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Summary: Bella comes to Forks as the overweight, excessively pale, book worm. No guy wants anything to do with her. Edward Cullen is the popular, smart, athletic, honor student who all the girls swoon over, despite the fact that he's never expressed interest in any of them.
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What if Bella really had a reason to have self-esteem issues? What if Edward had a secret that no one else knew?
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Oh," Jacob hesitates. "I just figured the way he acted around you the other night and how you were going to his party that maybe you guys were..." He trails off.
"Well, no." I clarify. "We are only biology partners."
"OH! I get," he nearly shouts. "Like benefriends."
"WHAT?!" I yell, "NO!" I pull the phone away from my ear and press the TALK button to end the call.
The phone rings again.
"No Jacob! That is NOT what is going on between Edward and I, AT ALL, you perv!"
"Bella?" Edward's voice asks.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 42 Completed: Yes
Word count: 128763
[Report This] Published: July 12, 2010 Updated: March 22, 2011
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: August 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Arrival
I'm finally getting a chance to check out your story. So far so good. On to the next chapter. :) Author's Response: Aww thanks! I hope you like it! I know I totally have been loving yours!
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: August 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Acquaintances
So Edward's the jock? I like that you didn't put Tanya and Edward together as a couple. The first interaction between Bella and Edward will be interesting. Author's Response: Haha, I have a thing for guys who play sports, *shamelessly shrugs*
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: August 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Lunch
Oooo I like it. Edward sticking up for our Bella. :)
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: August 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Biology
I really enjoyed their first interaction. I have a feeling Edward's plan is going to backfire on him in a major way.
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: August 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Project
Poor Bella. She really thought he was going to leave her there. I hate to think of the things she's had to endure before to get her to that point. I love that Edward doesn't see her as fat. :) Author's Response: Looks like you're almost to Bella's background...and yes Edward is amazing.
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: August 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Reason
Well I guess that answered the question of why is is so leery of Edward and guys in general. Author's Response: HAHA and gifts...and compliments...and other girls...lol
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: August 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Bound
Loved the food fight!
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: August 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Punishment
Okay someone needs to take Tanya down a peg or two. I'm thinking maybe Alice might be up for the job. ;)
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: August 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Shopping
That was a good shopping trip. I'm glad Bella was able to gain a little confidence.
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: August 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Makeover
So all Bella wants is friendship. I'd say that's a little bit of a lie on her part. She's just too scared to admit it to herself.
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: August 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Departure
Oooo Alice and Rose laid down the law. Yay! And I'm so glad that Bella is opening up to Edward finally.
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: August 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Confession
I'm so glad that she told him! :)
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: August 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Fight
Oh I loved the concert and him singing that last part to her. That was definately swoon worthy. :) Author's Response: I'm glad you approve haha! Bella needed a little push...lol
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: August 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Caught
Edward catching her naked was great! Well probably not for her, but great for the story. Don't you just love how little scenes like this develop in your head and before long you have a whole story? :) Author's Response: That'spretty much how this whole story went...I saw bits and pieces and just wrote in the rest on the spot...haha
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: August 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Exclusive
I'm not sure who worries me more at this point, Tanya or James. Hm...
The way they announced they are a couple to the world was great. Perfect, actually.
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: August 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Brothers
Well I guess I was right to be worried about James. Still concerned about where Tanya is though and what she's got up her sleeve. I thought all in all their first day didn't go half bad. It could have been a lot worse.
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: August 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Fears
Interesting party. I'm glad Edward shared with her as well. These two have a lot of emotional barriers to work through it seems.
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: August 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Truth
Not good. Bella way over reacted. Edward didn't help, of coure, but she could have handled that a lot better. He's given her no reason to think he's just using her. That Drake needs to get a taste of his own medicine.
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: August 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Proclamation
Yay, the I love yous are out! That was a wonderful chapter. :)
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: August 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Interrupted
Things were really heating up there until dad came one. lol. That's was just too good. Poor Edward and Bella.
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: August 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Talk
lol. I knew the sex talk was coming.
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: August 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Alone
They're getting closer and closer. I love that Edward gave her her first orgasm though. That's always special.
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: August 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Gifts
Edward's gift was perfect. :)
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: August 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Confused
I wonder what trouble Aro is going to cause them. Poor Bella is still having self confidence issues. :(
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: August 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Fireworks
That was an awsome date. Way to go Edward. :)
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