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Penname: freckles9399 [Contact]
Real name: Reeda
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Member Since: April 17, 2009
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Hi ,


Im Reeda im a 28 yr old twilight fan i have 4 kids and with my spare time i read, read, read all i can on twilight and their other stories told by the great people that do continuations of the Stephanie Meyers works.I also am a free lance writer of my own romance stories.Thank you all you talented writers for bringing more to our favorite books I love it ! hugs Reeda   


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Summary:

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What if in the beginning Edward lied to everyone about being in love with Bella? What if originally it actually was all about Bella's scent? And what would happen then if accidentally, much against his will, Edward kind of sort of fell head over heels in love with this not-so-dull human girl?

This is an AU of the Twilight Saga using an entirely different plot as to how, why, and when Edward and Bella fell in love. It offers a different explanation for what was so special about Bella Swan, why Edward vigilantly enforced those physical boundaries, why there's tension between the Cullens and the wolves, and why Edward behaved the way he did not only with Bella but with his family. Expect romance, mystery, angst, and humor. Dark Edward.

Canon Pairings, No BxExJ, OOC.

This story is rated NC-17 because of occasional naughty language, violence (or implied violence) against humans, vampires, werewolves, animals, insects, minding-their-own-business-pajamas, entities, books, coffee tables, leather recliners, bridges, sword ferns, shrubs, rocks, and worst of all....trees. It is also rated NC-17 due to excessive snarkiness by Edward, references to underage drinking, practical jokes and/or enthusiastic tormenting of secondary characters particularly Mike Newton, Jacob Black, and Charles Swan. It also is rated NC-17 due to sexual content.

 Thanks to Mizra for the banners.


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Eleazar, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jacob, Jasper, Kate, Lauren, Leah, Other Character, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 74 Completed: Yes Word count: 1085631
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2008 Updated: May 31, 2011


Reviewer: freckles9399 Signed
Date: May 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 8 - Heart of Darkness - Part Sixteen - Can't a Century Old Vampire be a Moral Degenerate in Peace?

i love your story i have followed it and want more thanks for writing i cant wait till the next chapter



Author's Response:

Hi there freckles9399!

Thanks so much for your review! I always enjoy everyone's enthusiasm as it really does help fire up the muses - and those wenches have been screaming at me lately. The next chapter is with my beta. As soon as she's done abusing it and I finish repairing whatever she thinks needs fixing, I'll post it. Promise. :)

Thank you for your support of the story. You made my day. :) Books

 
Reviewer: freckles9399 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 5: Indecent Exposure at the Thriftway on Aisle Three: Shameless Hussy Part One

Awesome !! i will never get the image of mike withering screaming "mike the monster "out of my head thanks for the mental images "hugs"lmao



Author's Response:

Hi there freckles9399!

Thanks so much for your review. I have a vice of torturing secondary Twilight characters - ok, Bella and Edward, too. But Mike is a particular favorite of mine. I see him as just a typical pervy high school guy. If you like what I did to him, you'll be all kinds of excited about what is going to happen with Jacob. :) Books

 
Reviewer: freckles9399 Signed
Date: April 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 8: Heart of Darkness Part One - Pride and Tribulation

Thank you for taking the time to do this amazing work you have done .I adore your work and it feeds my twilight addiction ,i really wanted to know about Edward and his "family "since they first metioned how they came to be i wanted to know it all .I love it



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review freckles9399,

If you want to know about the Cullen family - this is the story for you. I'm showing how Edward came to hate himself in the chapter you reviewed, the rest of this arc shows how he expressed that self hatred - by building a self-delusion of being the perfect vampire - and how Bella blew all of that to bits when she entered his life. I hope you continue to enjoy the story :)

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Reviewer: freckles9399 Signed
Date: April 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 8: Heart of Darkness - Part Four - Deviant

what a wonderful chapter !!! it is so fresh and just plain awesome thanks for the read ...now im on to the next !



Author's Response:

I'm glad you are enjoying them freckles9399, I've had a blast living in Edward's skull, poor guy. And I do loved Starched Shirt Edward - who is batting his eyelashes at you and blowing you a kiss for reviewing.

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Reviewer: freckles9399 Signed
Date: April 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 8: Heart of Darkness Part Six - Bonkers

I'm pondering systematically killing the pets in the immediate neighborhood."

this was the funniest part of anything i have ever read in my mortal life lol lol lol



Author's Response:

I had to go there. Edward is completely demented in that chapter. I wanted to show just how unthinkingly ruthless he is believing to have the moral high ground all along. He can't handle the fact that he almost slipped and killed her in more ways than one. So he's overcompensating by literally tearing down the scene of the crime and rebuilding it and making her life safer from fungii and dust mites. The OCD like behavior won't be that bad in the next chapter. :)

I'm glad you are enjoying my odd take on Edward. I do have a dark sense of humor.And thanks, freckless9399 for the review!

Best, Books :)

 
Reviewer: freckles9399 Signed
Date: May 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 8: Heart of Darkness - Part Seventeen - When the Fur Flies

great chapter ,the story og the clearwaters and the blacks makes good reading material .I love Edward in this story he is so protective and loving he also has a vulnerable side to him that is endearing when he is with Bella . 



Author's Response:

Hi there freckles9399!

Thanks so much for your review! I'm glad you enjoyed the wolf angle. There's a bit more to that story. I had fun trying to come up with a different explanation for the tribal politics and re-framing that pesky treaty so that Bella getting bitten was not an issue.

The thing to keep in mind with Edward is that he's not very self-aware despite all that over-thinking. He has spent 75 years creating this "shy" person (and the dreams he has of his past show that he was in fact shy in his human life), who is the perfect vegetarian vampire. The only way he can construct a rational reason to allow a creature such as himself to be around Bella is to be protective of her, to remind himself constantly of what a marvel she is. Notice that he's still calling her his human, although he's not added in other endearments such as his dear little bottle cap. What you're seeing in this chapter is that he needs her emotionally and being without her is a huge shock to his system. Hence, he's been given some motivation to address that whole sleeping together business. :) Books

 
Reviewer: freckles9399 Signed
Date: May 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 8: Heart of Darkness - Part Eighteen - Stomping Through the Sword Ferns and Twinkling in the Night

great chapter, skeevy is the one that witnessed Jaspers family being massacred.Skeevy seems to be a handsome guy actually he looks like my brothers alot !



Author's Response:

From what Genevieve is saying through sock-puppet Bella it does indeed appear that Skeevy witnessed Jasper's family being killed. Since Aaron took his time about it according to Edward's memory of the vision, that makes Skeevy look even worse at least to me. If your brothers look like Kevin McKidd you must be busy with a baseball bat swinging at the legions of fangirls throwing themselves at them. Poor you. :) Thanks for reviewing freckles9399. It makes me feel all inspired to do things... like writing more. :) Books

 
Summary:

The trauma suffered by Bella for three years has left lasting mental scars.  Esme and Carlisle are finally offered the chance to be true parents to a teenager that needs them.  Surrounded by the support and love of the Cullen family, Bella begins to grow and finds out there is more to life than simply surviving.

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Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No Word count: 91654
[Report This] Published: November 04, 2008 Updated: August 19, 2009


Reviewer: freckles9399 Signed
Date: May 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Im already sucked in !

 
Reviewer: freckles9399 Signed
Date: May 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

God i love Emmett he is such a sweet heart i wish i had an Emmett lol lol ,I truly love your story it is amazing,Carlisle and Esme are the perfect parents  

 
Reviewer: freckles9399 Signed
Date: May 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I love the way all of them have rallied around her during school ,and i especially love the way Esme is Bella's home ,i love your writing style

 
Reviewer: freckles9399 Signed
Date: May 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

ohhh wonderful chapter !!,Im so glad to see Bella and Edward finaly get a little closer ,Ill be surprised if Laurent walks out of there in one peice the Cullen men are very protective

 
Reviewer: freckles9399 Signed
Date: May 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I cannot wait till the next chapter this is a awesome story!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

 
Reviewer: freckles9399 Signed
Date: June 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

i really do love this story !! i missed it so much ,i cant wait to see what happens next



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying! :)

 
Mind Over Matter by SubtlePen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1378]
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Bella challenges Edward's limits of self control by insisting that he build up his tolerance level to intimacy.

Set in the 6 week 'blank period' at the end of Eclipse / beginning of Breaking Dawn, between the battle, and the wedding.  Bella and Edward expand and deepen their physical relationship in preparation for their impending marriage.


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
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Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 70976
[Report This] Published: November 26, 2008 Updated: August 16, 2009


Reviewer: freckles9399 Signed
Date: May 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Pull my hair, and spank me

this chapert made me lmao ,Edward said cockblock lmao lmao



Author's Response:

i love it! 

 
Reviewer: freckles9399 Signed
Date: May 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Worth a thousand words

ok the odd prop guess for me would be "pink"?? this chapter was very sexy !!!



Author's Response:

nope...  not pink!   glad you liked the chapter!

 
Reviewer: freckles9399 Signed
Date: May 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: A boring afternoon

my fav author !!!



Author's Response:

*flattered*

 

thanks!

 
Reviewer: freckles9399 Signed
Date: May 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: A Laurel Wreath

really good sexing there milady !!

ok so tell me lol lol ,pleas was it not the hedghog, Edward and the guys were watching with faux Bella???lmfao



Author's Response:

glad you liked my sexing...   *blush*

not familiar with hedgehog - the faux bella movie was a product of my active imagination, and a compilation of several movies i've seen over the years...  gotta love online free porn.

 
Reviewer: freckles9399 Signed
Date: May 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Taboo

you know what ?? i always wondered about that anyways so it dosnt bother me in the least ,very tactful and discreet and yes i imagine him with tidy manners as well lol lol



Author's Response:

thank you so much - i'm so glad you liked!  a slightly more risque' version is available as a one-shot.  click on my profile...

 
Rescue me by venomousgal Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2836]
Summary:

 

 Bella Swan is accident prone and always in need of rescuing. Sexy neighbour Edward Masen is an EMT and more than willing to handle the job.

 

THANKS TO FALCONCRANELOVE FOR THE WONDERFUL BANNERS!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Mike, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: No Word count: 100511
[Report This] Published: December 21, 2008 Updated: November 10, 2009


Reviewer: freckles9399 Signed
Date: May 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

thanks for the inside look at what Edward does i love it !! paramedics are so very sexy !!! lol lol hugs =)

 
Reviewer: freckles9399 Signed
Date: May 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I freakin love this chapter it is awesome and i couldnt stop smiling and laughing the whole time !! TEAM EDWARD !!!

 
Reviewer: freckles9399 Signed
Date: May 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I think Edwards going to beat james a** well i hope he does he is a creep .

 
Reviewer: freckles9399 Signed
Date: May 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

im so glad that Edward got a peice of that slimy jerk,Emmett is so sweet he is perfect in this story .

 
Reviewer: freckles9399 Signed
Date: May 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

i love your story it is awesome !! i have been reading it so fast i havnt taken the time to write a review in the past chapters it is great

 
Reviewer: freckles9399 Signed
Date: May 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I love this story i think ive said it a few times but i do ,Jake really annoys me so bad ,Emmett with the sperm cells dying lol lmao that was so funny thanks ill be back as soon as the next chapter is done

 
Reviewer: freckles9399 Signed
Date: May 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

another great chapter i love this story it is so wonderful im so pleased they are back together and they are getting everything in order ..sexy songs? humm i may have to get back to you on that one

 




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