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Penname: Dragonflyidt [ Contact]
Real name: Dana
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Summary: 
Bella takes a vacation to Hilton Head Island in South Carolina to meet Alice's new boyfriend, Jasper. Rosalie and Emmett come along, too, just in case Bella didn't feel like enough of a fifth wheel. With Jasper's roommate out of town, Bella has his nice big bed all to herself. Until Edward comes home in the middle of the night...
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes
Word count: 163211
[Report This] Published: March 01, 2009 Updated: December 21, 2011
Reviewer: Dragonflyidt Signed
Date: August 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
That was one hell of a way to start a story. Wow, I thought she was dreaming at first. Lol, loved Bella's impersonation of a caterpillar in a cocoon.
Summary:
When Bella and Edward meet the first day of High School, he is a chubby misfit with no friends in a new town, aside from his popular cousins. He meets Bella Swan, a well-liked, if uncoordinated, local with problems of her own. This is the story of their friendship, their loss, their love and destruction. Can they find their way back to each other? And can they survive the changes they have both gone through since the fateful day they met?
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: Always Human
Chapters: 41 Completed: No
Word count: 164271
[Report This] Published: August 12, 2009 Updated: December 03, 2012
Reviewer: Dragonflyidt Signed
Date: March 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: 1998 - The Dance
"Soft pink lips. Twinkling green eyes." OHHH ♪♫ Bella and Edward, sitting in a tree...
“Oh, the ones where she looks at him, and he raises an eyebrow, and she shakes her head, and he quirks up one side of his mouth, and she nods?” LOL!
"You’re beautiful to me." All together now: AWWW!
“Kate asked you to the dance, didn’t she?” 0.0 Is he going?
“What? And leave my best friend behind? If you don’t go, I don’t go, Swan…” He didn't go with Kate. YEY! ALthough too bad for Kate, she seemed nice. GAH! Chubward is awesome.
Reviewer: Dragonflyidt Signed
Date: March 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: 1998 - The Rescue
He's actually gonna go get her...AWWW! That's so adorable. And I can understand why Edward would be angry at Charlie, but he's being too harsh. Charlie loves Bella, he would never consciously put her in danger. Renee is her mother, a kid needs to have contact with his mom and kudos to Charlie for allowing it even though Renee is so difficult.
"I knew what she was seeing - the pretty girl with the fat boy." Oh Edward, WE still love you. Chubby or not.
“Bells, you’ll just have to sit on Edward’s lap until we get back to the house.” LOL! Poor, poor Edward. You can do it Edward, you can keep little Edward in check, just think of your grandmother in a bikini.
"Grandma in a bikini" ROFL! I'm so glad he takes my advice.
"My body was not something I liked to display, and I was embarrassed." Awww Chubward who wouldn't wanna hug you? *hugs*
Reviewer: Dragonflyidt Signed
Date: March 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: 1997-New kid
I LOVE Alice, and I love fics that make me love Alice. So far this is my favorite fanfic Alice ever. I just want to hug her.
I had totally forgotten about The Wallflowers…I loved that song, “One Headlight”. The Wallflowers and Savage Garden were what I remember listening to in ’97…well that and The Spice Girls, but I DO NOT like admitting how much I loved The Spice Girls back then. ’97 was “Viva Forever” year. LOL, my lighthearted years, before my dark H.I.M.-“Join Me in Death” stage.
Rosalie's bitchiness makes me laugh. "She had softened somewhat at that, but still cut a huge path around me when she was in my presence" LOL!
"She flashed me a dazzling smile and reached up to hug me before dashing off, leaving me standing there dazed." Chill out Ed, you'll get plenty of tail when you grow up. :)
“does my ass look fat in these pants?” LOL. Should she be saying 'fat' around Edward? Isn't it a touchy subject.
Author's Response: We are glad you enjoyed it. The characters will grow and change over time...
And that's kind of the point - nothing is off limits or touchy between them from the get go. He doesn't think twice of those words in reference to her (other than she's nuts) and that's a revelation for him.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Dragonflyidt Signed
Date: March 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: 1997-First day
"book bag slung over one shoulder and blue Chucks strapped firmly to my feet.
A flash of Napoleon Dynamite went through my head. You are under Emmett’s protection…."
This fic is so good! I do however have to point out that Chucks weren't popular in the 90s and no high school kid would have been wearing them to school unless they got their kicks out of being teased. And also Napoleon Dynamite was definitely not out in 1997. It came out in 2004, when I was a senior in high school, so 1997 Bella could not have been having flashes of “Pedro offers you his protection” going through her head :D
"Alice bounced toward him, all five feet of her looking about waist high to new boy. Could be convenient in a couple of years. At least for him." ROFL! Alice ftw!
OMG, Bella calls Charlie 'dad'. YEY! I love Charlie, I love reading about them getting along like regular father and daughter.
"This kid was willing to relive his own humiliation to relieve mine. That counted for bonus points on the Bella Swan scale of making friends." Awwww...I think we're all with Bella on that one.
Author's Response: We are aware of the Napoleon Dynamite snafu and it's corrected in our docs, however, Chucks *were* popular in some places in the 90's ( I know that one for a fact!). Just depends, I guess, on where you grew up! Trends differ from region to region, I suppose.
Charlie plays a HUGE role in this fic, even as a supporting character, and is definitely a "dad". We like writing him that way too:)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
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