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Penname: KacS [Contact]
Real name: Kacie
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Member Since: October 11, 2008
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Reviews by KacS
 
Summary:

After college, best friends Bella, Rosalie and Alice have a run-in with their past. . .and maybe their future? A farcical, romantic comedy with a healthy dose of angst.  Nominated for Best Romance & Best Edward Characterization (Incomplete) at the Twilight Awards.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes Word count: 144638
[Report This] Published: June 20, 2008 Updated: December 29, 2008


Reviewer: KacS Signed
Date: December 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Ouch.  Ouch, ouch, ouch.  That chapter was painful in every possible way.  You really know how to bring out the heartache!  I can't wait to see how everyone redeems themselves.

 
Summary:

When Jasper Whitlock and Alice Masen tied the knot, they hoped their own siblings would have the same happy ending. Jasper's sister, Isabella, was at the peak of her career, leaving very little time for love. Alice's brother, Edward, was in the process of moving thousands of miles in the name of business.

What happens when Jasper and Alice insist on accompanying Edward to Seattle while he finds his new base of operation, all while staying in Isabella's penthouse?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Lauren, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes Word count: 77087
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2008 Updated: July 04, 2009


Reviewer: KacS Signed
Date: October 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Jasper

Just finished chapter 15.  "But I love sushi."  Lol, so cute!  I've read a lot of fanfic, and yours is the first to make me all teary. ;)

 
Summary:

Bella is a witness in peril. Emmett Cullen is the deputy assigned to protect her. When the witness protection program proves unsafe, Emmett has Bella pose as his brother Edward's fiancée. ExB. AU/AH.

 

 

Hiding in Plain Sight

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 138506
[Report This] Published: September 14, 2008 Updated: June 14, 2012


Reviewer: KacS Signed
Date: November 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: April 19 - April 26, 2008

Best.  Sex scene.  Ever.

 I mean that.  I don't know why.  Just perfect.

 
Reviewer: KacS Signed
Date: November 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: April 27 - May 5, 2008

"But damned if I could resist a fried piece of heaven"

That made me LOL.

I'm thinking maybe Edward should have stayed in the bed. 

Still love your story!  Can't wait for updates. :D



Author's Response:

I'm in the south. Last month I went to the state fair, and there is nothing they don't fry. I had fried Oreos. It sounds disgusting, but they were tasty. They even fried pecan pie, and my friend called it "heaven on a stick." Anyway, I digress.

Yes, maybe Edward should have stayed in bed. But he didn't. 

Thanks for reviewing :)  

 
Summary: Bella Swan is a successful editor at The New York Times, and her life is only getting better. But when she gets stuck in an elevator during a summer blackout with a mysterious stanger, everything gets complicated.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 60019
[Report This] Published: September 30, 2008 Updated: April 13, 2009


Reviewer: KacS Signed
Date: November 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: The Most Beautiful Name Unknown

Loads of potential!

 
Summary:

Bella Swan is different than any other woman you'll meet. She's intelligent, beautiful, clumsy, and a natural born witch. Her quiet life in Forks is shaken when a mysterious family of vampires moves into town, and one in particular may change her life forever.

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Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 25952
[Report This] Published: October 07, 2008 Updated: June 23, 2009


Reviewer: KacS Signed
Date: November 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Crash Into Me

Oh, I LOVE this one!  My new favorite of all my favorite stories in progress!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! You have no idea what it means to me to get a response like this! Thank you!

 
Promises, Promises by NyteRock Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 46]
Summary: Edward needs to unwind after a difficult mission overseas and Bella's just the girl to help him. AU/AH Lemony one-shot. My entry for the DTE contest
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 6761
[Report This] Published: October 27, 2008 Updated: October 28, 2008


Reviewer: KacS Signed
Date: October 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, yeah, without a doubt, you must continue.  Surely that was your intention all along, right?  ;)

 
Southern Living by NyteRock Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 56]
Summary:

On a business trip down to Georgia, Edward gets set up to stay with an old friend of Carlisle's where he meets Bella. But when an old boyfriend comes back into the picture and threatens her life and her happiness, can Edward save her? AU / All Human

Thanks to MrsC for the uber awesome banner!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie, Sam
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 29389
[Report This] Published: October 27, 2008 Updated: January 07, 2009


Reviewer: KacS Signed
Date: November 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oohhh, I love it!  Seems like most fanfics take place in Portland or Seattle or Chicago, so it's nice to have them out of the city.  With all that mud, there's sooo much potential! ;)

 
Reviewer: KacS Signed
Date: November 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I think you're a really good writer.  I really love this story, but it's not just that.  You seem to have a knack for how to bring out real personalities and emotions.  Enjoying it immensely!

 
Reviewer: KacS Signed
Date: December 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

That was awesome, awesome, awesome!  Great mix of nice guy/cocky Edward.  Yum.

 
Reviewer: KacS Signed
Date: December 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Come on, missy!  Don't leave us hanging!  Get to the sex. ;-)

 
Summary:

Alice brings Bella home for Thanksgiving break to forget about her ex. After some drunken clubbing with the fam, Edward and Bella have a one night stand. Hilarity and drama ensue. AU, AH. Rated NC-17 for language and sexual themes.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Mike, Other Character, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: No Word count: 47715
[Report This] Published: November 04, 2008 Updated: July 17, 2009


Reviewer: KacS Signed
Date: December 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Friend Is A Four Letter Word

Hmm...their little talk should be interesting.  And Edward's use of the word "friend"...is he clueless about the way Bella feels about him too?  Or maybe there's something we still don't know about him.  Fun story!!! :D

 
Reviewer: KacS Signed
Date: December 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Rain Keeps Falling Down

You're writing a great story so far, so I'm going to trust whatever you think is best!  As long as it's AWESOME at the end and gives me butterflies. :D

And I think the way you write Alice and Bella's relationship is perfect.  It's sweet and amusing and realistic.  Loving it!

 
Raspberries by Isabel0329 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 43]
Summary: Summary: Edward has a fantasy about Bella that he’s been desperate to see come to life. One that involves fruit. And he’s determined to make it happen.
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3156
[Report This] Published: November 08, 2008 Updated: November 09, 2008


Reviewer: KacS Signed
Date: November 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

Whoa! That was great!

 
D.I.D. by dollegirl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 341]
Summary: What happens when Bella saves Edward from the clutches of a skank in a coffee shop? He wants her to be his girlfriend of course! The problem is, they only just met. Will she say yes?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 48857
[Report This] Published: November 10, 2008 Updated: April 26, 2009


Reviewer: KacS Signed
Date: November 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

This is such a fun story!  XD

 
Reviewer: KacS Signed
Date: November 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

LOL.  Hides under the desk?  This is  FUN cliffie!  Can't wait for more. ;)

 
Reviewer: KacS Signed
Date: November 16, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

OMG, this whole friggin' chapter was so hilarious!

 
Reviewer: KacS Signed
Date: December 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

BOOOOOBS!!!!

LMAO!





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