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Penname: sweetishbubble [Contact]
Real name: Ali Halbmaier
Status: Member
Member Since: June 10, 2008
Website:
Beta-reader: Yes

29 year old female who is addicted to all things Twilight and my fanFic!


I'm married with 2 kids, living in MN.


***I now have a blog! http://sweetishbubblescrazyworld.blogspot.com/


Fav Character:  Carlisle and Esme Cullen and Charlie Swan (movie version).


I enjoy writing and offering my beta skills.


I'm also a BETA on Project Team Beta.  Check it out!



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Reviews by sweetishbubble
 
Realize by Goo82 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 633]
Summary:

Edward is a hot up and coming actor and Bella is his ever faithful best friend and personal assistant. Bella's feeling for Edward have changed over the years, but he is oblivious to her feelings. With the help of her friends, will she get the courage to tell him how she feels before it's too late, or will she just stand by and watch him fall in love with someone else? How will Edward take the news of these feelings from the girl he has always thought of as a sister? Will the obstacles along the way ruin even the best of friendships?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 93126
[Report This] Published: June 29, 2008 Updated: November 08, 2008


Reviewer: sweetishbubble Signed
Date: August 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Love the story! I thought for sure you were going to make her preggo.

 Can't wait to read the next chapter.



Author's Response: Ah bubble!! from twimoms! I am declansmom04over there.. ar BD upset was shot down babe! lol

 
Reviewer: sweetishbubble Signed
Date: August 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ah! HI!!

I can't belive what the VM's are doing over there!! We can't even voice our opinions w/out being told it's wrong. Oh well. We always have our fanifc, right!?

 I have my own versionof BD on fanfic - it's called "Forever's Sacrifices." Check it out if you'd like :)

Ali (Sweetishbubble)

 
Reviewer: sweetishbubble Signed
Date: August 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Well it's about time Edward!! LOL

 Can't wait for 16!

Sweeishbubble

 
Reviewer: sweetishbubble Signed
Date: August 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Loved it. I hope Edward gets to Bella in time

 
Reviewer: sweetishbubble Signed
Date: August 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Wonderful! I can't wait for your next story!

SB

 
Summary:

Now, I love every single one of the Twilight characters, especially angsty, overprotective Edward, but let's face it - sometimes they can go overboard. This is a parody of the characters' personalities.

 


Categories: Eclipse, Crackfic Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 6030
[Report This] Published: August 26, 2008 Updated: September 18, 2008


Reviewer: sweetishbubble Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Act 1

OMG - This is hysterical

NARF!

 
Reviewer: sweetishbubble Signed
Date: December 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Act 2

Bella:  picks up Edward’s bottle of Tresemme Bouncy Curls Extra Defining Hair Gel Edward, does this stuff even work on you?  I mean, you’re a vampire.  Aren’t you pretty much frozen the same way you were when Carlisle bit you?



Edward:  Chayeah.  And you’d think he would have given me a quick comb-through or something.  I mean, influenza is so not good for the locks.


 


That was brilliant!!

 
Reviewer: sweetishbubble Signed
Date: December 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Act 5

Bella in a Baby Bjorn?  OMFG I am dying overhere.

 
Summary:

Life has dealt Edward and Bella their fair share of problems, but just as they begin to get their marriage back on track tragedy strikes. What happens when the only love you have ever known may be taken away? Will the guilt and memories tear you apart or is there something left worth fighting for?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 15516
[Report This] Published: August 28, 2008 Updated: December 30, 2008


Reviewer: sweetishbubble Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 (S)

Oh - It was SOO worth the wait!! I've missed this story - glad to see it's back.

 
New Life by cowza Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 338]
Summary: After their marriage, Bella has disappeared, shattering Edward and the Cullens. When Emmett finds her, alone and pregnant in a strange city, will he and his family be able to make things right?
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 31135
[Report This] Published: September 09, 2008 Updated: November 15, 2008


Reviewer: sweetishbubble Signed
Date: May 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Just read this and I'm hoping you're settled and updating soon.  I love this story. :)

 
Summary: Bella's life was a fairytale until tragedy struck not once, but twice, changing the course of her life forever.  No matter what life throws her way, Bella accepts her life and trudges on.  Now, as she starts college, Bella meets some new friends who try to help her regain her fairytale life.  Will she meet prince charming in the process? 
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No Word count: 51114
[Report This] Published: September 10, 2008 Updated: August 27, 2009


Reviewer: sweetishbubble Signed
Date: January 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Unwanted Visitor

it's about time someone told her to get therapy.  Edward was sweet.



Author's Response:

I even thought she had enough issues that she needed therapy in the books--seriously.  Her self-esteem was next to nothing.  Edward is such a good guy to her.  Thanks for reading.

 
Summary:

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Bella went cliff diving, but it didn't turn out so well. She broke her back. A decade later, Edward reappears in her life on the same night she loses her best friend and husband to a freak accident. Now a graduate student in Women's Studies, Bella isn't thrilled to see him. But when the Cullens re-enter Bella's life, they bring change, hope, and a new joint project that will require all their expertises.

Also, you can find a SPANISH version here:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4829851/1/En_un_parpadeo

AND you can find images for various things like Esme's house, Edward's piano, Bella's wheelchair and Rose's car on my ff.net profile page:

http://www.fanfiction.net/~thatwritr

OR in my LJ gallery:

http://pics.livejournal.com/that_writr/gallery/000010z2

Special Update:

For personal reasons (a ridiculously full teaching schedule and being recently put in charge of a bi-annual local conference and ongoing project), I am no longer able to reply to reviews and questions. But that said, I wanted to give a BIG THANK YOU to EVERYBODY for the wonderful feedback and kind words that have been sent my way since the completion of this story in August 2009. I do still check my messages about once every 1-2 weeks and read *every* review. I just have too many to reply to anymore, but I didn’t want anyone to think I was ignoring her/him in particular, or didn’t appreciate readers taking time to leave a review. Writing this story was tons of fun and I’m thrilled readers seem to enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed the chance to write it. I can’t tell you how flattering that is!!! As I used to reply to all reviews, I feel a little badly about this decision, but work has been requiring virtually all of my time since the new (academic) year began.

Best to all of you in 2010 and beyond!

 

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 68 Completed: Yes Word count: 221619
[Report This] Published: September 10, 2008 Updated: August 26, 2009


Reviewer: sweetishbubble Signed
Date: January 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I can't believe you put Alice and Jasper in Minnesota - they'd hate it here. It's too damn cold in the winter and too sunny an warm in the summer.



Author's Response:

Ah, but St. Olaf's is there. :-)  But I doubt they'd notice the cold. Ha.

 
Reviewer: sweetishbubble Signed
Date: January 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Very well written chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thank you.

 
Reviewer: sweetishbubble Signed
Date: January 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

The letters were wonderful.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm glad those letters worked well.

 
Reviewer: sweetishbubble Signed
Date: January 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

When a woman leaves an abusive relationship, it's a day she'll never forget. The sense of freedom is overwhelming and empowering. It's also the most difficult time as well, because you're leaving everything you're used to, even if it's somethign horrible like abuse.  So, speaking for personal experience, I can relate to Esme on so many levels.  Great job.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  And yes, I've heard that from survivors over and over -- just the sense of FREEDOM that one experiences, like dropping a huge weight.  I was glad I was able to convey that for Esme and have it seem authentic to somebody who's been there. :-)

 
Reviewer: sweetishbubble Signed
Date: May 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Great chapter! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

 
Reviewer: sweetishbubble Signed
Date: June 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

I liked that!! Now that they've actually done it, I'm sure his stamina will build.  I can't wait for the wedding.  Love the story!



Author's Response:

Hee!  Yes, first times for boys -- and physically he's still a boy -- are just BAM-its-all-over. LOL!

 
Reviewer: sweetishbubble Signed
Date: June 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

lOL  - yes, but sometimes that carries over into manhood, too.  My hubby is 31 and he's almost just as bad.



Author's Response:

:-D

 
Reviewer: sweetishbubble Signed
Date: July 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

A short, but sweet chapter.  They talked about quite a bit there, didn't they?  Look forward to more! :)



Author's Response:

They did, actually.  Part of my original problem was that it took forever to get to the POINT.  So I just started where it got interesting. :-)

 
Reviewer: sweetishbubble Signed
Date: August 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

OOH!!  Loved it! Can't wait for more! :)

 
Reviewer: sweetishbubble Signed
Date: August 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

I liked this chapter, and how you're getting them to us nice and quick.  I have a feeling the guy is Hannah's?  husband getting revenge? Either way, its a great cliffy!

 
Reviewer: sweetishbubble Signed
Date: August 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

I hope they find her! And I hope Brady gets what's coming to him!!



Author's Response:

Ha.  He will ... but maybe not at the hands people expect.

 
Reviewer: sweetishbubble Signed
Date: August 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Doesn't matter to me, as long as he gets it!!

 
Reviewer: sweetishbubble Signed
Date: August 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

MAN!! Mother of all cliffy's there, lady!! Can't wait to read the rest!

 
Reviewer: sweetishbubble Signed
Date: August 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

Great chapter!

 

 "'If ever I should hold you once again,'" he whispers, "'I shall not be so foolish / as once I was to ever let you go / I'll hold tight, and then let come what may.'" - What is that from?



Author's Response:

The [i]Decameron[/i].  It's in the end notes. :-)

 




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