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Penname: KelseyJane [Contact]
Real name: Kelsey
Status: Member
Member Since: April 27, 2009
Website: www.Twitter.com/KelseyJR
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Hey, I'm KelseyJane, thanks for checking out my page. I am 24. I live in Oregon. My favorite book of the Twilight series is Eclipse. I love to write but most of my stories are for my own enjoyment.


Come follow me on twitter @KelseyJR


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Okay, so everyone has their own perspective on what a vampire looks like and what one can do, here is my brand of vampire:



  • Unlike Twilight, I do not think vampires glitter. They burn.



  • My vampires burn in direct sunlight but in cloud cover they can go out with only it bothering their eyes and a slight tingle to their skin.



  • Their eyes change color as they get hungry.



  • They are only a few degrees cooler than the average human.



  • They do bleed. But only for a minute or so. It runs slow and clots quickly.



  • They have fangs that come out when they smell blood and retract when they are done feeding.


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Links for Ever The Same


Elle's Tattoo:


http://www.unlimitedperfumes.com/images/ch-823_250w.jpg


Imagin the sun is blue without the face and only the 3 yellow stars continuing the circle.


Elle's dress in Chapter 9


http://www.imdb.com/media/rm2914031872/tt0454945


The one that Amanda Bynes is wearing


Elle's dress with Jacket in Chapter 9:


http://bynes-source.net/gallery/displayimage.php?album=158&pos=3


Edward's shirt in Chapter 9


http://shop.nordstrom.com/S/3016282/0~2376777~2374609~2374623~2374685?mediumthumbnail=Y&origin=category&searchtype=&pbo=2374685&P=1


Elle's outfit in Chapter 12.


Imagine the shirt a dark green with those jeans.


http://www.urbanoutfitters.com/urban/catalog/productdetail.jsp?itemdescription=true&itemCount=10&startValue=71&selectedProductColor=&sortby=&id=16084972&parentid=W_APP_CAMIS&sortProperties=+product.marketingPriority,-product.startDate&navCount=444&navAction=poppushpush&color=&pushId=W_APP_CAMIS&popId=WOMENS_APPAREL&prepushId=


Cassie's outfit in Chapter 12


http://www.urbanoutfitters.com/urban/catalog/productdetail.jsp?itemdescription=true&itemCount=60&startValue=1&selectedProductColor=&sortby=&id=16268815&parentid=W_APP_TEES_GRAPHIC&sortProperties=+product.marketingPriority,-product.startDate&navCount=111&navAction=poppushpush&color=&pushId=W_APP_TEES_GRAPHIC&popId=WOMENS_APPAREL&prepushId=


Alice's outfit in Chapter 12


With a white denim jacket over the top and her black flats


http://shop.nordstrom.com/S/3011961/0~2378467~2378483~6023104?mediumthumbnail=Y&origin=category&searchtype=&pbo=6023104&P=1


Rosalie's outfit in Chapter 12


It's the outfit with the blue jacket.


http://www.urbanoutfitters.com/urban/catalog/productdetail.jsp?itemdescription=true&itemCount=10&startValue=1&selectedProductColor=&sortby=&id=16144172&parentid=W_APP_VESTS&sortProperties=+product.marketingPriority,-product.startDate&navCount=486&navAction=poppushpush&color=&pushId=W_APP_VESTS&popId=WOMENS_APPAREL&prepushId=


Elle's dress in Chapter 22.


Color: Lapis


http://www.davidsbridal.com/webapp/wcs/stores/servlet/ProductDisplayView?storeId=10052&catalogId=10051&categoryId=-49998974¤tIdx=62&subCategory=-49998976|-49998975|-49998974&catentryId=6097279&sort=


Please let me know if the links aren't working




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Rock Bottom by ernzo Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 113]
Summary:

 

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Bella Swan has hit rock bottom. She’s flunked out of college and is forced to move back home with her father because her mother wants nothing to do with her. But when she gets a job at Sofie’s Restaurant and meets Edward Cullen and his unique group of friends, things begin to change. But how long will Edward be there for her? Will she push him away?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 40787
[Report This] Published: March 18, 2009 Updated: July 11, 2009


Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: May 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Firsts

I like that date. It shows that they're comfortable with each other. So much so that they don't need to do the formal dinner and a movie, they can just stay at home...and tease a little. Good chapter!

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: May 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Birthday Kisses

That was a cute chapter. I like the fact that he came to see her on his birthday. Now that is really sweet.

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: May 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: The Party

Of course, some chick has to go and practically ruin a great guy. But it seems he's bouncing back quite nicely. Hehe, good chapter hun



Author's Response:

thank you! :D

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: May 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Movies and Late Night Swims

Oh, of course, cliff hanger! Jerk! Hehe, that's so not fair! What did he lie about...maybe he does have a kid after all? Or hmmm....maybe he's a virgin? I highly doubt the last one... Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Well, I have good news. I just finished Chapter 11 and sent it off to my beta! So it will be posted very soon :D

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: June 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Soon

hehehe. Naughty, naughty! But I love it! The beach would be fun, but that's overplayed, I think. Maybe...well actually, i got nothing. I think it would be fun if they did this game where they ask each other questions, the next one more personal than the last and whoever refuses to answer loses, and has to do something for the other person. Did that make sense? I don't know. Great chapter! Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

I really like this idea, actually. I was kind of thinking beach-wise about the Cullens going down to a beach house in California and taking Bella with them, but I'm still bouncing more idea around in my head, so we will see!

TY for the idea, I really like it :')

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: June 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Condom Testers

Very good! Haha, I love that he ran into Charlie at the store! Great chapter!



Author's Response:

thank you! :)

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: July 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Alone Together

Hehe, this chapter has it all. Some loving, some sweet moments. Some gotta-have-you sex. It's awesome. Great chapter hun!

 
Summary:

      

A chance encounter leads to an odd attraction that develops into an addiction.

 There are so many things about this woman that fascinate me.  She's beautiful.  Classically beautiful at that.  Intelligent.  Articulate.  Witty.  She's everything any man could ever dream of or want.  Except I don't even know her name.

Warnings:  Lemons.  Lots of lemons.  Actually, more like Mike's Hard Lemonade.  Mild D/s.

 

 


Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: The Anonymous Series
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 44658
[Report This] Published: March 18, 2009 Updated: June 10, 2010


Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: November 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Tea and Sympathy

Wow. He is so far gone into this whole thing. She's right. He is taking this way too seriously. Great chapter!

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: June 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Patience is a Virtue

As much as I like this story, I must admit this chapter was kind of confusing cause it get jumping around with all the breaks and stuff. But other than my confusion (Which happens easily) it was a really good chapter. Good job!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.  In hindsight, you're right that is can get a little confusing.  I'm going to try to make that easier in the future.  :)

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: June 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Don't Say A Word

Normally, I don't like stories that have the actual actors, but this one is pretty good so far. Good chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you for giving this a chance.  I'm sorry it's taken me forever to respond to your kind review.  It means a lot that you take the time to leave your thoughts.  The least I can do is acknowledge them in a timely manner - but I'm a loser like that, lol.

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: July 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Erotica

Hehe, I like that she just leaves him there. That's awesome. Normally I don't like anal stuff but you worded it nicely and it wasnt vulgar. It was very well done. Good job hun!



Author's Response:

Your comments mean a lot to me.  I try very very hard to make it as sensual as possible without being harsh or vulgar.  I think that can detract a lot from a "hot" scene :)  Thank you again for the kind words.

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: July 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: The Longest Day

Wow. This is such sweet torture for him, I love it. Hehe, I laughed when the sub recognized Rob. It was bound to happen at some point if she ever brought someone else into their arrangement. Great chapter!

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: November 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: The Odyssey

I like that he's taking what he's learning and actually using it. Good for him. Although, I bet there will be hell to pay for not calling her on time. Oops! Haha, great chapter hun!

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: February 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Waiting for Godot

Didnt he just break the rules right there by having sex with someone else? Hmm. It'll be interesting to see if she picks up on that fact. Great chapter!!

 
Summary:

While Edward is away hunting, Emmett is left in charge of keeping an eye on Bella. Come along as they play one of the most ridiculous games to ever be created. Pure Emmett and Bella silliness.


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1463
[Report This] Published: March 22, 2009 Updated: April 02, 2009


Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: September 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I have never heard of that game, but it was quite amusing.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm glad you enjoyed it.  No real point to the game just pure silliness and guaranteed laughs. :)

 
Summary:

 

It's a Friday night, two weeks before the wedding, and Edward has gone hunting, leaving Bella in the wedding-crazy hands of Alice.


In an attempt to distract Alice, Bella suggests a girly night in (all wedding discussion banned), involving story-telling, a bottle of wine and some cheese.

Edward returns home to find his fiancée extremely drunk, which leads to an entertaining, yet interesting conversation in which Edward answers Bella's innocent questions concerning cheese.


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Filling the Silence
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2944
[Report This] Published: March 24, 2009 Updated: March 27, 2009


Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: September 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Philosophy of Cheese

You talk about the most random things when you're drunk. It's so much fun though, especially when you remember it and laugh at your stupidity the next day. Cute story



Author's Response:

Oh yes! I am the Queen of Drunken Stupidity, unfortunately. Although lately, I've taken to observing other drunks rather than become one myself, and laughing at others is just as fun as laughing at yourself! LOL
Thanks for taking the time to read and review. Much appreciated!

 
Human Pet by cullens_pet Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 673]
Summary:

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Edward doesn't make it in time to the ballet studio.  James has a far worse fate in store for Bella than death.  One that she had never imagined in her worst nightmares.

** This story is graphic and contains sexual assault. If you are sensitive to that topic, please don't read any further. **


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 47514
[Report This] Published: March 28, 2009 Updated: December 11, 2009


Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: January 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I ha;f expected James to find out that she had used the phone. If only Bella had played along, they might have been at the hotel when the Cullens arrived. Great chapter

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: January 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ooo, this looks good! Great intro chapter!

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: January 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Awesome chapter! you can really feel her pain about everything.

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: January 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Great job. I love the little snipits that show us what the Cullens are doing. Especially when you went into Edward's head and we could see what the others were thinking. Very well done.

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: January 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Wow, james now has feelings for Bella. I did not see that coming! Great twist!

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: January 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Ooo, I like angry Carlisle! Haha, it's kind a hot! Hehe

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: January 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I had a feeling he was gonna take her there. Well it's not 2 am, and I need to get some sleep. Damn. Guess I'll finish this story tomorrow!

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: January 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Ooo Aro's got a naughty plan! I think his plan is he'll let the Cullens take care  of James and then Aro will try to talk the Cullens into leaving Bella, stating that they will kill all of them if they don't. That's kind of what I'm thinking.

 
Reviewer: KelseyJane Signed
Date: January 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Wow James was easier than I thought he would be. Now to deal with the volturi.

 




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