It is wonderful to hear Esme's point of view on everything she seems so often left out of most stories.  Good job.

Wow I envy your top 10 placement as a reviewer not a writer its all I could actually achomplish as far as a ranking. I tend to make tooo long of reviews. I plan on reviewing the previous chapters. This story is soo beautiful. My laptop keyboard is messed up and driving me insane. Took the spacebar off trying to fix it. Well, dont do that lol. This chapter made me cry too.  I love how Jasper is in this story. He has grown through his pain. It is all heartbreaking but real. Pissed Jake would say that to her, but Jake isn't my favorite charachter.  Great job on all your work. I mean it.

Michelle

The outtake makes sense here, but I can see how much pain it would cause. I would not blame Bella or Jasper though. I can see this story going either way, but it would kill Alice,  Man, if I did that in my sleep. I talk in my sleep all the time and say some weird ass shit. I pray I don't do that. Don't have a hot vampire jumping through my window lately.  Guess her locking that sliding glass window would not help her from her kind of danger. Is this the same Angela Bella knew in highschool?

Bella's intution is an interesting twist. In the book I could forgive Edward a little easier I guess, but he was back soon even though it was not his own doing, but 3 years and him never checking up on Victoria's vendeda or having Alice check on her. I am mad at him I know it is a temporary madness and he almost makes up for it with his self loathing that doesn't really help anyone. I am glad Jasper protected Bella at least for now till she is ready cause he won't be able to lie much longer.  Man, I have dreams like that all crazy and stuff. I would not mind meeting Jackson again, maybe he will visit my dreams. OK I have turned into a dork. Suprised Edward did as he was asked. Your a very vivid writer.  Good job. Emmett has to be kinda fun to write. I am glad he told his brother off. I am sure Carlisle is starting to want to lose it. He is always so calm it seems. I hate when in rl men seem to think that you are better off with out them and make that desicion for you. I guess we all can relate to Twilight somewhat. This Jasper is making me so proud. I love that he can be in your story more cause of his restraint. I always missed him in the books and loved his honesty. Love it in this story too. :) Miss my working space bar it is taking twice as long to type. OH and I need to PM you my story about Twicon. :)

Michelle B  Houston TX

The dream sequence was cool. Wondering what Bella's gift would be in this story. I bet Edward had a tough time getting away from a grinding Bella. Jasper was so thoughtful when getting her bath ready. I wonder what his true feelings are and like how honest he is being with him self. It is written so much like real life. When someone new and refreshing comes in you question your feelings towards the steady person in your life. You have done such a wonderful job.  So scared someone is gonna die. While I am questioning how much Jasper feels vampire mated to Alice, don't want to see her crushed. Finished a story not to long ago and Alice died and man it made me so sad. I understand writers have a poragative when writing and it is their will. OMG what song was that in the 80's my porgagative paula abdul. Lets pretend I can spell. I think Emmett is at the door. Hey just maybe I will be you 900th review is I go back and review what I missed.  I feel so bad being behind on reviews. I want to show authors I appreciate all their hard work and love their stories. I am over 50 reviews behind and some are my fav authors, and what do I do read more stories. I am currently keeping up with over 50 stories on Twilighted and a lot on Fan fic too.  I always felt like I could not tell my Anatomy and Physiology teacher last semester went back to college for nursing. OH well sorry see I am addicted to Twilight now and either go on You Tube benders or for awhile was into Twilightmoms forums not so much not but still met SOME nice ones at Twicon I can not say the same for all of them.  One made me cry ok so going off topic lol. Sorry but man am I addicted to Fanfic and now the Music of Twilight there is actually going to be a show on Reelz channel call the Music of Twilight lol. TNR soooo rocks.  Love those guys and the monkey helpers. :) I am sure as a SUper Reviewer like your self you get the review guilt. I feel like I am letting the author down and have homework and guilty for reading new stories but it is so easy you end up on your favorite's profile then their recommendations and boom another bad ass writer. I know the ending of this story is coming and am sad. Hoping to read more of your stuff after.  Thanks so much for this story.  This Jasper is mature and caring and sweet yet still Jasper.  You have done him justice. Ok before you start  playing the music to kick me off the stage.  OH, btw if I PM you the elevator story of Twicon just to let you know it is over 2000 words in MS Word lol. Not sure I would be a good writer. I ramble too much plus I know people say it does not matter but right after IKE the hurricane here my Comp 1 teacher gave me a 60 on a paper I had an english teacher friend go over, my mom who is very litteraray, and someone else double check and of course I used spell check proper formatting etc.  I was really bummed. She was not very nice though every essay in our book she would go oh I like this one then insult it the whole class never actually telling us what she wanted. Plus back in high school on what was then the TOSS test I missed no math questions and only a few on the rest and got a 3 out of 5 on the essay.  It messed up all sorts of things. I mean it was passing but still has made me even more self consious about my writing. For a while I did not even review cause I thought I had nothing of importance to say to the authors and would just bug them and they would be like ugg annoying reviewer. I then decided even if I sucked I wanted to tell the authors I liked it. I tend to bring up personal experience in my reviews so you guys can see what the writing brings out in the readers and also so you guys see how affecting the story was. Love you guys and thanks really you are awesome and I sound like Catherine Hardwick on the BlueRay DVD commentary just need to say dude and man a few more times. I just turned 30, so feeling age sensitive lately. Whole reason I went to Twicon doing something crazy going out of my twenties, Glad I did even though their was suckiness I think it was good for me and met some really nice people and also can officially say the actors and those related by proxy are genuine and nice. Oh Jackson you hit my soft spot in my heart. Still want to hit what I call wasps now they buzz around them invading their space screaming and acting ridiculous. How hard is it to be nice and normal. I mean yeah I got star stuck and shy but would never be rude and inappopiate and just want them to know I enjoy their work all of it Twilight related or not.  Have you seen Jackson in the Criminal Minds episode man he is a bad ass actor Twilight can't really show all his abilities and not dogging the movie at all just there is not a lot of Jackson and got to wonder who picked out the wig. He is even from Texas too. I am sure you understand what I am saying about the fans overdoing it and making us all look bad with your oppertunities meeting them.  I just believe they deserve respect and personal space. Yes they are public people and all but don't stalk them scream in their face or basicly attack them. Ok have definantly made this too long soo sorry procrastinating have a doc appointment tomarrow I have waited 2 months for and lost my meds, surgeries, diagnosises lists and since I have had 20 surgeries can't just remember it all. Ugh got to dig and if I find them update them. Plus am way nervous about this particular appointment a lot is riding on it.  Ok so sorry made this like a blog or something. Your such a sweet person guess you bring out the talking side of me. Hope things are going better. :) So wonder how long this wah I am 30 now thing lasts. It is just not about being older. My health has sucked for awhile and scared this is just gonna make it worse plus on an even more personal note wanted more kids and have endo which makes it tougher longer you wait and Chloe will be 10 and I am completely single. Silly I supposed, but you know all those old maid jokes about single women and cats guessing I will have to be the crazy dog lady Chloe is like ahh man got to go visit crazy mom and her dogs. My new best buddy I met at Twicon is 47 been in the Airforce and faced breast cancer and won so she would not let me wallow and feel sorry for myself like Edward lol. I just need to try and make the best of life and I do always know many people have it worse.

 Michelle B :)

Great job!

I am so glad to see update.  This has been a great and unique story so far.  I have also noticed a bunch of pretty popular writers recommend this story.  I think I actually found it a while back it was in the top tens still is.  I love it.  I can just picture all your characters.  I love them all.  I am so glad to see Edward admitting his feelings at least more to himself, and for them to start a real sex scene.  I understand why the family can not know the truth, but since they have money couldn't they help?  I know it sounds silly.  If Edward once he admits he truely loves her, could they not use their connections not tainted by and 3rd, or 4th party Volturi links to help hide her.  I guess that is what Edward is doing, and that would put his family at more risk.  I think that they would still be in risk even if they did not know who Bella was.  I really love this story.  Wish it did not have to end, but they all have too.  I nearly jumped for joy when I saw it was updated.  I am always nervous when I pick stories not done that have not been updated in a while cause I can't stand not knowing what the author had planned for the ending.  Thanks for writing it for everyone.  I am sure lots of people will read it.  Great job.

Michelle

Wow this is my first story remotely similuar to this storyline.  Hope I am making sense.  Trying to say it seems really unique.  I am excited to read it.  I am loving it so far. 

Wow! I am really excited now.  Wonder what the prophecy is and how it ties to Bella.  I could speculate, but that would take a while.  Wanted to tell you even though your done with this story.  I appreciate it.  Thanks so much for putting in the time and effort to write it.

Hmm  well I am definantly getting suprised.  I love it.  Edward defended her.  I was happy to see her blood thing not last too too long like Angsty Edward to the max.  I can not believe I just typed that phrase.  I am excited to keep reading.  Hope my reviews are ok.

Aww the whole thing was amazing.  Bella was so brave and even stronger than she usually is especially considering her circumstances.  Thanks for the clearer image on what Edward being the light meant.  Their kiss was adorable.  I also think this story taking place inside an ancient castle makes it kinda cool.  Great job again : )

Man you really are so talented.  There are so many unexpected twists to this story.  I love how Bella recognized Edward right away, and then her turning down the people, and standing up to Aro.  Then they were so sweet in the woods.  Aro sneaking up suprised me.  Also Carlisle's theory was interesting.  I am dying to know what happened next. : )

Forgot to say last chapter, but thanks for not liking review threats.  They always make me feel weird and akward, and I never know what to type after that.  It always jars me like someone is angry at me. ~*~*On to my review*~*~ I will also check out the new story.  Your recommendations have always been so great.  Interesting about Bella's crazy powerful ability.  Glad the family is not going to let  her leave, though that has to be a hard position to know your what the evil army wants and they will hurt your family.  Rosealie really suprised me by speaking up on Bella's behalf.  Ok then she irritated me by flipping out about Bella not trying.  How would she know how hard it is.  Bella is literally brand new and know one understands her power.  OK now I see she did it on purpose.  Was wondering if it was maybe a ploy to get Bella to be upset enough.  Awww she accepted the propsal so sweetly.  I love Edward for trying always do the right thing.  Alice's prediction about her ending everything at the hand of the Volturi, and how Edward prevented that is so cool.  It makes destiny, and fate so true in this story.  I love it.  You are so creative.  I myself am not a talented writer so I only hope my reviews give the story some of the justice it deserves for being so creative.  Wonderful job, you should write real books.  If SM ever decides to let others write under her supervision you would do a wonderful job.  Your so descriptive.  I am jumping up in down to read the rest, but do not want it to end.  I have tried to be a good reader and review every chapter.  I have accidently forgotten to comment on everything but I have tried.  How Alice tied in was amazing.  I love Alice not letting Bella get away from not going.  Wondering what they are gonna do about people recognizing her.  Since I am sure he picture was in almost all papers.  Clap clap clap.  When I say I love this story I mean it.  I have read a lot of fanfiction.  I mean if you look at my favorites I prob am up to 50.  Afraid to take the ones that are done off the list, not sure if it will affect the author's standing in ratings.  I also have a ton I have picked but not read yet.  I like a lot of them, but usually not always the ones I make a point to comment on every chapter I love.  Not to offend any authors I have not done that with.  I did not review in the begining was too embarrased, thought people would be like um wtf she can not write why is she jabbering.  I learned though that it is the only way to thank you guys for the wonderful stories you put so much effort into.  So let me revise.  I have started to make sure I review almost every chapter when I love it.  Ok I will stop my rambling.  Thanks for the chapter.