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Penname: KelseyJane [ Contact]
Real name: Kelsey
Status: Member
Member Since: April 27, 2009
Website: www.Twitter.com/KelseyJR
Beta-reader: Yes
Hey, I'm KelseyJane, thanks for checking out my page. I am 24. I live in Oregon. My favorite book of the Twilight series is Eclipse. I love to write but most of my stories are for my own enjoyment.
Come follow me on twitter @KelseyJR
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Okay, so everyone has their own perspective on what a vampire looks like and what one can do, here is my brand of vampire:
- Unlike Twilight, I do not think vampires glitter. They burn.
- My vampires burn in direct sunlight but in cloud cover they can go out with only it bothering their eyes and a slight tingle to their skin.
- Their eyes change color as they get hungry.
- They are only a few degrees cooler than the average human.
- They do bleed. But only for a minute or so. It runs slow and clots quickly.
- They have fangs that come out when they smell blood and retract when they are done feeding.
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Links for Ever The Same
Elle's Tattoo:
http://www.unlimitedperfumes.com/images/ch-823_250w.jpg
Imagin the sun is blue without the face and only the 3 yellow stars continuing the circle.
Elle's dress in Chapter 9
http://www.imdb.com/media/rm2914031872/tt0454945
The one that Amanda Bynes is wearing
Elle's dress with Jacket in Chapter 9:
http://bynes-source.net/gallery/displayimage.php?album=158&pos=3
Edward's shirt in Chapter 9
http://shop.nordstrom.com/S/3016282/0~2376777~2374609~2374623~2374685?mediumthumbnail=Y&origin=category&searchtype=&pbo=2374685&P=1
Elle's outfit in Chapter 12.
Imagine the shirt a dark green with those jeans.
http://www.urbanoutfitters.com/urban/catalog/productdetail.jsp?itemdescription=true&itemCount=10&startValue=71&selectedProductColor=&sortby=&id=16084972&parentid=W_APP_CAMIS&sortProperties=+product.marketingPriority,-product.startDate&navCount=444&navAction=poppushpush&color=&pushId=W_APP_CAMIS&popId=WOMENS_APPAREL&prepushId=
Cassie's outfit in Chapter 12
http://www.urbanoutfitters.com/urban/catalog/productdetail.jsp?itemdescription=true&itemCount=60&startValue=1&selectedProductColor=&sortby=&id=16268815&parentid=W_APP_TEES_GRAPHIC&sortProperties=+product.marketingPriority,-product.startDate&navCount=111&navAction=poppushpush&color=&pushId=W_APP_TEES_GRAPHIC&popId=WOMENS_APPAREL&prepushId=
Alice's outfit in Chapter 12
With a white denim jacket over the top and her black flats
http://shop.nordstrom.com/S/3011961/0~2378467~2378483~6023104?mediumthumbnail=Y&origin=category&searchtype=&pbo=6023104&P=1
Rosalie's outfit in Chapter 12
It's the outfit with the blue jacket.
http://www.urbanoutfitters.com/urban/catalog/productdetail.jsp?itemdescription=true&itemCount=10&startValue=1&selectedProductColor=&sortby=&id=16144172&parentid=W_APP_VESTS&sortProperties=+product.marketingPriority,-product.startDate&navCount=486&navAction=poppushpush&color=&pushId=W_APP_VESTS&popId=WOMENS_APPAREL&prepushId=
Elle's dress in Chapter 22.
Color: Lapis
http://www.davidsbridal.com/webapp/wcs/stores/servlet/ProductDisplayView?storeId=10052&catalogId=10051&categoryId=-49998974¤tIdx=62&subCategory=-49998976|-49998975|-49998974&catentryId=6097279&sort=
Please let me know if the links aren't working
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Summary:  Make your own banner at MyBannerMaker.com!

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Single mom Bella is frustrated with how her life has turned out. She finally gets the nerve to quit her job and open her own restaurant, taking with her some of her insane boss's best employees.
Can she deal with the stress? What about her noisy upstairs neighbor?
As she struggles to be successful, raise her daughter, and deal with the pressures of daily life, can she finally find happiness and love for herself?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jacob, James, Laurent, Mike, Nessie, Phil, Renee, Renesmee, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes
Word count: 110605
[Report This] Published: April 23, 2009 Updated: October 08, 2009
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: May 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Ingredients
Haha, That was so cute! I loved the chapter. When I read about James, I actually thought of the chef on Ratatouille. The short little one with the bad attitude. Haha Author's Response: I didn't even think about the Ratatouille chef. But yeah, it fits. Thanks again!
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: May 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Add a dash...
Hahahaha, I love it. Not only is he the handyman but he lives in that building, right? Too cute! Great chapter hun! Author's Response: Handyward is yummy huh? As for where he lives wink wink nudge nudge. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: May 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Stir Together
Hehe, I love your nickname for him. Handyward. Love it! Cute chapter! It's interesting that he owns the building too! Holy cow, what doesn't he do?! Can't wait for more! Author's Response: So glad you liked the chapter, you can check out a few pictures I have links for on my ff.net profile. http://www.fanfiction.net/~melolabel. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: May 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Double Check the Recipe
Hmm, so either Edward has 2 boys with Tanya or...i don't know. Maybe they're dogs. Haha, i have no clue. I like that you outed him at the end. It's cute. Also, I think it's charming that he wants to keep his ownership of the building a secret. Good job hun. Can't wait for more! Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: May 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Something Stinks
Okay, now the Tanya thing makes sense. I immediately got this sister vibe from her when she started talking, so good job on that. Great chapter. Bella's probably going to get way confused thougth! Hehe. All in good fun! Author's Response: Yep, things are going to get interesting for a bit, I'm glad you liked it. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: June 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: A Sticky Mess
Love the chapter! Haha, I like how she's getting so formal with him now. I wonder how long that's gonna last! Great chapter! Author's Response: So glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: June 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Making Music and Mishaps
I loved this chapter! Loved it! I watched that video. The elbows thing was kinda funny, i have never seen someone do that with the piano. I love the song that Nessie and Edward played. I don't think there's a person on this earth that doesn't know that song. However, i never knew the title until now. Great job hun! Author's Response: so glad you enjoyed that chapter! thx for the review, typing w/ baby in my arms 1 handed so pls fgive!
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: June 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Humble Pie
How the heck did I miss that you posted a new chapter? Oh well, works out for me cause now instead of a cliffi hanger, I can go directly to the next chapter. Hehe. I love how Alice was so sneaky in doing her make up and having her put on the dress just to end up having to go down to the restaurant. Too cute! Great job hun! Author's Response: I don't know how you missed it, but I'm glad you're back in the saddle again. Thanks so much!
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: June 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: The Secret's in the Sauce
That was so cute! Except for when she broke down in hysterics. Not that I blame her, i would probably do the same thing. I think it's cute that hey even got Nessie in on it too. Good chapter hun! Author's Response: Yeah, the freak out was not fun, but I'm glad you liked everything! Thank you!
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: June 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Clean up is a Breeze
I love this story. I was just thinking, before you even said anything, that everything was coming together a little too easily. Like something bad is gonna happen. Great job! Author's Response: Yes, things can't always be sunshine and roses, there is drama coming up, but not too much ;)
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: July 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Bear Food and Flowers
Aww, that was so sweet that Nessie almost called him dad. That was almost too sweet. I think I have a cavity now, thanks. Haha. Hey, wait, where did Jacob come in? Was he mentioned before and I missed it? I think it's kinda cool that Emmett has a scar from the bear he has in his club, I never would have thought that. Great chapter hun! Author's Response: It was a pretty surgary chapter. Jacob was intro'ed towards the start of the story (the kid peeking in the window at Nessie when they first started renovating the building) Bella mentions Nessie spending too much time with him instead of practicing, and for this chapter he was waiting in front of their building to go to the recital with them. I haven't really spotlighted their phone convo's or any of their interaction because I'm trying to keep as few POV changes as possible. :) Glad you liked Em's story! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: July 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Nervous Baker
Hehe, I like all of the little snippets from twilight that you put in. Like raised from wolves and victoria and her curveball. It's cute, I like it. I'm glad that Edward is more than okay with Nessie calling him that. That warms the heart. Great chapter hun! Author's Response: Glad you liked the nods and thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: July 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Sweet Success
Awesome chapter! I loved every bit of it! Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: July 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: The Fat Shaggy
i am so trying those fat shaggy's. They sound amazing!
Wonderful chapter! I wonder if Victoria and James have something to do with her late order or if it was just Mike deing a douche. Either way, it was a good chapter. I loved the photo booth scene! Too cute! Author's Response: Glad you liked it! And justice is on it's way, for at least one of our villains. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: August 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Even The Best Ingredients Can Spoil
Hmm so I'm guessing that Jessie is Jessica. James sure is getting sneaky trying to get someone on the inside.
I'm sure Nessie will be okay. My guess is that right now Edward is remembering back to Chelsea and so it's gonna be hard to work on Nessie but he will and everything will be fine.
Great chapter!
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: September 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Unexpected Recipe
Wow. I did not see that coming! I thought for sure that Eric was Renesmee's father. Interesting twist there darling! Great chapter!
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: September 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: A Brand New Day
Wow, he's actually her father. Wow. What are the chances! I wonder how Nessie will react to it!
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: September 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: Garnishes
Aww, Nessie took it so well! And now they are engaged! Too cute! I'm still wondering what jessie is up to...
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: September 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 23: Preheat The Oven
aww, I'm glad that Jessie told the truth. That's good. Now they'll have an allie to make James pay. Cute chapter! Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: September 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 24: Simmering
Hmm....I really hope Jessie is gonna stay true to Bella and not do anything. But you never know. Guess we'll have to wait to find out. Great chapter! Author's Response: Thanks so much! glad you're on the fence about jessie!
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: September 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 25: Boiling Over
WOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh my God! That was amazing! I love that Jessie told Bella the truth and they got them good! Ahhhh that couldn't have been more perfect! Awesome! Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed that chapter. It was a pretty fun one to write! Thanks so much for all your reviews!
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: September 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 26: Frosting
Aww, that was so sweet! I forgot to tell you, I love Big Daddy. He's funny! Great chapter hun, that was adorable! I loved Jake's little scene. Too cute! Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Teaser is up on the forum thread.
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: September 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue Just Desserts
Aww, I'm so sad to see Tapas done. It is such a cute story, I loved every bit of it! Great job hon! Author's Response: I'm sad it's over too. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Hope to hear from you when The Marksman starts to post!
Summary: The Cullens move to yet another town and meet a new and somewhat odd girl, she becomes something different for each member of the family: Alice loves her, Edward can't figure her out (but will become obsessed with her non the less), Emmett shares a hidden and forgotten past with her, Esme thinks she's found another daughter, Rosalie is deadly jealous…
But whatever impact she has on any of the Cullens, the impact made on her own life is much greater.
I always wondered what would happen if Edward lost the tight rein on his control. So I wanted to explore deeper into his vampire nature.
Categories: AU Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No
Word count: 13743
[Report This] Published: April 24, 2009 Updated: June 16, 2009
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: May 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Underwater
Good intro chapter. I like how it drops in and then you get into the scene. I like it. Is that movie really gory? I was gonna rent it from Netflix but now I'm not so sure. Good chapter! Author's Response: I sent you a message, but yeah, do rent that film!
Thanks for the review! Hope you read the next chapters :)
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: May 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- The Race
Cute chapter. I like the fact that he doesn't really like Jaime and yet he is completely obsessed with her now. I wonder what Emmett wants from her. Good chapter hun! Author's Response: Thank you!! :)
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