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Penname: mcamastow [Contact]
Real name: Amana
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Seducing Ms Swan by Rialle Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3032]
Summary:

 

AU Post-New Moon.

Bella never jumped, Alice never had her vision and Edward never came back. Six years later, Bella is struggling to make a new life for herself as a teacher in Rochester, New York. How will she fare when a very familiar student crops up in her classroom? Will she be able to remain professional, or will old ties get in the way?

Edward is convinced that getting Bella back is just a matter of 'persuasion', but Bella isn't prepared to be that cooperative. What's more, she's in the grip of a dark secret which threatens to prevent her from loving ever again.

Bella Swan is slipping under...

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 124383
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2008 Updated: July 25, 2010


Reviewer: mcamastow Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Leader

I have really enjoyed this story and hope to read more in he near future keep up the ggod work can't wait to rea about what happens next

 
Reviewer: mcamastow Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: War in a Waiting Room

Excellent job you have not failed you potrayed Jacob and his emotions wonderfully  even how it was breaking him down and affecting Edward. keep writing your story it is agreat read, can't wait for  the next chapter.

 
Reviewer: mcamastow Signed
Date: June 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: War in a Waiting Room

 ,why you not finishing the story it was going so well i'm getting hear broken here please ,please, please continue writing it

 
Reviewer: mcamastow Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Control

good chapter Bella really saw thru Jacob he did'nt fool her at all.

 
Reviewer: mcamastow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: An Ending

For I think the first time ever I have read a story that truly reflects how Bella really feels about  Edward leaving to many times her feelings of betrayal and resentment are snuffe out by her desire to be with him they are nevervoiced or expressed in any way , and I always feel repressed feeling serve  no good perpose they will come out later in negative ways so thank you for your honesty in your writings . For giving Bella  a voice an outlet from here they can maybe find a way to build a relationship based on truth .

 
Summary: Feature

Seven years have passed since Edward and Bella last saw each other. They grew up as children and even became good friends. Once they entered high school, Edward became distant and eventually severed all ties with her. Confused and hurt, Bella moved on with her life in Seattle.Through it all, Bella had her older brother Emmett to get past the estrangement. Now, with Edward's imminent return to Seattle to help out with his sister Alice's wedding, Bella can't help wondering what drove away her brother's best friend all those years ago.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4369590/1/My_Brothers_Best_Friend

Nominated for Best Novel-Incomplete at the Eddie and Bellie Awards.

http://www.thecatt.net/tw/Vote/aspx

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes Word count: 247400
[Report This] Published: July 14, 2008 Updated: February 28, 2010


Reviewer: mcamastow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 20: "It's You" Part 2

great story great characters great writer found you on fanfiction first only discovered you here last night thanks for the read .

 
Reviewer: mcamastow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Epilogue: Every Time

Great story great ending iloved how you tied up all loose ends in the storyso we have a fair idea of how all their lives have gone on.

 
Summary:

 

Bella Swan spent the first two years of her life in Forks developing a friendship with Jacob Black that finally turned into something more.  As she begins her senior year of high school, a new family moves to town and Bella slowly begins to question the path she thought her life would follow.  Sometimes there is a difference between what you think you need and what you never knew you wanted.  Takes place during the timeframe of New Moon and Eclipse.  J/B at first, but eventually E/B. 

 

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: No Word count: 170230
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2008 Updated: July 19, 2009


Reviewer: mcamastow Signed
Date: April 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Giddy

Hi, I'm new to this site but I do love agood Twilight fanfic . I am Quite enjoying the developement of your story and ca'nt wait to see how it turns out . Bellas drunken episode in this  chapter was hillarious and Edwards responce  ingenious keep up the good work.

 
Reviewer: mcamastow Signed starstarstarstar
Date: July 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 35: Kissed

good to read  another chapter . hopeing all goes well with your wedding and you can start writting more chapters.

 
Wishing Star by Mystic_Ice24 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 4552]
Summary:

WRITTEN REWRITTEN REWRITTEN REWRITTEN

After her parents are killed in a plane crash, a young girl is rejected again & again by foster families for being too old. She wishes on a star nightly, but will she find what she seeks? Will the Cullens be that family?

NC-17 for later chapters. Warning" Violence, and sexual aggresion may be part of this story.

Winning Summary:

"I wish I may, I wish I might, have the wish I make tonight."  With that one hope Isabella Swan faces life as best as she can.  The tragedy of her parents' death, leaves her alone in a system where her age leaves her undesirable for adoption.  That is until one day two people come into her life offering her a chance at hope.  The Cullen family takes to Bella like a long lost sister.  What happens when Bella is taken from the Cullens by a lost relative?  Will Bella's hopes be destroyed?  What happens when fate steps in years later to reunite Bella with the one's she loved and who loved her so long ago?

Bella knew what she would say, "Don't you want to be my sister?"

 

 

Thanks to Mrs C for the above Banner and my beta readergoof for the below Banner!Wishing Star Banner Readergoof

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 40 Completed: No Word count: 137752
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2008 Updated: April 12, 2011


Reviewer: mcamastow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Halloween

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! HOW COULD YOU.

 
Reviewer: mcamastow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Truths Revealed

So glad to see a new chapter I was beginning to get frantic.

 
Reviewer: mcamastow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Lives Altered

Fantastic proposal.

 
Reviewer: mcamastow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Wishes Fulfilled

AHH FINALY PROGRESS FOR OUR YOUNG STAR CROSS LOVERS.

 
Summary:

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At a pivotal moment in New Moon, a simple choice alters the course of Bella's future, and she is forced to endure several more weeks before Edward's eventual return to Forks.  Victoria, a pack of young werewolves, and the blossoming of an undeniable bond become the least of Bella's concerns as she undergoes her own supernatural transformation. It turns out vampires and werewolves aren’t the only things that go bump in the night.  Edward/Bella/Jacob

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A huge thank you to placeofthunder for the lovely banner!


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jared, Jasper, Kim, Leah, Quil, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 145984
[Report This] Published: August 30, 2008 Updated: August 30, 2010


Reviewer: mcamastow Signed
Date: August 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Forgiveness

hey its been afew weeks and I've been hanging on this cliff you left me on please get on with th story it was going good now it's stalled write i check ever so often to see if its been continued please give us a hand we're hanging here.



Author's Response:

Okay, um, I submitted the next chapter about a week and a half ago, but I sorta didn't put my validator's name in the chapter title (yikes! Because I just found out this is a pretty big no no).  I just fixed that, so hopefully It has a better chance of getting validated now.

Please don't slip and plummet to your death!  I need all of my readers I can get alive. ;)

 
Reviewer: mcamastow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Precarious

  TO much to little to late thats Bellas  song for Edward . whats going on with this school in Salem how do they suddenly have copies of Bellas records suspicious.



Author's Response:

I don't suppose you have a tune to go with those lyrics? ;)

Yep. The school sounds totally suspicious. But Charlie is gullible like that. And we love him for it.

 
Reviewer: mcamastow Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Human

This chapter has it's angst and it humor very good read.



Author's Response:

I love me some humor and angst rolled into one messy package.  I'm glad you liked it too!

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: mcamastow Signed
Date: August 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: The Beginning

Wow this story was all kinds of wonderful and I'm kind of sad its almost done. Hope to be reading about Bella's adventures when I read th epilogue. 



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you! I'm sad that it's comming to an end, too (although half of me is excited). Should just be a few more days for the epilogue to get posted. :)

 
Reviewer: mcamastow Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Constellations

whats really going on with bella the woman in her dream had the same last name is this her ancestor has she been given some kind of powers from pasat relations I reallylike your version of jake he is avery real teen age boy.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I tried to really drive home the fact that Jacob is infact a guy.  A teenage guy. Glad you appreciated the effort! As far as what's going on with Bella...stick around and find out! :)

Thank you! <3

 
Reviewer: mcamastow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Kept Promises

What is Alex doing in Forks BElla powers are getting Strongershe was able to remove herself from danger the hand print was from your first story picture which I had loved, to bad you don't use it any more.



Author's Response:

Not Alec.  Think someone a little more thirsty...

YOU REMEMBERED THE HAND FROM THE FIRST BANNER!?  Wow, you've been following this story for a while then (I made that sucker way back before the first movie when Taylor was still too scrawny too look like a werewolf, so I had to use a different guy, lol) Yes, that's actually one of the three places where the hand has appeared. (The other two actually happen within the story.)

Thanks for sticking with me this long! :D

 
Reviewer: mcamastow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Ashes to Ashes

what happened to Riely is their now something in Bella's blood that kills vamps.



Author's Response:

It would certainly seem that way (pretty spiffy, right?).  Hopefully Bella will find out the details soon, so that we can all be enlightened. :D

 
Reviewer: mcamastow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Leah's Advice

ok only one quetion this round  how come Carlisle did not take a sample of Bellas blood to test   it



Author's Response:

You are on it! Like...like...cheese on mac!  Seriously.

Bella was out for like 9 hours for something and she never really got filled in on all that went down while she was out.  So to answer your question...he did.  It will come up later. :)

 
Reviewer: mcamastow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Something Wicked

great chapter.

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Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

 
Reviewer: mcamastow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: They Fight

what the hell wrong with that girl?



Author's Response:

IDK. It's like she posseses no survival instincts at all. *face palm*

 
Reviewer: mcamastow Signed
Date: July 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: His Hand

You have tied evry thing together and have given us a back ground story aswell I am really enjoying this tale.



Author's Response:

Thank you! It's been a lot of work getting everything to fit together, but I've really enjoyed doing it. :)

 
Summary: Bella's life was a fairytale until tragedy struck not once, but twice, changing the course of her life forever.  No matter what life throws her way, Bella accepts her life and trudges on.  Now, as she starts college, Bella meets some new friends who try to help her regain her fairytale life.  Will she meet prince charming in the process? 
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No Word count: 51114
[Report This] Published: September 10, 2008 Updated: August 27, 2009


Reviewer: mcamastow Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21: First Spat

Edward has a nerve does she look like his child.

 




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