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Penname: whiteroses [ Contact]
Real name: Eve Lorenz
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Member Since: April 21, 2009
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Summary: He loved her so much, even then, that he'd tried his hardest to hold them together. Tried to talk, and when that hadn't worked, he'd tried to keep his mouth shut. To patiently bear her rebuttals and her undeserved scorn, to put up with her insults and her barely-veiled jibes, poking at his manhood, his family, his former and present life - poking holes into the fabric of his very existence until he was brought to his knees under its weight.
He'd tried. But in the end, it hadn't mattered.
She'd left anyway.
Banner credit goes to addicttwilight2 - words cannot express how uniquely fabulous she is!
Categories: Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No
Word count: 55326
[Report This] Published: July 01, 2009 Updated: July 25, 2010
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: August 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Fire
Ugh! SO, Aro wanted her to be changed but why did he have to break them apart? Does Aro want her for himself?
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: August 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Lost
UGh! I have a lot of questions but I can only come up with why...for everything that happened. :( I don't know which is worse. That Bella divorced him and pretended that she didn't love him anymore or that she's back but she doesn't even remember Edward! I think if I were Edward, I'd rather that she's back and doesn't remember me and I can woo her all over again. Fifty percent chance she'll like me. But if she's gone, then she's well, gone, LOL!
Summary: When Edward, the son of the rich, multi-billionaire Carlisle Cullen is kidnapped by terrorists, a secret organization puts Agent Bella Swan on the case. It's her job to go rescue him and take down the terrorist group without becoming to involved. Will this mission be too much for her to handle?
Violence, language, lemons eventually
Thank you to readergoof for my completely amazing banner!!!!!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No
Word count: 47059
[Report This] Published: July 06, 2009 Updated: July 28, 2010
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: July 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Don't worry, readers and reviews will come soon :) The suspense is good. Can't wait for more!
Summary: 
Bella remains sexually unfulfilled after three separate liaisons with “boys” instead of men. Diagnosed as frigid, she is on the verge of giving up on her sexuality. She encounters Edward Masen, another sexual misfit, and things begin to change. B/E/AH/AU/OOC. Rated NC-17 for language and sexual content.
WARNING: THIS STORY CONTAINS ADULT THEMES RELATED TO VIOLENCE AGAINST WOMEN
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No
Word count: 149083
[Report This] Published: July 15, 2009 Updated: October 05, 2010
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: August 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Cat Fancy
This is so funny and clever! I'd continue reading this. However, I think that the third person POV takes away a bit of the hilarity of Bella's thoughts. I don't know...I just think it would work better with the First person POV since you have a lot of Bella's thoughts in there...and you wouldn't need to italicized them anymore. Just a suggestion! Author's Response: The first chapter is the only one with 3rd person. Everything else is 1st person past tense.
Summary:  
Bella had the perfect life. She was married to her longtime best friend, had a great job and a beautiful son…until a careless driver stole her happiness.
Edward was fulfilling his dreams. His residency was almost over, he had a gorgeous fiancé, and he was ready to move forward, starting a family…until a devastating break-up and a health scare in his family shake his foundation.
See, sometimes, life doesn’t go the way you want. Sometimes, things can happen that change the course you choose. And most of the time, it takes courage to walk down the new path.
What if that new path started with a tee ball team?
Big thanks to sigh-for-sigh for the banner!!
Play with me on the forum. I now have a thread in the Alternate Human thread.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie, Seth, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: No
Word count: 116372
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2009 Updated: October 05, 2010
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: August 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Practice Makes Perfect
Bella falling apart two years after Jake's death is too consuming. She probably needs therapy. Author's Response: Bella is actually doing well, she is just dealing with one more thing that reminded her of Jake. It does get easier when we lose someone, but the ache can return with certain memories. She is healing.
Thanks for reviewing!
Summary: 
Bella and Edward meet and experience an instantaneous sexual attraction, but are forced to remain only friends for a year. When Bella and her boyfriend finally break up, they're finally free to act on their mutual lust. It's just sex . . .or is it? AH.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 4977
[Report This] Published: July 18, 2009 Updated: July 18, 2009
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: July 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
nice lemon! but where do they go from here?
Summary: When Bella's unit is ambushed in the jungle and she is taken captive, an elite team is sent in to save her. As events unfold, Bella finds herself caught in the web of this mysterious team made up of elite, and unique, people. Things become even more interesting when she discovers that the leader of this group is a man she thought had dissapeared forever.
Props to Annamorphos for her awesome banner making skills!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: No
Word count: 124260
[Report This] Published: July 19, 2009 Updated: October 06, 2010
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: August 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Waking up in Dallas
I am enjoying the mystery...but I do not have any theories on why Edward has to keep himself away from her, or why she'd react strongly when she sees him. She's a specialist...a spy, maybe? I don't know. But what about him? She mentioned him being in the gym but that's about it. Gah. well, on to the next chap then.
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: August 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Recovery and Pain
UGh, so Edward and Bella did have a past.
Summary: 
Bella Swan is a high school junior who along with her best friend, Jasper Cullen, lives by her own rules. That is, until Jasper's twin brother, and the brain of Forks High, Edward comes into play.
Nerdward meets Bitchy Bella in this new and fun fic...
Super thanks to heatherdawnc for the awesome banner!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Renee
Challenges: Series: Geekward and Nerdella
Chapters: 8 Completed: No
Word count: 23881
[Report This] Published: July 19, 2009 Updated: February 16, 2010
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: August 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Once Upon A Lie
ohhh! So, how come Bella has issues? She "works" Edward to ecstasy but doesn't let him touch her even when he clearly wants her? And have Jasper as a bestfriend? Life isn't fair. Author's Response: I think in Chapter Two, you will begin to see why exactly Bella has so many issues. It's an attachment and intimacy thing that she'll have to work out... Don't worry, I will try not to lead her, or the readers, astray!
Summary: People aren't always what they appear to be. Including Kristen and Rob. The night of the Tokyo premiere of Twilight, perceptions and assumptions weigh heavily on a fledgling relationship. But what happens when the ultimate perception collides with an incorrect assumption? Can they get past it together and become stronger for it? Read on to learn 'The Secret'.
Categories: Other Characters: Kristen Stewart, Robert Pattinson
Challenges: Series: The Robsten Files
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes
Word count: 10752
[Report This] Published: July 29, 2009 Updated: August 24, 2009
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: August 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: The Secret
It's so sweet and hot....and wow...she's a virgin? Author's Response: Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed this. Yeah, it's just as likely as the other scenario. :)
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: August 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: The Reaction
loved it...they're so sweet! Author's Response: I am so pleased you like it! Thank you for reading and reviewing! :)
Summary: 
With medical bills, school bills, not to mention rent, piling up, Bella looks for a way to dig herself out of debt. Rose tells her about a new business she’s gotten into. Bella tries her hand at the business, and ends up paired with Dr. Edward Cullen. But can she separate business and pleasure?
Here's a link to the thread. We'd love to hear your thoughts! http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=5822
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Eric, Jacob, Jasper, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No
Word count: 43549
[Report This] Published: July 29, 2009 Updated: March 21, 2010
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: September 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Mike Newton
Ugh! But escorts dont always have to do the deed! I cant believe she did it. He should have paid her more than 6k!
Summary: Womanizer Edward meets Maneater Bella let the sheets fall where they may. It's not the average every day lover story between Edward and Bella. He's not into the one woman kind of deal and she's not into the one man kind of deal. The meet at a wedding, Edward is the Best Man and Bella is the Maid of Honor. Anything goes with these two so hold on tight and enjoy the ride.
Out of Character, All Human, Cannon Pairings.
Potty mouth and lots of lemony goodness included.
First chapter is kind of risky but I gotta show you just how naughty my Edward is. Give it a chance you won't regret it!
This banner is by Readergoof. I have another one that was up before but I'm switching to just this one for now.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: Always Human
Chapters: 12 Completed: No
Word count: 41376
[Report This] Published: August 04, 2009 Updated: February 27, 2010
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: December 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
oh no, seems like Edward is having cold feet! Why isn't Bella scared with the "no one else" deal while Edward is? He'd probably leave and then "kill" himself with the torture, LOL! They're not unlike each other but for some reason, I'm on Bella's side. Maybe because she might not know what she wants exactly, but she doesn't get frighten easily. Your Rose is different. It's pretty refreshing, hahaha! Author's Response: Edward isn't quite having cold feet, he just fears he's getting into old territory. His biggest fear falling for someone and not having them love him back. It's not that Bella isn't she's just not as invested quite as much as Edward I think. She still sees it as a good sexual relationship with "no one else" involved. She's drunk at the end and probably not thinking too much just that she'd like a little company and Edward is who she wants. She wants what she wants and usually gets it. She's a strong independent woman who isn't ruled by her emotions but is she ready for her emotions to rule her?
Summary: 
Bella wakes up married to Edward Cullen, who she’s only just met. The problem? She’s still a senior at FHS. The other problem? The judge orders them to stay married for a year as punishment for abusing the sanctity of marriage.
(The beautiful new banner was made by hoping4more!)
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jane, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Word count: 13829
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2009 Updated: March 10, 2013
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: September 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
Omg, so Edward's a douche, Bella's a good girl and they have to live together? Oh, the horrors! Great start!
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: September 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: There's Something About Edward
Hahaha, Bella's hilarious! How did they get married? I so wanna know! And oh, i hope their one year marriage includes he who cheats gets neutered or spayed or killed, whatever.
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: September 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: There's Something About Edward
And an EPOV would be fun too!
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: September 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: The Stepsister
Jane is a freak! But she's hilarious! Your fic is so funny. I still hate McBastard. I think Edward hates her because well, she's not falling all over her ass worshipping his beautiful crotch, or whatever, hahaha! But Bella is not as GOOD as she thinks she is? Something to do with another boy perhaps? hmm...update soon pls!
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: September 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Not in Kansas Anymore Part:1
Edward is not that bad? Eeeckkk..in what world is that? Who got them married in the first place? There should a law against those organizations who issue licenses to drunks wanting to get married...Ahh, but I'm excited to read how you're gonna turn these two crazy freaks around. They will eventually get together, right? Err, maybe?
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: November 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Not in Kansas Anymore Part:2
hahhahah, they're both so vicious. I can't wait to read what happened from the "morning after" to the courts.
Summary: When Edward receives devastating news of Bella he isn't strong enough to stay by her side. Though he regrets his defection he realizes its too late. Until she agrees to meet him.
banner by emerald_rosalie
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 5067
[Report This] Published: August 09, 2009 Updated: August 09, 2009
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: August 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Crap. I know it happens. I did it myself, though under totally different circumstances. And I didn't do any of the the things that he did for her. I stayed away, totally. I cannot even begin to imagine the additional pain she went through thinking that he didn't want her when she was sick. It was unnecessary and beyond cruel. Edward acted selfishly. He doesn't deserve Bella. But who's keeping tabs? Only Bella can decide if he deserves her or not. Thanks for the story.
Summary: Edward Cullen is new to the area and asked to cover for a sick cameraman from a crew filming at a local tattoo parlor. Under the lights will sparks fly? My entry for the Inkella and Tattward contest.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, James, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 7770
[Report This] Published: August 09, 2009 Updated: August 09, 2009
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: August 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Well, that was a damn HOT one shot. Good thing it was just a a one shot because I think I forgot to breathe while reading it.
Summary: Bella Swan, a successful paranormal romance writer, misses her plane to her best friend’s wedding. She goes to a small private airport and charters a plane piloted by the attractive, witty Edward Cullen. When fate intervenes, their plane crashes, and the two are thrust together to survive. Can a relationship started during an intense situation last, what does fate have in store for the pair?
Originally started as a one shot for the Twilight Gift Exchange on LiveJournal. Due to popular demand their tale will be continued…
banner by the ever so talented: Heaven's Immortal
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Word count: 10014
[Report This] Published: August 09, 2009 Updated: January 15, 2010
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: August 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chocolate Cover Promises
Wow, that was fast! Well, they almost died so I guess they should never ever take any time for granted! MOre pls! Author's Response: Thanks! I tend to think they had that instant chemistry...and...well...no one knows what will happen next!
Summary:
When Bella and Edward meet the first day of High School, he is a chubby misfit with no friends in a new town, aside from his popular cousins. He meets Bella Swan, a well-liked, if uncoordinated, local with problems of her own. This is the story of their friendship, their loss, their love and destruction. Can they find their way back to each other? And can they survive the changes they have both gone through since the fateful day they met?
HUGE THANKS TO ATHENALOVE and READERGOOF FOR THE AMAZING BANNERS!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: Always Human
Chapters: 41 Completed: No
Word count: 164271
[Report This] Published: August 12, 2009 Updated: December 03, 2012
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: September 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: 2001-Goodbye to You
Bella needed help! What if she was raped? And Edward loved himself more than he loved her. He didnt believe her. She begged, she cried. One can only do so much. Manwhore Edward can just go to hell. I hope one of his random conquest gets pregnant and he loses his job or something. I hate him. I hope Bella doesnt fall for him until he goes to hell and comes crawling back on his knees.
Author's Response: Wow, the hate oozes off the page.......he does redeem himself, and they both make alot of mistakes in this fic. Please bear with us.
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: October 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: 2009-Bed of Roses
You're driving me crazy! Now I hate Bella. But she didn't make Edward into a douchebag. He made himself into one. Author's Response: Yes, he did, it was always his choice. Now he realizes the mistakes he made. Don't hate Bella yet.....she has her own set of problems.
[Report This] Published: August 13, 2009 Updated: May 12, 2010
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: January 18, 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1- In the Beginning
Edward is not just naughty, he's manipulative. And Bella seems to like the attention.
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