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Penname: icrodriguez [Contact]
Real name: Isabel
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Member Since: October 08, 2008
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Forget Her by wish_girl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 156]
Summary: AU - Edward left Bella in the woods four years ago. What happens when he runs into her and she's completely changed? Rated for later chapters.
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 8225
[Report This] Published: October 01, 2008 Updated: December 01, 2008


Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed
Date: October 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oooooh. Please keep going!

 
Summary:

Edward never left, he stayed by Bella's side but refused to change her, wanting her to have the human experiences she deserves.  As Bella approaches her 30th birthday she gets her news that makes her question the direction her life has taken.


Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 31798
[Report This] Published: October 02, 2008 Updated: February 05, 2009


Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: What have I done?

MERCY! I cannot wait for more! Thank God the depressing part is over. I don't think I could handle it anymore. Please let it get good now. Anything, please!

Author's Response:

It will get better I promise.  Another chapter is waiting but Shabby is on a well deserved vacation so look for it after the holidays I would imagine.  Thank you so much for the reviews.

 
Anything and Everything by Jfly Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 45]
Summary: AU- Edward has been gone for months and finally returns to Forks to claim his true love.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3307
[Report This] Published: October 10, 2008 Updated: October 10, 2008


Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed
Date: October 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Anything and Everything

BEAUTIFUL. I loved it. Sigh.....

 
Isle Esme by Vixen1836 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 92]
Summary:

Isle Esme

For True Edward Fans. A serious look at the first night on Isle Esme through Edward's eyes. Rated M for Eloquent Lemons. Canon. EPOV.


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 13775
[Report This] Published: October 11, 2008 Updated: January 13, 2009


Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed
Date: October 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Isle Esme - Part One

YOU HAVE TO KEEP GOING WITH THIS. SWOON!

 
Farewell by starcrossdlover Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 932]
Summary:

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It's Bella's 18th birthday, and what does she want more than immortality? Her darling Edward's loving company—minus the clothing. To her surprise, Edward caves and when Bella gets some, she gets WAY more than she bargained for. Cue Edward's standard self-sacrificing departure, a snarky, homicidal Victoria with some powerful connections, and a new Bella who grows a belly and a backbone and goes on her own little hunting trip in Denali to find answers.

Farewell is a twisted tale where everything is not always as it seems. There is an underlying current of betrayal that may knock your socks off on one or two occasions. A FRIENDLY WARNING: This story is not full of fluffy bunnies and rainbows and unicorns. It has the tendency to be very dark, in both drama and humor, on some occasions. If you choose to read, well, welcome to the dark side lovelies...

Special thanks to randigiles for helping me straighten out my synopsis. You rock, babe!

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Charlie, Chelsea, Demetri, Edward, Eleazar, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Irina, Jane, Jasper, Jessica, Kate, Lauren, Marcus, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: No Word count: 214439
[Report This] Published: October 11, 2008 Updated: January 13, 2011


Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Keeping the Blade

MERCIFUL LORD! You might as well kill me! This is FAN-FREAKIN'-TASTIC! I soooo loved Bella telling Edward she was leaving him to his "distractions!" Delicious! I cannot wait for more! Please post more ASAP!

Author's Response:

i'm glad you felt it was delicious. i like that! thank you for your kind words and i shall give my best effort to get another chapter up soon! thanks for the review! :)

 
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: White Horse

My God this is good stuff. Really, really good stuff. So much so that I don't think I can hold out too long for more. Please post more ASAP! Loving every word!

Author's Response: i will certainly post more when i have it written, but as of right now...the next chapter is just an idea in my head...i will attempt to write it out as soon as possible, though so you aren't kept waiting for long...thanks for reading and reviewing!! :)

 
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Revenge

I am completely horrified by the images those last paragraphs infected me with. I know that it's all ok because the baby is "vampire strong" and not going to suffer the abuse and beatings, but it was still very graphic and upsetting. This absolutely NEEDS a kick-ass scene between Edward and Victoria, and one hell of a reunion between our beloved B&E. Our poor Bella deserves it so. Btw, can you please elaborate a bit on when B&E made love on her birthday with some details? It had to have been amazing! Please post more ASAP! That was one hell of a cliffhanger!

 
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 16, 2008 Title: Chapter 15: I'm Jealous

Ok, JASPER BETTER NOT BE DEAD! Please let it just be a "what could happen" before Emmett comes barrelling in and saving the day! If not, then it will completely ruin everything that follows. B&E's reunion, the baby, everything! PLEASE DON'T KILL JASPER! Ok, I'm getting hysterical. I trust you. This fanfic has been nothing short of perfect so far. And I know you'll do wonders with what you've got planned. PLEASE POST MORE ASAP! And DON'T KILL JASPER! For the love of all that's holy! (As Edward said in BD)



Author's Response:

oh no! i don't want it to ruin everything that follows! please do continue to trust me...i PROMISE that everything i do is for a reason and in the end, i think people will understand and be happy. i just hope you continue to read and thank you for reviewing! :)

 
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed half-star
Date: December 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 16: Set Me Free

Sorr. I've been a HUGE fan of all of this....until now. At first I thought it was Jasper who was going to be hurt or die. But I never imagined it would be Emmett. I don't like this. My heart is broken. And I can't possibly see how B&E can have the reunion I was hoping for amidst such sorrow. Even the moment she first opened her eyes was a big let down since it happened at the same time as Emmett's......I can't say it. I can't even think it. I hope this goes another way...somehow. Burned, huh? I don't know how you can bring him back. But you're the writer and I've loved every single word you've written. So I guess I'll trust you with this. For the time being. I'm very upset over here.

Author's Response:

i'm glad the things i have written up until this last chapter were good enough for you to continue on with the story for the time being despite your feelings on this last chapter. even if you have to stop reading the story at some point in the future, i encourage you to read the end. and that's all i'm going to say about that. thank you for the review.

 
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 17: Fire and Rain

I don't know what to write. I think I'm in shock. And I don't know if it's a good shock or a bad one. All I know is that I NEED your next chapter....like NOW! For the love of all that's holy, POST MORE ASAP!!!!

Author's Response:

i'm hoping it's good shock. since you NEED the next chapter, like, yesterday, i will try super hard to get it written quickly. i make no promises, though, because real life does happen...thanks for the review! happy reading! :)

 
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Silence

You are sooo right in that I NEED A SMILE HERE. I don't think I've ever been on such an edge with a fanfiction before. I haven't smiled in this story....well....I can't remember when! PLEASE GIVE US SOMETHING TO BE HAPPY ABOUT SOON! Don't get me wrong....everything is AMAZING. I wouldn't change a single thing (except killing off Emmett...I still cry with that). But I definately need some good news here. By the way, how bandaged up is Bella? Her face too? I'm trying to picture just what Edward sees. Please post more asap! It feels like forever since last time! MORE PLEASE!!! And make it a HAPPY MORE!

Author's Response:

hmmm...bandage around her head from the craniotomy with tendrils of hair sticking through...stitches on her cheek and minor cuts and bruises scattered over the rest of her face. both forearms and hands are wrapped mummy style and her legs are cast and wrapped. i hope that helps with the imagery! sorry it took me soooo long to respond! i'll get to work on that whole smile thing...and i'm hoping to update today...thanks so much for the review! :)

 
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Lightning Crashes

YES! YES! YES!

This could not have been MORE perfect, MORE surreal, or MORE amazing than you made it! HOLY. HELL. It was hearbreaking, suspenseful, and utterly full of love, love, and more love.


Please give us more of Edward's pov! It's so mesmorizing that it leaves me numb with awe.

Oh how I loved it!

Please post more asap! It feels like forever since last you did!

Author's Response:

woohoo...you felt the love! we certainly haven't heard the last from Edward, so have no fear...i only hope what is coming can live up to the standards i apparently set for myself :) i'm sorry it was forever since last time...i shall try not to let it happen again! :)

 
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Lightning Crashes

I'm sorry. I already reviewed this latest chapter. But I've just now realized that I forgot to praise you for Bella naming the baby EMMALIE. It's a combination of EMMETT and ROSALIE, right? Did you mean to factor in Rosalie? If so, it's just beautiful. JUST BEAUTIFUL.

And thank you, thank you, thank you for having Edward change her in the very end. You were merciful in not leaving us with a cliffhanger where Bella was flatlining. That would've been torture.

THANK YOU.

Author's Response:

no apologies needed! you may review as often as you see fit and i won't mind one little bit! i'm very happy that you like the name, and yes, it was a hybrid of emmett and rosalie :) and i'm not gonna lie, the thought did cross my mind to be evil, like i usually am, and end the chapter with bella flat lining, but i was deathly afraid of the angry mob that might attack if i didn't leave at least one chapter balanced more toward the happy side of the scale :) can't wait to update so you can let me know what you think of the next parts! :) happy reading!

 
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Cosmic Love

I am so relieved and thrilled to see you're back to updating! And now I cannot wait to see how Bella will manage to go and 'save' Edward. Please update asap! 



Author's Response:

hey! glad to see your still on board and happy about the update!!! thank you very much for the review(s) (I know you've been a faithful reviewer and that means a lot to me!) and I hope you will enjoy the next update. I'll do my best to be quick about it, but I can't promise you anthing because I really don't want to let you down. until next time, happy reading! :)

 
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Taking Over Me

WHAT A RELIEF YOU HAVEN'T ABANDONED THIS! 

Woman, I was seriously giving this up for dead long ago. And what a great chapter too. I am truly terrified for our beloved Edward now and beg you to please post a new EPOV chapter asap!

 



Author's Response:

Nope, I haven't abandoned it and I never will. It just takes me awhile to write sometimes. I'm very happy to see that you're still reading :) and you'll be happy to learn that the very next chapter is an EPOV so we will get to see how he's doing. I'll do my very best to get it to you by the end of the week. Happy reading!

 
Sleeping to Dream by Somah4 Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 338]
Summary:

 

The newspapers say it all: Bella Swan is dead. But no one is sure why she jumped from the cliffs at First Beach. No one really knows why her body wasn't ever found. But everyone knows her coffin is empty and that the Cullens are back.

 

          


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 61557
[Report This] Published: October 13, 2008 Updated: January 30, 2009


Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed
Date: October 14, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 All Part of the Plan

KEEP 'EM COMING! LOVE IT!

 
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed
Date: October 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Time Stands Still (a glmpse inside Edwards mind)

Oooh. This keeps getting better and better! Keep it coming!

Author's Response: it's comin', it's comin'!

 
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 Goodbye to You

JESUS! You just love to drive us crazy! This is awesome! PLEASE HURRY WITH THE NEXT CHAPTERS! It's one of my fave story lines! WOO-HOO!!!

Author's Response: Wow! I'm so glad you like it so much...makes me feel all warm and fuzzy :) They're coming!

 
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 Crawl Inside My Head With Me

I've just gotta say, I love that for once Bella didn't automatically cave into Edward's apology and made him sweat for a while. I hope that continues on a little, allowing to build up that heat and tension. And the "ooompa-loompa" line, it cracked me up! Please post more ASAP. It's definately one of the best written story lines out there!

Author's Response:

Wow, thanks for your compliments!

There will deifnitley be heat and tension build up! and i never liked that in the book, Bella was able to forgive Edward so quickly. so wants very much to be with him (in my story) but is still sort of wary...

 
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20 New Dynamics

MERCY. MERCY. MERCY! Now THAT was unexpectedly delicious! CANNOT WAIT FOR MORE! Please post more ASAP! I need to cool down now....



Author's Response:

Cold shower! Haha.

Next chapter should be up sooon!

 
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22 Broken

Alas, sadly all GREAT things must eventually come to an end....as will your "Sleeping to Dream". But no worry! It's all amazing, and I am certain that you will give us the ending our Bella and Edward so truly deserve. Their happily ever after! Please post more ASAP!

 
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23 This is Hell

FREAKIN' AWESOME. I don't what else to say. WOW! I loved it! Please post more asap! It's been too long since last you posted! I love it!

 
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25 This Magic

Congratulations on such a magnificent ending to your work. Everything tied up wonderfully in the end. Especially with B&E's pending nuptuals.

Thank you for writing such beauty for our beloved lovers.

BRAVO!!!!

 
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25 This Magic

Congratulations on such a magnificent ending to your work. Everything tied up wonderfully in the end. Especially with B&E's pending nuptuals.

Thank you for writing such beauty for our beloved lovers.

BRAVO!!!!

 
Summary:

Set during New Moon.  Bella didn't jump.  But a vision from Alice sends the Cullens running back to Forks.  What if Bella wasn't the only one who fell apart when she lost the love of her life?  What if Edward couldn't handle being apart?  What if he fell?  How far could he fall?  Who committed the murders at the Swan residence and what happened to Charlie?  Just how bad can it get? 

Read and find out!

Story Banner

Thanks to the amazingly talented Anne Cullen for the Banner.

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Ben, Billy, Brady, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Garrett, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Jessica, Kate, Kim, Lauren, Laurent, Leah, Marcus, Mike, Other Character, Phil, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tanya, Tyler, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No Word count: 77631
[Report This] Published: October 15, 2008 Updated: March 03, 2010


Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed
Date: October 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Resolution

Ok....I'm hooked. Please continue with this quickly. I can't wait. The suspense is awesome!

Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review :)  Glad you like it so far!  I hope you stick around and follow the story.

 




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