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Summary: Bella is a witness in peril. Emmett Cullen is the deputy assigned to protect her. When the witness protection program proves unsafe, Emmett has Bella pose as his brother Edward's fiancée. ExB. AU/AH.

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No
Word count: 138506
[Report This] Published: September 14, 2008 Updated: June 14, 2012
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed    
Date: December 21, 2008
Title: Chapter 13: May 4 - May 15, 2008
Great Job yet again lahomia. :) Thanks for the early Christmas present.
I liked seeing Bella's POV on this one and to know she does want to sleep with Edward again since we knew he wants that too. I'm glad they are continuing with their swimming lessons. I'm hoping Bella sucks it up and tries to find a way to suduce Edward back into bed. That could be quite fun.
I like how Bella's going to be helping out at the Cullen foundation although I'm a little worried someone may reconnize her given Edward has found so many people around him that are connected to the Volturi. Esme asking "How do you really feel about marrying my son." lol. That was so a mother question.
Can't wait for next chapter as always.
Merry Christmas! Author's Response: thanks so much for reviewing :)
concern for Bella working at the Cullen Foundation is quite valid. next chapter should be up tonight or tomorrow.
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed    
Date: December 31, 2008
Title: Chapter 14: May 17 - May 18, 2008
Hm. Interesting flashback. I wonder how Aro knows her from the past?
Loved the rest of the chapter though. The chemistry between Bella and Edward durring Truth or Dare was fantastic. I knew sex was probibly a little must to hope for so soon after his promise to Emmett but with the tension I was kind of hoping for at least a passionate kiss before he came to his senses. *sighs* Oh well. I'm sure you'll make it up to us. :)
I know Edward is right about Bella's reaction to Emmett's news. I just hope Edward's able to find some "creative" ways to make her want to live life again. Author's Response: A lot of people were hoping for a kiss. You weren't alone. But they did tap noses. Does that not count for anything?
Edward and Emmett both have valid points.
Thank you for your thoughtful review. :)
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed    
Date: January 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: May 18 - May 20, 2008
Another great chapter. I loved Emmetts POV and then when Bella told him he was to appologize to Edward...lol. Loved it!
I didn't think about what would happen after the trial if Edward and Bella became a couple. I know Emmett thinks Edward wouldn't or couldn't walk away from his life but I think he would.
Alice gave Bella some great advice. She's going to have to grow a backbone to live in Edward's world.
Summary:
Bella is an out of work actress living in New York City, when an audition comes along that could change everything. Does she have what it takes to impress noted Broadway Director Edward Cullen? And even if she does, will his biggest secret keep her from success in her career, or worse, in love? How is it possible for real love to form out of a fantasy?
AU Human, Canon Pairings, An ExB story
*The entire story is based on my favorite quote from Shakepeare's Venus and Adonis
Thank you RedRose15 for the AMAZING banner! And thank you Shakespeare for all your inspiration!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Quil, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No
Word count: 48558
[Report This] Published: September 16, 2008 Updated: April 04, 2009
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed    
Date: January 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: The Unexpected
I love the new twist. I think it's great. Granted I'm assuming this is leading up to Edward finding out she's living in this trashy, unsafe motel and going balistic. *sighs* I love over protective Edward. :) He's just so cute when he's angry. lol.
Can't wait to read about their ice skating adventures. Author's Response: thanks! i'm glad you like it... and i love an angry ed as well... :)
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: April 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: The Revelation
Wow so she's admited to being in love with Edward. Quite a big step. And it's obvious he knows he is crossing way over the line with her so it will be interesting to see how long it takes before he admits the same thing not only to himself but to her.
I totally understand that RL gets in the way but please, please, please can we get an update in the near future. I really do like this story but I have to admit when I saw this update I had to stop and really think about what was going on and what the story was about b/c it had been so long.
Summary: When Bella's roommate Alice tells her that her brother Edward is coming to stay with them she is not exactly thrilled. In fact, she wants nothing to do with him. Can Edward change her mind? Or is the past too powerful?
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes
Word count: 52590
[Report This] Published: September 20, 2008 Updated: July 11, 2009
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: October 21, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Prodigal Sibling
Hmm. So Edward ruined three relationships for her. Sounds like he liked her even back then. But why did he stand her up for the prom? This could be interesting.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: October 21, 2008
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Rehashing Barcelona
This chapter just left me with more questions. Ok I get that they "hooked up" and all but I didn't get the referrence to it being a "one night stand" if he left a month later. And if he did leave then why? I like the two perspectives on this one and it's very obvious that both of them still have some serious feelings for each other.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I hope you keep reading.....
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: October 21, 2008
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Too Much Charles Shaw
*whoo* I'm really glad there was no chemistry between Bella and Alex. The comment about kissing his gandma was kinda funny. I agree with Bella. I think I'd be a little offended too if a guy said that to me. Well Alice dropped a bit of a bombshell didn't she. Edward didn't realize Bella was in love with him all those years ago? Can you say duh. Sometimes guys can be very dense. I think their night together and the fact she was impulsive with him when she normal isn't should have clued him in but maybe that's just me. Ok on to the next chapter. :) Author's Response: Thanks for yet another review:-) You are making me very happy!
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: October 21, 2008
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Crossing The Line
Wow the angst just keeps on coming. Poor Bella. I feel a little sorry for Edward too and I'm glad you told us what happened with prom, but Edward needs to grow up and confront his feelings for Bella and actually do something about the. I'm intersted to see what he does to keep Alice from going through with kicking him out. Author's Response: Thanks for the review :-)
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: October 21, 2008
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Finally Alice figured out the Edward loves Bella just as much as she loves him. Now lets see what she's going to do about it. hehehe
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: October 21, 2008
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
This was an amazing chapter. I wasn't expecting the car crash but I guess something needed to happen to get Bella to admit she was still in love with him. So now they both know they love the other...what are they going to do about it ???
Author's Response: Haha. Keep reading and you'll find out :-) Thanks for reviewing each chapter, by the way. You are beyond awesome.
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: October 21, 2008
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Wait
Yeah! Finally they get around to telling each other how they feel. It's about time. :) Great chapter.
Summary: Stranded in a strange town by stormy weather, Bella is befriended by Edward, a gorgeous man with a mysterious past. While she’s immediately attracted to him, she quickly discovers that the rest of the town doesn’t share her affections for the bronze-haired one, so she sets out to prove to them, and to Edward, that he’s anything but a monster.

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Laurent, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes
Word count: 108250
[Report This] Published: September 29, 2008 Updated: November 28, 2008
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: November 01, 2008
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Mine
Oh you don't have to kill anyone. Come on. We like HAPPY endings. Another great chapter though. You are really keeping us on edge. James need to get what's coming to him. I can't believe he is up in the atic spying on them. And that Mrs. Cope is NOT helping the situation spreading rumors about Edward and Bella. Didn't she learn her lesson from the last time.
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed    
Date: November 05, 2008
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 The News
Bella was great in this chapter how she wouldn't leave Edwards side until Alice showed up. Thank goodness for Alice. I loved Bella's reaction when Edward woke up. :) I could just see her doing that. lol. Charlie was getting on my nerves though. I mean I understand to a certain extent but he knows someone just tired to kill them and that his daughter obviously cares deeply for this man. I just thought maybe he could have been a little...less overbearing. It was like he blamed Edward for James trying to kill them but maybe that's what you were going for. I vote for some fluff after the last two chapters but I will take what you give us. :)
Summary: Edward never left, he stayed by Bella's side but refused to change her, wanting her to have the human experiences she deserves. As Bella approaches her 30th birthday she gets her news that makes her question the direction her life has taken.
Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes
Word count: 31798
[Report This] Published: October 02, 2008 Updated: February 05, 2009
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed    
Date: November 25, 2008
Title: Chapter 8: Coming to Terms
Oh no what did he do?! I'm assuming he bit her. This is going to be interesting. I felt so bad for Edward having to sit back and watch Bella suffer. We all know how he doesn't take her being in anytype of pain, physical or emotional, well. Please don't leave us hanging like this for too long. Author's Response: Answers coming soon, very soon. Edward can not stand to see Bella in any kind of pain and this is killing him even though he respects her reasoning behind it. I'm trying to not leave you hanging for long but my wonderful beta was on vacation so I am sure she is very backlogged. Will hopefully update soon and then more in the works. Thank you so much for the review.
Summary: It's rare to see any other POV of Twilight than the hackneyed versions of Midnight Sun. And now we get to see Esme's view on her first "son" falling in love, and welcoming a new daughter to the family. The eternal mother's perspective on Twilight. Rated PG-13 for some very mild Carlisle/Esme fluff. (And yes I did see the whole "eternal" pun)
Categories: Twilight Characters: Esme
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No
Word count: 1874
[Report This] Published: October 10, 2008 Updated: October 10, 2008
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: October 11, 2008
Title: Chapter 3: 3. Discussions About Nothing
I just stumbled onto this fic and I have to say I really enjoy seeing Esme's POV. She is such a minor character in the books although it is obvious how much Edward loves her and that she does view him as her son. I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: October 11, 2008
Title: Chapter 3: 3. Discussions About Nothing
I just stumbled onto this fic and I have to say I really enjoy seeing Esme's POV. She is such a minor character in the books although it is obvious how much Edward loves her and that she does view him as her son. I can't wait to read more.
Summary: Race car driver Edward Cullen has wrecked another car. He's losing all his sponsors and funding. His only hope is the incredibly sexy but stubborn Isabella Swan a brilliant engineer. He can't get enough of her and she's keeping a secret that will change his life forever.
Banner by: dazzlemebetch-Thanks!

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 40 Completed: Yes
Word count: 140390
[Report This] Published: October 14, 2008 Updated: November 20, 2009
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: October 24, 2008
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Jealous
I am liking this fic more with every chapter I read. :)
Author's Response: Thank you I'm glad you like it.
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: October 24, 2008
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Race
wow. Mike is really quite nasty in this story. I'm glad Edward beat him, but what he did to Bella... *shakes head* That was just...well I hope Emmett had fun "reminding him" to leave Bella alone.
Hopefully nothing is going wrong with Bella. I liked how Edward "declared" he was her boyfriend. That was sweet.
I was wondering when they were going to get caught and by who. I'm kind of hoping it's Jasper since he's been the one insisting Edward keep his hands off her.
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed    
Date: October 25, 2008
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Doctor
I'm glad Jasper took things as well as he did and that he knows this isn't just some fling for Edward. I'm still a little curious as to why Bella wants to keep their real relationship from the crew. That doesn't make total sense to me especially since Jasper now knows. I like her doctor. He seems very nice and maybe just maybe Carlisle will be able to help her. I'm really hoping Bella doesn't die at the end of your story. I like happy endings. I somehow don't think Edward is too happy that Bella is going to be the one racing him after everything that just happened. Great Chapter. :) Author's Response: I think keeping the romance a secret just adds to the fun and plus its less pressure on Bella with everything else is going on. Don't worry everyone will find out soon. Thanks.
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed    
Date: October 26, 2008
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Racing Bella
I love waking up to updates. :) The race went how I thought it would. Bella is really good which of course we already knew. I loved the locker scene where Alice almost caught them. lol. Their luck is going to run out soon, I think. The phone call to his parents went well I think and it was very obvious they are worried about their son and b/c of his feels for Bella, her as well. I can't wait for them to meet her. You write the interaction between these two well, very sentual. I can't wait for next chapter and hope you continue with the amazing connection as their relationship moves to the next level.
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed    
Date: October 29, 2008
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 What the ?
To answer your question...I was wondering if she was going to be a virgin. I think it played well that way though. I love how she'd has totally cured him of his wondering ways. And Alice...well what can I say. She's Alice, but she was great in this chapter. Alice is on to them big time so it would just be best for them to come out with it before she lets loose. I loved how you ended it with them making out in the closet. Author's Response: Thank you. Alice is pretty smart she'll figure it out soon enough. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed    
Date: October 31, 2008
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Fan
yeah another chapter! I loved Bella's reaction to Edward's "fan" and then Edward's reaction to Bella's reaction was awsome. The way you had Alice find out was great. lol. Nothing like getting caught half naked by your sister. :) I felt so bad for Bella though when Edward found her crying b/c she didn't want to hurt him. That was such a touching moment. I'm glad Edward set her straight and they confessed their love. The dinner was nice and I must say Bella is quite a vixen in this story. lol. She is definately keeping Edward on his toes. Great Job!
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed    
Date: November 05, 2008
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Alone
Yeah another chapter. :) I'm glad you decided to give them another day to themselves. It was a great idea to have them drive up the coast and just enjoy the time alone together. The phone call with Emmett was quite funny. I love that Bella can distract him so completely. I was wondering how long it would take before the others found out. The fact that Edward slipped and told the whole group they were sleeping together...loved it.
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed    
Date: November 05, 2008
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Past
Two chapters in one day? Wow I feel special. :) Bella is quite a tease. She sure made him pay for his slip. I liked how you worked the brusing in there. This little bet of theirs could get interesting but I agree with Edward. He is so going to lose. Esme and Carlisle were so sweet. Esme is obvious so happy for her son having Bella in his life. It was an intersting twist that Bella and Edward had met so many years ago. And the fact that Renee could have prevented Bella being at dealths door is quite upsetting. At least Carlisle could provide a little hope. Can't wait to see what happens next with these two.
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