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Penname: trixie cullen [Contact]
Real name: chris
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Member Since: April 14, 2009
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Summary:

Special thanks to mellyfrisco6 for this new and improved banner.

Post Eclipse.  Breaking Dawn never happened.  Bella and Edward are engaged to be married, but Bella can't seem to ignore the feelings she still has for Jacob.  Will she stay with the vampire who broke her heart, or will she run to the werewolf who put it back together?

Coming Full Circle has won praise from The Wolfpack Awards:

MOST SUSPENSEFUL

MOST ORIGINAL PLOT

BEST IMPRINT

Winner of "Most Loved Imprint Character" in the Summer JBNP Awards!

 

*And special thanks also go out to precioustandi for this banner as well.

 


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 46 Completed: No Word count: 415372
[Report This] Published: January 31, 2009 Updated: September 24, 2012


Reviewer: trixie cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter Twenty-Nine

Love this story!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review.  I'm actually working on the next chapter as we speak.  I think I'm finally getting back into the swing of things.  Hopefully I'll have a new chapter to post within the next 2 weeks.  Thanks again. :)

 
Standing Alone by right2write Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 268]
Summary:
Banner"He's gone." It is something of a mantra for me. Edward left me in the woods years ago. It is hard to recall how many months I spent in a walking coma but one day I awoke from it determined to live all on my own and vowed never again to let thoughts of Edward and his wayward family wound my heart again. It seemed to work for a while. By sheer determination I willed them out of my heart and mind, until my final year of college. A gift from a friend changed everything. A simple CD downloaded from a webpage and burned onto a generic looking Disc held them, melodies of a wounded heart. From the piano Alice tiptoed and twirled across my mind brandishing her contagious joy like a sword into my heart. Other songs, seemingly musical representations of a family that was almost mine, tore into my mind and heart haunting me. It became an addiction for me. I listened every night. I listened on the long drive to California to my new job, convinced it would somehow end the pain with over exposure to emotions long since buried. Until one night my window was left open and dreams crept in and I cast the music away. But I was too late. Somehow it had called them to me. But my wounds were healed and my life in a new place had no room for them in the sunshine. The Cullens, however, each had something to say about my new life.

I own nothing Twilight it all belongs SM!


Categories: AU Characters: Bella
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Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 38947
[Report This] Published: March 10, 2009 Updated: June 11, 2010


Reviewer: trixie cullen Signed
Date: May 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Jasper's Heart

I like this story and the focus on Bella trying to be independent of the Cullens (even though we know that she is still longing to be with all of them). I think that although she's not ready yet to see Edward, he should try to leave her some clues to show that he loves her and misses her.  I'm thinking that he could make her another CD or something that shows how haunted he's been since he left and shows his sorrow for his mistake.

Please keep going though!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review and giving me something to consider. I hope to have the next chapter up soon.

 
Like Night and Day by EllaB Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1273]
Summary:

“Three things cannot be long hidden: the sun, the moon, and the truth.”

Alice’s werewolf blindness never allowed her to see Bella’s cliff diving at La Push, so she and the rest of the Cullens continued to stay away from Forks.

Bella struggles with her changing feelings for Jacob, her pain from Edward’s rejection, and her lingering feelings of love for the vampire who broke her heart and disappeared. Will Jacob and Bella find their way to each other and get their chance at happiness? And when a miserable and heartbroken Edward returns to beg Bella for forgiveness, what will she do?

As relationships change, Victoria continues her vendetta.

** Nominated for a Bellie Award for "Best 'Edward Who?' Fic!" **

** Nominated for two Indie Twific Awards for "Best Love Triangle" and "Best New Moon Story!" **

** Like Night and Day placed second in The Wolfpack Awards for "Favorite Jacob" **

Thanks you to catonspeed and the ladies of Altered Lions and Sacrificial Lambs for the new banner and your general awesomeness!

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Quil, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Victoria
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Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 127337
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2009 Updated: July 19, 2010


Reviewer: trixie cullen Signed
Date: May 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Fate's Decision

Being a team edward girl, it's hard for me to read some of the Jacob fanfiction.  This, however, was excellent.  You did a great job of demonstrating the conflict within Bella, the anguish of Edward, and the patience of Jacob.  Nicely done! 

 
Summary:

 

Oct 2009:  Nominee, Best AU AH, The Moonlight Awards
Winter 2010:  Nominee, Best 'Under The Radar' Fic, The Faithful Shipper Awards
November 2010:  Nominee, Best Angst, Best Lemon, Most Original Storyline (Rare Gem division), Rare Gem Awards

Bella Swan attends group therapy to placate her worried father, remaining mute about the events that led to her suicide attempt.  Mesmerized by the sullen, silent stranger who enters five minutes late each session, she is shocked into action the day he finally speaks up, her pierced tongue forming words aloud for once...

Edward Cullen obliges his father and sees his colleague, Dr. Jones, for individual and group therapy after his near-demise - the physical one, that is.  For Edward knows that inside, he's already dead, destroyed by the painful memories he commemorates with tattoos like mile markers...

Two damaged souls who speak the same language come together by chance.  But can the damaged save each other in the wake of revelations to come?

This story's first chapter began as a finalist for the Tattward/Inkella one-shot contest, and is rated NC-17 for language, lemons and disturbing themes/imagery including suicide attempts, substance abuse, self-harm and scenes of violence.  It deals heavily with issues of mental illness and healing; please read with care.

Canon pairings, AU-AH, somewhat OOC.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Bree, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Heidi, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Leah, Mike, Other Character, Paul, Quil, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 44 Completed: Yes Word count: 223921
[Report This] Published: September 20, 2009 Updated: February 26, 2012


Reviewer: trixie cullen Signed
Date: September 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

This chapter was very well written. You can understand wny Bella did what she did and got high, but you can also see why the Quiluete are so angry with her. 

I am curious how Edward is going to handle it, if he will become angry with Bella or help her to address the pain.

 
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This is Breaking Dawn from Edward's POV, using the same scenes and dialogue but with new scenes added as well -- the latter of which are entirely the product of my over-active imagination. New scenes include the lemons sorely lacking from the original.


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: No Word count: 194511
[Report This] Published: November 16, 2009 Updated: September 07, 2010


Reviewer: trixie cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Surprise

seriously awesome.  I think this is a better EPOV than Stephenie herself coudl have written  Please keep it up!

 
Summary:

An old, dilapidated hospital residing in the outskirts of Forks, Washington, sits untouched - other than being the occasional setting of a teenage party. Everyone knows the rumors, and it's because of those rumors rebellious teens are lured there. They want to be the first to spy the young man who supposedly lives inside its walls, the man who's either a ghost or crazed maniac that murders those courageous enough to enter the building.

No one has ever seen him, or at least no one that's ever lived to tell the tale. But it's all just rumors, right? Well, Bella Swan is about to find out.

 

Rated for subject matter and content. OOC. Canon pairings.

 

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Warning: There is mention of physical abuse in this story.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Jessica, Marcus, Mike, Rosalie, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 89825
[Report This] Published: February 13, 2010 Updated: July 12, 2010


Reviewer: trixie cullen Signed
Date: April 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: A State of Serenity and Rapport

Tormented, sexually repressed Edward is my favorite.  Looking forward to future chapters!

 
Beyond Time by tkegl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1733]
Summary:

After the Cullens leave Forks, a twist of fate lands Bella in Chicago in 1918. She thinks it's her second chance... a chance to build a life with a human Edward. But when she finds him, he's not quite what she expected... and Bella has some hurdles to overcome to create the future she's hoping for.

 

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Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes Word count: 286468
[Report This] Published: February 17, 2010 Updated: June 05, 2011


Reviewer: trixie cullen Signed
Date: October 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality

I can't wait for the next chapter!

 
Reviewer: trixie cullen Signed
Date: October 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose

I love this story - it's one of the few that keeps me hanging on the edge of my seat.  From the moment she came back in time, I have thought this would be the eventual conclusion, but it doesn't make it any easier to bear reading it on the page.  Thanks for writing.

 
Reviewer: trixie cullen Signed
Date: October 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30: Of Fear and Fate

I am loving this story...it's one of the few on FF that I just can't see the ending coming, and I feel the angst right along with Bella.  Keep up the good work.

 
The Blizzard by she_viking Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1402]
Summary:

Bella is walking home during a blizzard and stumbles upon a homeless man on the ground. Despite her better judgment she decides to save him from the cold, and the night turns into something she never expected. Rated NC-17 for language and lemony stuff.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No Word count: 127182
[Report This] Published: April 07, 2010 Updated: June 22, 2011


Reviewer: trixie cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I love this story...please update soon!!!  Don't leave us hanging!

 
London Rain by duders79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 992]
Summary:

 

London RainEvie Russo works hard and plays hard.  She also has a penchant for late night internet browsing, focussing her attentions on Robert Pattinson.  This story is about what happens when the object of her fantasies becomes a reality. 

How will the fantasy compare to the reality?  Whether she likes it or not, Evie Russo is about to find out...

(Big thanks to candykizzes24 for the awesome banner!)


Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: No Word count: 275820
[Report This] Published: June 02, 2010 Updated: December 06, 2011


Reviewer: trixie cullen Signed
Date: October 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Resolutions

Loving this story!  Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

trixie cullen,

Thank you so much!  I have 30 chapters written so far and still writing.  Hope you continue to enjoy!

Duders

 
Reviewer: trixie cullen Signed
Date: November 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Persistence of Time

Time for Evie to reevaluate what is important to her.



Author's Response:

This is true.  There's a lot of change coming for her. 

 
Summary:

There's a dusty old bookstore in Seattle where the proprietor keeps odd hours and knows the location of every book in his stock.  What surprises hide in its stacks?

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 48 Completed: Yes Word count: 122523
[Report This] Published: August 12, 2010 Updated: February 01, 2012


Reviewer: trixie cullen Signed
Date: February 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

So sad the journey is over, but what a ride!   Thanks!

 
Summary:

A dark angel visits Bella Swan in her dreams, filling her with lust and unparalleled pleasure, but what happens when the line between fantasy and reality starts to blur?  

Banner by @Miztrezboo

 


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 39 Completed: No Word count: 263309
[Report This] Published: August 22, 2010 Updated: August 16, 2011


Reviewer: trixie cullen Signed
Date: October 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Freak Out

nice chapter!

 
Summary:

A dash of racier smut to start the weekend off right. 


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Categories: Pre-Twilight, Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, Post-Eclipse, Breaking Dawn, Post-Breaking Dawn, AU, AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 110770
[Report This] Published: August 27, 2010 Updated: April 15, 2011


Reviewer: trixie cullen Signed
Date: August 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Grind by PurdueLiz

Little Nicki by Prince :)

 
I remain, Yours by momatu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1050]
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After unexpectedly being given an antique desk and finding a letter written by Edward to his cousin over nine decades earlier in a hidden compartment, Bella, on a whim, decides to respond and starts them on a journey neither could have ever imagined. 

Perhaps there are some things we aren't meant to understand, just accept....

This story will eventually contain character death - NOT Edward or Bella.


Categories: Pre-Twilight, Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 50 Completed: Yes Word count: 419120
[Report This] Published: February 23, 2012 Updated: March 09, 2013


Reviewer: trixie cullen Signed
Date: March 09, 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Loved this!!!! Sorry to see it end!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it!  You wouldn't believe how much trouble this chapter gave me! 

I'm both sorry for it to be done, but I'm thrilled it's finished.  Does that make sense?  I'm hoping to have some time to work on somthing new now.

Thanks for reviewing!





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