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Penname: icrodriguez [ Contact]
Real name: Isabel
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Member Since: October 08, 2008
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Summary: Music can be quite the aphrodisiac, even for vampires. When Edward shares his passion for classical music with Bella, they discover a whole new world together just weeks before their nuptials. Set at the beginning of Breaking Dawn.
Winner of "Best use of Music as Inspiration - Complete" at the Twilight Indie Awards!

Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes
Word count: 78097
[Report This] Published: November 02, 2008 Updated: April 14, 2009
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed    
Date: January 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Offenbach
JOY! JOY! JOY! JOY!
Oh how I loved it! This was the most "fun" of all your chapters yet! You KNOW that I've been a devoted fan to your "MUSIC LESSONS". It's been my absolute favorite since chapter 1. So I just have to say that I was completely and amusingly surprised at the nature of this chapter. It was carefree, freeing, and delightful. It served to bring humor and playfulness to our B&E's lives before the wedding. Oh how I loved this! Everyone's part in it was sooo true to canon...their reactions, their myrth. Just pure joy.
And I thank you for interjecting those delicious moments of lust, fire, and love between our B&E. They were subtle, yet managed to underline the entire chapter with their happiness.
I'm in utter suspense for your next chapter. I can't tell you how much I love this. Bliss. Pure and utter bliss!
Author's Response: As always, thank YOU for your great, funny reviews - I love them! :) Glad you liked this chapter - it was a bit out of left-field from the rest of the story, but I couldn't get it out of my head! I think you'll really like the next chapter(s)...there's one, final music lesson planned that will probably span a few chapters, since it's quickly spinning out of control in length! Hopefully it'll do the story just as a truly "final" ending. Thanks again for the review!
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed    
Date: January 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Bernstein
OH HAPPY DAY! You updated and it's gonna be more than one chapter! More than two? How many wonderful chapters are we talking here? I'm just trying to excite myself as mush as possible here.
Let me just say that what I always love most about your work is how you permit our beloved B&E to just be happy. They're so excited about getting married, and so genuinely thrilled over each other that you allow us to revel in their happiness. What sweet relief,
Each new venture is more passionate, more carefree, and more uplifting than the previous.
Your latest chapter is a perfect culmination of all those. I just adore how much Edward needs Bella. And I absolutely love how willing Bella is to enjoy herself before the wedding. In BD, you never fully got the feeling of her bliss, only nervousness.
But with your writing, we can live THROUGH Bella, enjoying her love for Edward and excitement. Thank you so much for this.
I'm dying to see what you have in store for our favorite lovers. If I know you and you're writing, it's going to be fabulous. And oh so tempting....(I just got a shiver down my spine....and nothing's even happened yet! LOL! See what power you have!)
Please post more asap! The suspense is crippling! (But oh so good!)
Author's Response: Ah, my favorite Twilighted reviewer! :) I am always so excited to get your wonderful reviews - they make my day!
Yes, there's still another chapter (or two, or three) in the works. I don't have a set limit on them yet, BUT, this will probably be the final act for our beloved couple. The chapter count will depend entirely on how their little trip goes....so far, so good!
Thank you for the kind words regarding their happiness. I couldn't agree more - we got so few glimpses into the two of them being "truly" happy together in the books, that it left me craving more. I absolutely loved the Edward we saw briefly in Twilight after the meadow scene, or the Edward in Eclipse after Bella formally accepted his proposal...it's as addicting as heroin (or so Edward tells us!) Though I love his angsty-side, I leave all of that for my other, ongoing story.
I also agree with you on Bella's wedding bliss. Though I don't think she was ever a "born to be a bride" type of girl, she would undoubtedly be at least a little excited - especially when she's marrying Edward! Hello! Plus, I think she's enjoying her newfound "power" over Edward and his carnal desires...
I will do my best to post as quickly as possible....and, as always, thank you VERY MUCH for your awesome reviews! :)
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed    
Date: January 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Debussy Pt. 2
I am forever in love. This story has come to be the one I judge all others against. I love it THAT much. And this latest chapter is exactly why.
It had everything. Romance, lust, humor, and most importantly...suspense. And not the kind we usually get with B&E. This suspense is fueled by the ever growing and massing need between our favorite lovers. And it's this suspense that drives this story, pushing B&E's limits to a brink that is both tempting and utterly delicious.
What I love most, though, is how Edward is at his Bella's mercy. Very rarely did we ever get to see this in S. M.'s work. It was most often the other way around, Bella depending on Edward for not just her protection, but her heart's life in itself.
With MUSIC LESSONS, we are able to savor an Edward that not only needs and craves his Bella physically, but an Edward whose very life thrives on her love for him. It humbles him, makes him nervous, makes him excited and terrified all at once. He lives on her every word, breathes in time to the beats of her heart, and tenses in exictement at her very touch. This is all a thrill to me. To see that Edward BELONGS to Bella, just as much as Bella BELONGS to him.
Every word you write is the sweetest form of release for them. You create moments for them that just perfect enough to render them speechless, forcing them to bend willingly to the rapture that awaits them with each new chapter.
And my dear, I cannot wait for more. And I'm certain that neither can they.
Author's Response: Okay, you get two awards tonight. The first is for being the first one to review the latest chapter (yay!)
But the second is for writing the NICEST review of all time. Seriously - I'm about to start crying right now!! I always look forward to your kind and insightful reviews, but this one is just heads and shoulders above the rest. I feel just like Edward right now - giddy, excited, nervous....because someone likes the story as much as I do! I can't describe how cool of a feeling that is when you realize someone really gets what you're trying to convey. I love Edward and Bella so much, that I feel like their story is just so relatable (even though I've never been on such a boat, or been a vampire's sweetheart). I think that's what draws so many of us in to their relationship, along with their undying love for one another.
Thank you again for all of your GREAT reviews - I can't begin to tell you how much I appreciate them. Stay tuned for more chapters...they're both just not quite ready to walk down that aisle yet....at this point, there's a good 36 hours left on that boat.... :)
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed    
Date: February 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Brahms & Liszt
WOMAN. WOMAN. WOMAN. What kind of she-devil are you? How is it that you wield around your magic so masterfully? Every single chapter is more romantic, more passionate, and more angst ridden than the previous! It's all so incredibly beautiful and true to character that I can barely still my trembling hands and stuttering heart. Oh what you do to me!
I think this chapter is in a word...perfect. B&E are so dangerously dangling on the edge of that cliff that I can literally feel that tension and desperation they are feeling. It's torturous, yet DIVINE!
And, I don't think I've ever thanked you for this, but THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU for having always made this an EPOV story. We all aleady know the mind of Bella and her thoughtful ways. We know her as well as we know ourselves. But it's EDWARD that intoxicates us. Ever since S. Meyer released her MIDNIGHT SUN, Edward has gone from being a complete (yet sexy) mystery, to the most interesting and enticing character ever (in my opinion, anyway). And you write him so majestically, and yet with such humility, that he truly every bit as seductive and alluring as Bella knows him to be.
The danger for full surrender is extremely potent now for B&E. What is to come will test their resolve in a way that can only be described as agony. But as it is written. with the greatest agony comes the greatest ecstasy. Isle Esme is that ecstasy.
Btw, I know that there a few days left in your time line here before the wedding. I've lost count how many though. But I was hopefully wondering if you were planning on writing the Wedding Night? (I cringe in my hope..) It just seems that all this exquisite build up has just got to be released in this story! And you would write it like no other! Think of the music possibilities! Oh God....the ways you write Edward....it would eclipse all other translations of that night. Please consider it. What a way to honor our beloved B&E with the love scene they so desperately deserve and need,,,,and by extension us!
(PS: I can't tell you how grateful I am for your "music lessons", I've got a whole playlist titled "Music Lessons" that I listen to constantly. You've introduced me to the beauty of classical music and I thank you for it. I'm truly, truly grateful!)
Author's Response: Okay, I literally had to step away from my desk and hide in the bathroom - dude, you made me almost cry (but in a good way)! Your reviews are so incredibly nice...thank YOU very much! If no one else liked the story, I'd still continue it just for you - honestly! :)
(deep breath. I'm okay now) First off, thank you for saying the story hasn't lost any of it's momentum yet - I've been very worried that since the true bulk of the story ended chapters ago, I was just stringing it along and it'd lose some of it's luster. But I"m so glad that it's still working for the reader. With that said, honestly, I'm going to have to end it after the boat trip because that will get them to within about three days of the wedding, and well all know what happens then (Renee's in town, Bella's commandeered by Esme/Alice/Renee 24/7, Edward gets dragged off on a bachelor party their last night together before the wedding, etc). As of now, there's no plans to do the wedding from Edward's POV. I've read so many great fanfics with others already doing it, that I'd rather stick to something more unique and fresh. But never say never - I could change my mind, so I'll leave it at that for now!
Edward's POV - for me personally, I prefer stories to stick to one POV. Sure, there's a handful of times when it's necessary to switch (temporarily), but I'm just not a big fan of going back and forth. Besides, with Edward's POV you usually get the other's perspectives/thoughts anyway with his talent, and in this case, we all know Bella well enough to figure out what's going on in her head. I'm glad others appreciate the one POV aspect of the story. I have no plans to change that.
Hopefully the climax (pardon the pun) of their "excursion" leaves everyone happy and satisfied....that's all I can say right now. It's loosely mapped out, but things can always change a little. I can say this - there will be a reason why Bella (in Breaking Dawn) could think of nothing more than getting up that aisle, into his arms, and then off on the honeymoon as quickly as possible! ;)
Finally, I'm so glad you like the music - I owe my beta, Emilie a HUGE thanks on these bonus chapters and the ending of the main portion of the story for her suggestions. I love all of the songs that are in here, and it's exciting to hear that others are getting into it as well. I can't think of any music being more romantic than a classical symphony or concerto or solo piece or opera - hopefully that comes across in the story.
Thank you so much again - now my response is as long as your review! :) Stay tuned...there's still more to come. 36 hours worth to be exact. 36 LONG hours from Edward's perspective.....
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed    
Date: February 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Liszt Pt. 2
Sometimes I can't get over just how incredible this is. And how incredibly happy it makes me. I know that I celebrate your writing all the time. I even think I repeat myself sometimes. I just can't seem to find the words to convey why I love M.L. so much.
But here, tonight, I think I've had an epiphany. You see, I read dozens and dozens of fanfictions in a week. I follow them with dedication, and some almost religiously. What I realized is that most (if not all) of these are either all filled with angst, suffering, drama, horror, comedy, or all of the above. And few actually make me happy. And I mean jus that...happy.
But with M.L., I find that happiness in every single word you conjure up for our beloved B&E. When I get the notice that you'v updated with a new chapter, my heart actually jumps for joy because I KNOW that I'm about to experience something completely wonderful again. And here's the kicker: ALL TRUE TO CANON.
I don't need to jump into any parallel universe. I can live and breathe the glory of S,Meyer's work, and do so in this wonderful story you have created. S. Meyer, herself, would be tickled pink with pride.
Your Edward is OUR Edward. He is the same romantic, inexperience, nervous, gentlemanly, and oh so sexy Edward we've all fallen in love with. His voice in MIDNIGHT SUN echoes beautifully in M.L. And you manage to stay so true to character that it is for this very reason that my heart stutters over every divine scene.
The music, the gentle rocking of the boat, the sounds of heavy breathing, the weight of each moment's tantalizing gravity....it's all Heaven on Earth. And oh, how I love it, woman.
I. LOVE. IT. (Almost as much as I love Edward. I said almost. Edward is...well....sigh....EDWARD).
I cannot wait for more. Seriously, it's all kinds of wonderful. I bow to it in reverance. And once again, I sigh....
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you THANK YOU again.....my favorite Twilighted reviewer! :)
Sometimes I get the impression that the readers are not only wanting, but expecting the Edward in this story to make up for Edward's faults in the book, including his over-protectiveness, self-doubt, and tendency to go angsty on us at any given time. But what always drew me to the Edward we read about in SM's work WAS his faults - to me, that's what made him more perfect and so utterly real. Sure, I was going nuts by the end of Eclipse just like everyone else and pissed as hell at Bella for turning down his offer in the meadow (when Edward finally cracks). BUT, I was still quite happy with the majority of the events/plot in the series, and I wanted to embellish on that without changing the characters. Sort of write the parts that might have gotten edited out simply because there wasn't room for them.
With that said, I really appreciate it when readers recognize that although Edward desperately wants to get more physical with Bella, he's absolutely terrified to do so. Which brings me to the cell phone (by the way, THANK YOU for not commenting on that!)...I think it's terribly obvious why he'd leave it on this entire time if you think about the Edward in the books. AND if you think about Alice's character in the books, she's doing exactly what she would have done in the original canon - a combination of looking out for their best interests, yet also slightly meddling. And I would like to think that if SM ever read this, she wouldn't roll her eyes, gag, and vow never read fan-fic again for the butchery of her characters and story.
I'm really glad you're still happy with the story...I hope I can continue to do it justice as it slowly nears the end (gosh, I hate that word!). As always, thank you very very much for the reviews - I've loved them all! :)
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed    
Date: February 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: Hovhaness
How is it possible that this just gets better and better? TWENTY-TWO chapters and you still out-do yourself, over and over! I wish there were some way you could get a medal or something for this.
Where do I begin? I love everything about this. Your music selections have introduced me to a world of classical music that I had never know before. And to listen to it as I read along is more wonderful than I can say.
It's almost a magical feeling to be listening to the same soaring melodies and notes that our beloved B&E are hearing as we read along.
I will say this. You had me ROARING in laughter with, "Threaten all you want, Edward, but you don't scare me. You were right, you know...about the wager? Jasper and Emmett are sitting here, swapping rolls of cash as I update them on your future. Rosalie has even set up a board, complete with the changing point spread and side bet opportunities." And that Carlisle and Tanya were involved had me crying! It was a much needed hilarity among those heated and lustful moments between B&E.
Your writing is so wonderfully descriptive and vivid. that I find it requires no effort at all in living the scenes with B&E.
Just a quick question (I think I ask this all the time..sorry)....what's the time line here until the wedding? Edward said days. What? Little more than a week? San Francisco happened with 2 weeks to go to the wedding. Just curious.
I can't wait to see what the next 36 hours hold for our lovers. And those days ahead too!
You're killing me woman! I love this like no other. Sigh....
Author's Response: Thank you! But man, I'm getting nervous that the ending isn't going to be enough for you...I hope I don't disappoint!
An answer to your question - they're about 4 days or so out from the wedding. Maybe 5. Alice would only let them go if Edward promised to have Bella back a few days prior so she could do the final fittings, plans, etc. Plus, Renee will be in town shortly, so Bella needs to be around for that. Sorry about the ambiguity regarding the timeline. As for their time on the boat, this chapter ends at about 7 or 8am, so they've got roughly 24 hours left before they need to head back to Forks.
Glad you liked the betting bit - on one hand, it must really, REALLY suck to be Edward and to be on the receiving end of so many jokes and pranks. But on the other, that would be one fun family to hang with! :) I'd love to see all of them go to Vegas for a weekend - now that would be funny! :)
As always, thank you very much for the great review - hope you caught Rob Patt in all of his hotness at the Oscars Sunday night. I taped all the preshow stuff and the event and watched it last night. Sigh. His hair is growing back so wonderfully...that boy is just too darn good looking. Can't wait for New Moon to come out!
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed    
Date: March 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 23: Smetana
I find it amazing that I come away so happy and completely satisfied after every single chapter. I'm either grinning like a fool, panting in lustful heat, or sighing in a blissful slumber. This chapter had me floating in all three!
I can't say anything i haven't told you countless times already. I love this. EVERY. SINGLE. WORD.
Sheer Heaven is what it is. And B&E deserve nothing less. I exhale in complete surrender.
Author's Response: As always, THANK YOU for all of your kind words! And I promise to turn up the heat in the next chapter once they're safely anchored in Griffin Bay. Then Edward won't have anything else to occupy his time with, except Bella and her flirting. Gosh, I feel so bad for those two......not!
Thanks again for all of the reviews - I always smile when I read them, and they make my day! :)
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed    
Date: March 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 24: Schubert
WOMAN, another masterpiece! It's always amazing to me how wonderfully erotic and yet, romantic, every single moment is in your story. Your writing truly is something of a wonder. I've known that you updated since early this afternoon. But, I waited until I got home, put my daughter down for the night, kissed my husband goodnight, and settled down in front of my computer before I immersed myself once again in the one of my all time favorite fan-fictions ever. I just had to be completely devoted to the moment. I love it that much.
The foot massage was an ingeniou idea. It never ceases to amaze me how you manage to devise new and enticing experiences for our beloved B&E. This one took me by complete suprise.
I love your music selections. They always flow so wonderfully with the scenes at hand. Just masterful writing, my Dear.
I can't wait to read more. B&E have only a few hours left together, alone and away from what awaits them. I pray it will be magical. What am I thinking? Of course it will! At your hand, Heaven itself will rain down upon them with sheer and utter bliss.
You love them so. It's obvious. And I'm right there with you. Sigh....
Author's Response: As always, thank you very much for your fun reviews! I always look forward to getting them - they put such a goofy smile on my face that people think I must be doing something illegal on the computer at work! ;)
The story is winding down - only a few chapters left, then it's all done. I'm really sad that it'll be coming to an end, but at the same time, it frees up quite a bit of my time to devote to new stories (not to mention, life outside the world of fanfic and Twilight!)
I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter - it'll only get more intense from here on out as B&E take advantage of their little bit of "alone time". What I wouldn't give to be Bella right now.....
Thank you again - I REALLY appreciate it! :)
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed    
Date: March 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 25: Beethoven
I am seriously about to combust, implode, expode...ALL AT ONCE! The sexual tension you create is so hungry and yet, comforting, that it constantly leaves me in a state of complete surprise.
Let me explain. The hunger that B&E have for eachother is sublime. You never push things to a point that their characters abandon their Canon counterparts. It never feels rushed or forced. What it does is build up this delicious sense of need and want, all laced with B&E's love and passion. We're given this fleeting moment to savor the beauty of what B&E share with one another. And I thank you for that.
As for how this is comforting, well, in all honesty, it brings much needed relief from the angst, desperation, and urgency we most often endure with other fanfictions. Not that we don't want to experience all of that. These feelings themselves are wanted by us. But it is your "MUSIC LESSONS" that let's us BREATHE. We inhale and exhale, all in a silent whisper of praise to the magic you've given our beloved B&E. It is utter relief and sheer bliss.
And so in my whisper, I once again sing your praise. Exhale...
Author's Response: And why aren't you writing your own fanfic again? Seriously - if you write reviews like this, you should be writing stories too! ;)
Again, thank you very much, from the bottom of my heart. Today's my bday, and nothing can start the day off better than reading your reviews. I'm so glad the chapter squeaked by and got validated last night (thanks again Vjgm!), because now I spend the better part of the workday just responding to reviews and dreaming of Edward.....tickling....hand-feeding....yum.
I really hope I don't disappoint you when this ends...because there's going to be a bit of a twist to the ending (to keep it in canon), and I really hope it doesn't offend or piss anyone off. BUT, as of now, I'll also write an AU ending to appease all of the readers who have been begging for B&E to give in and "just do it already!"
Thanks as always - hope you had a Happy St. Pattys!
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed    
Date: March 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 26: Grieg
LOL! So is THIS the "twist" you mentioned? LOL! I find it fascinating how seemlessly the scene flowed from seductive to giddy with laughter. When Bella left and told Edward to "stay here", I seriously thought she was going to change into something sexy. But then when she chucked the phone overboard......THAT'S OUR GIRL!!!!!!
I love that it was Bella that finally put Alice in her "place" (poor sweet Alice!)! Even Edward had to double over in laughter at the realization that she had braved to do what he could not!
But oh no! She slipped and is now probably hurt, right? Can't be too hurt since she's not hurt in canon during the wedding, which is only 4 short days away now.
For sure, this took the heat out of the moment much like it happened in Seattle when Bella screamed "I'm freezing!" as Edward was seducing her. And it's just as delicious a cliffhanger as ever!
Maybe at least "some" boundaries can be crossed by them before reality checks in again? Poor B&E, they're gonna spontaneously combust soon! And us along with them!
I'm soooo gonna love that BOOM! Woo-hoo!
Damnit Woman! I just LOVE your stuff! (I'm obviously very excited tonight since I'm ecstatic that MUSIC LESSONS has NEVER ONCE disappointed me. So freakin' rare in the fanfic world!)
Can't wait for more, Love! The suspense is wonderfully painful!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the "twist". I thought it'd be so obvious, especially after I told everyone that Edward was incapable of destroying the phone himself. It's great to hear that it still surprised some of you! There were a few different versions of the phone going overboard before this one made the cut, but I think this way is my favorite... :)
Yes, you're right - obviously Bella won't be in traction or have any other "significant" injury that will impact the wedding. BUT - Edward's definition of a "serious" injury may be a bit different than Bella's.....and remember the canon of Breaking Dawn. I can't stress that enough.....
That's all I can say for now, or I'll give too much away. But hopefully the ending appeases most of the readers (I'm well aware of that old saying "You can please some of the people all of the time, some of the people some of the time, but never all of the people all of the time." Therefore I'm not setting my sights too high...)
Thank you again for your wonderful reviews - they're always my favorite to respond to out here! I have a busy week ahead, but look for the next update FOR SURE by early next week - unless I get stuck at JFK on Thursday night and they have wireless. Then you might get lucky and get a chapter earlier than planned....
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed    
Date: March 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 27: Rachmaninoff
You did it. You actually did it. You’ve managed to end MUSIC LESSONS with the same love, need, devotion, and all consuming want that has blessedly graced every single one of its glorious chapters. And my heart is broken that it’s ended at all.
I can’t begin to tell you how rare, if not impossible, it is to come across a fanfiction that is as completely satisfying as is “ML”. NEVER ONCE did I ever think to myself “now THAT wouldn’t’ happen”, or “B/E would NEVER do/say that”, or even “this just ruined it for me”. I’m still in awe at what you have achieved. And I so thank you for it all.
I admit that I was nervous about the “twist” you were going to pull in the end. Never uncertain of you, mind you. Never uncertain. I’ve always had 100% faith in your work. But I was nervous at how you were going to pull off an ending that would fit the canon of the saga, and yet be able to stand alone in it’s creativity and worth. Again, I salute you!
Bella’s fall was just right for the moment. And Edward’s subsequent remorse, self-flagellation, and inner turmoil were PERFECTLY written and true to character. I was heartbroken for them. I felt and shared Bella’s disappointment and self blame for “ruining the moment”. I understood Edward’s newly resurrected fear of hurting his Bella. And most fiercely, I reveled in their determination to overcome all the obstacles, uncertainties, and fears they had in order to consummate their love. Their NEED to consummate their love is based not only on lust and desire, but their ever-growing desperation to physically demonstrate to the other, once and for all, just how much they loved and cherished them. They had already spoken every word to declare their undying love to each other. They had already demonstrated to one another the inability to live without each other. And they had already cemented their future together in their commitment to marry and be joined forever through Bella’s eventual change. Their hearts were well aware of all this. But their bodies would now demand affirmation of this commitment.
“It felt like time stood still as we carefully moved forward, kissing, caressing - falling slowly into the opium of our passion.” “ This will ring true through all time for B&E. And it is thanks to you that they were allowed to share such pure, innocent, romantic, and dizzying moments of sheer bliss together. I thank you, thank you, thank you for that.
Truly, you wrote something that is just lovely. A beautiful tribute to our beloved Bella and Edward. And now, I genuflect in your honor. We all do.
BRAVO! BRAVO! BRAVO!
Author's Response: Thank you VERY much.....your reviews really do mean a lot to me! I'm so glad you liked the ending....it was sad having Edward do and say what he did, but it was true to his nature - even if some of us didn't agree with it! I really think this is what would have happened, and what could have derailed their "boundary extending" right before the wedding (as well as make Edward freak out so badly on the honeymoon). Just my opinion of course, but it seemed plausible in my mind....
Now, onto the good stuff (or the hair-pulling stuff for me)...the alternate ending. I probably won't have any nails left after writing it, but I'll give it my best shot!
Thank you again for all of your heartfelt reviews - I have enjoyed reading and responding to every one of them! :)
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed    
Date: March 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 27: Rachmaninoff
And now I CANNOT WAIT for those outtakes! The betting back at the Cullens’ will be a riot! If it’s ANYWHERE NEAR the hilarity of “Offenbach” (your food fight chapter!), then we’re in for one hella of a time! And truly, while I adore the fact that you held ML to canon, I am desperate to read your alternate ending to B&E’s “union”!
BTW, are you really going to do the wedding and honeymoon? Because if you are, dear sweet woman, you have just made me happier than I can possibly convey. Your meticulous dedication to staying true to character and to canon is something that will undoubtedly lend beauty and majesty to the enormity of these moments for B&E. I tingle with excitement at just the anticipation of such a possibility! Please say you will and in doing so, allow B&E to breathe in that relief that only comes with your writing.
Say it so, sweet lady!
Author's Response: Okay, I realized people were misintepreting what I meant in my end-note on this chapter. My bad - so sorry!
Let me clarify - as of now, I am writing the betting scene back at the house as an out-take, as well as an AU version of the last chapter. However, I am not writing the wedding/honeymoon. What I meant in the note was that everyone kept asking me to do it (meaning, everyone wanted to see B&E consummate the relationship), so instead of doing that, I was going to do the AU chapter instead. I apologize for any confusion around that ambigiously worded paragraph, and I already went out and fixed it so others don't think the same thing!
Now then, with that said - if you want to see the wedding/honeymoon done, I'll do it....IF you win the "Support Stacie" auction!
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed    
Date: April 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 28: AU Ending - Rachmaninoff
BEAUTIFUL. ROMANTIC. ABSOLUTELY DIVINE. This was sheer Heaven. You have given our beloved B&E a wonderful gift...the gift of surrender. At long, long last they have come to know the beauty of what it is to succumb to fate and surrender their needs to each other. And it was done so romantically. Just gorgeous writing, my dear.
"As she pledged her love to me again within a breathless cry, I felt myself fall to pieces, my apocryphal soul unchained at last and rising from the ashes of my self-exiled existence. It floated above my physical body, marveling at the beauty of our conjoined limbs, but even more so at the tangibility of our everlasting love. Sighing deeply, and with the purest purport, I laid my forehead against hers, drinking in her intoxicating breath and feeding her mine."- I have never read such a delicately poetic illustration of their physical release before. It moved me to tears. I truly, truly loved it. Thank you so, so much for that.
I cannot wait to read your "Betting with the Cullens" chapter (or story if it's a seperate side-shot). That in it of itself is going to be thrill to read.
But as you well know, my heart lays in anxious waiting for my win of your rendition of the wedding and honeymoon. And believe it or not, I can't wait to see what music choices you decide to lace the soundtrack of the wedding ceremony and reception with.
Oh, sweet Lady, I can only imagine the majesty that will come to be. B&E can't possibly anticipate the beauty that is to come for them through you. Even our Alice would bow to your hand!
I loved this AU to MUSIC LESSONS. But I adored your original ending. The fact that they held on to each other and weathered the storm that was their passion in order to preserve the magic of their wedding night, is what I think serves as the epitome of B&E's love. It transcends all things, even their lust (as consuming as it is). Their love is stronger than anything else....ever. And THAT is why their need for each other frames the EPIC love story that is their fate, their destiny, their forever.
Bravo, my dear. I wait with bated breath for what I know is to come....BLISS. God speed.
Author's Response: Thank you very much - but I'm still sitting here wondering when you're going to write something! Your reviews alone are reason enough to take the plunge and write your own fanfic! I'll be the first to read it - trust me! ;)
I'm glad you liked the AU chapter - call this the "test run" for your story. I'll be in touch about ideas/music suggestions...
I really like the original ending too, because it really sets the stage for the wedding and the honeymoon in the books. Plus, they waited that long - might as well wait another 72 hours, right? But it was fun to skew their universe a bit and see what would happen if they gave in AND if Edward was able to be with her without hurting her (though I completely respect and understand why that happened, I can't help but secretly wish that it'd happen this way too).
Again, thank you for all of the WONDERFUL and fun reviews....it's sad to see the story end, but we still have the betting out-take and your story to dove-tail into this one. I think I'm posting both of them as separate stories/one-shots. Thanks again! :)
Summary: Edward & Bella take an interesting ride on a roller coaster during their first summer together. But will the emotional highs of the ride carry over to their relationship? Set between Twilight & New Moon.

Categories: Twilight, New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes
Word count: 6744
[Report This] Published: November 02, 2008 Updated: November 02, 2008
Summary: The time had come for us to relocate. Again. I’d caught a few stray thoughts from several of the wary, yet still exceptionally unobservant humans, who seemed to find it odd that in the seven years of living here we seemed to lack the aging gene.

15 years have passed since Renesmee was born, and now the Cullens are relocating. Renesmee, Jacob and Bella experience the high school charade for the first time with the rest of the family. But what happens when Jacob wants to start a little bet?
Edward's POV at first, though it might change in later chapters. First Twilight fanfiction, so please read and review.
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No
Word count: 21887
[Report This] Published: November 04, 2008 Updated: December 27, 2008
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed    
Date: November 07, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Preparations
WONDERFUL. I can't wait for more chapters. Your writing is just that,,,,wonderful. Please post more chapters ASAP. I wait in baited breath...
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm very flattered. Chapter 2 has been submitted, just waiting for validation now. :)
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed    
Date: November 09, 2008
Title: Chapter 2: It's On...
MORE! MORE! MORE! I've WAITED & WAITED for someone to write something so fun like this! Oh you're gonna have a blast writing this, but nowhere near as much fun as we are gonna have reading it! Please post more chapters ASAP! It's just too fabulous! Woo-hoo!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm just editing the third chapter, then I have a much longer chapter ready to unleash on you all. As soon as I've finished writing the chapter I'm working on now, I'll submit the next chappie. =)
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed    
Date: November 09, 2008
Title: Chapter 2: It's On...
Oh! One more thing! I love that it's in EPOV! I don't know why, but his POV is always so much fun! I hope you keep a lot of it EPOV! Woo-hoo!
Author's Response: At the moment I am planning on keeping it EPOV, because he reads minds so he knows everything thats going on! It also makes for longer chapters. And cause hes just so fun! ^.^
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed    
Date: November 13, 2008
Title: Chapter 3: Gossip
You are KILLING ME HERE! I laughed out loud like 5 times, and then went back to re-read it over and over again! I love it! You are obviously having so much fun with this! And may I say, that I'm thrilled that for ONCE (in all of the fanfictions I've ever read!) it's been made that Bella & Edward's passion and lust was greater than Emmet's & Rosalie's! It's only common sense that it would be, too! Finally someone got it right! And it's you! Please post more chapters ASAP! I'm totally loving this and checking for updates constantly! Author's Response: I gotta say, I look forward to your reviews everytime I update. I agree with you re: the edward/bella vs rosalie/emmett lust thing. SMeyer implied it in the book, where she mentions personally Bella thought it would last longer than a decade, and so I wanted to illustrate that point. What's the most epic love story every without a healthy dose of lust? And yes, I am having a really fun time with this. Just you wait until they start lessons eh eh eh I try to keep a couple chapters ahead before I update, so the next chapter might take a little longer (what with school almost over for the year), especially since I'm making the next one much longer than any of the chapters you've read so far. And now that I've written way too much in an Author's Response, I'll get back to writing the next chapter!
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed    
Date: December 09, 2008
Title: Chapter 5: Urge
YAY! YAY! YAY! I am so thrilled you updated! It felt like forever! AMAZING chapter by the way! I was laughing hysterically with Edward being tackled by Alice, then Emmett! It was priceless, and honestly, caught me completely by surprise. I never envisioned it like that and wow, I'm so glad! It had me roaring! LOL! I love it when it's EPOV & BPOV. EPOV is my absolute favorite. Not only can he hear and project to us everyone's thoughts, but it's, well....EDWARD! Anything EPOV is always the best route to go. So I implore you to keep going with EPOVs. But I would also like to see maybe a Jasper POV, then maybe Emmett? Jacob or Nessie is alright, too. But they're just not in on what's going on with B&E, so I feel like we'd miss out on a lot (unless you figure out a way to go around that!). Anyway you go, it's all AMAZING and the most fun I've had with a fanfiction EVER! It's one of my absolute favorite "after BD" stories. Please post more ASAP! (Btw, I hope we get to see some "action" as the day turns into night! It would be cruel to not! LOL!)
Author's Response: I'm so thrilled that you're thrilled! I agree about the POV thing, and most of the fiction will be Edward's perspective. I'm thinking I may throw Bella into the mix occasionally, but Edward can narrate for all the characters, including Jake/Ness.
Regarding 'action', I'm actually a bit unsure of how much to include. I've never written a lemon before (well I've written a tame one-shot, but haven't submitted it), so for one thing it wouldn't be nearly half as good as all the others on this site, and for another, the rating of the story is actually PG13 (at the moment, anyway). You know, you've actually brought up a good point, I'll make sure to ask people what they think in my next chapter. Which I will be updating soon, btw.
I've finished it and all I have to do now is a bit of editing. It should be up tomorrow or the next day.
Reviewer: icrodriguez Signed    
Date: December 19, 2008
Title: Chapter 6: Observe
I loved this chapter! But I have a couple of questions. When exactly was it that Jasper was manipulating B&E's lust for eachother? Just in the cafeteria? I hope so. 'Cause that would mean that their lust wasn't exactly as poweful as it seemed. And THAT would be disappointing. Also, how exactly is Bella gonna get back at Emmett? That could be fun!
As for a lemon possibility....GO FOR IT! It's just that it almost seems like you have to since you've set it up that B&E's lust for eachother is actually WORSE than Rose and Emmett! They need some kind of "release"! Or they'll explode! But you don't have to go too graphic or anything, if it makes you uneasy or nervous to write it. Rated R is just fine, even though B&E seem like they're more than ready for some NC-17 action as soon as that bell rings for the end of the day! And to think they've got 4 more days to endure, right? Are you going to do the rest of their week? You can set up soooo many scenarios! Swimming (like you mentioned), field trips, movies in class, etc! Also, we've just gotta see who cracks first! Nessie & Jake or B&E!
Whichever way you go, it's still the most fun I've ever had in reading a fanfiction! Definately one of my all-time post BD missing moments! I LOVE IT ALL! Please post more asap, and Merry Christmas!
Summary: The trauma suffered by Bella for three years has left lasting mental scars. Esme and Carlisle are finally offered the chance to be true parents to a teenager that needs them. Surrounded by the support and love of the Cullen family, Bella begins to grow and finds out there is more to life than simply surviving.

Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No
Word count: 91654
[Report This] Published: November 04, 2008 Updated: August 19, 2009
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