes and a slight tingle to their skin.



  • Their eyes change color as they get hungry.



  • They are only a few degrees cooler than the average human.



  • They do bleed. But only for a minute or so. It runs slow and clots quickly.



  • They have fangs that come out when they smell blood and retract when they are done feeding.


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Links for Ever The Same


Elle's Tattoo:


http://www.unlimitedperfumes.com/images/ch-823_250w.jpg


Imagin the sun is blue without the face and only the 3 yellow stars continuing the circle.


Elle's dress in Chapter 9


http://www.imdb.com/media/rm2914031872/tt0454945


The one that Amanda Bynes is wearing


Elle's dress with Jacket in Chapter 9:


http://bynes-source.net/gallery/displayimage.php?album=158&pos=3


Edward's shirt in Chapter 9


http://shop.nordstrom.com/S/3016282/0~2376777~2374609~2374623~2374685?mediumthumbnail=Y&origin=category&searchtype=&pbo=2374685&P=1


Elle's outfit in Chapter 12.


Imagine the shirt a dark green with those jeans.


http://www.urbanoutfitters.com/urban/catalog/productdetail.jsp?itemdescription=true&itemCount=10&startValue=71&selectedProductColor=&sortby=&id=16084972&parentid=W_APP_CAMIS&sortProperties=+product.marketingPriority,-product.startDate&navCount=444&navAction=poppushpush&color=&pushId=W_APP_CAMIS&popId=WOMENS_APPAREL&prepushId=


Cassie's outfit in Chapter 12


http://www.urbanoutfitters.com/urban/catalog/productdetail.jsp?itemdescription=true&itemCount=60&startValue=1&selectedProductColor=&sortby=&id=16268815&parentid=W_APP_TEES_GRAPHIC&sortProperties=+product.marketingPriority,-product.startDate&navCount=111&navAction=poppushpush&color=&pushId=W_APP_TEES_GRAPHIC&popId=WOMENS_APPAREL&prepushId=


Alice's outfit in Chapter 12


With a white denim jacket over the top and her black flats


http://shop.nordstrom.com/S/3011961/0~2378467~2378483~6023104?mediumthumbnail=Y&origin=category&searchtype=&pbo=6023104&P=1


Rosalie's outfit in Chapter 12


It's the outfit with the blue jacket.


http://www.urbanoutfitters.com/urban/catalog/productdetail.jsp?itemdescription=true&itemCount=10&startValue=1&selectedProductColor=&sortby=&id=16144172&parentid=W_APP_VESTS&sortProperties=+product.marketingPriority,-product.startDate&navCount=486&navAction=poppushpush&color=&pushId=W_APP_VESTS&popId=WOMENS_APPAREL&prepushId=


Elle's dress in Chapter 22.


Color: Lapis


http://www.davidsbridal.com/webapp/wcs/stores/servlet/ProductDisplayView?storeId=10052&catalogId=10051&categoryId=-49998974¤tIdx=62&subCategory=-49998976|-49998975|-49998974&catentryId=6097279&sort=


Please let me know if the links aren't working




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Reviews by KelseyJane
 
Branded by Oleander Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 654]
Summary:

(banner by vampire-romance)

After fifteen year-old Bella Swan and her older brother Emmett lose their parents in a tragic accident, Bella's life takes a horrific turn for the worse. Once Emmett discovers the secret she's been keeping, he moves them from Phoenix to Forks to live with their Godparents Carlisle and Esme Cullen, and their children, Edward and Alice.

Can a move to a new town help heal Bella, who has deemed herself ruined and unfixable? Can the love of a new family break through the scars of her past?

***This story contains explicit language, violent scenes, sexual situations, and angst***

Thanks to the wonderful ReaderGoof for the banner!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, James, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 76531
[Report This] Published: April 29, 2009 Updated: November 07, 2009


Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: July 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Good chapter. I like the fact that you brought in Rosalie's rape into the story. I wonder if Bella will end up getting surgery to get rid of the word on her stomach. Good job hun!



Author's Response:

Thanks KelseyJane!  Rosie needed her moment to "shine."  It was long overdue.  :) 

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: July 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I don't think they got together too soon. For them I think it's perfect. Them admitting that they love each other could have been two soon. But it's your story hun, don't let anyone tell you different. Good chapter.



Author's Response:

Hi KelseyJane,

Thanks for the love!  I agree that them confessing their love was a bit soon, but they are teenagers, and I don't know about you, but I fell in "love" almost instantly (every five minutes) when I was a teenager.  ;)

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: July 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This story is starting to get sickly sweet. It's a good story, don't get me wrong, it just seems like everything is too perfect, like something bad is gonna blow up in their face. I don't know, that's just the vibe that I get and I'm sure I'm dead wrong about it. What I'm trying to say is, good chapter.



Author's Response:

I hope I won't have to start including insulin with this story.  ;)  Trust me, hun, it's not all the land of honey and milk.

 
Pretending by lindseyfair Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 505]
Summary:

Edward and Bella have known each other since birth. After one moment at a party just months before their college graduation, Edward sends them on a journey that begins with a little pretending. Where it ends? No one knows. NC-17 for language and sexual content. AH/AU/OCC

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 52003
[Report This] Published: May 03, 2009 Updated: March 25, 2010


Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: May 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Just the Beginning

Great intro chapter! I love how they're comfortable around each other and yet secretly want each other. Their pretending will definitely be interesting. Great job. By the way, I love the banner! That is my favorite photo shoot they did.

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: May 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Discoveries (V)

Whoa, I did not see that coming. Bella and Emmett fooling around with each other. I see why they did it and would totally be up for it myself. Hehe. I wonder how they keep it from being awkward between the two. Great chapter. I like how because people think they are actually dating that they are learning little secrets about each other from different people. Love it!

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: May 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Dreams Come True (V)

So I am officially in love with this story! I love everything about it! It's gonna be interesting and exciting whenever they decide that they actually want to date for real and that they actually love each other. Great job!

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: May 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Sexting (V)

This story freaking rocks! i love how close they are! It's too freaking cute! Can't wait for more!

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: June 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: The First Twenty-four Hours

Okay, one more question to add to your list if it's already been explained. If it hasn't and it's still in the story somewhere, I'll suffer in silence but what did Rose mean about Edward and Jacob knowing about her?

Other than that, great chapter! Can't wait for more!

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: July 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Revelations (V)

First of all, congratulations on the baby!

Second of all, that threesome was hott! Damn. So Edward and Bella finally stopped pretending and admitted their feelings. Great chapter hun!

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: July 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Sometimes Good Things Come in Threes (V)

Whew. So everything is out in the open and so far Edward seems okay with everything. I love that Bella and Rose put Tanya in her place, although I highly doubt that will be the last of her. Awesome chapter!

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: July 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Changes

Wow. They're getting married in less than a week. Wow. That's unexpected. Good, but unexpected. To me it seems a little soon but they have known each other and been in love with each other for a while, it just seems sudden. Good chapter hun!

 
Summary:

Edward is the retired right hand man for the infamous mob boss, Charlie Swan. When asked to train a woman to help to protect herself and her daughter, he had no idea the trouble he'd find himself in. She's the boss's daughter, can he keep his hands off?  OCC/AH

banner by: emerald_rosalie


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 59124
[Report This] Published: May 04, 2009 Updated: October 24, 2010


Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: May 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Trainer

I was wondering if this was gonna be like Enough. I loved that movie. Makes you want to go sign up for a fighting class. Good intro. I like it. Gives a little background to Edward. Good job.

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: May 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: The Assessment

Haha, already?! But like you said, it's not like I blame her. I would probably do the same thing. I think it's cute how Edward is so sweet towards Ellie. Good chapter!

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: May 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Tease

They are such teases! I like the way that they do that though. I hope that does't dissipate when they decide to do something about that. I like the sexual tension. It keeps things interesting.

Haha, I loved "Thats right fucker. Not available" I cracked up!

Great job!

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: May 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Wet

How cow woman. That was hot. I'm thinking their gonna have a hard time working out together. Either that or they will end the work out sessions working on each other...which, I wouldn't mind. Haha Great job!

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: May 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Story Time

Ahh, so close and yet so far! Haha, I wonder how long she'll actually use the toy before they give in to each other. I like the fact that you put in a little star trek in there. Have you seen the movie? It's really good. For somebody who didn't like the tv series, I loved the movie! Plus, the fact that the main guy, Chris pine, is hott, doesn't hurt either!

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: July 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Babes and Toys

I'm so glad you're back! I loved this chapter! I think my favorite part would have to be when Edward was like "You don't nee that." and "this is all you need" I loved that! Great job hun! Amazing chapter!

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: July 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Temptations

Hehe, I'll do those training lessons, shoot! I loved the Jacob scene, that was cute! Great chapter hun!

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: September 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Sweat, Blood and Tears

Wow, I haven't read this in a while. What is wrong with me? Okay, so is this the first time we've heard about Edward feeling guilty about a little boy or is there something I should be remembering? I can't imagine the memories that flashes in her eyes when Edward grabs her wrists. Poor Bella. Great chapter!

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: September 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Guests

What? Bella killed someone? Whoa. You definitely know how to thicken the plot my dear. Well done

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: December 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Confessions

Wow. So that's what happened to Alec. Aww, that's so sad. Part of me is hoping that Bree is still alive somewhere although I know that is not the case where James is concerned. Great chapter.

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: December 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Like Mother, Like Daughter

Wow so Charlie knows about Edward and Bella. Hmm, He took that rather well, considering. But like you said, that's not the last we will hear from Charlie about that couple. Great chapter!

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: January 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Show Me What She Can Do

I think Leah should be however you want her to be. Possibly a little aggresive and definitely bitchy. But other than that, it's up to you. Loved this chapter! I like that Charlie punched him anyway. Haha

 
Summary:

It all started when Bella scheduled her yearly physical with Dr. Cullen, as usual. This appointment, however, was anything but usual. And for the better.

A series of related lemony one-shots featuring Doctor Edward and Bella. Hot and humorous.

Banner by sunshinelollypops

EXCERPTS:

Ch. 1: Touch My Body

"Good morning, Isabella. Here for your annual exam, I see?"

Wait a minute--that's not Carlisle.


Ch. 2: Another Day at the Office

I mustered up my sexiest voice to purr, "Hi, Baby."

"Oh, Christ!"

Wait a minute--that's not Edward.

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 9940
[Report This] Published: May 05, 2009 Updated: May 30, 2009


Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: May 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Touch My Body

3 words. That. Was. Hot!



Author's Response:

thank you much!

 
Summary:

When Bella's parents divorced Charlie moved to Destin, Florida instead of staying in Forks and Bella grew up in Phoenix with her mom.  After Bella suffers through a 10 month long verbally abusive relationship with James, he threatens to take from her physically what she would not give him so she moves to Destin to live with Charlie.  Here she meets Edward Cullen who has sworn off all women because of a horribly destroyed relationship with his ex, Tanya. Can they save each other from there respective pasts and make a future together?

Banner made by Readergoof!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 22769
[Report This] Published: May 07, 2009 Updated: August 13, 2009


Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: May 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: School, The Beach, and Awkward Introductions

Great intro! I loved the interaction between Jasper and Edward. That was awesome. I like it so far.

 




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