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Penname: pixieyow [Contact]
Real name: Jenna
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Member Since: October 07, 2008
Website: jennaandcameron.blogspot.com
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So I started reading Twilight because of all the stuff on facebook I saw about it and the girls in the youth group I work with were obessessed with it....I am so glad my curiousity got the best of me!  

I bought the first book and read it in two days...rushed to the store and bought New Moon and read it in two days and then I rushed out and bought Eclipse and Breaking Dawn and finsihed them both before the week was out.  I was working all day during the day (I was on summer break from college) and then I would stay up all night reading...it was awesome.


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Seducing Ms Swan by Rialle Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3026]
Summary:

 

AU Post-New Moon.

Bella never jumped, Alice never had her vision and Edward never came back. Six years later, Bella is struggling to make a new life for herself as a teacher in Rochester, New York. How will she fare when a very familiar student crops up in her classroom? Will she be able to remain professional, or will old ties get in the way?

Edward is convinced that getting Bella back is just a matter of 'persuasion', but Bella isn't prepared to be that cooperative. What's more, she's in the grip of a dark secret which threatens to prevent her from loving ever again.

Bella Swan is slipping under...

ALSO POSTED ON FANFICTION.NET


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 124383
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2008 Updated: July 25, 2010


Reviewer: pixieyow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Race Against Time

i read your teaser and i am BEGGING you for a happy ending!!!

 

please please please please please

 

 
Reviewer: pixieyow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 31, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Lucky

wow.  Rialle~I've waited a long time for this chapter and let me just say--it was well worth the wait.  I adored every single second of it.  Thank you so much.  Wonderful wonderful wonderful job. 

 

the podcast sounds fun!

 
Summary: Feature

It was said of early vampire books and movies that vampirism was simply a poorly disguised substitute for sex. Back in the day, the entire genre was considered extremely risque'. With that in mind, this is a parody of Midnight Sun replacing all the vampirism with sexuality - no blood lust - just extreme human lust. AH/AU and consequently, OOC.  Thank you to Debussy_This for the fabulous (and hysterical) banner!!!

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 85040
[Report This] Published: July 14, 2008 Updated: April 24, 2009


Reviewer: pixieyow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

hahahahahaha clever Bella!

 

 

 
Reviewer: pixieyow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

thanks for the new update!! I'm looking forward to next one!!! I'm scared for Bella!!!!!  i hate james.  i love Angela!

 
Summary:

 

Bella Swan spent the first two years of her life in Forks developing a friendship with Jacob Black that finally turned into something more.  As she begins her senior year of high school, a new family moves to town and Bella slowly begins to question the path she thought her life would follow.  Sometimes there is a difference between what you think you need and what you never knew you wanted.  Takes place during the timeframe of New Moon and Eclipse.  J/B at first, but eventually E/B. 

 

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: No Word count: 170230
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2008 Updated: July 20, 2009


Reviewer: pixieyow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Preface & Chapter 1: Sixteen

I really loved the preface!! I t was so well-written and instantly sucked me in!  It's prolly gonna take me forevver to catch up...oh but I will.

And I really like how the kiss changes everything...like kisses always do

 
These Dreams by jbluvs2sing Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 954]
Summary:

It's been three years since the day Edward left Bella in the woods...she is moving on but is still plagued by nightmares from time to time. Will someone from her past help her get through her difficult times? What danger lies ahead for her? Will her dreams eventually come true? Please read and review!

Dream sequences based on the hit song by Heart.

Thanks to the fabulous Mrs.C for the banner!

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Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 70891
[Report This] Published: August 14, 2008 Updated: April 06, 2009


Reviewer: pixieyow Signed starstarstarstar
Date: November 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

oh so angsty! lovely!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: pixieyow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

it's Edward!!!! oh that is SO sweet...if only she had opened her eyes!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!!! I guess we will have to wait and see who it was.

 
Reviewer: pixieyow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Awwwwww that was so sweet!!!!!

Author's Response: Loved that dream, huh? Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: pixieyow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

it's Emmett!!!! oh i love Emmett!!!



Author's Response:

Me too!!! I hope to have the next chapter approved as soon as possible so you won't have to wait long.

 
Reviewer: pixieyow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

such a great update!!!! lots of stuff happening!!!! 

i love how Emmett comforted Bella....so sweet

and I'm glad Bella was able to hear parts of their convo towards the end--i hope whe'll remember it when she awakes...that is if she stays safe

this is what i think should happen:  Edward should kill the newborn and Victoria and Irina and then run to Bella and sweep her up and they will live happily ever after!!!   yea....i watched Disney movies today;)

great chapter!



Author's Response:

I watched them too!!! Disney Channel on all day today. Thanks for the review and the kind words.

 
Redemption by oh Ivory Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 124]
Summary:

Her weight had dropped. She felt frailer now, more breakable.
Her skin had taken on a translucent hue. It was strangely disturbing.
Her previously silky hair was always now a knotted, tangled mess.
Her teeth never gave her lower lip a break; It was pulsing from all the biting she'd been doing.
She stopped reading.
She drank coffee in unhealthy amounts.
She slept 3 hours a night.
God. What have I done?


Edward has to deal with the repercussions of leaving Bella.


Categories: AU, New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 10392
[Report This] Published: August 20, 2008 Updated: October 06, 2008


Reviewer: pixieyow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Smoke

Wow!

 
Reviewer: pixieyow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Blood Lust

OMG please update!!!!

 
Summary:

This is an AU Story that starts a year after Bella gives birth to Renesmee.

Edward and the rest of the Cullens left when Renesmee was born.
How will Bella learn to accept her fate? Will she mope forever--like an insane never-ending continuation of AU New Moon--or will she strengthen and think clearly for once?? You'll also experience the budding romance between Renesmee and Jacob as Nessie grows and grows.

A confrontation is bound to happen...be there when it does! ;]

Thanks so much to RedRose15 for the fabulous banner!!! (And to the Twilight Awards for the 2nd place one.)

 

 

 


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob, Nessie, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 15830
[Report This] Published: September 01, 2008 Updated: April 06, 2009


Reviewer: pixieyow Signed starstarstarstar
Date: December 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Shock and Surprise

I knew it would be Edward...but strangely enough I'm dying to know what the animal is!

Author's Response: you won\'t be disappointed!

 
Reviewer: pixieyow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: The Fury of a Twice-Broken Heart

oh no!!! Edward!!!!!

 
Summary: BPOV. Edward's embarrassed, the Cullens tease, and Bella's nave.
Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3442
[Report This] Published: September 02, 2008 Updated: September 09, 2008


Reviewer: pixieyow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Playing Solitaire

I freakin loved this!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you.  :D

 
Summary:

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Bella went cliff diving, but it didn't turn out so well. She broke her back. A decade later, Edward reappears in her life on the same night she loses her best friend and husband to a freak accident. Now a graduate student in Women's Studies, Bella isn't thrilled to see him. But when the Cullens re-enter Bella's life, they bring change, hope, and a new joint project that will require all their expertises.

Also, you can find a SPANISH version here:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4829851/1/En_un_parpadeo

AND you can find images for various things like Esme's house, Edward's piano, Bella's wheelchair and Rose's car on my ff.net profile page:

http://www.fanfiction.net/~thatwritr

OR in my LJ gallery:

http://pics.livejournal.com/that_writr/gallery/000010z2

Special Update:

For personal reasons (a ridiculously full teaching schedule and being recently put in charge of a bi-annual local conference and ongoing project), I am no longer able to reply to reviews and questions. But that said, I wanted to give a BIG THANK YOU to EVERYBODY for the wonderful feedback and kind words that have been sent my way since the completion of this story in August 2009. I do still check my messages about once every 1-2 weeks and read *every* review. I just have too many to reply to anymore, but I didn’t want anyone to think I was ignoring her/him in particular, or didn’t appreciate readers taking time to leave a review. Writing this story was tons of fun and I’m thrilled readers seem to enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed the chance to write it. I can’t tell you how flattering that is!!! As I used to reply to all reviews, I feel a little badly about this decision, but work has been requiring virtually all of my time since the new (academic) year began.

Best to all of you in 2010 and beyond!

 

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 68 Completed: Yes Word count: 221619
[Report This] Published: September 11, 2008 Updated: August 26, 2009


Reviewer: pixieyow Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I can't wait till we find out what's in Mark's confidential folder!

Author's Response: I was thinking that would be in the next chapter, but it seems Edward wants the POV in that one too.  It was supposed to be Bella's POV, but Edward just ... kept talking! LOL!

 
Reviewer: pixieyow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

this was such a beautiful chapter!! I loved Carlisle's explainations to Bella!! 

 

I also love how you don't gloss over Bella being in a wheelchair and make it seem glamerous.  It's so real and i think it shows Edward's love even stronger



Author's Response: I have read some Twilight stories that went in the direction of Bella in a chair and most of them really made me wince.  It WAS glamorized, or glossed over.  My sister's in a chair, and I can promise, it's not glamorous.  It's a pain in the ass much of the time, for her, and for those with her.  That's not a complaint, at least not one directed at her.  We just live in a society that's not very AWARE.  Anyway, I'm glad that it adds to the story.  And I'm glad that Carlisle's reasons made sense.  (Because I really had to think about that!  I mean, really!  The whole family just up and left because Edward told them to?  I figured they had to have reasons of their own for thinking he was right.

 
Reviewer: pixieyow Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

but i can't wait till morning to look at the CD!!!!

 

 



Author's Response: Hee!  Next chapter!

 
Reviewer: pixieyow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

awwwwwww soooo sad!!!!!!and sweet!!!

Author's Response: Thank you!  And yes, sad, but necessary. :-)

 
Reviewer: pixieyow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

awww my heart is broken for edward!

Author's Response: :-)  But good times are a'comin' ... ;>  Eventually.  A year or two ... nothing to a vampire!

 
Reviewer: pixieyow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

i just love your Rosalie!

Author's Response: Thanks!

 
Reviewer: pixieyow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

i feel so bad for Edward...but at least he isn't pushing her or being too overly angsty

Author's Response: Edward has grown up a lot, he really has.  Sometimes it's age, but sometimes it's events in one's life.  Edward didn't have a lot to challenge him until Bella, he just sort of ... drifted along.  But now he's been forced to grow up.

 
Reviewer: pixieyow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 14, 2008 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

nice work with the dream!  They are getting so close!  You did such a great job at subtly showing how their relationship has changed in the course of a few months.  I love it!!



Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad it's working, slow as it may be.

 
Reviewer: pixieyow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

i really loved this chapter.  I think you did a great job at balancing out Edward and Bella on some many levels...youv'e put them into a much more equal relationship.   Loved it!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  And yes, it's so very important that they be more equal, I think!

 
Reviewer: pixieyow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

i loved seing thi side of Edward and i loved how you incorperated Job into it!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Edward strikes me as a sort of Job character (if not necessarily sinless).  But he likes to argue, I think. LOL!

 




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