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Penname: mella [ Contact]
Real name: Melissa
Status: Member
Member Since: April 14, 2009
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Summary:
 What if the wolf pack hadn't interrupted Laurent before he bit Bella? This is the story of Bella being changed despite Edward leaving her to prevent it from happening.
Rated for later chapters. Just like in New Moon, Edward will make an appearance eventually!
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Laurent, Quil, Rosalie, Sam, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes
Word count: 71429
[Report This] Published: December 09, 2008 Updated: November 24, 2009
Reviewer: mella Signed
Date: April 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Us
Just read the whole lot in one sitting and WOW! I didn't think it was possible to love Edward anymore than what I did, but you have done it!
I'm dying to know what they get up to on their date, I'm not even going to try and guess cause you'll just surprise me like with the Tanya incident
Can I just say that i'm in total awe of your talent. I've been trying to read a great deal of fanfic, but I have yet to finish any besides yours. Please keep writing...
Reviewer: mella Signed
Date: May 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Attack
Wow great chapter. Loved the fight and especially the necklace part. Keep it up
Summary: 
Four weeks before her wedding to Edward, Bella is frustrated. She knows there's little-to-no chance of getting him to bend his rules and boundaries now, but there's no harm in fantasizing about what could happen later. So she begins compiling a list of things that she and Edward can do together once they're happily married. She's surprised to find she might be able to cross some things off earlier than she thought...
Story contains mature themes and is not intended for younger readers.
Thanks to Mandi, aka m81170, for the great banner!
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes
Word count: 187877
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2010
Reviewer: mella Signed
Date: May 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: The Wedding
I am totally lost for words. What a fantastic chapter, and at such a diificult time for you. You, Laura Cullen are amazing!
This was the best chapter for so many reasons: the wedding, Bella's unique gifts, jacob imprinting on someone his own age,Bella stripping, their first nite of husband and wife (Go Edward).
Its exactly what was missing in BD. Please keep it up, I'm just as addicted to your story as I was to the originals.
Reviewer: mella Signed
Date: April 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Just started reading The List last nite and can't wait now for your next chapter! I am just as addicted to this as I was to the saga. You have such a talent, you've opened up the characters further and taken them to a place where I was just dying for them to get to in the saga, while still being true to the essence of Twilight. WOW
This is so good it leaves me gasping, wanting more. Keep it up and thank you!
Reviewer: mella Signed
Date: April 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: 7 Days
Even though it was short, still a great chapter. Loved it that Edward found the list and made an addition. I didn't think it was possible to love Edward any more, but you've made me. In the back of the chevy, how romantic! Great work as always, can't wait for more
Reviewer: mella Signed
Date: April 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Yet another great chapter. Please keep em coming! Oh and my boyfriend syays to say thank you too...
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