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Penname: Nthetwilightzone [Contact]
Real name: Denice
Status: Member
Member Since: April 12, 2009
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I am Twi-30's female that is highly addicted to the Twilight Saga; I happened upon this website after it was mentioned on another website that I am a member of; I love to read, and have not written any stories as of yet. I plan on doing so one day....but until then, I just like to read, read, read!!!!


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Mind Over Matter by SubtlePen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1378]
Summary:

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Bella challenges Edward's limits of self control by insisting that he build up his tolerance level to intimacy.

Set in the 6 week 'blank period' at the end of Eclipse / beginning of Breaking Dawn, between the battle, and the wedding.  Bella and Edward expand and deepen their physical relationship in preparation for their impending marriage.


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
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Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 70976
[Report This] Published: November 26, 2008 Updated: August 16, 2009


Reviewer: Nthetwilightzone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Alice's Gift

This is good!



Author's Response:

yay!  it's the least reviewed chapter tho - i think folks don't know what to make of it...  :(

 
Reviewer: Nthetwilightzone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: I am a stronger man than I knew

Love this...and I knew exactly what Edward meant when he stated that he was fighting the urge to kill her while having uncontrolled sex with her. This is by far my greatest fan-fic!



Author's Response:

thank you!  yeah - the reviewer that got confused about necrophilia, i think, was just reading too much into his statement....  :)

 
Reviewer: Nthetwilightzone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Not the Same

This is sooooo goood! (Yelling from the shower)



Author's Response:

...sorry, what was that?  can't har you over that strange battery-powered humming sound.....

 
Reviewer: Nthetwilightzone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Hot Tears

Best one so far....don't be surprised if I make the same comment on the next chapters, lol!



Author's Response:

the hot spring chapter is one of my faves, too.  i'm thrilled you're enjoying it too!

 
Reviewer: Nthetwilightzone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Breakfast, and some light reading

I love the way Edward and Bella is portrayed in this story. It's like the adult version of Eclispe and the beginning of Breaking Dawn.....it's what I have been missing...LOVE IT!



Author's Response:

i agree.  i think of this as all the 'adult' material SM left on her laptop when she sent the draft to her publisher as a 'teen novel.'   :)

 
The List by Laura Cullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13652]
Summary:

Four weeks before her wedding to Edward, Bella is frustrated. She knows there's little-to-no chance of getting him to bend his rules and boundaries now, but there's no harm in fantasizing about what could happen later. So she begins compiling a list of things that she and Edward can do together once they're happily married. She's surprised to find she might be able to cross some things off earlier than she thought...

Story contains mature themes and is not intended for younger readers.

Thanks to Mandi, aka m81170, for the great banner!


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
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Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 187877
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2010


Reviewer: Nthetwilightzone Signed
Date: May 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

I am sorry to hear of the death in your family and I hope your kid is feeling better! : )

 
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Date: May 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

ok, ok, you have got to write more...I have enjoyed this more than the Twilight Saga and I am totally addicted to it!!! Pleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaasssssseeeee update soon. I have been checking my email through out the day at work just to see if you have updated!!! You are a damn good writer! Edward is just too hot in this story....I LOVE HIM EVEN MORE!

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Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  Hang in there for a few more days for the update.  I had a sick kid and a death in the family this past week and I haven't gotten done what I thought I would.  So it'll be just a few more days...

 
Reviewer: Nthetwilightzone Signed
Date: July 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change

This was awesome....just awesome! I have been waiting forever for an update. This story is still listed in my favorites and will continue to remain there long after it is complete. You are an great writer...so descriptive. I can visualize every scene so clearly...Pleeeeeeezzzz update soon!!!!!  "So Good"

 
Unwanted by bloodredlust Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1577]
Summary:

Edward couldn't bear to watch his beloved Bella being torn apart from the inside by his baby… so how might things have turned out for our favourite couple if he had taken the steps to ensure Bella’s survival, rather than let his spawn kill her. Very dark, Angsty little 'what if' story.

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A HUGE thankyou to Emerald-Rosalie for the amazing banner.  I love it!


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes Word count: 85602
[Report This] Published: December 29, 2008 Updated: September 15, 2009


Reviewer: Nthetwilightzone Signed
Date: June 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Ambivalent

I love this chapter! Can't wait to read more.

 
Summary:

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All told from Edward's POV, The Acclimation Diaries, chronicles Edward’s struggles with learning to control himself and taking things one step at a time as he acclimates himself to Bella sexually in preparation of their impending wedding night.  Can he keep his desire in check or will he snap?

 

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A companion story for my one-shot, “Show Me”

TAD Banner by: falconcranelove

Indie Banner by: AngstGoddess

 


Categories: Eclipse, Post-Eclipse, Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 84817
[Report This] Published: March 19, 2009 Updated: September 19, 2009


Reviewer: Nthetwilightzone Signed
Date: May 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Delicious

This was really good. I have read a few stories where Edward and Bella "practice" before they attempt to have intercourse, and I must say that this is one of the best ones. I like what you present Edward. I also like that he has dirty thoughts in this one...it's good. You should right more.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!  I'm so glad you are enjoying this little trip inside Edward's head with me!  Please, stay tuned!!

 
Reviewer: Nthetwilightzone Signed
Date: June 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Naughty Bella, Dirty Edward

This was one of my favorite chapters. It was funny as well as hot!!! Just Purrrrrfect!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I'm so glad you are enjoying!!  Please stay tuned!! *MWAH*

 
Reviewer: Nthetwilightzone Signed
Date: June 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Painfully Slow

I am so glad that I finally got around to reading this story. It has been in favorites for awhile, but I am recently getting to it. I have read a few stories that are relative to this and I must say that this is my favorite thus far. It is so detailed......I can just see every scene in my mind.....again, purrrrfect!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, that really does mean a lot to me.  I try my best to stay in touch with my readers so if there is anything specific you'd like B&E tackle, just shoot me a message and I'll do my best to make it happen.  I write this fic for my readers as much as I write it for myself.

Again, thank you so much for reading and please, stay tuned!!  *MWAH*

 
Reviewer: Nthetwilightzone Signed
Date: June 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Only Words

And I thought that it could not get any better...hotdamn!!!! I love the countdown...that was just plain sensuous and HOTTTT! I would like to see Edward loose control and bite Bella during there honeymoon. The one thing that I did not like about Breaking Dawn is that he did not actually bite her.

You my dear, are a very good writer and very descriptive. Once again, this was PURRRRFECT!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I'm so glad you are enjoying!!!  I will bring up the biting with Edward, all ideas must go through him because this is his story after all ;-) 

Again, thank you very much for reading and please stay tuned!!  *MWAH*

 
Summary:

Bella and Edward have happily been together for decades but Bella craves something new and exciting in their sex life. Jasper steps up to the plate to fill the void in Bella. Where do they go from here and who else will help them along the way? One-shot turned into a lemony story.

 

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Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 18995
[Report This] Published: April 06, 2009 Updated: July 16, 2010


Reviewer: Nthetwilightzone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

WOW....WOW.......WOW!!!!! This is so eroctic...please keep writing...Take it to the next level!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you. I plan on taking it to the next level, and beyond.

 
Reviewer: Nthetwilightzone Signed
Date: May 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Love it!

 
Summary:

Edward and Bella have reached a new level of intimacy in their relationship just prior to their wedding.  This one-shot outtake shows us Edward's point of view from the story "Mind Over Matter:  Chapter 14, 'Taboo'."

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I suggest you read Mind Over Matter, especialy the chapter "Taboo" before you read this, although it will probably be an enjoyable read either way...

This Out-Take is brought to you by the popular demand of my readers and reviewers!  I guess the chapter i posted in M.O.M. just wasn't smutty enough for you, ya pervs!  *silly grin*

 

Vamp AU, (Mostly) Canon BxE, Rated NC-17 for graphic descriptions... of Cullenlingus... and some other things that might gross you out.

 

My deep gratitude to NINAPOLITAN for permission to use the word "Cullenlingus" from her outrageously entertaining story, The Bella Swan Diaries...  GO READ IT.  (Sorry, no Hot Bitch in this one-shot)

Thank you also to my fabulous banner goddess (all will bow down before her!), Stavanger1.  thanks for taking pity on my photoshop-ineptitude.    i lurve you hard, beh beh.

 

Disclaimer:  I do not own the Twilight series, nor any of the characters created by Stephenie Meyer. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.

 


Categories: Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3341
[Report This] Published: April 19, 2009 Updated: April 20, 2009


Reviewer: Nthetwilightzone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Cullenlingus

Damn, you just have a way of making everything so dirty, sound sooooo goood. After all, Eddie is a vamp!!!!!



Author's Response:

*flattered*  

...but, dirty IS good!

 
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EPOV. Edward is having trouble balancing his urges for Bella's blood and Bella's body before the wedding. What started out as a simple "Practice Fic" has become a retelling of BD from EPOV that lets us see just how much he struggles for control at every turn.

Warning: Edward's got issues. Some dark images and angst, but nothing too bad and quickly giving way to steamy goodness.

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Categories: Post-Eclipse, Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 132400
[Report This] Published: May 11, 2009 Updated: March 30, 2010


Reviewer: Nthetwilightzone Signed
Date: August 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: The Other Boot

This is an awesome story. I love it! I hardly ever make a habit of reading incomplete stories, but I just could not help myself with this one. I hope that you continue with the chapters!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Another chapter is on its way soon!

 
Reviewer: Nthetwilightzone Signed
Date: February 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Training, Trust, and Christmas

Guilty! I have been reading your updates, but have not left reviews as I previously did. This is a very good story! It is saved in my favorites....I was a little concerned after I did not receive any alerts for awhile but totally understand that you have a life outside of Fanfic (smiles) keep up the good hot vamp sex.....LOVE IT!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!! I'm trying to update more regularly now, hopefully you won't have to wait as long.





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