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Penname: icrodriguez [Contact]
Real name: Isabel
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Member Since: October 08, 2008
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Amnesia by Siggy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 104]
Summary:

Bella meets the Cullens after being seperated for about 70 years and things aren't what we've known them to be.

Will Bella be able to bring our favourite coven together again? Will she care enough to do so?

Very AU because it VERY loosely follows the plot.


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 18854
[Report This] Published: November 11, 2008 Updated: April 16, 2009


Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: What They've Become

LORD. MERCY. Talk about a cliffhanger! WOO-HOO! Loving it! Please post more ASAP!

Author's Response: CLIFFIES RULE MY WORLD!!! (strangely enough the chaps i give cliffies to rate higher than the ones i don't.... strange lol)

 
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Date: December 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Nothing Like the Past

You're killing me with no EPOV or BPOV! You're so mean! LOL! But I love everyone else's POV. I just can't wait to see what will pull B&E back together. Please post more ASAP!

 
Summary: After his conversation with Jacob, Edward's imagination goes a little wild. Clearly, his mind is his worst enemy.
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2617
[Report This] Published: November 11, 2008 Updated: November 11, 2008


Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

I would love to see what you could do with the conversation between Edward & Bella after his return to her. Is she appalled? Is she shocked by Edward's unbelievable selflessness for her? Please take this to task. I feel like you could do wonders.

Author's Response: I would love to write more Twilight fanfic actually, but alas, my maternity leave is coming to an end, and with a full time job and a baby, I'm afraid that part of my life will be sacrificed. But your kind words might encourage me to write as soon as I have more time.

 
Summary: At the end of New Moon, Charlie and Bella have a little chat about Bella's activities during the three days she was saving Edward's life in Italy. What does this conversation look and sound like to the vampire hiding in the closet?
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Charlie, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3547
[Report This] Published: November 11, 2008 Updated: November 19, 2008


Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Closet Thoughts

FABULOUS. ABSOLUTELY FABULOUS! I can't imagine a better EPOV of this scene. Are you going to continue with more? Please say yes. I haven't felt this satisfied with a fanfiction in a long while. Thank you for that! MORE PLEASE!

Author's Response:

Wow! I haven't gotten a review like that for quite some time. Thank you so much!

I'm not sure if I'll continue this particular one-shot, but I plan on doing more little fics like it- moments of all four Twilight books that I want to hear from Edward's POV. Of course, what with all the forces of the universe getting together to make my life so busy, it probably won't be right away.

 I hope you keep updated.

-Rizandace

("Riz", like Rizzo from Grease, I played her in a musical once.
 "Ace", like the name Logan calls Rory in the show Gilmore Girls")

In case you were wondering, which you probably weren't. Oh well.

 
Mistaken Vows by twi_ction Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 525]
Summary:

Takes place several years after New Moon. AU. Bella never went cliff diving, Edward never went to the Volturi. For years Edward has been forced to live with the pain of Bella’s absence in his life, knowing that it is no one’s fault but his own. How will Edward and his family react when Isabella Swan turns up as one of Carlisle’s intensive care patients and has no where to go? Will the mystery of her condition and the events that she has overcome in Edward’s absence be revealed?


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Other Character, Phil, Quil, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 55312
[Report This] Published: November 12, 2008 Updated: January 17, 2009


Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Now THIS is a good story line. I'm loving it. I can't wait to see where you're going with this! Please post more chapters ASAP!

 
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

The suspense over Bella's fiancee is killing me! Please post more asap!

 
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Be still my throbbing heart! That was amazing! Please post more....ASAP!!!!!!!

 
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

HOLY. LORD. My mouth is still hanging open over here! This is becoming more and more hypnotic with each passing line and each devastating blow. I love it. Please post more asap! I truly love it.

 
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Oh, please end B&E's suffering! And by extension, OURS! This is torture! Sweet torture....but TORTURE still! MORE PLEASE!!!!

 
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I haven't cried this much since....I can't remember. I LOVED IT! Do you understand what I'm saying? I LOVED IT. And I'm so thankful that each of your chapters actually moves the story along at precisely the pace it needs to maintain it's suspense, angst, and longing. I find myself checking 5 times a day for your updates. MY GOD HOW I LOVE THIS! It's become one of my all-time favorites. THANK YOU FOR THAT. Sigh...I've gotta read it again now. Excuse me....sigh.....

 
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

BRAVO, dear girl. BRAVO!

And thank you for such a wonderful story, with such a fitting and romantic ending. It meant a lot to me. Thank you, thank you, thank you.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it!

thanks so much.

 
Summary:

A fluffy, one-shot featuring our favorite vampire family. Post Breaking Dawn. Possible Spoilers. ExB


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1330
[Report This] Published: November 15, 2008 Updated: November 18, 2008


Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh please, oh please, keep going with this. It's beautiful! I had a huge smile on my face the entire time!

Author's Response: You guys are definitely making me want to continue it. Thanks so much for the kind words. 

 
Summary:

 

When Charlie catches Bella and Edward in a compromising position how will he react?

What tactics will Edward and Bella have to resort to in order to get time alone together again?

 

Thanks Mandi for the banner!


Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella, Charlie, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Completed: Yes Word count: 134267
[Report This] Published: November 16, 2008 Updated: December 07, 2009


Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Get Out Now!

Well, now THAT was interesting! It was so incredibly hot! At least it's a scenario that I don't think has been done before. Please keep going with this. This could be a lot of fun!

Author's Response:

Thank you.  Hope that you are still enjoying it, I am having a great time writing it and have enjoyed the overwhelming response!

Thank you for the review.

 
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Um...we were just having sex.

Ok, LOVING it! I had the biggest smile on my face the ENTIRE time I was reading! I just LOVED Edward's POV! His thoughts were so playful That I was absolutely giddy! And his smile at Emmett! Too perfect! Please post more ASAP! 

Author's Response: Yeah...I like to hear that people are enjoying this story.  I was a little worried in the begininng because I have never written anything like this.  Thank you for the wonderful review and I hope you keep enjoying the story as much as I enjoy writing it.

 
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed
Date: November 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Damn...he was just getting fun

I'm loving how playful Edward is, and how excited too! But I'd like to see more of the love he has for Bella, too. This chapter felt like a "quickie" for Edward and Bella, and they are SOOO not the type for that. Can't wait for your next chapters! WOO-HOO!



Author's Response: The love will come more into play later.  At the moment they are just enjoying the high of first sex and exploring.  Horomones are kind of taking over.  More is posted and more is on its way!  Thanks for the review.

 
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Mad hunting skills

This is so much fun that I have the widest, silliest grin on my face the entire time I'm reading! I love it! Please post more ASAP! WOO-HOO EDWARD!

Author's Response: Thanks...what a wonderful review.  I"m so glad that you are enjoying reading it as much as I enjoy writing it.  More is coming soon, hoping to finish it up today so keep an eye out!!  Thanks again for the wonderful review.

 
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Monkey Man

That was hilarious! It had me laughing straight thru! I can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Thank you!!  More has come since then I've just been slow to responding to reviews.  Hope you are still enjoying and I am hard at work on the next chapter!

Thanks again.

 
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: It's going to take more than bars on the window

That was sooo much fun! I just love how playful B&E are together. It's so refreshing after so much drama and suspense. Oh, poor B&E! Emmett's gonna have a field day with them! I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response:

Yes, I figured they deserved to have some fun.  I always tend to write them in some sort of sad story or another. 

Yes, Emmett wants details and he won't be easily deterred! 

Thank you again for taking the time to review!  I appreciate it and am sorry it has taken me so long to respond.

 
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Like Your Surprise?

I can't tell you much fun I have reading this. It makes my day!



Author's Response:

Ah, thank you so much.  This was the week of updates too!  I just added one more so I hope you enjoy!

Thank you again for taking the time to always review, I truly appreciate it and it makes my day.

 
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: You Have Got to Be Kidding Me!

Point of view? EDWARD! Always EDWARD! And by the way, your chapters just keep getting better and better!

Author's Response:

Wow..thanks.  I appreciate that.  Okay, Edward was a clear winner in the POV requests.  Hope you enjoyed it and working on more Edward for the next chapter.

Thank you again for all the amazing reviews.

 
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Vampires Don't Get Nervous

This chapter had me howling in laughter! The funniest one yet!

"An hour, there was no way we had only been gone an hour. It had to have been six at the very least"....LOL!!!!!!

Can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

Thank you.  That was a lot of fun to write.  I just couldn't have Edward be good at this, he had to have some flaws at some point. 

We've all been in those situations where time just seemed to stand still.  I couldn't even imagine being stuck out on a lake with my human girlfriends father.  Poor guy.

Thank you again for taking the time to review. 

 
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: The Feisty Badger

Each chapter is more delicious than the next!

Btw, what is the time frame here? Post Eclipse? Pre-engagment? Hmmm....just curious.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  Glad you enjoyed that chapter.

The time frame is pre Eclipse.  No engagement..yet.

Thanks again for the review!

 
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: A Vampire and a Werewolf Walk Into a Bar

I'm roaring in laughter! "Edward entered the room at that moment, laughing. I don’t think I had ever actually heard him laugh before. It was a bit disturbing. He abruptly stopped laughing and sat down in the living room. Alice excused herself in order to get things ready for dinner and I sat there in silence." The pictures in my head are hilarious!


"We all nodded discreetly and then went to work. Food was flying over everyone’s shoulder. Thankfully we were outside or else Esme would have killed us for defiling her home. At one point I had to stifle a laugh when Alice got a bit overexcited and flung a whole potato over her shoulder almost taking out the window behind her. " - Again, LOL!!!!!!

I want more!

 
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 34: What's Behind The Door

That had to be the most romantic proposal I've read yet from Edward! JUST BEAUTIFUL! 

 
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Forever

I vote for either Alice or Edward. WOO-HOO!

 




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