"I think subconsciously I keep searching for a sign that Bella still loves me too, searching for a reason to fight for her, to try and win her back. But there are no signs, because she doesn’t love me anymore."

*thumps Edward upside the head*  That's it.  It's final.  The Cullen men are idiots!

Oh my, that E/B kiss (well, both of them) were hot.  As I was reading the second one, though, I kept thinking, Jasper's gonna interrupt.  And what do ya know, but he did.  Damn him.  hehe

But poor Jasper.  What he must be thinking.  I mean, he was worried that if Edward got his act together Bella'd go back to him, and here he is, his act almost together, and Bella is forced into his arms, and she seems to be adjusting quite nicely.  You know, I wonder what would have happened if Jasper hadn't shown up.  They were getting pretty hot and heavy, weren't they?  hehe  Hmmm....that'd be another interesting oneshot, huh?  Gosh, I'm just forcing all these writing ideas on you, aren't I?  hehe

Wow.  Poor Bella.  I mean, she's stuck in a very difficult situation here.  Damn.  And the guys!  *sniff*

That was a wonderful chapter.  I loved that they finally talked and put what they were feeling out there.  While I agree that taking a break from Jasper is the best way, I still think it's gonna break him to pieces.  Poor Jasper!  And Edward agreeing to change her (finally) w/o strings.  Fantastic.  Gah!  *reads on*

Oh dear Christ.  Jasper's costume.  *pants*  Ohmigod.  What I would pay to see Jackson done up in that diddy.  And as long as I'm shelling out the money, to have him done up in that diddy in my living room.  While my hubs is away for the week.  *mind wanders*

*cough*  Anywho, wonderful chapter.  Wonder how Heidi will take to the whole singer idea.  Several mines were avoided in that chapter, can't wait to see what happens next!

"I’m not going to just propose there, I’m going to get married there!"

I about fell off my chair at this!  But what if the Volturi are still there?  Oooo, and Iwonder who Bella will take.

Have I told you how much I love Adrian?  He's the perfect guy!  He's smart, funny, caring, good in bed, good looking, athletic, fashionable, and (for the moment) he has a pulse!  hehe 

Okay, first, the mutual attraction between Jasper and Heidi.  Hmmm...interesting.  He can't be with Kelly, obviously (too weird), but Heidi....it'll be interesting to see where that goes.

You know, as I was reading NM I got the impression that Felix lusted after more than Bella's blood.  Glad to see I wasn't alone in that.  And I'm glad you didn't make Felix and Heidi all bad, either.

The sex!  Dear god, the sex.  That was, well, it was perfection.  It was hot and sweet all together and just wonderful. 

"I will take a step back and be your friend, your brother, as I promised you I would be. But know this, Bella. When the threat of the Volturi is gone, I will fight for you.”

Is it wrong that this line makes me so tingly inside?  hehe

Dear god, the thought of Edward, doing that.  My oh my.  And that he said "fuck" during sex.  hehe  Get's me every time.  Can't wait to see the trip to England.  Won't the Volturi come with them?  Although, maybe they can keep Felix and Heidi occupied long enough....hmm...

That was a really hard chapter for me to read.  I cried so hard during that point in NM, and it wasn't any easier reading it this way.  Now that the worst of it is out of the way (in my mind, him leaving was the worst, the aftermath was livable), it should be easier to read.  Doubt it'll be easier for them to deal with, though.

Great chapter, darling.

"I’m coming after you with a .45 and a shovel, understand?”

*dies*  Too funny.  I love your writing, darling, and I love these characters that you've developed so beautifully.  What are you going to write for us next? 

I hope to be caught up with this fic by tomorrow (I have a half hour before work then three hours after with nothing to do but read.  Joy).  I just hope it has a happy ending for all involved.  I'm surprised, I've grown attached to Felix and Heidi. 

Oh, that was simply perfection.  You know, both of those made me think of my wedding day.  Down the isle to Cannon D, dancing to At Last, and smooshing cake in my husband's face.  He got some up my nose.  There are lovely pictures of him cleaning me up.  hehe

But, oh, Jasper!  He still had hope, poor thing.  And the Volturi will prob want her changed right away, huh? 

Oh god oh god oh god....Jasper, you idiot! 

*sniff*  They're seperating?  *sniff*  That's so sad!  *sniff*

'Was there a man alive who wasn’t lusting after Bella?!

“Welcome to my world, brother,” Edward muttered quietly, reading my thoughts.'

hehe  Loved this.

Well, I love the ability you gave Bella.  Very neat.  Very original.

Wow.  Just wow.  I loved the whole story to bits.  The whole thing, even when you were breaking my heart.  Just, the story you wove, the characters you created, was simply brilliant.  Can't wait to see what else you write!