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Summary: Bella works as a Resident Advisor at Seattle University. She meets Edward at a Halloween Party thrown for the residents and employees of Weston Hall. A friendship slowly builds and Bella finds herself falling in love with Edward throughout the semester. What could the popular Edward Cullen possibly see in her? BxE, AH
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No
Word count: 49362
[Report This] Published: January 10, 2009 Updated: September 25, 2009
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed 
Date: January 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: What Is The Hold Up?
lol. Of course they have to meet at the coffee shop and Bella is soaked. That's just so perfect. Are we going to get Edward's POV on this chapter or are we moving on with the story? Cause while I could do withouth EPOV on the coffee shop it would be nice to hear his thoughts regarding the towel. lol
Author's Response: Oh we are most definitely moving on, but don't worry, he will most definitely be still thinking about the towel... ;)
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: February 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: You Smiled For A Second
Your Edward is just so cute! I love how nervous he is. Em really let the cat out of the bag when they were in line for coffee. Too bad Bella didn't get it. Loved that he asked her if she wanted to come into his room. Thanksgiving should be interesting. So are we going to be meeting Alice in the next chapter or skipping for after they come back from break? Author's Response: Alice is most definitely in the next chapter, but probably not as much as you'd like! I will have her in some more upcoming BPOV chapters though, I promise! Thanks so much for reading! ;)
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed 
Date: February 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Where Are We Now
Yay another chapter. I'd been looking for it. :)
ok so I knew this one was coming where they'd be going off to their families for Thanksgiving. It was nice seeing their different POV's in the same chapter and the fact neither can stop thinking about the other. I have to be honest though, I can't wait until they are thrown back together again so we can feel that wonderful tension. Author's Response: Well of course we want them back together! Thanks so much for reading! (Even if it was about boring old Thanksgiving!) ;)
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: February 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Change Of Plans
It was nice seeing Bella and Charlie's relationshiop in this chapter. And I loved the change of plans. :) Can't wait for Edward to be back next chapter. Author's Response: I'm glad you liked Charlie. I have a new found love for him after Billy Burke's portrayal of him. I thought he was great! Thanks so much for reading & one Edward... coming right up! ;)
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: March 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: If Only I Could
Oh Yay! I was so happy to see an update. :)
All I have to say is ACKWARD! Poor Bella. She is so head over heels. lol. And I love the whole Edward biting the inside of his cheek. Very cute.
Can't wait to see how this plays out. Author's Response: Aww - thank you! I love how people think they're awkward. Dude - awkward is my middle name.... My hub bites the inside of his cheek, and yes - it IS very cute... Thanks for reading & I'll be updating soon! ;)
Summary: 
If you loved someone, how much would you be willing to sacrifice? Bella makes the most difficult decision of her life; now she has to live with the consequences. A Bella/Edward story.
Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes
Word count: 68203
[Report This] Published: February 02, 2009 Updated: November 24, 2009
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: March 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Carlisle
I wanted to take the time to tell you how wonderful I think your story is. I passed it over quite a few times before reading it b/c it just didn't grab my eye as an Edward/Bella story I would normally read. For whatever reason though, it kept calling to me so I finally broke down and read it and I am loving it.
The delima Bella is having with telling Edward the truth is very well written. You make me feel her struggle. Also, the connection there with human Edward is also there. I can feel both the simalarities and the differences between the human and the vampire.
I had a feeling things would begin to come out in Forks and it appears that I was right. I'm glad she confided in Carlisle and I loved that conversation.
You do love cliffhangers though don't you. ;)
Can't wait to read the upcoming conversation between Bella and Edward in her room. It should be interesting. :)
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: March 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Edward
This was another great chapter. You are doing such an amazing job. I actually went back and re-read this a second time and loved it even more. Their conversation was so emotional and I was melting when she was telling him of all the first they've shared over the last month.
My favorite line, however, was when he asked her why she loved him there at the end and her response, "I was born to love you. Our hearts, our souls were joined at the beginning of time, and nothing will ever change that. Our love is a miracle, Edward. Never doubt it.”
Perfect!
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: November 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Story of a Life
Wow. This was not how I envisioned this story ending, but I thought it was perfect. Thank you for finishing it for us. I'm glad writing it was able to help you to heal from your loss.
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: November 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Hope
I was so happy to see an update on this story. The baseball idea was great, and I'm glad Edward is coming around.
Summary: Edward never returned after leaving in New Moon. Now, 72 years later, he returns for his final good-bye. BxE Oneshot
Categories: AU Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 1537
[Report This] Published: February 24, 2009 Updated: February 25, 2009
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: February 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot
I have no idea how you managed to write this. I was crying before I even got half way through. So powerful.
Summary: Reclusive computer prodigy Edward Cullen needs a personal assistant and single mom Bella Swan needs a job. What happens when their worlds collide? Will Bella learn to trust the shy genius and will he be willing to open up to her as well?
Thank you to Shug for my beautiful banner!!!!!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No
Word count: 17994
[Report This] Published: March 16, 2009 Updated: April 08, 2009
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: April 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
I just found this story and I have to say I'm enjoying it so far. Edward is so adorable and Bella is very sweet. I'm loving how Edward is going to be swooping in to help save Ms. Swan. :) Author's Response: thanks -- he reads to many comic books but his heart is in the right place.
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: April 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
wow we got to see Edward asserting himself a little here. He really is quite taken with Bella isn't he. lol.
It was so sweet that he called her a spectacular mom. She so needed to hear that. I just wonder how long it's going to take her to figure out she doesn't just want him as her boss.
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: April 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Awwww. That was such a sweet chapter. I loved how Bella walked into find Edward playing with Charlie. And oh their first touch. Very cute. You have to wonder how Edward felt about Bella touching his hair, especially after he just admited to Emmett he loves her.
Next chapter should be fun with Rose seeing Bella's "place." Can't wait!
Summary: A long and tiresome journey and a wrongly booked ticket later, Bella Swan finds herself sitting next to renowned actor Edward Cullen and learns that whether flying coach or first class, karma gets her way.
Exerpt:
“Well… that’s embarrassing.” I looked up in the direction of the male voice that was responsible for the comment and nearly died. Nearly. Instead, I shrieked and flung my glass of champagne right in the lap of the owner. I was clearly hallucinating, because the man sitting next to me could not possibly be… I closed my eyes and opened them again. But he was still there a slightly uncomfortable look on his beautiful face as he retrieved my glass from his lap and inspected the damage to his trousers.
“This is a new reaction,” he mumbled all the while I gaped at him and glanced at the magazine checking whether he had jumped out of it. But Edward Cullen was still gazing at me from the page, his eyes hypnotising and in addition the exact - slightly displeased - replica (with perhaps a bit more facial hair, and clothes) was undeniably sitting in the chair next to me.
“I’m so sorry!” I finally managed to croak out when I remembered how to speak. Before I could thoroughly think it through I grabbed a napkin from my backpack and dove to dab his pants. He was not the only one who jumped up as my hand came into contact with his crotch.
“I got it,” he said louder than I had heard him speak so far. For a moment he cast me an exasperated look and I almost felt the need to ensure him I was not trying to feel him up. He held up his hand as a stop sign and snatched the napkin from my hand, still hovering over him. I wasn’t sure whether he was mad or embarrassed. I was too busy trying to sink through my chair in shame.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No
Word count: 82552
[Report This] Published: March 16, 2009 Updated: January 30, 2010
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: December 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Take off
I just saw this story and for some reason you're little teaser of the story under the summary drew me in. I've started a few of these stories where Edward is a mega star and they've done nothing for me. This first chapter was very well written and a pleasure to read. The way they met was genious and so absolutely Bella. I loved how you added in his ignoring her, but then his obvious interest. Giving her his phone number there in the end told loads about what he's feeling. I can't imagine he does that often. Hopefully it doesn't take her too long to get up the nerve to call him. :)
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: December 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Full House
This story is impressing me more and more. Edward's family is great and I loved his reaction there at the end. I so want to read chapter 3 right now, but seeing as it is so late I am going to force myself to wait until tomorrow. :)
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: December 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Double Bind
I honestly can't wait to read more of this. I've added this one to my favorites list and have already recommended it. As I said in my first review, I've started other stories where Edward is a famous actor and couldn't get past the first chapter or two. This story leaves me hanging on for more after every chapter. Thank you for all the work you've put into this so far. Please continue writing and I will continue to read. :) Author's Response: Thank you, Ekimmuh! It thrills me that something about this story makes you come back for I know it is not original in its plot. It makes me happy that the reading was worth while! I shall most definately continue writing!
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: January 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Inferno
Another amazing chapter. I was so excited when I saw this tonight. I really love the interaction you have with these two and then the family in this one. The talk in the bathroom with Rose was perfect and just so Rosalie. You've done a good job keeping them true to character while bringing in new elements. Author's Response: :) Always great to see you back! Thank you and glad to hear you are still enjoying yourself!
Summary: Bella Swan is a writer for a Women's Magazine in Florida, a magazine that she writes the self help column for...Something she really wants to escape. The good news, she is escaping self help, the bad news, she's covering the lives of women behind sports stars...In Denver.
Here she meets three amazing women; the girlfriend, fiance, and wife to two players and the coach of the team, but what will happen when the team superstar, Edward, takes an interest in Bella?
Warnings: It's NC-17, so basically... Smut, Language.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes
Word count: 129668
[Report This] Published: March 23, 2009 Updated: January 18, 2011
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: April 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 - At the Rink
I stumbled across this story and thought I'd give it a try. I'm really enjoying it so far. I haven't read a hockey one before and you seem to know your stuff. My husband was a huge Devils fan when we met but since moving from NJ he doesn't follow it as much as he used to although he still cheers for them when they come to town. :)
Can't wait to see the next chapter.
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: April 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 - Family Barbeque
Our poor Edward is already falling under Ms. Swan's spell it seems.
So I was thinking you were going to show them playing the game...well maybe you will in the next chapter but... Anyway...as I was reading I kept thinking, oh no someone is going to get the word vibrator and say the first thing that comes to mind like "fell out of Bella's luggage at the airport."
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: April 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 - Going Home
I have to disagree with your statement that nothing big happens in this chapter. I think the fact that you are setting the parameters of their relationship and laying the ground work for a longer lasting relationship is pretty big.
Loved the chapter and I can't wait to read more. The hockey was good too. :) Author's Response: Thanks for that...that was the main purpose for the chapter...but it just sort of felt more scattered than other chapters because it was full of little bits of storyline instead of action over a short period of time. But I'm glad you liked it.
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: April 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 - Home Ice advantage?
lol. I am so waiting for someone to catch them in a comprimising position.
Don't worry about the whole Tanya thing. I'd rather have her as the ex than Jessica any day. Jessica tends to come across as pathetic in most fics.
I'm glad these two are realizing that their relationship has moved past the casual part. It never really was. I'm hoping Bella can help comfort him and keep him focused going forward.
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: May 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 - Late Night Activities
Loved the bit of fluff. The skating was so cute. I love to see them when they are just being them, together. And I figured Alice would catch them somehow. She already seemed suspicious so it was only a matter of time. Can't wait to see next chapter and how she "deals" with her cousin afair with Bella. lol.
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: June 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13 - Rivalry
So glad you're back. I was missing this fic. :)
Great chapter. Loved the blackmail. You go girl!
I'm not surprised Edward got hurt really considering the confrontation with James last chapter. So happy to hear its not too serious. Bella's reaction was perfect though. It is so obvious she loves him, even if she hasn't admitted it to herself yet.
Can't wait to read what you have in store next for us. :)
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: August 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 - Almost Time
I was so happy to see another chapter. I've missed this one.
Bella and Edward need to talk. This is just totally crazy. It's called English. You both speak the language. Open your mouths and speak!
Loved Jasper and the ring. He really was too cute here. :)
Reviewer: ekimmuh Signed
Date: October 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 - Wedding Day
Oh I was so happy to see an update on this one. :D
It's about time they talked. Finally! And I loved that Bella admited that she was even thinking of moving her life across the country for a guy. But not just any guy, the right guy. :)
Can't wait for the next one, and hoping it's not too far away. :)
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