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Penname: KelseyJane [Contact]
Real name: Kelsey
Status: Member
Member Since: April 27, 2009
Website: www.Twitter.com/KelseyJR
Beta-reader: Yes

Hey, I'm KelseyJane, thanks for checking out my page. I am 24. I live in Oregon. My favorite book of the Twilight series is Eclipse. I love to write but most of my stories are for my own enjoyment.


Come follow me on twitter @KelseyJR


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Okay, so everyone has their own perspective on what a vampire looks like and what one can do, here is my brand of vampire:



  • Unlike Twilight, I do not think vampires glitter. They burn.



  • My vampires burn in direct sunlight but in cloud cover they can go out with only it bothering their eyes and a slight tingle to their skin.



  • Their eyes change color as they get hungry.



  • They are only a few degrees cooler than the average human.



  • They do bleed. But only for a minute or so. It runs slow and clots quickly.



  • They have fangs that come out when they smell blood and retract when they are done feeding.


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Links for Ever The Same


Elle's Tattoo:


http://www.unlimitedperfumes.com/images/ch-823_250w.jpg


Imagin the sun is blue without the face and only the 3 yellow stars continuing the circle.


Elle's dress in Chapter 9


http://www.imdb.com/media/rm2914031872/tt0454945


The one that Amanda Bynes is wearing


Elle's dress with Jacket in Chapter 9:


http://bynes-source.net/gallery/displayimage.php?album=158&pos=3


Edward's shirt in Chapter 9


http://shop.nordstrom.com/S/3016282/0~2376777~2374609~2374623~2374685?mediumthumbnail=Y&origin=category&searchtype=&pbo=2374685&P=1


Elle's outfit in Chapter 12.


Imagine the shirt a dark green with those jeans.


http://www.urbanoutfitters.com/urban/catalog/productdetail.jsp?itemdescription=true&itemCount=10&startValue=71&selectedProductColor=&sortby=&id=16084972&parentid=W_APP_CAMIS&sortProperties=+product.marketingPriority,-product.startDate&navCount=444&navAction=poppushpush&color=&pushId=W_APP_CAMIS&popId=WOMENS_APPAREL&prepushId=


Cassie's outfit in Chapter 12


http://www.urbanoutfitters.com/urban/catalog/productdetail.jsp?itemdescription=true&itemCount=60&startValue=1&selectedProductColor=&sortby=&id=16268815&parentid=W_APP_TEES_GRAPHIC&sortProperties=+product.marketingPriority,-product.startDate&navCount=111&navAction=poppushpush&color=&pushId=W_APP_TEES_GRAPHIC&popId=WOMENS_APPAREL&prepushId=


Alice's outfit in Chapter 12


With a white denim jacket over the top and her black flats


http://shop.nordstrom.com/S/3011961/0~2378467~2378483~6023104?mediumthumbnail=Y&origin=category&searchtype=&pbo=6023104&P=1


Rosalie's outfit in Chapter 12


It's the outfit with the blue jacket.


http://www.urbanoutfitters.com/urban/catalog/productdetail.jsp?itemdescription=true&itemCount=10&startValue=1&selectedProductColor=&sortby=&id=16144172&parentid=W_APP_VESTS&sortProperties=+product.marketingPriority,-product.startDate&navCount=486&navAction=poppushpush&color=&pushId=W_APP_VESTS&popId=WOMENS_APPAREL&prepushId=


Elle's dress in Chapter 22.


Color: Lapis


http://www.davidsbridal.com/webapp/wcs/stores/servlet/ProductDisplayView?storeId=10052&catalogId=10051&categoryId=-49998974¤tIdx=62&subCategory=-49998976|-49998975|-49998974&catentryId=6097279&sort=


Please let me know if the links aren't working




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Reviews by KelseyJane
 
Summary:

 

Edward left Bella, forcing his family to stay away from her. Six years onwards, the Cullens are a mess without Bella and Emmett decides to get away from his angry, angst ridden family and let loose. What he finds in the meanest biker bar in Seatle will send shockwaves through his entire family.

 

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All canon couples!


Categories: New Moon Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes Word count: 112765
[Report This] Published: April 07, 2009 Updated: December 04, 2009


Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: December 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27:Izzy is Lost Forever

Wow, didn't see that coming. Great job

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: December 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26:Sweets After Sex

lol the bear thing was just too funny! That and i love the fact that Edward grabbed her and jumped off. Too fun! That and pool sex is always a blast...

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: December 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6:What the hell happened to Bell Swan

I like that she still has the soft side of going to a library. In all this angerness, it's sweet. Good chapter

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: December 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7:Welcome Home Bella, oops I mean Izzy!

I like that Alice got to pissed at Edward, that was awesome! Now time for the real show!

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: December 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Poor, Poor Edward Cullen

Moving in? Really? Hmm this should be interesting. I love the fact that Emmett is always correcting them on her name. Too funny!

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: December 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Dying Again

LMAO. I loved their conversation about Edward being raped1 Oh my god, too freaking funny!

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: December 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22:JB Man of Mystery!

Aww, Jacob and Bella time. Do we get to know what Jacob and May name the baby? I always love that part

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: December 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play

Hmm interesting. I like the idea of that knife. Very clever.

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: December 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Family Reunion

Wow, Can't say I'm surprised that they all came to see her. I am surprised however, that Esme and Carlisle weren't there. Great chapter!

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: December 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Bikes, Cars and Ugly Rugs!

I didn't even know a car like the bugatti veyron even existed until now. I like it. Now it makes sense as to why Alice never saw anything. Great chapter

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: December 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16:A Bloodied Kiss

Oooo naughty Edward! So he really has changed! I like this Edward!

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: December 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Red Like Human Blood

Yeah! Thats what i wanted! Them to yell at each other and then make up for it. Hmm maybe that will come later!

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: December 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Edward Enjoys His Torture.

I love that Edward is letting himself go and being changed by Izzy. I love it! Great job!

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: December 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14:Fun At Tonka's

Jealous of Izzy? Pshh, of course I am! She has a great relationship with all 3 guys. Okay 2 out of the 3. We're working on the third. Great Chapter!

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: December 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Izzy Comes Bearing Gifts

Okay, so she gave Alice the Lambo, Jasper a bike. What did she give Rose? Another bike? Great chapter

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: December 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11:The Goddess+The Pixie+The Badass=Pure Evil!

Great chapter! I loved this one, it was awesome. That talk between Jasper and Izzy was sweet, I enjoyed it. Great job

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: December 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Scariest Place EVER!

Hahaha, I love the Toy Story bit you put in there. I'm a married spud. That was too cute! Took me a minute to realize what that was from. I like this bella. It'll be interesting to see what happens when her and Edward meet face to face.

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: December 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Reckless Abandonment

I'm surprised that Alice hasn't been keeping tabs on her. I wonder why things are fuzzy. Hmm

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: December 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This sounds really good. Great intro chapter!

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: December 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25:Cotton is Calling

I totally love that Edward trusts her to tell him if she's hurting him. That and she was the one to freak out over the bruises. Too funny!

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: December 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33:Izzy Learns To Hunt

I like that you are showing both sides. Edward's side and Izzy's side. Especially like that you first showed Edward's conversation with Tanya and then the funeral and then explained everything on Izzy's side. Very well done.

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: December 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34:New Life

I like that he's confused and she had to prove to him that she's real. Great chapter. I was wondering how you were gonna have them meet again.

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: December 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35:A Lil' Less Conversation

Ahh, so she's slowly learning her power. Great chapter.

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: January 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36:Boy Scouts(TB)

Cute freaking chapter! I loved every bit of it! Bring on the other Cullens!

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: January 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37:The Lost are now Found

Awesome epilogue chapter! i really like the way you did it! Can't wait for the sequel!

 




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