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I'm 28, I live in wonderful sunny Athens (Greece not Georgia) and I'm trying to find time between reading twifictions to organize my wedding. I'm not doing a good job though (with the wedding thing)


I loved the SM books and have read them more than twice each. Ever since I've found fan fiction on line I've gone a bit obsessed and keep reading almost all night and during the day at work (shhhh don't tell my boss). I love reading these stories so much that I'm afraid my soon to be husband will change his mind about the wedding and cancel it.


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Summary:

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Bella went cliff diving, but it didn't turn out so well. She broke her back. A decade later, Edward reappears in her life on the same night she loses her best friend and husband to a freak accident. Now a graduate student in Women's Studies, Bella isn't thrilled to see him. But when the Cullens re-enter Bella's life, they bring change, hope, and a new joint project that will require all their expertises.

Also, you can find a SPANISH version here:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4829851/1/En_un_parpadeo

AND you can find images for various things like Esme's house, Edward's piano, Bella's wheelchair and Rose's car on my ff.net profile page:

http://www.fanfiction.net/~thatwritr

OR in my LJ gallery:

http://pics.livejournal.com/that_writr/gallery/000010z2

Special Update:

For personal reasons (a ridiculously full teaching schedule and being recently put in charge of a bi-annual local conference and ongoing project), I am no longer able to reply to reviews and questions. But that said, I wanted to give a BIG THANK YOU to EVERYBODY for the wonderful feedback and kind words that have been sent my way since the completion of this story in August 2009. I do still check my messages about once every 1-2 weeks and read *every* review. I just have too many to reply to anymore, but I didn’t want anyone to think I was ignoring her/him in particular, or didn’t appreciate readers taking time to leave a review. Writing this story was tons of fun and I’m thrilled readers seem to enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed the chance to write it. I can’t tell you how flattering that is!!! As I used to reply to all reviews, I feel a little badly about this decision, but work has been requiring virtually all of my time since the new (academic) year began.

Best to all of you in 2010 and beyond!

 

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 68 Completed: Yes Word count: 221619
[Report This] Published: September 11, 2008 Updated: August 26, 2009


Reviewer: cornel Signed
Date: May 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

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I found your wonderful story just a few days ago and I have been extremely engrossed in it. This is, if not the best, most definitely one of the best fanfics I’ve read so far. It is very very well written, I love your vocabulary. I feel like reading one of the twilight series books only written for ‘adults’. I mean the books Stephenie wrote are mainly addressed to teenagers and I loved all four and a half of them, but this one is more mature and pithy.  I also very much like the fact that all point of views are displayed but they’re not like EPOV or BPOV or written in first person. The exchange of ideas, thoughts, expectations, aspects of life and truth between Edward and Bella has been fascinating. You’ve shown what a real 117 year old experienced man (putting aside for a brief moment the vampire status) is supposed to be. Also, all those little trivial every day things you’ve put in the story, like her ‘human’ moments, the actual problem of being handicapped, even his arousal and then the palliation, make this story real.  It’s not just Edward though who is actually showing his real age but the others as well. Jasper? I absolutely love the way you present him to be as well as the fact him being an academic. Rosalie? Another wonderful surprise. She’s beautiful, but you have gone way past that and shown her personality.

17year old Bella was acting on impulses but 28year old Bella knows exactly what she’s doing. This is not infatuation; this is real and profound love. If she chooses to be changed it will be a conscious decision and she will not regret it. All the other vampires were changed at a very young age, adolescents, and it was not their choice. They hadn’t had the chance to experience many things so I think that was the main reason for regret of being changed and for longing to be humans again.

Mark being black? Brilliant! Mentioning the issues of domestic violence? Brilliant! Displaying the problems of handicapped people? Brilliant! Bella an academic despite her problem? Brilliant! Edward not caring about Bella’s disability? Brilliant! The great relationship between Bella and her mother in law? Brilliant! Esme’s reaction to Bella? The typical mother that is being taken away her precious son? Brilliant!

Now that I found your story it is on my favorites list and I can’t wait to read the next chapter and how they’re moments under the same roof will be.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I'm really glad that you liked this and found the characters and their behavior to be realistic.  And yes, Stephenie was writing for teens.  I really wanted to let them grow up! :-)  How would people sorta my age act and react?

I also didn't really like the anti-human-ish message in the books.  I wanted a Bella a little more cognizant of what she'd give up if she became a vampire, and who could see the value in being human. :-)

Thanks again for the really sweet compliments!

 
Reviewer: cornel Signed
Date: May 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

WOW Edward really is 116 years old. I already told you that but I'm so excited to read that he behaves and talks his age, whenever he's with Bella of course and lets go of himself. The intimate moments between them were fantastic and how they talked about it, it's so real.

This was a fantastic chapter and I can't wait to see how the sex between them is going to be. Bella is paraplegic and he is a vampire with extreme strength, he might crush her lower body and Bella might not even realize it.

Just wondering, because I have no experience at all with paraplegia and no medical knowledge whatsoever, the fact that there are a few spots she can feel sensation, doesn't it make it more possible for her to walk again?



Author's Response:

Thank you!  And yes, I do want Edward to actually act his age sometimes!

On her ability to feel in a few places, that just means not all of the nerves dies at the point of the break, but a handful survived down to the next vertebra.  It doesn't necessarily have anything to do with whether she can walk again, unfortunately.  It's just that spinal injuries aren't always absolutely *complete* at the point of the break unless the spine is actually severed.

 
Reviewer: cornel Signed
Date: May 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Great chapter!!! They're a couple now a real one and they're starting to do those little things that are so very important because they're doing them together and for themselves. 

I also like the fact that despite the happiness and the good moments they're having while shopping, Bella has not forgotten that in ten years she will look older and he will not. But then it's great to know she's considering that in ten years they'll still be together and that she wants them to be together.



Author's Response:

She's starting to think about things like that.  Things are changing for *her* very rapidly right now, even if the reader has been anticipating it (as has Edward), so she's just starting to consider "And then ..." questions. :-)

 
Reviewer: cornel Signed
Date: June 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

²Love, he thinks, shouldn't be desperate. It should be giggles and joy and a bed of white feathers.² this is the best part of the whole chapter imo. That is such a wonderful message, because that’s what love really is about.


Yay they’re married now, even if it is that small ceremony between the two of them, but then again marriage is something intimate between two people and the whole “window dressing” is for the rest of the world. I think their commitment is the most beautiful act of love.


It was a wonderful, wonderful, wonderful, chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  They'll eventually have the "window dressing" for the rest of the family, and for Edward, to some degree, but the important part is accomplished, and there are a lot of considerations to work through for the public side of it.  No reason to hold up the private reality.

 
Reviewer: cornel Signed
Date: June 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

I read the chapter right when you posted and I thought I reviewed but I guess I didn't, so much going around lately.

Before all, I want to say I nominated this story at the Bellie awards as the most re-readable story, because I simply enjoy reading it over again.

I love Bella's response that she would let the change happen even if it was going to mean that she might be in tath chair for eternity in order to avoid Edward killing himself. She loves him and chooses to sacrifice herself and spend eternity bound in the chair, more depended on others than before, in order to have him safe.

I was reading a few of the reviews and I also realized, the way ypu described, in the previous chapter, their intimate moments, that Edward did not have body fluids at all. So having that in mind and the BD outcome, that is Rensesmee, I was wondering how that was possible. Of course it is fiction, and of course Stephenie, never clarified whether Edward actually had any body fluids to allow conception. She did mention though that the vampires did no longer need to use the bathroom. Just a crazy thought.

I really liked this chapter and I also like Alice's point. When you bend too far for someone you love, too far that you end up loosing yourself, than you might hate them in the long term. So she shouldn't make any decisions hastily. I do believe that talking about this Edward might be a little difficult, but then again I might be wrong, he seems to have changed quite a lot since they got back together.

 

Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

First, WOW -- thanks!  I'm really honored that you find it to be a re-readable story.  That's the best sort of compliment!

And yes, I think that Bella, while irritated that (and perhaps not fully grasping why) Edward would rather die than live without her, she does consider him too important and would be willing to sacrifice for.  But as you say, Alice is right, and there's a big difference between willing sacrifice in one area and giving up so much, one doesn't feel REAL anymore.  It's a hard balance to manage.

You asked: "I also realized, the way ypu described, in the previous chapter, their intimate moments, that Edward did not have body fluids at all. So having that in mind and the BD outcome, that is Rensesmee, I was wondering how that was possible."

There will be no Renesmee.  I've mentioned that before, but I don't necessarily assume you'd wade through all the reviews to see that. :-D  But yeah -- no mutant baby half-vampires here.

 
Reviewer: cornel Signed
Date: June 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

everyone else already told you but I also love Edward playing hooky and what's more I love Bella asking him to do so.

It was a great chapter of love making between these two that are in love and it doesn't matter that he's a vampire and that she's a paraplegic, all that matters is their love for each other. The description was very realistic, and the details given were just right to make it sweet and sensual. I love how Bella is guiding him and her words "This is for you, sweetheart" are more than enough to show him how much she loves him.

I'm telling you, you've got another voter for the bellies, and don't be so sure you won't win...

I just want to add one last thing that refers to my previous review and your response. I know there will be no Renesmee and I don't expect there to be a child given Bella's status. Besides I don't know if you'll have Bella walking again or turned her into a vampire. Frankly? whatever you choose to do with that I'll be just fine.So, my previous note was more on Meyer's book, rather than this story. While reading the book I was so hooked on the story that I didn't notice the little details about vampire body fluids. After reading your story and taking in all the details, I just thought that if they don't cry, don't use the bathroom, etc. how can they have the necessary body fluids to lead to conception?

After reading your update and my favorite fanfic update too (Just This Once by just_write) I can say that I'll be having a great Sunday, so thank you.



Author's Response:

Ah, okay!  On the earlier comment.  And actually, Bella could have a baby, even as a para, but she's not really sure she wants to.  Or rather, it's not a driving need in her, like for Rose or Esme.  I see her more like Alice -- a baby would be fine if it came, but she won't feel unfulfilled not having one.

And thank you, on the Bellies.  I really AM honored just to make it to being nominated for this particular category.  I've tried really hard to make the story feel like something that could happen if things had gone a bit differently.  I know not everybody likes my interpretation of Bella (or Edward), but I did take what I read in the story and then tried to project realistically into the future with certain "if..."s. :-)

 
Reviewer: cornel Signed
Date: July 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

oh dear I had almost forgotten Alice's vision. This chapter was great, well they all are, but this one too. I like the way you have Esme thinking that she now feels powerfull and how vulnerable and fragile she had been when Charles was abusing her. What an antithesis to him Carlisle is and how kind he is with Esme.

I know Esme and Alice are in trouble for keeping this from Edward, but I love his reaction. He's in love with Bella and is worried something might happen to her and besides this is Edward we're talking about, he's mastered the art of overreacting.

I can't wait to read the next chapter and see what Edward is going to do.

I didn't get the chance to review the previous chapter but know that I read it twice, when it was first posted and now before reading the latest update. it wa sjust wonderful. the conversation between the two of them was very touching and despite the fact they were talking about where and how they are going to live from now on, it was very emotional. Edward wants babies... I know no Renesmee but they could adopt... lol just a thought ... don't listen to me ... just do what you have already planned with these two because I'm sure it will be great.



Author's Response:

Edward has reason to be angry -- although it might surprise people why.  I think Edward likes the IDEA of babies more than he'd actually like having one, especially in a house of vampires. ;P

Next chapter in a couple days!

 
Unwanted by bloodredlust Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1577]
Summary:

Edward couldn't bear to watch his beloved Bella being torn apart from the inside by his baby… so how might things have turned out for our favourite couple if he had taken the steps to ensure Bella’s survival, rather than let his spawn kill her. Very dark, Angsty little 'what if' story.

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A HUGE thankyou to Emerald-Rosalie for the amazing banner.  I love it!


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes Word count: 85602
[Report This] Published: December 29, 2008 Updated: September 15, 2009


Reviewer: cornel Signed
Date: May 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Impasse

definitely love it

I'm sure Bella's pregnant but I wonder how Edward is going to react to that.

 

 
Reviewer: cornel Signed
Date: June 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Discovery

I'm wondering how this pregnancy will work out. If they can hear and see the baby through the sonogram maybe the baby will not be as strong as Renesmee was and maybe Bella won't need to be turned to a vampire?

Can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens.

 
Reviewer: cornel Signed
Date: June 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Divine

she forgives him that's so sweet and I'm dying to see it all ends well.

 
Change of Heart by LuvCullens Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 855]
Summary:

Bella, has spent her life hating and loving the arrogant Edward Cullen. When she returns to Forks after ten years, will she fall for Dr Black, or will Edward see that he wants her to have a change of heart?

Thanks to heatherdawnc for her amazing banner work.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 201161
[Report This] Published: January 29, 2009 Updated: February 11, 2010


Reviewer: cornel Signed
Date: May 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

my favorite part? can I have more than one? like when she saw him naked, or the part she was screaming in the pillow, that was just adorable and him laughing, or the singing in the plane and of course whe he hugged her in his sleep and said her name, no wonder he slept so good that night.

Can't wait to see the guys in tuxes but we all know who's gonna be looking best, Edward of course. I'm sure Alice is going to help her find the best dress ever and she will be breath taking and Edward will not be able to take his eyes off of her. Wonder how Tanya will handle that...

well done this was a great chapter and I liked every single cute moment between the two of them.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I love hearing that you enjoy reading parts that I really enjoy writing. I would have to say naked Edward is always my favorite.

 
Reviewer: cornel Signed
Date: May 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Naked Edward is my favorite too it could be my second best by naked Edward holding naked Bella in his arms....

Wait a minute... Jacob and Tanya together? Engaged? And she just didn't feel good about it? When you're engaged you don't just not feel good about it and then break up. Either serious stuff was wrong between the two of them or she was never interested and maybe all she was after was the money, cause she likes going out and getting dressed up, and maybe Edward's wallet was more full than Jacob's.

Am I getting somewhere or am I just being paranoid?



Author's Response:

Maybe paranoid, maybe she is hard to please, maybe you have to just wait and see ;)

 
Reviewer: cornel Signed
Date: November 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28(s)

This was a beautiful chapter. I'm so glad they finally caught James and I loved Emmett. Edward? Has been just perfect. He's the type of man every woman dreams. Loved the idea for the book and I think it's going to be a best seller. Can't wait for the next chapter and see how Bella is going to cope with her posttraumatic emotions and whether that will affect her relationship with Edward. But the way you've written Edward, he's going to be perfect again and won't let anything come between them. I loved every word he said to her.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it. You know I always throw in some Emmett is one of my favorite flavors. I was originally going to have Bella write a book about a vampire falling in love with a human but changed my mind. We will see a little of Bella's coping but not a ton. I think it could only strengthen their relationship. Thanks so much for always taking the time to review.

 
Reviewer: cornel Signed
Date: May 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13(s)

All Edward has to do is dump Tanya and make babies with Bella, we all know he wants that. When will he realize it?I wonder how the trip will go.

I started reading this story today and I totally love it. I enjoyed reading 13 chapters one after another, but now I have to wait for the 14th. And the worst for me is that you've just updated the story so I guess it will take a whole week to get the rest of it.

Please update sooner I can't wait ONE week.



Author's Response:

Ooohh, I'm so happy you liked it. I will try and update soon. Thanks for your review. I love getting reviews.

 
Reviewer: cornel Signed
Date: May 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13(s)

More reviews more incentives right? lol

I've read the last chapter again and this particular sentence more than 100 times

"I had seen this before, Bella holding a baby against her in a rocking chair and me walking into the room to find her."

 

ok I'll stop harassing you now lol



Author's Response:

Haha, you crack me up. I do that with books all the  time. I find a paragraph in a book that I will read over and over again. Like chapter 16 in Eclipse.

 
Reviewer: cornel Signed
Date: May 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15(s)

you are so cruel, you could have made the chapter a bit larger, because I want to read more and find out what happens during the rest of the gala.

The dress is absolutely wonderful, it is the perfect choice. What about Tanya's dress? I wonder what she had worn.

when I read how she felt when she saw Jacob and then how she felt when she saw Edward, my only wish was that you could find a way to have Tanya killed. You are the author here so you can do anything you want with her...

I think I read smth about chapters at chapter's notes. Does this mean the next chapter will be up soon?



Author's Response:

Yeah, I am thinking my next chapter will be up next week. LOL have Tanya killed. There are nicer ways of getting rid of her.

 
Reviewer: cornel Signed
Date: June 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

When Tanya came between Edward and Bella and asked him if he had missed her, I was wondering why couldn't you just make her go away. Why couldn't she just leave? And then she breaks up with him!!! It was less painful than getting her killed lol.

Edward finally finally relaized he's in love with her and the idea to have the girls for a couple of days was really nice. He'll get his chance to have Bella close and maybe he'll tell her about Tanya and maybe he'll show her his feelings.

Jacob? Why did he have to kiss her? Huh? No no no, no Jacob kissing Bella is allowed! But Edward kissing Bella is mandatory!

Great Great Great Chapter!



Author's Response:

LOL, you always make me laugh in your reviews. I knew some would be mad about the Jacob kiss. Come on we need to boost Bellas self esteem a little.

 

 
Reviewer: cornel Signed
Date: June 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Is the creepy person James? He seemed like the kind of guy that doesn't take no for an answer. Maybe Bella saying no is some sort of a game for him...

Yes I was very very dissapointed the flowers were from Jacob, but it wouldn't be normal for Edward to send Bella flowers and he wouldn't have any excuse for that.

The bikini is great, I was considering buying that thing, but after Bella wearing it I think it belongs to her now.

Friday is a day I'll be eagerly expecting. I think it's a great choice to have the non-date of Bella and Edward before her date with Jacob. She can dump Jacob on Saturday hehe

The next chapter will be up sooner that Friday right? Okay, maybe not sooner but definitely Friday.



Author's Response:

I'm on vacation but I will get the chapter up as soon as I can. The chapter is going to be really long, I am debating if I should split it or not.

 
Reviewer: cornel Signed
Date: August 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21(s)

I haven't reviewed this story in like ... forever, but I have read every chapter the moment it was updated. I feel really bad for that because I know that what all the writers are looking forward to when they share their thoughts with the rest of us. 

ok so back to the story... I knew it ... I knew it was creepy James all along. Can't wait to see what Edward is going to do to him. You know I loved the part where Bella thinks about Edward's reaction to James. She sure knows her man...

They're together, even if they're taking it slow, they ARE together. I've been waiting to read this since the beginning. But really, tell Bella to relax and enjoy the wonderful man named Edward. He realized he loves her now and since she loves him too, she should be happy.

one last thing, is Charlie buying an engagement ring? There's going to be a wedding!!!



Author's Response:

Good catch there, cornel about Charlie. I know if Edward said he loved me I wouldn't think about it I would just make out with him all the time ;) Thanks for reviewing again.

 
Reviewer: cornel Signed
Date: September 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25(s)

yay!!! she chose him! although i knew she would. i mean what sane woman wouldn't choose Edward over ... anything? lol

and finally she told him she's a virgin. i think Edward is going to be very sweet, but i also get the feeling that he might not go any further until they get married. and don't tell me they won't because that man has been dreaming about being married to Bella since the moment he saw her with his nieces.

i hope you have a great time this weekend and when you come back maybe another chapter will be posted?

 
Summary:

Bella takes a vacation to Hilton Head Island in South Carolina to meet Alice's new boyfriend, Jasper. Rosalie and Emmett come along, too, just in case Bella didn't feel like enough of a fifth wheel. With Jasper's roommate out of town, Bella has his nice big bed all to herself. Until Edward comes home in the middle of the night...

Beautiful banner by the awesome achelle131


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes Word count: 163211
[Report This] Published: March 02, 2009 Updated: December 21, 2011


Reviewer: cornel Signed
Date: April 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Panting & Painting (V)

I love this story! You’re doing such a great job. I thought the sex parts could be coarse, but on the contrary they’re so nicely written and not cheap at all. I really like it they way you’re describing their love making.


But where’s the rest? Please update! I can’t wait to read about Sam’s look on his face when he sees Bella with Edward. I wonder how Edward is going to react to that. Would there be any fighting between the guys? Please please please update…….

 
Summary:

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A Final Nominee @

Edward Masen was changed in the early nineteenth century (1817) by Carlisle Cullen in England. Later on, he separated himself from the Cullens and moved to Washington, USA.

Bella Swan’s parents die in an accident, and she has to move to the small, village-like homestead township of Forks Prairie with her uncle, Charles Swan. Fate brings her to Edward’s doorstep, and the dreaded monster rears its ugly head. Will she survive the monster?

THIS STORY IS ON A HIATUS TILL JULY 2010.

NOTE- This story is getting updated over at FF.net as well. You can visit there if want to - http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4900151/1/


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: No Word count: 119711
[Report This] Published: March 06, 2009 Updated: March 29, 2010


Reviewer: cornel Signed
Date: November 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I'm sorry to hear you had health issues. I hope you're feeling better now. Hopefully New Moon has made every Twi-hard feel better and forget about their health issues. I had the fever and still went and watched thee movie twice!

I really like reading your Darkward. He seems dark, but in reality I think he's just pretending. Bella has cracked his armor and the feelings he has for her are starting to show. I loved how sweet and tender he was to her and how he rubbed her foot. And I also love how perceptive Bella is. Tha is so in character.

I'm a team Edward (or rather Robward) girl, but the part with the Quilettes was very interesting and I wonder what is going to happen that they had to get so much involved and so thoroughly mentioned in this story.

Edward is a very mean man. He left her all hot and bothered! I hope he will make amends in the next chapter...

Can't wait for the next chapter.

 
Reviewer: cornel Signed
Date: September 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I was wondering when Jake would show up. I mean there's no other way for Edward to admit that he truly cares about Bella and is falling (if he's not already fallen) in love with her.

I loved their reunion and his concern about her and how he's starting to show his feelings for her.

Jasper? really funny. and I'm not talking about the accent. Especially the part where he's asking Edward to clean himself because of the smell of the blood and its location on Edward's body!



Author's Response:

Jake here is a bit different than canon. That's gonna show in the next chapter.

i have updated it at FF. My VB is off twilighted for some days, so it will take a lot of time for it to update here. You can visit the link for FF.net in the story summary.

Edward's closed to the world and has been bottled up for many years, so it'll take some time.

And yeah, Jasper's snarky... I am happy to make you laugh. :)

-Devy

 
Summary:

 

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Best Jacob and Renesmee Winner, Twilight Twins Award

A TLYDF recommendation, June 7, 2009 . Check out their great blog here: http://discerningficster.blogspot.com/

Winner of Best Imprint, Silent Tear Awards http://silent-tear-awards.webs.com/

Most Suspenseful, 3rd Place, Wolfpack Awards

Two weeks and the whole world can change. Caius and Jane led an insurrection against Aro and are making a mad power grab.  Renegades from the wolf pack, unhappy with the treaty with the Cullens, are attacking vampires at every opportunity.  Jacob and Renesmee are struggling with the paradox of imprinting.  Edward, Bella and all the Cullens must come together to protect the world they've come to love.

A tale of action, deceit, intrigue and sexual awakening.  


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Caius, Edward, Jacob, Jane, Other Character, Renesmee
Challenges:
Series: Imprint Me: The Jacob and Nessie Archives
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 78200
[Report This] Published: March 23, 2009 Updated: July 12, 2009


Reviewer: cornel Signed
Date: July 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Lies

this is a great story! I came looking for it after many PBT author had suggested it and I find that theywere all right. The storyline is very original and yet completely logical. It would be logical for Caius to go against his brothers in his pursuit for more power.

I like what you've done with Jane, she is a vicious creature. I would have expected her in any other circumstances to try and help Alec or at least mourn for him, but she only has malice perpersenses and so it is logical for her no to be emotionally touched, but to worry about the "powers" she was loosing.

The new character you have brought in Mei-An is really good. I like the fact she doesn't talk too much, in fact almost at all. I also like the fact that she' Asian, they do populate one fifth of the world after all, co it woul be weird not to be any Asian vampire. I'm looking forward to reading some more about her and why she's beig so quiet.

After 13 chapters in a row I'm running to get some rest and prepare for the rest. I'm glad I have so much to read and that I don't have to wait for the update :-)

 

 
Venenum by Kyrene Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 43]
Summary:

She would be the death of him; he loves her too much to care. Her poison is his libation; he willingly accepts.

"Her hundreds of secrets. Even more of her lies. I welcomed it all." AH, OOC.

Thank you to Segolily for the awesome banner.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 22351
[Report This] Published: April 04, 2009 Updated: October 29, 2009


Reviewer: cornel Signed
Date: May 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

This is a great story and I really like your writting style. I read all of the so far written chapters yesterday and now I need to read more but there's nothing there.

I wonder what Bella is trying to keep from Edward. At first I thought she was a reporter that had done this on purrpose to get close to him and be able to get a story out of him with all those intimate questions she asked. But then lying about the beat up. I mean Edward isn't stupid and he is a doctor.

Ok so when you say Edward "reads" people I don't suppose you mean he's got an issue like Alice.

I know you've just updated the story but hey I just found it so please bear with me when I ask for more.



Author's Response:

You are allowed to asks for more. Unfortunately, it's the end of a semester for me so I can't promise more in a timely fashion. I'll try, but it's doubtful.

You are actually the first to bring up the reporter theory. Kudos to you. (I won't say if it's true or not but it's different which I like.(

I can tell you that no, Edward is just really good at reading people. It was hinted in Twilgiht that as a human Edward was good at reading people which is why as a vampire he was able to read minds. I'm trying to bring that over to here. His dad was also a lawyer so I figure he'd try to train his kid to not judge a book by it's cover and don't believe everything you hear and all that.

Thank you for your wonderful review! Come join us at the forum!

 




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