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Penname: whiteroses [ Contact]
Real name: Eve Lorenz
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Member Since: April 21, 2009
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Summary:  "Once upon a time, there was girl that just wanted to get swept off her feet. Little did I know my co-star would be the one to do it. And with texting no less."
A fictional tale of Rob and Kristen realizing their feelings for each other and getting their signals crossed.
Thanks to falconcranelove for the banner!
Sequel: Behind the Lens http://twilighted.net/viewstory.php?sid=11639
Categories: Other Characters: Kristen Stewart, Robert Pattinson
Challenges: Series: The Robsten Files
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes
Word count: 193022
[Report This] Published: December 24, 2008 Updated: April 09, 2010
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: June 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Ohh.....I understand why Rob wanted to beat himself up for thinking that Kristen could be the bitch that Nikki wanted him to believe but Kristen also thought that Rob was just leading her on too. Both of them fell hard so when they didn't get confirmation from each other, they also hurt badly. Anyway, I'm glad they're good and they're in this fight together. Luv the update. Hate the Nikki with Rob rumors, LOL!
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: August 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
THe lemon got me wanting for more, LOL! Yeah, I'm that greedy, heh. Anyway, what's going to happen now? Nikki is still trying to insinuate herself in. I can't stand her comic-con girlfriendtude towards Kristen. Kris's realization was true though. The looks that Rob gave her during the promos were just very telling. He was really that wrapped up in Kristen,
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: December 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 29 ~Part Two~
Yay, me too! I need a cold shower!!! I so wanna bitch slap Nikki around.
Summary: 
Four weeks before her wedding to Edward, Bella is frustrated. She knows there's little-to-no chance of getting him to bend his rules and boundaries now, but there's no harm in fantasizing about what could happen later. So she begins compiling a list of things that she and Edward can do together once they're happily married. She's surprised to find she might be able to cross some things off earlier than she thought...
Story contains mature themes and is not intended for younger readers.
Thanks to Mandi, aka m81170, for the great banner!
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes
Word count: 187877
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2010
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: May 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: The Wedding
how can it get any better than this?
Everything's wonderful! I can't even find the right words. This chapter was like being caught in the eye of the storm, where I'm surrounded by love, passion, friendship, etc...and I'm in the middle, pleasurably watching everything around. Now I know how it feels like to be Jasper, LOL!
Update soon! :)
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: April 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Music
Darn, this chapter is sooo beautiful! Lyrical and musical!
I can't imagine the rest of the chapters to be much better than this!
But I bet they are!
Thanks for sharing this story...ahhh, on to the next chaps :)
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: April 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Teasing
hahaha, this chapter made me blushhhh!!!
Summary: Bella and Edward were secret best friends during one of the best periods of Bella's life. Their friendship has waned. When they are forced back together, untold secrets are revealed. When the truth is out there, will anyone feel lucky?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Jessica, Lauren, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes
Word count: 78205
[Report This] Published: December 30, 2008 Updated: April 12, 2009
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: April 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Signs, Signs, Everywhere Signs
OMG, you made me really feel for Bella...
I hate Lauren..and why would Bella and Edward keep their being friends a secret? Well, I guess it probably worked better that way. If I were Bella, I wouldn't want others to know I was friends with the handsome boy....too much pressure and too many meanie claws!
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: April 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Brown Eyed Girl
Edward's thoughts...grr.....that's all I have to say about that! Author's Response: You were definitely not alone. Lots of people didn't like his thinking in the beginning.
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: April 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Biology
I think Bella is Edward's drug, haha!
He couldn't expend effort for a gorgeous blond like Rosalie, but he surely was doing a lot for Bella!
And of course, he didn't have to work that hard for Lauren.
Summary: Edward is a lonely vampire who has been waiting for over eighty years to find his soul mate. His sister Alice has never been able to see his true love, but for good reason--she hadn't been born yet. When Alice finally sees her, plans are made to finally make Edward's dream come true.
This is a different version of Twilight, and it's told from Edward's point of view.
A little lemony, but not too graphic. Rated NC-17 for mature themes and language, and possibly for violence in later chapters.
Thanks to Evilangel6714 for the awesome banner!
Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Laurent, Mike, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya, Tyler
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes
Word count: 157222
[Report This] Published: January 06, 2009 Updated: May 21, 2009
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: May 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Glimpses
Oh no..i didnt think of it as pedophile-ish in any way! And I work with kids all the time :)
He's a vampire, lonely for sooo long! It's but normal to touch something/someone that you've waited for so long yet have materialized in front of you. It was a fantasy come true.
He's got strong feelings for her, that's for sure. but not the creepy kind. you can't expect him to behave like a human does/nor should we judge him as if he's human -- because he's not.
He's a vampire, judge him as vampire --- all these things, his yearning for her, her blood and scent attracting him, his heightened senses just makes it all the more potent to desire to be with her...that's just natural for him.
And i think it's awesome! Author's Response: Thank you so very much, whiteroses. I have had a small handful of people tell me he seems creepy in a pedophile way, and that makes me incredibly sad because I don't feel I've written him that way. You got exactly what I was trying to say in that first chapter, and I appreciate you voicing it so well. Thank you, and I hope you like where I take the rest of it. Thanks for reading, and I hope you continue.
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: May 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: New Arrival at Forks High
How frustrating it must be for Edward to control himself because he knows they're supposed to be together ...but Alice's vision can change right? So, Edward still has to work on getting Bella to like him.
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: May 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Thwarting Mike
It's so funny! The Cullen men went shopping with the girls? LOL!
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: May 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Truth or Dare
hahahaha, this chapter made me laugh!
The Cullens are acting like real teenages, it's refreshing! :)
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: May 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Seventeen
hahaha, he's so wonderfully pathetic :D
I like it..he's acting like a normal seventeen year old!
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: May 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Making Out 101
I was just wondering if Bella will like/hang out with anyone else except the Cullens?
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: May 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Bella Moves In
what? foreshadowing? does it mean, Edward will really think that he's unable to control himself and leave her? *gasps*
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: May 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Testing Limits
ugh, the revelation coming up.
I think it's gonna get ugly :( I'm gonna be so sad, coz they're just so sweet!
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: May 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Bella's Party
Oh no!!!
I totally felt my heart breaking along with Edwards!
Grr...this shouldn't last long! How can Bella call him a monster? after all the tenderness that he had shown?
What was Bella thinking?
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: May 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Truth
whew! Glad that's over. Arrghh...well, they could both be so stubborn.
Well, good....Edward now knows how to be 'without' her..so maybe he will stop thinking of leaving her ever! hmph!
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: May 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Complete Honesty
hahha, i thought they were all gonna be kissing the hell and just be gooey and all but they fought and laughed! I like it. It's different :)
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: May 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Road Trippin'
Wait, how can Edward think she's pregnant if they haven't done it?
I mean, wasn't that the reason he almost lost his control? That they pushed their boundaries? Did something happen at the back of the car? But how can they have done it there without Edward not losing control?
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: May 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Snow Angel
awww..that was cute.
She called him an asshole, he called her a bitch! How dare he! I still think Edward is the asshole, Bella was just provoked, hmph! It's funny though!
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: May 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Sentimental Reasons
oh no, what's going on? Is she turning into a vampire now? But how?
Is this the reason for her vomiting and her being coordinated and all now?
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: May 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Man vs. Monster
Dont worry..i dont think the love scenes were there just to so you could feed us lemons, LOL (although, i like some lemons too, haha). This is Edward's POV and it's part of his struggle. In the earlier chapters, he almost killed her when they got to that part so this part is necessary to show his progression and his control. thanks, i think it was done great :)
Summary: The much anticipated sequel to A Lesson in Release. Jasper has won the girl of his dreams and they are beginning a new life together at college. But what happens when fate intercedes? Will he be able to hold onto her or will fate return her to Edward?
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges: Series: The Lessons Saga
Chapters: 49 Completed: Yes
Word count: 171842
[Report This] Published: January 09, 2009 Updated: October 28, 2009
Reviewer: whiteroses Signed
Date: June 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Motorcycles
Jasper doesn't deserve this. Bella tries too hard to pacify Edward, ain't gonna work. Jasper should be her priority, not Edward. Just because they cheated doesn't mean they need to defend their relationship forever. I cried for Edward in the first fic but I realize that he lost Bella because he is who he is. Unless he changes. Even if Jasper and Bella never got together, I think, eventually, he still would have lost her.
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