Well, I've come to review here again, see if I can help push you any further up the list.  hehe  Damn Charlie and his interupting.  Can we get some more yummy smoochies soon?  Pretty please?

Well, Jake did say that what he was off to do was for Bella.  Hmm...maybe he was working out with Sam so he would be the one staying back to protect Bella when everyone else went to hunt Victoria?

Love, as always.  Here's to making it into the top five!

LOVE IT!  I've been looking for a good Jacob/Bella fic for ages!  And I've found exactly two besides this.  One was a rediculous AU-human one that was soooo OOC.  The other was during the same time span as this one, but so OOC it wasn't funny.  Kudos to making a very picky me happy!

Another thing that I love that you do is that you don't make Charlie head over heels for Jake.  Too many people are all "Oh, you want to suck my daughter's face right in front of me, be my guest, at least you're not Edward!"  hehe  Great job, dear.

le sigh.....kisses for a great chapter, darling!

Oooo, yay!  hehe  Perfect!  It was funny, I posted in the forum asking when we could expect an update, then I checked my email.  hehe  So yay for updates!  Hope to have the next chapter soon!  Love this story to bits!

hehe  The joy of having a bf who can fix cars, right?  Lord, though, is sticking around what's best for Bella?  I mean, it would be better for them, in the long run, if she goes away to school if it's what she really wants rather than go to a school that she doesn't like/doesn't offer what she wants just for Jake.  There's alway email and phone.  Pluse they can take turns driving to see each other on the weekends.  Sam can let Jake off for a weekend a month, can't he?  Can't wait to see what else you have in store for us.

Okay, this is how it's going to go.  My husband it flying down to TX next month.  I'm going to come with him, kidnap you, bring you back to NY with me, and hold you hostage so that you can write for me all day long.  hehe  By the time I'm done, I'm going to have quite the collection of fic authors living in my office.  Guess it's great my hub's is such a good cook. 

Wonderful chapter, darling.  Can't wait to read the rest and see where you take our lovely couple.  And some more smoochies (and a little more, eventually) would be wonderful as well.

Wow.  Great job!  What bit of her did he get?  Ooo, I can't wait for another update!  hehe

Um, I noticed a small mistake:

"I searched the minds of the pack again, looking for someone who could help, but they were all too far away or too busy with their own leeches."

Jake told Edward that they'd tried 300 miles away and they could still hear each other.  And when Jake was up in Canada and Seth was keeping an eye on him, I had the impression he was more than 300 miles off.  So if they're all in the Forks area, he'd still be able to hear them, right?  Unless you were planning on changing that bit.  Just thought I'd point it out.

You already know my thoughts on the whole imprinting thing, darling.  Besides, I'm over there enough as is.  hehe  A little lurking, a little posting, you know how it goes.

Great chapt, bb!  Loved it!  Now, write us some more.  Please.  Hell, if you won't come up here, I'll steal my hub's tickets and come to you.  I cook, clean, babysit, the whole nine.  All you have to do is write.  hehe

Just curious, how much do you think is left to this?  I know you're talking about a sequel, but do you know about how many more chapts you want to do on this?  And will the seq be in the same format?

Again:  Gah!  hehe  Oh, to see what happens.  Hmmm...if memory serves, you did say something on the thread about fluffiness coming in about two chapters.  Wouldn't that put our fluffiness this coming chapt?  *squee*

I love this story to pieces, bb.  Like, hard core.  When I see there's an update, I drop whatever I'm doing and dash over here like a mad woman to read what you've written for us.  Please please please update soon!  hehe

I was trying to explain to Matt the other day how 100 ppl might read a story, but only, sat 2 of them will review.  Sucks monkey butt.  So review, ppl!  Show ysar love for her hard work!  Don't make my come around and stand over you, b/c I will do it!

*cough*

Anywho, love this story to bits, dear, but you knew that.  I love how you write Jacob all the typical horny teenage male, but worried about not pushing Bella too far too fast as well.  It's sometimes hard to remember that it's only been a week, and for many people that's too soon, especially for their first time.  I love how you stick to that.  Although, we should be getting our fluffiness soon, right?  Please?  hehe

And as for your A/N:  I understand and support Edward coming back, you've been true to the books todate, would hate to see you stray away.  But the imprinting thing?  Gah!  How evil are you, telling us that?  *grumbles* 

20 more posts, does that mean 10 more chapters?  Hmmm....a lot can happen in that amount of time.  Wonder what you'll be doing with it.  Can you give us a time frame?  Like how many more days are left in the story?  hehe

Great chapt, darling.  Oh, is she going to imprint on Quil?  Tee hee, that'd be great.  Or Seth!  How embarrassed would Jess be to imprint on someone so much younger?

Are we going to get the deal on Quil's homelife?  What's going on there?  Oh, and can we also get a little on Rachael's deal?  Maybe a O/S from her POV?

"Proof that Bella stood there...naked...wet...shit! I barely managed to dry off before I pulled on my shorts and got out of there. It was either that, or spend the rest of the day in there with a bar of soap."

Love this bit.  *giggles*  Poor Jaky.  Will he be getting some of his, erm, tension relived soon, or will that be in the sequl?  I know you said that one was going to be NC-17.

Holy crap, woman, you are a literary genius, have I told you that?  I love every word that you write.  Hmmm...I wonder if maybe Jess' pizza making will draw some of her friends and some of the pack together, that way a pack member can imprint on one of her friends.  Oh, wouldn't it be great if Embry imprinted on Lauren or something?  tee hee.  Now we just have to find that lesbian for Jake to imprint on....

Wonder where Jake ran off to?  Oooo, and the convo w/Charlie!  Can't wait for that!