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Penname: whiteroses [ Contact]
Real name: Eve Lorenz
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Member Since: April 21, 2009
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Summary: Two strangers, two computers.... one night.
Lonely ER doc Edward Cullen goes online one night to relieve some tension, never expecting to find what was awaiting him. AH/possibly some OOC. Rated NC-17 for a reason.
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Banner by Lindsi loolabell
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes
Word count: 132766
[Report This] Published: August 24, 2009 Updated: May 08, 2011
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: December 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 ~Anxiety
Nooo, you cant just end it like that! Seems, they still like each other in person:) wonder how their relationship will change...
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: September 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Preoccupation
OMG, this is freaking hilarious! And Edward used his work email to log on to some sex chat site? So funny. But would they just end up sexing each other online or would they actually meet up. Would reality be better than the fantasy that they created. Ah...well, hope you continue with the story :)
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: November 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 ~ Turning Point
Ohh, turning point indeed! What would Edward do?
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: January 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 ~ New York, New York
I was worried that Bella would go all insecure on Edward...but my, she's a vixen!!!
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: November 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 19 ~ Past Demons
Edward is an ASS! There's no excuse. His story is a pathetic excuse. He doesn't love Bella. He only loves himself.
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: November 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 18 ~ Where Do We Go From Here?
Good. Let Edward suffer for being dumb.
Summary: Edward may have just met the girl of his dreams, but there's something strange about Bella Swan. Maybe it's the fact that she keeps turning up dead.
AU/AH. Canon pairings.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Word count: 5621
[Report This] Published: September 12, 2009 Updated: December 03, 2009
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: September 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: The Amazing Collapsing Girl
Since she retained consciousness, its not a seizure disorder. Not sure about the pulseless part. If she had a cardiac problem ( hence pulseless), circulation would have stopped too, but again, unlikely since she was fully conscious. Cataplexy most likely. Hilarious first chap:)
Author's Response: You, my friend, are very smart. Won't tell you what part you got right, for fear of ruining the future twists and turns for you, but you definitely got something right. :3
Thanks for your feedback! :D
Summary:
When Bella meets Edward and Rosalie, they have an interesting proposition for her. It was supposed to be one night only. What happens when no one wants it to end? ExBxR, ExB, BxR, AU/AH. Part One of The Photographer's Series.
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No
Word count: 66121
[Report This] Published: September 21, 2009 Updated: April 21, 2010
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: December 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: 8: The Pretender
It really is messed up. And Bella's only thinking of having them both but not losing about losing them both if thry find out nor choosing at all! How can the rule of not being one on one still apply when the agreement among the three of them has been broken? It should have flown out the window when Edward flew out the door. Its now all fair and square. And i like Rosalie:)
Summary: *Entry for Ninapolitan's D.I.L.F. Contest* Alice and Bella are best friends. Jasper is Alice's hot dad, who Bella has been lusting over since high school. Now that Bella is all grown up and newly divorced, Alice decides it time for a little experiment. J/B pairing. AU/AH. Lemon.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No
Word count: 43395
[Report This] Published: September 26, 2009 Updated: September 25, 2011
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: March 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Theyve waited for so long..cant believe theyd be apart again!
Summary: A curse spanning generations. For one, unrequited love. For the other, all consuming hate. Together can they break it? OCC/AH Lemons. Banner by emerald_rosalie
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes
Word count: 99512
[Report This] Published: October 10, 2009 Updated: March 12, 2013
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: October 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: The Price of One
wow...this is VERY interesting. I think Edward's curse works well for him. Bella's...it's really a curse, lol!
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: October 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Morning After
soooo HOT!!!! I can't review...I need a cold shower, LOL!
Summary: 
Stephenie’s cut-away during the honeymoon left many of us extremely frustrated! What exactly happened from that touching moment in the bay until morning, when Bella woke up with feathers in her hair? Did the rest of the honeymoon proceed smoothly?
No honeymoon is completely perfect—especially when the two people involved have never done anything like this before. And especially when the couple is Bella and  Edward, with all their unique problems.
Join me as I explore Edward's thoughts and feelings during his most intimate moments with Bella. Watch these two grow and learn about each other as they fall deeper in love. I hope you will agree that I have treated their love with the utmost respect and good taste that it deserved.
Categories: Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes
Word count: 64151
[Report This] Published: November 07, 2009 Updated: January 14, 2010
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: November 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Poor Edward! A century old and still learning. As any person with psychological issue would tell you, physical pain can heal but emotional pain lingers. How much worse can he do? He's already emotionally hurting Bella - oh, thats right, he can physically kill her. Damn.
Summary: The companion piece to It Wasn't . . . This is Rob's response to Kristen. It's not necessary, but you will get more jokes if you read her piece first. His response is a bit longer, as it is Rob, and also because he admitted his love much sooner than she did.
Sometimes it's the smallest actions that speak the loudest. And sometimes, in the smallest things, the world can be found. Sometimes there is more than love at first sight.
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction. I don't know them. I don't own anything. I respect and adore the real people names in this RPF. I wish them nothing but happiness and success in their real life endeavors. No disrepsect, infringement, offense intended. This is for fanfiction purposes only.
Categories: Other Characters: Kristen Stewart, Robert Pattinson
Challenges: Series: The Robsten Files
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 2394
[Report This] Published: November 23, 2009 Updated: November 23, 2009
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: November 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: It Was . . .
Wow! Amazing. It reads like its Rob's!
Author's Response: Really? Cool. I tried to make it sound like him, and what he would notice. Thank you for reading and leaving a review! :)
Summary: This is my own twisted version of the Twilight story, much less PG-13 than the original version by Stephanie Meyer. As the story continues, a few of my own characters are added in for some spice and excitement. Edward is darker, possessive and a bit on the violent side (although the gentleman is still evident - don't worry).
Categories: Twilight Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No
Word count: 13582
[Report This] Published: December 21, 2009 Updated: March 12, 2010
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: March 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: La Push Beach
Wow...so twisted. But i like it!
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: March 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: The Hunt
Not disappointed with the lack of fight! Id rather have Edward happy. We wouldn't want him to spontaneously combust, do we?:p
Summary:
Edward and Bella are recently married, and it's time for him to live up to his promise and change her. However, what would happen if his venom had a slightly different effect on her? How will Edward handle Bella in the throes of the most powerful aphrodisiac in the world? (EPOV, Written for The Fandom Gives Back Auction)
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 12674
[Report This] Published: December 23, 2009 Updated: December 23, 2009
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: December 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: (One Shot)
i think that's the first time that I've read about Bella's change in THAT way...hahahaha! Whew. Good thing Edward's a vampire and doesn't get tired, LOL! Damn hot. Author's Response: I mean, if you HAVE to be turned... what a way to go, huh?
Thank you for the review!
Summary: 
Bella Swan is a writer that is on a trip of a lifetime. Edward Cullen is a famous actor, whose life is a blur of film-sets, hotels and screaming fans. A destined encounter and a battle of mind over matter erupt amongst sensual music and a shared longing.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Edward, Emmett, James, Jasper, Jessica, Laurent, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 48 Completed: No
Word count: 265821
[Report This] Published: January 02, 2010 Updated: February 05, 2013
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: January 25, 2011
Title: Chapter 24: Em Dash
Seriously,I usually find Emmett adorable. But this Emmett is treating Edward like a 4-yr old! Unless Emmett has peas for brains, he doesn't need to head out to a stupid cabin in the middle of the night to get laid. It's insulting to both Edward and Bella, no matter how good his intentions are. Emmett's interruptions are unrealistic and just plain dumb.
Author's Response: I can see how you would interpret Emmett's actions...let me know after next chapter if you like him any more or any less after it posts? I'd really love to know.... Thanks for reading!
Summary: *INDEFINITE HIATUS*
All through high school, Bella was in love with her best friend who was in love with her, too. Both never expressing their feelings and never knowing how the other felt. In the end, Edward decided to go across the other side of the country leaving Bella with only one memory of him: his journal. Heart-broken and confused by it’s content, she casted it aside. Years later, Edward moves back home, but Bella wants to move on with her life. Can they really stay away from each other, or will history repeat itself?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No
Word count: 118790
[Report This] Published: January 14, 2010 Updated: October 23, 2010
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: January 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: A Final Fantasy
Well, Bella's being stubborn but whats a girl got to do? He left her and was a wimp. I like the tension!
Author's Response: Tension is gooood. I love reading fics with a good amount of tension and something to figure out. Thanks for the review! :-)
Summary:
A first kiss, a first dance, a first curse word shared between best friends.
This is the tale of a boring young geek and the social pariah who thought the world of him.
A tale of growing up.
A tale of a Non-Romantic Romance.
Winner of The Little Indie that Could! Award at the Indie Twific Awards!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No
Word count: 97341
[Report This] Published: January 22, 2010 Updated: August 09, 2010
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: April 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Outtake: An Uncomfortable Conversation and the Assault of Mike Newton
I like angry and feisty Edward, especially in that scenario, LOL! Well, adorable as always. The thing is that, and I know that this is your story and you are an awesome writer but....as in love as you make these two, I find it unrealistic that Bella isn't curious enough to search the meaning of the elvish words that Edward repeatedly say to her --- and in special occasions at that (after they kissed, her bday). Bella not doing anything and letting those words slip by without knowing the meaning, doesn't speak well for her character. While Edward on the other hand is already counting the days until they could be officially together forever. Author's Response: Hey!
I'm so glad you're enjoying the story!
Alot of people have asked why Bella hasn't just looked up the translations. There'll be a little blurb in the next chapter about this but it's fairy simply. It's important to keep in mind that this is still 2002 and (I don't believe) Google became really popular until around 2004. At least, I didn't know it existed until then and Bella is the same age as I am.
On top of that, Bella isn't exactly computer savvy. She knows enough to help with some of the t-shirt designs, but all the web-design she does in photo-editing software and Edward posts it. So it isn't so much that she doesn't want to know what Edward is saying (because she really, really does) as much as the fact that she has no idea how to go about doing it. She's tried asking Edward before, but he's too bashful to actually tell her (and I think a small part of him is hoping she'll figure it out herself - of course Edward does know what Google is and doesn't realize that Bella doesn't have a clue how to figure it out) which is why she has kindly, on several occasions, asked him to only speak English to her. It's been almost a year since the first time he's started talking to her in Elvish. At first she was really persistent but after months of Edward not telling her, she's kind of just let it rest and considers it to be an endearing *cough*annoying*cough* quality in him.
I hope this helps a little! Thank you so much for the feedback, I really appreciate it!
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: August 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: A Farewell to Ninth Grade 2002-2003
LOL! Luv it as usual!
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: March 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: The First Time He Kissed Her
Oh my! This is probably the cutest Ff ever! I laughed so hard but also makes me tingle all over. Cant wait for more!
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: March 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: A Farewell to Eighth Grade 2001-2002
lol! He already told her he loves her, in Elvish, that is! So cute.. But they're only 13. I think im afraid of change for them
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: March 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: The First Time She Said the D-word
Short. Too short but too funny!!! Love your Edward and Bella.
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: March 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: The First Time They Walked Into Forks High
Ohhh, I was so nervous for both of them going tk HS. But what about the L word?!?!
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: June 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: The First Time They Broke Up
Well, they are lacking in communication alright. But I do think Edward is being unfair to her...vengeful and unfair.
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