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Penname: btvsna [ Contact]
Real name: Miki
Status: Member
Member Since: April 27, 2009
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Howdy! I'm Miki *points above* and I'm a Twilight/Edward/Jasper/smutty fic-aholic. *listens to chourus of "Hi, Miki"* I'm fairly new to the whole world of Twilight (I think I started the first book a few months ago), but I've jumped in head first. Acutally, I more did a cannon ball into the pool, but all the same. Right now I've got a one shot that's being edited and two chaptered fics I'm working ont (like I said, cannon ball), so you should be able to read what I do some time soon. Hopefully. *fingers crossed*
I am all for cannon pairings and storys, but like to delve into AU from time to time. And while I am hard core Team Edward, once in a while I'll write or read a little something that's Team Jacob. Normally I'm not so wishy washy, but those boys do bring it out in me. hehe
As for me, I'm 23, married, and working on going back to college so that I can one day teach snoby teenagers the joys of Math. Really, I'd rather teach them the joys of English, but NY is about chock full of English teachers. I love Math and English (almost) equally, so hence my choice.
I am obsessed with Twilight (obviously), Harry Potter, House of Night, knitting, chrocheting, House (though I drool over Chase and Wilson more than House), and those crazy science shows that tell you why time doesn't exist. I think if I watch one more show about the theory of realitivity my husband is going to cut the cable cord. hehe
Well, dearies, if there's anything else you need knowing, feel free to contact me.
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Summary: Edward Cullen made Bella Swan’s life a living hell from age ten to twelve. Finally fed up with the torment and teasing, she moved to Phoenix. Now she’s seventeen, beautiful, and has a new sense of confidence. When her mother sends her back to Forks for her senior year, she is determined to shake things up. 
NC-17 for sexuality, underage drinking, and language. OOC, just to be safe. Some canon pairings, some absolutely the opposite.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Laurent, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No
Word count: 55461
[Report This] Published: October 28, 2008 Updated: August 21, 2009
Reviewer: btvsna Signed
Date: September 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: The Snow Ball
Oh gosh. Now see, I don't know how I want this story to turn out. I mean, however you write it will be perfect, I'm sure. It seems like all my favorite stories are coming to a close. Whatever will I read when they're all done? hehe
I'm sorry about your loss, hun. I know how difficult it can be. The best advice I have is to just laugh. Remember the good, happy, funny times, and you'll heal faster. *hugs*
Summary: Edward chooses a life of danger over one of gentrified comfort. Did Bella, the beautiful innkeepers daughter influence his decision? Can he bring the two sides of his life together or is he destined to lose everything? Inspired by 'The Highwayman'.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No
Word count: 48839
[Report This] Published: November 13, 2008 Updated: June 29, 2009
Reviewer: btvsna Signed
Date: June 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8
Great chapt, bbs. Oh, I was so wishing that Charlie called her over b/c Edward asked to meet her. Maybe now that they've been formally introduced we'll get more Bella/Edward action instead of just Bella/Highwayman-Edward action. *sniff*
I am curious about what Carlisle did to the Highwayman.....
Reviewer: btvsna Signed
Date: June 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7
Oh. Oh my. Just one more story that makes me want to invest in a riding crop. Hmm...wonder where I might find one....
Reviewer: btvsna Signed
Date: June 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1
Oh, so wonderful! I love it to bits and pieces! *reads on*
Reviewer: btvsna Signed
Date: June 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3
Okay, noticed booboo in EPOV, Paragaraph starting:
He moved to stand, but weak as he was, he stumbled a little. I put my arm under his, helping him to his feet. It was easier to focus on my actions than it was to feel the guilt and pain just boiling under the surface. Guilt for being the surviving son and pain of loss, my brother and what I felt sure would soon be my father(rework).
Don't know if you just want to take out the rework bit or acutally rework it, but I thought I'd point it out to you.
Wonderful so far! I love it to bits and can't stop reading! Ya'll are fantastic!
Reviewer: btvsna Signed
Date: June 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4
Ladies, I love you. Seriously. I am packing up and leaving my husband so I can hunt you down and you can write me lovely Nobledward segments day in and out. I'll even cook and clean and what not so all you have to worry about is writing. Promise. *winks*
This fic is fantastic. I love the pace it's moving at, and it's so well written. I know I'm going to die while waiting for updates, but as long as you don't forget about those of us out here waiting for you I guess I'll live. I'm trying to hold off on the last chapter, as much as I want to dive in and devour it, to make the wait for an update a little more barable. I noticed that this was last updated in March, so I'm hoping another chapter is well in the works. But I know how real life can get in the way of things like this.
So please, ladies, pretty pretty please, update as soon as you can. I'm on bended knee here, offering up cookies as a bribe. hehe Make me happy, and I'll bake you yummy chewy goodness. ^.^
Reviewer: btvsna Signed
Date: June 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5
Okay, ladies. I waited as long as I could, and now I'm sitting here panting for more. Please please please update soon! Please!
Reviewer: btvsna Signed
Date: June 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6
OH. Oh ladies! Oh, that was so worth the wait. So good. Can't wait to see where you take this next. Kuodos, m'dears.
Hmmm...let's see, me thinks it's time for me to make guess work of what's to come, as that's what I do (terribly, might I add). hehe
Let's see, if you're going with cannon pairings (which it seems you're leaning that way), Victoria (the trollop) is going to get more than flirty with the redcoats. Rose is going to sneak out for illicit relations with our favorite smithy. More yumminess between our favorite highwayman and Bella. Perhaps more backdoor (not that way) sexing with Carlise and Esme? That is, if Carlise gets better. Hmmm....we still need some more happenings between Alice and our other favorite highwayman (as I assume that Jasper is that lovely role). The question is, are you girls in the proNessie tribe or not? If not, who knows who poor Jaccob will end up with....
Anywho, I'm gonna back off and leave the writing to ya'll, since it's what you do so well. Can't wait for the next chapt!
Summary: Bella travels to Alaska to vacation in the cabin Alice loaned her. What happens when Bella finds out she is not the only person staying in the cabin? 
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes
Word count: 88293
[Report This] Published: November 28, 2008 Updated: January 01, 2010
Reviewer: btvsna Signed
Date: May 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Something Else
Ooo, was this all Alice's doing? Wouldn't put it past the little pixie. hehe
Great job, love. Must read more. Please update soon (I know I haven't gotten to the end of what you have yet, but I noticed that it's not finished, so if you update, then I'll have that much more to read. Brilliant, right?).
Reviewer: btvsna Signed
Date: May 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Spark
Okay, this is how much of a perv I am: I looked at the title of this chapter, and I saw "Spank" I was like, "What the hell?" hehe I realized my mistake, though. *shakes head* Lordy, no more smutty fics for me. hehe
Reviewer: btvsna Signed
Date: May 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Burning
hehe, I love how you're using lines from the book and movies. Fantabulous!
Reviewer: btvsna Signed
Date: May 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Coming Clean
Love this story, but I have a dumb ass question: if the power's out, how did the hot water heater work for them to take a bath? And for her to do the dishes? I've tried squeaking a little hot water out of mine when the power was out and let me tell you, doesn't work. Just wondering if you caught this or not.
Reviewer: btvsna Signed
Date: May 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 24: Sweat
Ahhh! You evil evil woman! I say it's one of two people: Jacob or Emmett. Em really has no reason to be there, but it just seems like the kind of interruption he'd be responsable for.
This is so good so far, I love it to pieces. Please, pretty please, update soon. I'll bring cookies, yummy yummy cookies if you do.
Reviewer: btvsna Signed
Date: June 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 25: Knock, Knock-Who's there?
I had this long, lovely review written, hit submit, and the site informs me I'm not logged in. Crap! Gah, you'd think I'd learn to copy before I hit submit by now. Anywho, the long and short of it:
Kick ass update, bb. Loved it to bits. You had me worried there for a moment, what with Edward being so detatched and all. I wonder how Bella will react to his declariation. Oooo, and the rest of them, Jake especially. *rubs hands together* Should be interesting. So please please please update soon! I love this story to bits and can't wait! hehe Oh, and I'll be there Friday with bells on to see what little treat you have for us for FFFA.
Reviewer: btvsna Signed
Date: July 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 26: Decisons
Wow. As sad as it will be to see this story come to a close, I'll be happy to see these two get their HEA. Loved it to pieces, bb. Keep on writing!
Reviewer: btvsna Signed
Date: August 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 27: Homecoming
Yay! An update! Ooo, I wonder what "emergency" kept Edward from picking up Bella at the airport. And what all he has planned for her. "I'm going to claim you as mine," that sounds like marriage proposal to me. Update soon, please! Pretty pretty please!
Reviewer: btvsna Signed
Date: September 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 28: Reunion
Awww, I hope ya'll are feeling top notch by the time you get this. Being yucky is no fun.
Hmmm...does he have a pair of her panties up there? (sounds like something my hubs would do) Or the Twister mat, all nice and framed? Probly the Twister mat. Tee hee.
Summary: 
Jasper cannot handle Edward and Bella's overpowering emotions anymore. When Edward and Alice go hunting, Jasper decides to teach Bella how to satisfy her needs. But what will he learn in the process? Nominated for two Eddie/Bellie Awards. Winner of the Twi-Fi Award for Best Non Canon Couple.
Categories: AU, Other Characters: Bella, Jasper
Challenges: Series: The Lessons Saga
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes
Word count: 59555
[Report This] Published: December 01, 2008 Updated: January 09, 2009
Reviewer: btvsna Signed
Date: May 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: The Gifts
Okay, the end image was hotter than what you wrote. Sorry, but true. (just something about naked Edward, chocolate, strawberries *whimpers* Yum)
Anywho, wonderous fic thus far. You're making me late to get read for work reading it. hehe I just can't stop.
Reviewer: btvsna Signed
Date: May 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Batteries Not Included
Okay, I'm sorry, but the A/Ns are becoming more drool-worthy than the fics. Edward sundae....yum.
Reviewer: btvsna Signed
Date: May 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Lost and Found
*drools* Jacob covered in hot fudge...... *drools*
Lovely, heartbreaking chapter. As always.
Reviewer: btvsna Signed
Date: May 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Bella's Choice
*sobs* I love this fic, it's so beautiful, but I love Edward so much. And him...and her...and...and... *sobs*
Reviewer: btvsna Signed
Date: May 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: Alt Chapter 16: Reconnection
Okay, I like this chapter much better. Sorry. I love Jasper, I really do, but I love Edward more. *snuggles fluffy Edward*
Reviewer: btvsna Signed
Date: May 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 23: Alt Chapter 17: New Beginnings
"Perhaps Bella’s clumsiness was a curse from Aphrodite borne from jealousy that Bella outshone her beauty tenfold."
The sweetest description of Bella's beauty (or of anyone's for that matter) that I have ever heard. Wonderous.
The Cullen boys, Chippendale's style, hmm... Can we have Jacob and Adrien as well? Pretty please?
Reviewer: btvsna Signed
Date: May 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 24: Alt Chapter 18: Releasing Bella
Okay, I love this ending. *sniff* I'm heading out to read teh sequel right now. Loves and hugs, my dear, and congrats on the beautiful (and heartbreaking) fic.
Reviewer: btvsna Signed
Date: June 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Epilogue
Okay, I was reading back over my reviews of this fic, and I realized that most of them were me drooling over promised naked Cullen boys and not enough praising of the beauty that is your writing, so I've come back to ammend that.
I did love this fic. It broke my heart into a million tiny little pieces, but I still loved it. It was hot and steamy but sweet and heartfelt. I loved how you developed the characters and how you developed the relationship between Bella and Jasper. And Jasper? *melts/dies* HOT! hehe
Anywho, I just wanted to say that, as I realized some of my previous reviews were...off. And I keep trying to get back to A Lesson in Fate, but everything keeps getting in the way. hehe So keep writing, chica, because you do it so well.
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