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Penname: southerndaisy [Contact]
Real name: Dustielyn Savage
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Summary:

 

Bella Swan spent the first two years of her life in Forks developing a friendship with Jacob Black that finally turned into something more.  As she begins her senior year of high school, a new family moves to town and Bella slowly begins to question the path she thought her life would follow.  Sometimes there is a difference between what you think you need and what you never knew you wanted.  Takes place during the timeframe of New Moon and Eclipse.  J/B at first, but eventually E/B. 

 

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: No Word count: 170230
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2008 Updated: July 19, 2009


Reviewer: southerndaisy Signed
Date: June 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 34: Tightrope

I just started reading this story and haven't been able to stop.  I wanted to comment at every chapter, but thought I should just read till the end and leave one.  This is such a great story!  My eyes are tired from reading, but so worth it.  Thank you for the kiss.  I was ready to kill both of them.  The tension was too much.  I'm sure there is more angst to come, but maybe they can go through it together.  You are extremely talented.  I look forward to the next update.

 
Wishing Star by Mystic_Ice24 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 4551]
Summary:

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After her parents are killed in a plane crash, a young girl is rejected again & again by foster families for being too old. She wishes on a star nightly, but will she find what she seeks? Will the Cullens be that family?

NC-17 for later chapters. Warning" Violence, and sexual aggresion may be part of this story.

Winning Summary:

"I wish I may, I wish I might, have the wish I make tonight."  With that one hope Isabella Swan faces life as best as she can.  The tragedy of her parents' death, leaves her alone in a system where her age leaves her undesirable for adoption.  That is until one day two people come into her life offering her a chance at hope.  The Cullen family takes to Bella like a long lost sister.  What happens when Bella is taken from the Cullens by a lost relative?  Will Bella's hopes be destroyed?  What happens when fate steps in years later to reunite Bella with the one's she loved and who loved her so long ago?

Bella knew what she would say, "Don't you want to be my sister?"

 

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 40 Completed: No Word count: 137752
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2008 Updated: April 12, 2011


Reviewer: southerndaisy Signed
Date: June 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Surprise

Aaawwww.  It's gotta be Mom and Dad, right?  I just started reading this story and I love it.  I love the bond they all have.  I'm looking forward to the rest of the story.  Thank you for sharing your talent.

 
Reviewer: southerndaisy Signed
Date: August 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Say What?

Ok, you were right.  I didn't like this chapter....at all.  I mean, it's not that I don't like the chapter, I just don't like the "events" in the chapter.  I still love the story though.  And I'm hoping you are going to fix this horrible lapse in judgement and sanity on Edwards part.  I mean really....what was he thinking?  OOooohhh that's right...HE WASN'T!!!!

 
Reviewer: southerndaisy Signed
Date: September 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Aftershock

I love this story.  Sorry I haven't reviewed in awhile.  I'm still reading!!!  I'm hoping that this terrible incident will get Edward to get his head out of his a**.  You are doing an amazing job with such a sensitive subject.  You rock!!!!

 
Reviewer: southerndaisy Signed
Date: October 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Secrets

Our poor poor Bella.

 
Summary:

When Jasper Whitlock and Alice Masen tied the knot, they hoped their own siblings would have the same happy ending. Jasper's sister, Isabella, was at the peak of her career, leaving very little time for love. Alice's brother, Edward, was in the process of moving thousands of miles in the name of business.

What happens when Jasper and Alice insist on accompanying Edward to Seattle while he finds his new base of operation, all while staying in Isabella's penthouse?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Lauren, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes Word count: 77087
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2008 Updated: July 04, 2009


Reviewer: southerndaisy Signed
Date: July 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Fireworks

I got the update to this story right after the grand finale of our fireworks.  Perfect timing.  Hate to see it come to an end, but it has been wonderful reading it.

 
Summary:

Bella is a witness in peril. Emmett Cullen is the deputy assigned to protect her. When the witness protection program proves unsafe, Emmett has Bella pose as his brother Edward's fiancée. ExB. AU/AH.

 

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 138506
[Report This] Published: September 14, 2008 Updated: June 14, 2012


Reviewer: southerndaisy Signed
Date: April 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Come out, come out wherever you are.   Pleeeeeeeez update soon.  I think this is one of the most creative stories yet.



Author's Response:

Okay. I'm out. :)

 
Reviewer: southerndaisy Signed
Date: June 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: June 7 - June 13, 2008

I was so excited to see the update.  I thought I was dreaming for a minute.  Welcome back!  You have been missed. 

 
Reviewer: southerndaisy Signed
Date: July 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: June 14 - June 20, 2008

Thank you, Thank you, Thank you.  I just love this story!!!!  I can't say that enough.  It made my day when I got my update.  As difficult as it was....I waited until the kids were in bed and hubby was out with the guys so I could curl up, take my time and savor every word.  You have an amazing talent.  The story is moving along at such a great pace and I can't wait to see what's next.  Angst, happiness, lemons...it's all good.  You're the best!!!!



Author's Response:

Considering how long the chapter was, I'm glad you were able to wait-- it's hard to read a long chapter when you're trying to rush through. So glad you're enjoying it!

 
Snowed In by eclipsedawn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5321]
Summary: Bella travels to Alaska to vacation in the cabin Alice loaned her. What happens when Bella finds out she is not the only person staying in the cabin?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 88293
[Report This] Published: November 28, 2008 Updated: January 01, 2010


Reviewer: southerndaisy Signed
Date: May 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Sweat

Thank you for the update.  I was starting to think that YOU got snowed in.

 
Reviewer: southerndaisy Signed
Date: June 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Knock, Knock-Who's there?

oooooohhh, not another cliffy.  Why o why?  I don't know if I'll survive until the next update.  :)  Sorry, just got caught up in the drama of the story.  I love this story.  I was so happy to see an update.  Please don't make it too long before the next one.  

 
Rescue me by venomousgal Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2836]
Summary:

 

 Bella Swan is accident prone and always in need of rescuing. Sexy neighbour Edward Masen is an EMT and more than willing to handle the job.

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Mike, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: No Word count: 100511
[Report This] Published: December 21, 2008 Updated: November 10, 2009


Reviewer: southerndaisy Signed
Date: July 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Well, I can only imagine that it's James that called.  Maybe he's threatening Bella...or threatening those that she loves.  The only way Bella would agree to anything with James would be to protect her family and loved ones.  Why can't he just go away....like in a woodchipper somewhere.

Still love the story, and the angst only makes for sweeter lemons.  Thanks for sharing.

 
The List by Laura Cullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13645]
Summary:

Four weeks before her wedding to Edward, Bella is frustrated. She knows there's little-to-no chance of getting him to bend his rules and boundaries now, but there's no harm in fantasizing about what could happen later. So she begins compiling a list of things that she and Edward can do together once they're happily married. She's surprised to find she might be able to cross some things off earlier than she thought...

Story contains mature themes and is not intended for younger readers.

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Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 187877
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2010


Reviewer: southerndaisy Signed
Date: April 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Frustrated

I LOVE this story!!!!!  Not just because it's hot, but because it also has heart.  One minute I'm tearing up when Bella is thanking everyone, then I'm holding my breath during the lab table, and then lmao picturing Bella in a tree and Edward saying "mine".  It's the best.  You're the best.

 
Reviewer: southerndaisy Signed
Date: May 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: The Wedding

Absolutely beautiful!!!  I felt like I was there...and Charlie's toast...sniff, sniff.  It was just perfect.  And thank you for including the links for the dresses and such. 

 
Collide by Martinibaby1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1057]
Summary:

As usual, Bella is late for work and as she crosses the street -without looking-, a cycling music teacher, better know as Edward Cullen, must do all he can to avoid her. But the collision that follows will change their lives for good. All human and AU.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Other Character, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 137633
[Report This] Published: January 29, 2009 Updated: January 12, 2010


Reviewer: southerndaisy Signed
Date: April 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: My Light in the Darkness

I'm sorry you aren't feeling well and hope you feel better.  Thank you for the update.  I'm sick too, and this was the best medicine.  Thanks again.  Keep it comin' please.



Author's Response:

I hope to feel better soon too, but my sore throat is keeping me awake at night and that's not good :( Sorry you're feeling sick too (did you comment on the ff.net website as well :)) and I'm sending some healing vibes over to you. The preview for the next chapter will be up tomorrow, hopefully that makes you feel better as well!

 
Reviewer: southerndaisy Signed
Date: April 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: My Light in the Darkness

I'm sorry you aren't feeling well and hope you feel better.  Thank you for the update.  I'm sick too, and this was the best medicine.  Thanks again.  Keep it comin' please.



Author's Response:

Thanks girl, for your understanding. And I wish you the best as well, because being sick sucks, right? I'm going to update as soon as possible, but I want to reply to every review first!

 
Reviewer: southerndaisy Signed
Date: April 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Pulling a Bella Swan

I was so excited when I saw your update.  I quickly sent my husband and son to the park so I could just sit and enjoy without any distractions.  I am so addicted to your story.  I'm not sure how I feel if Bella is losing the baby....part of me is relieved, but part of me is worried that it will only delay she and Edward being together.  My heart is breaking for them.  Please update soon.



Author's Response:

Hi there, so you sent your husband and son away to read it? Oh oh I don't want your husband to get angry for me updating regularly :) but I like the sound of you being addicted to my fic, thanks for letting me know. We will see how the miscarriage is going to affect their 'relationship'. And I'll try to update on Friday, okay? I hope that's soon enough for you! Hugs!

 
Reviewer: southerndaisy Signed
Date: May 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Loss

I'm so very sad.  I know you warned us....but it was so beautifully written...wow.  I'm going to trust you that it will get better and they will be happy, because right now it is just so tragic.  Please update soon.  I don't want them to stay in this sad place for too long. 

You are doing an amazing job.  Totally addicted.



Author's Response:

Thanks for trusting me and for your sweet words about my writing *adores you*

I'll try to update soon, but probably not this week. Take care!

 
Summary: Feature


He's a young but jaded keyboard player writing lyrics for his band, Breaking Dawn, and she's a naive and frustrated poet looking to break out of her shell; their words collide on-line.
What happens when they meet in high school, unaware of their literary connection?

OOC, canon at heart.
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes Word count: 146168
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2009 Updated: August 26, 2009


Reviewer: southerndaisy Signed
Date: August 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 34: Hidden

Ok, that's just wrong ending it right there.  :)  This story has been so great!  Thank you for writing it.

 
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While hunting one afternoon, Emmett, Jasper and Carlisle stumble upon what appears to be a corpse.  When they learn it's a severely broken vampire, they take him home to do what they can to help.  But of course, fate has plans for this man.  Canon Couples.  AU.  DARK Themes.


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes Word count: 158872
[Report This] Published: February 26, 2009 Updated: October 31, 2011


Reviewer: southerndaisy Signed
Date: July 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: The Reunion

I just started reading this story yesterday and haven't been able to stop.  It is amazing and I couldn't be happier that they kissed.  I know there is a lot of trouble ahead, but it seems to be bearable when they are together.  Thank you so much for sharing your talent.  It's wonderful.  Looking forward to the next update.

 
Reviewer: southerndaisy Signed
Date: October 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: The Bracelet

I couldn't believe my eyes when I got the update notice.  I was so happy.  I love this story, but I also understand when real life happens....so I was being patient.  I'm glad to know that it wasn't forgotten.  Welcome back and thank you!!!!!

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen, graduate student and Biology instructor, has a wild night with a beautiful stranger, and becomes obsessed.  Bella Swan, his student, has a crush on her teacher...  Things aren't always what they seem,and people look different in the light of day.


NC-17 for lemons, mature themes.  Canon pairings ... kinda.


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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jane, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Laurent, Mike, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: No Word count: 75384
[Report This] Published: March 03, 2009 Updated: June 27, 2009


Reviewer: southerndaisy Signed
Date: June 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20. Lost and Found

Loved it!!!!

 
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Seeking to escape a dangerous memory from her past, Bella moves to Forks her junior year with every intention of getting a fresh start.  With a little self-assurance and a whole lot of attitude, she shakes things up at Forks High without even intending to.  When a mysterious new student turns her world upside down, will Bella have the strength to resist him, or is she destined to repeat her old mistakes?  Will he be able to save her when the past catches up with her?

Rated NC-17 for criminally hot cars, graphic sex, and language...

 

 


Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 82359
[Report This] Published: March 15, 2009 Updated: July 23, 2009


Reviewer: southerndaisy Signed
Date: May 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - The Bitch is Back

Please say it's not James!!!!!  Let it be Edward, or Alice, I'd even take Rosalie...just not James.  Totally hooked!

 
Reviewer: southerndaisy Signed
Date: May 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Breakable

Ok...breathe....I think I was holding my breath that whole chapter.  Love that Edward was her knight in shinning armour, and I'm so glad he told her why he acted the way he did...but a little frustrated with Bella.  I know she was hurt and just went through a horrible experience, but enough with the pushing and pulling.  How about showing some grace to the man that just saved your life and at least let him say how he feels.  I mean, I was pissed at Edward for how he behaved that night and I wanted Bella to make him grovel...but again...dude just saved your life. 

All that said....I'm lovin' the story.



Author's Response:

He messed up... she loves him.  They're soul mates.  But there's no way Bella's gonna let him off the hook that easily...

Thanks!!

 
Reviewer: southerndaisy Signed
Date: July 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Resolution

Sad to see this one coming to an end.  I've really enjoyed this story.  Thank you again for sharing.

 




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