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Penname: rosy1015 [ Contact]
Real name: rocio
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Member Since: April 21, 2009
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Summary: 
Four years after Edward left Bella in the forest; Bella is finally moving forward with her life but it is someone from her past that helps her truly heal and obtain the future that she was always meant to have.
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Jacob, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 51 Completed: Yes
Word count: 167857
[Report This] Published: June 11, 2008 Updated: August 14, 2009
Reviewer: rosy1015 Signed
Date: August 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51
ok WOW!!!! i loved how Jasper took all the pain from Bella's transformation..BIG props for that... now i see that u put your story as finished.. =( that really makes me sad... i really wanted to see Alice find someone special and see or rather read Edward's reaction.. please tell us ur writing an epilogue... PLEASE... PLEASE... PLEASE...!!! I also want to hear more of poor JACOB!!!! PLEASE... PLEASE... PLEASE...!!!
Summary: Three very different women, with one thing in common, must deal with life, love and betrayal.   
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Angela, Bella, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes
Word count: 71422
[Report This] Published: August 29, 2008 Updated: February 16, 2009
Reviewer: rosy1015 Signed
Date: June 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - The End
wow loved the story... i do have one question tho.... what death did Anthony refer to when he was in vegas with Bella??? i was thinking there were gonna be twins but when he mentioned that i was like.. uh oh he is cheating....did i miss something there?? but great plot!!!! i was so scared that edward/anthony was a cheating bastard!!!
Summary: Renesmee is finally "fully grown" and ready to start living. How do the people she loves most react when she is ready to be a woman?
Gravity Gravity!
So, I recently was reading through Gravity, and I realized how bad some of the begining (like the first thirty :]) chapters kinda...well, SUCK! so i'm going to be reposting the edited chapters of Gravity over on FF.net. same story, just better!



Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Jacob, Renesmee
Challenges: Series: Imprint Me: The Jacob and Nessie Archives
Chapters: 47 Completed: Yes
Word count: 174580
[Report This] Published: October 09, 2008 Updated: February 24, 2010
Reviewer: rosy1015 Signed    
Date: April 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: Hybrid Species
WOW!!!!! im loving it.. Im new to the twilighted site, i just got into the fan fiction. I loved the twilight saga and was sad when i finished Breakind Dawn because that was the last book of the saga... but lucky me i found your story, seems like a continuation of the books, not like those other fan fiction that are soooo not like the real charachters.. keep up the good work.,,,, and please post some new chapters
Reviewer: rosy1015 Signed
Date: May 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36: Calm Before the Storm
arrgghhhh dont do this to me.... why leave us hanging like that???!!!!! please update sooooon.... Author's Response: i leave it like that because its fun :)
haha.
ill get you a new chapter as soon as i can!
Summary: Bella ruins her friendship with Edward by confessing her feelings to him which he doesn't return. She goes back to Arizona for college but returns to Washington after graduation due to Charlie's illness. Can she and Edward be friends again?
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes
Word count: 112590
[Report This] Published: December 01, 2008 Updated: March 24, 2009
Reviewer: rosy1015 Signed
Date: June 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue: Beginnings
i really enjoyed your story..... i just loved Emmett here, all his goofiness... cant wait for The Daily Grind... and to hear more about Bella and Edward....
Summary:  You know those fics where Edward doesn't come back and Bella forgets about him and five seconds later she's in bed with Jacob and none of it makes any damn sense? Yeah, this isn't one of them.
This story picks up from the moment in New Moon when Jacob has driven Bella home after the cliff diving incident, right before he catches the scent of Alice. Only in this telling, Alice wasn't looking, so there's no sudden appearance at Bella's house, no Rosalie calling Edward and sending him on a suicidal mission to Volterra, and no reason for Bella to do anything but believe that Edward didn't love her anymore. This is simply a story of what might have happened if everyone stayed mostly in character and Edward's return was delayed. Yes, delayed. Because we all know that he was "this close" to coming back on his own anyhow. So what would have happened if Bella had tried to move on with her life? Would she have found happiness with Jacob? And would Edward be too late?
* First in a series of stories
~I thought of Jacob’s warm arms wrapped around me, his infectious laughter, and his ability to keep me from falling to pieces again… The pain choking my heart relaxed and I could breathe.~

~“More than anything,” I whispered, not caring what I'd just agreed to. When it came to Bella, it didn't matter what the question was. I just wanted.~
Winner of:
Best Author, Most Romantic, Favorite Jacob, Most Suspenseful, & Best WIP in the Wolfpack Awards | Best Non-Canon Pairing (Incomplete) and Best WIP in the Moonlight Awards | Best During the Series in the Razzle Dazzle Awards | The Storyteller Award in the Shimmer Awards | Best JacobxBella in the Silent Tear Awards
Categories: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges: Series: A Blazing Sun
Chapters: 76 Completed: No
Word count: 164405
[Report This] Published: December 07, 2008 Updated: September 11, 2010
Reviewer: rosy1015 Signed
Date: July 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 51: Quiet: Bella's POV
well im a total team edward person... i would love to have bella and edward end up together at the end of the story.. now i just have a feeling that jacob is going to imprint and it wont be to bella... i love the fact that jacob got some time with bella, but i still love edward!!! but thats just my opinion .. maybe at the end bella ends up with jacob... Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: rosy1015 Signed
Date: December 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 67: Closure: Bella's POV
why does Jacob always jump into conlusions.. hmm i was rooting for Jacob but hes no different than Edward i guess.. i dunno im in between right now.. it all depends on how your story goes..
Reviewer: rosy1015 Signed
Date: July 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 50: Unrest: Jacob's POV
Ok well first of all I lobe thus story!!!! You captured and write Bout the chatacters so well. U HHS me waiting for new posts and I keep checking e edu day for updates. Ok now moving along to what I don't like much. I hope u don't get ofended but why don't u post both POV's in one chapter? It just feels like I reading the same thing twice even tho there's tiny bits of different things in the POV. AnywYs thY the only thing I don't like much. But like I said before I lo e the story. Keep it up. =D
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
The story was only supposed to be a few chapters long when I started it, and that's why it was told from both sides---more insight that way. But people kept asking for more, begging for Jake's side of it, etc, and here we are now. Both perspectives are posted together on my LiveJournal page, which is how I would have done it if I'd realized the story was going to be this long, but it's too late to change the format now.
Reviewer: rosy1015 Signed
Date: December 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 65: Unexpected: Bella's POV
i think its alice!!!!!
please update soon!!!!
Summary:
What if the wolf pack hadn't interrupted Laurent before he bit Bella? This is the story of Bella being changed despite Edward leaving her to prevent it from happening.
Rated for later chapters. Just like in New Moon, Edward will make an appearance eventually!
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Laurent, Quil, Rosalie, Sam, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes
Word count: 71429
[Report This] Published: December 09, 2008 Updated: November 24, 2009
Reviewer: rosy1015 Signed
Date: May 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: The Date
OMG im so loving your story... please post new chapters....
Summary: Bella Swan moves cross country to take a teaching job, trying to escape the man who broke her heart. Edward Cullen is the school's music teacher with secrets of his own. Bella and Edward find themselves thrown together trying to work through their issues and unexpected feelings for each other.

Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 40 Completed: Yes
Word count: 272412
[Report This] Published: January 01, 2009 Updated: June 26, 2009
Reviewer: rosy1015 Signed
Date: May 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34
OMG what a cliffhanger.. aaarrggghhh!!!!! but im so mad at Edward, how can he believe something so fast, specially when its about Bella!!!! even the rest of the Staff (Emmett and Carlisle) didnt they learn from their first mistake of not believing Edward with that Tanya situation??? the should at least let her explain!!!! awww and poor Alice I hope shes ok... im rooting for her!!!!
please post the next chapter ASAP....
Summary: It's been three long years since Edward left Bella, and things within The Cullen family have changed epically. After Edward's final stand off with Victoria, Emmett is left heartbroken and alone. A chance vision sends him back to Forks, and into the healing arms of the one person he never expected. Why fight with fate?
New Moon AU - Bella/Emmett.

Categories: New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Eleazar, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Irina, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Kate, Laurent, Leah, Marcus, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Tanya
Challenges: Series: Emmett Stories
Chapters: 23 Completed: No
Word count: 64433
[Report This] Published: January 13, 2009 Updated: February 22, 2011
Reviewer: rosy1015 Signed
Date: April 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - The First Day of My Life
OOOO wow im so speechlees,, im loving the story.. and Jacob/Leah I LOVE IT!!!! i feel really bad for edward tho... ive always loved bella/edward, but i like where you are going with your story... cant wait for more chapters!!!
Summary: Bella, has spent her life hating and loving the arrogant Edward Cullen. When she returns to Forks after ten years, will she fall for Dr Black, or will Edward see that he wants her to have a change of heart?

Thanks to heatherdawnc for her amazing banner work.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes
Word count: 201161
[Report This] Published: January 29, 2009 Updated: February 10, 2010
Reviewer: rosy1015 Signed
Date: February 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
It was nice to hear about Culver City in a story here. But come on it ain't that bad in Culver City I work n live there. Anywho loved them sleeping in the same bed. I was hoping for more to happen but I'm guessing you're have a better plot. :-)
Author's Response: Maybe it is because I was raised in the valley. Culver City, atleast by Tito's was always scary to me at night but soo worth the amazing salsa and meat burritos. The bed was definately nice, I must agree. You'll have to keep reading to see what happens. Thanks for reviewing.
Summary: Alice's return in New Moon kept Bella from making a decision about where she and Jacob were going with their relationship. But suppose Alice had never had a vision of Bella jumping and hadn't come back Sitting in her truck with Jacob that night, Bella makes a decision that leaves a lasting and devastating impact on her life.
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Jacob
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Word count: 4274
[Report This] Published: March 27, 2009 Updated: April 27, 2009
Reviewer: rosy1015 Signed
Date: May 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
when are going to post a new chapter??? im so into the story now..
Summary: 
Nominated for Best Supernatural in The Silent Tear Awards!
Voting ends June 20.
Please check out the other stories and vote for your favorites;
http://silent-tear-awards.webs.com/vote.htm
~Nominated for Best AU in the Shimmers Snowflake Quarter 2010.~
Nine years has passed since Edward left her cold and alone on the forest floor. She has become familiar with the darkness and has relied upon Jacob to be her warmth and light. After nearly a decade of living in the shadows of others, a crushed and broken Bella wanders off into the forest in search of the place where everything had gone wrong.
She's known the cold bite of Ice. She runs from Fire's all consuming intensity. What she finds on her jilted journey will change the way she remembers both forever.
~summary by the fabulous Spaniard, talented author of Purgatory and North Star Rising.
Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes
Word count: 101571
[Report This] Published: March 31, 2009 Updated: May 27, 2010
Reviewer: rosy1015 Signed
Date: May 31, 2010
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
WOW!!!! Im just ...wow.. As u can see i loved it...i wish there was a movie out there about your story.. have u ever thought of posting a teaser video on youtube??? ive seen some of a few stories from twilighted..i used to only read all human stories... but your story was highly recomended so i saved it in my faves... i dont like to read non-finished stories so when i saw it was finished i was really excited... now that i finished it im so happy to admit that im going to read more AU stories... i just loved how u made everything work... i cant wait for you to start the sequel.. now i wont read it when u post it cus i hate wondering and waiting for updates.. but as soon as its finished you bet i WILL read it.. lol... but then again i dont know maybe i will start when u post the first chapter and just comment on each one (yeah im into your story that bad)... well sorry for the long comment but i tend to comment till the end and make up for the no comments on previous chapter...
thanks for such a great story.. keep up the great writing..
Reviewer: rosy1015 Signed
Date: May 31, 2010
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
WOW!!!! Im just ...wow.. As u can see i loved it...i wish there was a movie out there about your story.. have u ever thought of posting a teaser video on youtube??? ive seen some of a few stories from twilighted..i used to only read all human stories... but your story was highly recomended so i saved it in my faves... i dont like to read non-finished stories so when i saw it was finished i was really excited... now that i finished it im so happy to admit that im going to read more AU stories... i just loved how u made everything work... i cant wait for you to start the sequel.. now i wont read it when u post it cus i hate wondering and waiting for updates.. but as soon as its finished you bet i WILL read it.. lol... but then again i dont know maybe i will start when u post the first chapter and just comment on each one (yeah im into your story that bad)... well sorry for the long comment but i tend to comment till the end and make up for the no comments on previous chapter...
thanks for such a great story.. keep up the great writing..
Author's Response: I have learned that WOW is one of my favorite words since I started writing this story and getting reviews. Thank you so much Rocio for giving my story a chance and reading through so quickly and giving me a wicked review! I have never thought of posting a teaser on youtube. I don't think I would have the tech savvy to pull it off. That's an awesome idea though.
I was the same way when I started reading fanfic about the finished story thing, but there were some stories out there that caught my attention that I started dropping everything for to read each precious update!
I'm just as thankful for readers that wait as opposed to readers that don't. Readers that wait immerse themselves deeper in the story and follow through riding the ups and downs to the finish. There seems to be more of an impression made on the reader when they can read it through from start to finish without having to wait. Readers that follow post to post are instrumental in keeping me motivated to keep going, they ask the questions I never thought of before and even enhance the story. All in all an amazing place for a writer to grow and develop. I've learned so much since I started.
I'm very excited about the sequel and I should be posting it very soon. I have the first chapter written and I"m trying to iron some kinks out with the rest of it...
Thanks again Rocio, and I hope to hear from you again!
Summary:  Bella, compulsive sketcher of wolves, has not dreamed in years. Unexpectedly, she begins to dream again the night tragedy takes away her first and greatest love. ExB, sort of.

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes
Word count: 119182
[Report This] Published: June 07, 2009 Updated: October 12, 2009
Reviewer: rosy1015 Signed
Date: October 29, 2009
Title: Sleepers, Awake (Wachet auf, ruft uns die Stimme)
WOW!!! I finished your story today in the span of 3 days (i think).. and im still crying, i like to think that she reunited with jacob at the end.. he was her own child and she killed him for the love of someone else.. isint that the same think Renee did?? she abandoned her.. the saddest part of all is that Edward never knew who she was.. even tho at the end u mention her holding hands with someone that u describe as Edward.. i like to think shes happy in a world with Edward, Jacob as her child and the rest of the wolves.. but i loved this story.. not my typical story ill read, but im glad i took my time to read it..
Summary: Bella had the perfect life. The perfect husband to love, the perfect house, the perfect job.. everything perfect. Until one night the shutters came up and the perfect movie life she thought she was living came crashing down around her. Enter... The Sexy Bella..
After shenanigans in the tool shed go awry, Bella's forced into sex therapy with one hot looking doctor. But when he can't handle her, he calls the only person he knows who can ...
A series of unusual sessions, admissions and out and out seduction become the norm for her Tuesday Appointments. But will Bella ever get any better?

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Edward, Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Garrett, Jacob, Jasper, Paul, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes
Word count: 165008
[Report This] Published: July 08, 2009 Updated: October 04, 2010
Reviewer: rosy1015 Signed
Date: October 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 25: Shadows
WOW!! what a great story.. im so heartbroken for Jasper but im hoping that he will find his way back to Alice.. Im a harcore Edward and Bella fan, but u had me doubting that with your story.. I really loved Bella and Jasper together.. but all in all i loved how the story ended.. Jaspers love was so big that he let her go to be happy even if it wasnt with him.. Speaks volumes of him... geesh im still crying while writing this... lastly thank you for a wonderful stoy. looking forward for more stories from you... =)
Summary:

Edward Cullen has plans, and he's going to stick to them. Then Bella Swan comes to town and makes him realize that sometimes life doesn't always turn out like you thought it would. Third place and Judges' Award winner in Ninapolitan's DILF contest.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 10719
[Report This] Published: September 26, 2009 Updated: September 26, 2009
Reviewer: rosy1015 Signed
Date: October 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
o wow!!! im gonna be honest your story had be crying since the labor part... Its really sad but nice.. i see the love there.. im still crying wjile typing this.. wow i loced it.. one of my favorite stories so far.. thank you for writing something so different but lovely in its own way... Author's Response: Thanks rosy. There was an incredible amount of love in the story. Edward and Bella, Edward and Grace, Edward and his parents, even Charlie and Bella. I'm so glad you saw that throught the sadness.
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review.
Reviewer: rosy1015 Signed
Date: October 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
o wow!!! im gonna be honest your story had be crying since the labor part... Its really sad but nice.. i see the love there.. im still crying wjile typing this.. wow i loced it.. one of my favorite stories so far.. thank you for writing something so different but lovely in its own way...
Summary: 
Have you ever felt that no matter how hard you try to make it work, inside you know you should be somewhere else & that someone else should be standing where you are? Bella changes the lives of everyone around her when she tries to set things right.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 2115
[Report This] Published: January 10, 2010 Updated: January 17, 2010
Reviewer: rosy1015 Signed
Date: September 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
i loved your story.. correct me if im wrong but it feels like its a sequel to you other story "near to you"
loved both stories and i hope that you can write a full story with more than one chapter =)
keep up the great writing.. Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to review. I really love knowing that someone enjoyed my thoughts. I'm thrilled that you were intuitive enough to think that this could be a sequel to "Near to You", the funny thing is that I have a running joke with my friend Kassiah that I'm writing one story all in one-shots. So, I guess if that were true then absolutely this could be the sequel. But, I won't admit to having that much forethought yet...LOL.
In all seriousness, "Near to You" is actually the middle of a story that is all plotted out in my head. Now if only I'd ever get the time to write it. Yeah I've been saying that for a year, things have changed a little in my work life, so hhhmm maybe soon that is actually possible. "Where I Stood, would not actually fit in the 'Near to You" storyline, but I actually have a story plotted out to continue "Where I Stood" as well.
You have no idea how many stories I have in my head, and started. Time kills everything. But, fingers crossed I will get to it. Having a review like this makes me all excited to work on that, so thanks for providing some inspiration.
Thanks so much again, I love every review and every person is special in my heart for leaving me their love. So, love right back.
xo
Sherry
Summary:
Bella and Edward have loved each other practically their whole lives. But once tragedy strikes, can they heal their relationship?

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes
Word count: 55481
[Report This] Published: January 20, 2010 Updated: July 10, 2010
Reviewer: rosy1015 Signed
Date: July 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
i cant stop crying!!!!! its so sad....
Summary: Emmett, a club bouncer, is used to getting any girl he wants at Temptation Isle. Bella, recently on a "break" from Edward, just needs a girls' night with Alice at the "it" club. Will the temptation be too much to handle when they cross paths? One-shot. AH. AU.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Emmett
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 8302
[Report This] Published: June 15, 2010 Updated: July 10, 2010
Reviewer: rosy1015 Signed
Date: July 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Temptation Isle
o wow!!!! (fans herself) u need to write full out story with this... =D
loved the Bella and Emmett... we need more fan fiction with them Author's Response: Thanks!! And I agree, we do need to be more Emmett and Bella stories. I think they balance each other well in ways that Edward and Bella don't with one another. So I might write more one day. We'll see.
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