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Real name: Donna Hull
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Summary: Feature

 

Bella begins working for the elusive and distant Edward Cullen who she discovers is hiding behind an elaborate charade to maintain his secret lifestyle. Bella is determined to find out the mysteries of Edward Cullen but with what results? AU. Mystery/Humor/Angst


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: No Word count: 173201
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2009 Updated: December 27, 2009


Reviewer: dhull Signed
Date: September 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

This was HILARIOUS!  I loved this chapter!!!  I couldn't stop laughing...Bella thinking he's gay!  I can totally see it and him being shocked.  I love it - Gay Vampire CEO Crime Fighter!

 
Summary: Feature

 

While hunting one afternoon, Emmett, Jasper and Carlisle stumble upon what appears to be a corpse.  When they learn it's a severely broken vampire, they take him home to do what they can to help.  But of course, fate has plans for this man.  Canon Couples.  AU.  DARK Themes.


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes Word count: 158872
[Report This] Published: February 26, 2009 Updated: October 31, 2011


Reviewer: dhull Signed
Date: February 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: The Vision

Michellephants,

There's no hate here from me!  When you can give me an update I know you will!! 

I really have enjoyed reading VITB!!!  Thanks for writing it and Happy Anniversary!  I look forward to your updates!!!

Remember - no hate only love here for VITB!!!

dhull (Austin, TX)

 
Help Wanted by jaxon 22 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3038]
Summary:

Bella Swan applies for the job of PA to the rude, arrogant Hollywood film star Edward Cullen.

Can Bella keep her feelings for her boss in check so she can do her job?

A/H, OOC, luscious and graphic lemons and bad language.

A million and one thank yous to Rachel1313 for the spectacular banner! You are my hero, bb!!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 52 Completed: No Word count: 473901
[Report This] Published: May 26, 2009 Updated: March 28, 2011


Reviewer: dhull Signed
Date: April 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Wishful Thinking

Holy shamwows Batman!!!  Wipe me off the floor!  That was a fuckawesome chapter!  Whew.....

I think Tanya better watch the hell out!  Having Edward set her straight surely had more of an impact on her than if Alice or Bella would have done it....Muy caliente, si?!?!

Anxiously awaiting the next update! 

dhull (Austin, TX)

 
Reviewer: dhull Signed
Date: February 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Surprise (Part One)

As you said in the A/N, "Hells yes..." to the Domward! *wiggles eye brows*....  I'm glad Bella appears to be getting her head around the gossip & photogs too!

I'm really looking forward to Belward traveling to Italy to meet the parents! LOVE, LOVE, LOVE your story!!!!

dhull (austin,tx)

 
Reviewer: dhull Signed
Date: March 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Surprise (Part Two)

Jaxon22,

Hales yeah - I'm still reading!  I love your fic!  Can't wait for the Italy trip and I'm glad they've settled the issue of where Bella will live!  I think they should be able to manage living together!! ;)

Thanks for writing!!!

dhull (Austin, TX)

 
Desiderata by kimpy0464 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 619]
Summary:

A special thanks to NaughtySparkle for the banner!

HE'S SMIRKY. SHE'S SNARKY. AND THEY'RE FLOATING DOWN THE RIVER OF DeNIAL TOGETHER!

Edward Cullen is a well-known director for an independent film company, Masen Masterworks. He is filming his latest project in the town of Forks, Washington. Bella Swan is a baker for her best friend Alice at Alice's Wonderland Cafe and Mad Tea Party, also located in Forks. Desiderata is latin for “desired things or something that is needed, wanted.” This story is meant to represent that state of feeling for both Bella and Edward. What happens when their pig-headed stubbornness gets in the way of true love and happiness? Based upon the Desiderata of Happiness by Max Ehrmann and Pride and Prejudice by Jane Austen.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 151974
[Report This] Published: June 13, 2009 Updated: November 26, 2009


Reviewer: dhull Signed
Date: September 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: CASTING SPELLS

Love your story!  I'm having a lot of fun reading!!!  BTW what is a Rob pron collection?  I love RPattz!

Donna Hull

dhull@austin.rr.com 



Author's Response:

dhull, I'm so happy you are having fun reading my little story--that's what it's all about!! 

What is a Rob pr0n collection? It is any random pic that gets distributed on the internet. On Twitter, people are linking to RP pics ALL THE TIME. I have such a huge collection that I download on my harddrive, that sometimes I wonder if i have enough room for it all. (That's an exaggeration, it isn't really THAT bad). A great source for Rob Pr0n is Robsessedpattinson.com. 

People use the word pr0n interchangeably with porn, because porn tends to get blocked by spam filters, and pr0n does not. Just a clever internet user tool.

 
Summary:

Dr. Edward Masen is a single father of two, a recent widower, and in desperate need of a nanny. Bella Swan just graduated from Penn State University with degrees to become a teacher.  With dreams temporarily on hold, she is literally knocked off her feet by a certain Masen boy, or perhaps two.  After much public begging from them, Bella accepts the job.  Hey, it's not teaching, but a job's a job, and a job means money. What could possibly go wrong?

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Thank you Lou for the fabulous banner! I absolutely LOVE it!


Categories: AU, AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 47494
[Report This] Published: June 27, 2009 Updated: January 04, 2010


Reviewer: dhull Signed
Date: December 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Go Girl

Hazelnut406 - I LOVE your story and look forward to your updates!  Please know there are those of us who enjoy your creative journey of Confessions of a Not Teenaged Nanny!  You know you can't please everyone and these yahoos are to stupid just do like you said:  JUST DON'T READ IT IF YOU DON'T LIKE IT!  I, however, have my thoughts abt these dumbasses:  they are just jealous b/c they have NOT one creative bone in their body and just wish they could write a story! 

Have an awesome time in Vegas baby!  I'm headed there at the end of January w/girlfriends!

Merry Christmas! 

Donna Hull

 
The Taste of Sin by emarroquin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 207]
Summary:

After living on the blood of humans for decades Edward returns home to his family. He finds things are very different from when he left. Can a brown eyed orphan help him cure his thirst once and for all? Or make him hunger for more than blood? B/E OOC/AU lemons-

 

 

Taste of Sin Banner

Banner by the amazing Anne Cullen


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charles, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 26830
[Report This] Published: July 02, 2009 Updated: March 22, 2010


Reviewer: dhull Signed
Date: March 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Auntie

I just started reading this story!  It's AWESOME!  I love it!!!  I can't wait for you to update so I can find out what happens!  Thousand year old Tanya better NOT hurt Bella!  I'm sure she will have sympathy for Bella; being half human, menstrating, and finding out that Bella can read her thoughts! 

Thanks for writing!

 
Summary:

Life in a maternity unit is full of ups and downs!  

Bella Swan, an experienced midwife at Forks Hospital meets the new obstetrician, Edward Cullen and the attraction is instant.

As their hands touched, she gasped softly as she felt the shock of electricity that seemed to pass through their skin.  Dropping his hand abruptly, her brown eyes wide in surprise, Bella stepped back.  Without volition, Bella felt her face flame with another cursed blush.  Damn, she was 26 years old.  When was she going to stop blushing like a schoolgirl? 

Banner by Twimom817 @ TA


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes Word count: 226754
[Report This] Published: July 13, 2009 Updated: September 12, 2010


Reviewer: dhull Signed
Date: February 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Awww!  A great chapter!  I love your story!!

Thanks for writing!

dhull

 
Reviewer: dhull Signed
Date: February 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I think you gave "Your" Edward the right reaction to the pregnancy.  I agree w/you about it being OOC if he had thought she cheated.....Anyway, it was an AWESOME chapter!

I'm looking forward to your updates!!!

dhull (austin,tx)

 
Summary: Feature

 

Bella had the perfect life.  She was married to her longtime best friend, had a great job and a beautiful son…until a careless driver stole her happiness.

Edward was fulfilling his dreams.  His residency was almost over, he had a gorgeous fiancé, and he was ready to move forward, starting a family…until a devastating break-up and a health scare in his family shake his foundation.

See, sometimes, life doesn’t go the way you want.  Sometimes, things can happen that change the course you choose.  And most of the time, it takes courage to walk down the new path.

What if that new path started with a tee ball team?

 

Big thanks to sigh-for-sigh for the banner!!

 

Play with me on the forum.  I now have a thread in the Alternate Human thread.  

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie, Seth, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: No Word count: 116372
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2009 Updated: October 05, 2010


Reviewer: dhull Signed
Date: February 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Epilogue: Life Goes On

I enjoyed reading your story SO MUCH!  Thank you for writing it!

dhull (austin,tx)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!  I'm so glad you enjoyed my story! 

 
Summary:

**Banner made by: Oceanwaters2006**

 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella's had enough of Edward holding back from her.  She enlists some unexpected help in her pursuit to get Edward to let go of his Victorian views on love and sex.  When unexpected events occur that change the plan for Bella's transformation, what course will their lives take?

Lots of lemons/humor.  Canon couples.  I took the story OOC because I wanted to let them be a little less uptight.  I wanted them to have a lot more fun and a lot less fighting.

THANKS TO OCEANWATERS2006 FOR THE AMAZING BANNER!!!


Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 173485
[Report This] Published: July 17, 2009 Updated: April 25, 2010


Reviewer: dhull Signed
Date: February 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Torture at 40,000 Feet

I really enjoyed this chapter and Bella's sexual torture of Edward!  I'm looking forward to what's coming!

Thanks for writing!

dhull

 
Reviewer: dhull Signed
Date: February 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Afterglow...and Aftermath

*Raises hand to Darthmouth question*  Yes please! 

Love this chapter too!!  I'm proud of Edward and his restraint!  I love that you had Embry go off to Alaska w/Tanya!

I'm really looking forward to your next chapter and what's in store for the couple!

dhull (austin, tx)

 
Summary:

Edward leaves Bella at the beginning of New Moon.  Bella then moves to the East Coast to escape her past.  As she takes the final steps to heal completely, the past, both hers and others, comes back to find her.


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Other Character, Phil, Renee, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 21037
[Report This] Published: July 25, 2009 Updated: March 23, 2010


Reviewer: dhull Signed
Date: March 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Breaking Bella

No way, I didn't fall asleep!  I'm really enjoying your story!  I'm looking forward to understanding more about the ghost, how the Cullens handle Miss Victoria and how Bella works it out with Bella!  Thanks for writing it!!!

I hope everything will be ok for you.....Just know that you are in my thoughts!  Stay strong, stay tough!

dhull (Austin, TX)

 
Summary:

A few weeks before Bella and Edward's wedding, something terrible happens in the state of Washington.  Can the Cullens protect Bella and her father from the living dead?

Rated NC-17 for Graphic violence and language.

Carlisle, zombies


Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Other Character, Rosalie, Seth, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 54019
[Report This] Published: July 26, 2009 Updated: June 11, 2011


Reviewer: dhull Signed
Date: February 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Glad you didn't give up on your story!  I find it VERY entertaining!!!

Thanks for writing!!!

dhull :)

 
Reviewer: dhull Signed
Date: September 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I've really enjoyed your spin with having Zombs!  Please continue to write as it has been very entertaining!

 
Reviewer: dhull Signed
Date: August 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I'm sorry for the lack of comments. :( I have found TIASW very entertaining!  I found it funny you had been writing your story and a while after Zombieland came out!  LOL!! 

You definitely have thrown readers by having certain characters die, but in a time and atmoshpere you have, it IS BOUND to happen!  Every chapter, I get more concerned that the Cullen's and Co. won't make it to safety!  *bites nails*  So, you are most definitely doing your job as a writer!!!!

Thanks for giving us a different scenerio!  I have thoroughly enjoyed reading your story!!!

dhull (Austin, TX)

 
Summary:

 

The summer before her junior year in college, Bella moves to be closer to her father. All the while adding some much needed space from her crazed frat-boy ex-boyfriend. Being there for her father comes with the fresh start she needs. (One without men to complicate it) Until, one evening after her shift the most gorgeous man she has ever laid eyes on...comes to her aid. He causes Bella to almost forget the vow she's taken against the opposite sex. Almost. That is until the realization that he's a frat boy and she's never going there again. No matter how those intense green eyes make her feel.

What will happen when Bella transfers to the University of Washington and meets a handsome coed, Edward? Will she find peace from her past or be stuck playing the part?

 

(thanks to ekimmuh for her help with the summary)


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 177757
[Report This] Published: August 03, 2009 Updated: September 03, 2010


Reviewer: dhull Signed
Date: December 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Raging Poet

The song I listen to when I'm pissed off is "Hells Bells" by ACDC...

I really like your story and how it is building.  I love Charlotte as a character.  Her personality is awesome and I would love to have her as a BF (it doesn't hurt she is also from Texas too!)

Good luck with hitting your 500 reviews!  I gotta know whose glaring!!  I'm looking forward to reading your unfolding story!

Donna Hull (Native Texan/6th generation) 

 
Summary:

Bella Swan has moved home to Forks. It's only a matter of time until she crosses paths with Edward Cullen, her former best friend and first love. They parted on bad terms years ago, and both thought that they had moved on... All-human, LEMONS.

touchstone67 - hollaaaaa

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Completed: No Word count: 132849
[Report This] Published: August 04, 2009 Updated: April 11, 2010


Reviewer: dhull Signed
Date: November 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: But for now, Love, let's be real

I'm sorry your life sucks for you!  Hang in there!  Life is hard and there is no manual to tell us what it is that we need to be doing.  I just want you to know there will always be good times and bad times (like you probably don't need me tell'n ya that one)...Keep your head up and NEVER give up!!  I REALLY enjoy your story!!  Thanks for writing! 

 
Reviewer: dhull Signed
Date: March 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Winter Formal

I'm glad they've gotten themselves back together....I'm just waiting to see how youhave them handle the reality of a baby....if it's really his......hmmm....

Love your story and I'm looking forward to your next update!

dhull (Austin, TX)

 
Summary:

Edward Masen is a former NFL football player who was injured and could not return to playing. After taking some time off to figure out what he wanted to do with his life, since playing football was out of the question, he decided to go with coaching high school football. He leads a simple, quiet life with his friends in Forks until he meets the woman that will change his life forever. Bella Swan decides to move back home with her younger brother when she gets a teaching position at her old school in Forks. AH/Canon Couples/alternating between Edward and Bella POV. Rated M ;)

Huge thanks to Jessica1971 for being my beta once again.  I could not do this without her. :) 

Disclaimer: SM owns Twilight.

Thank you to Heatherdawnc for making another terrific banner for me. =)

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie, Seth
Challenges:
Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes Word count: 170353
[Report This] Published: August 09, 2009 Updated: March 02, 2010


Reviewer: dhull Signed
Date: February 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Going Home

I really enjoyed reading your story!  It was AWESOME!!!!  Thanks for sharing it!

dhull (Austin, TX)

 
Reviewer: dhull Signed
Date: March 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Epilogue

It was a PERFECT ending for this couple!  You couldn't have written it any better!  Thanks for sharing it with us!

dhull (Austin, TX)

 
Summary: Feature

 Thank you, hellacullen, for the awesome banner!

Edward’s rebellious period didn’t last a few years; it lasted seventy.  A solitary hunter on the fringe of society, he stumbles across a young woman praying. Can he seduce her away from everything she's ever known? And will he be willing to fight for Bella instead of fighting against her?

AU, a bit OOC, canon couples.  Rated for lemons, violence and adult subject matter.

Banner by Zesty_T, awesome!

Banner by n7of9 Thank you!

Banner by readergoof, thank you!

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 129165
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2009 Updated: March 27, 2010


Reviewer: dhull Signed
Date: March 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 The Pride of Lions

Ok....I'm so into this story.....I'm reading it to fast and then.....cliffie!!!  I know you gotta end it somewhere; it's just - ARRGGGHHH!!!! LOL!!!  It just means I think you're really great at writing!!! IMO!

Can't wait for your next update!  Is Jacob going to meet death?  Will Edward attack Bell?  If not, who has stopped him???  Will Bella need to be changed due to the injuries Jake as inflicted?  Will Edward drain Bella?  Will Edward change Bella?  Will Aro change Bella?  Will the Cullens EVER be able to get out of this mess????  What will happen to the wolves????  AAAHHHH?  So many questions to ponder until your next update!

dhull (Austin, TX)

 
Summary:

DESS Banner

The day Edward finds his mate, his world grinds to a halt and starts spinning the other way 'round; this is true even in canon, though there it takes Edward many hundreds of pages to fully acknowledge it.  But what might be different if Edward weren't blinded by his bloodlust and hamstrung by his inability to hear his mate?  Would Edward and Bella still be the intensely romantic figures they are in canon?  What sort of ripple effect would occur from Edward's inevitable changes in behavior?  Would there still be a compelling story to tell?

The Day The Earth Stood Still is my response to these questions.  I hope you enjoy it.

AU/Canon Pairings.

 

Mrs. Perfect Mystic Award

Golden Onion Mystic Award


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No Word count: 154844
[Report This] Published: August 24, 2009 Updated: December 19, 2009


Reviewer: dhull Signed
Date: October 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: The End of The Beginning

Excellent....I love the way you are writing this tale!

 
Need to Escape by lostluggage Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5732]
Summary:

 

 

When Robert Pattinson needs to escape the crazy life of stardom- he finds an unlikely ally to see him to safety- a quiet bookshop owner who is secretly infatuated with Twilight, and a certain young British actor.


Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 97 Completed: Yes Word count: 829399
[Report This] Published: September 07, 2009 Updated: September 07, 2012


Reviewer: dhull Signed
Date: July 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58-Fall Seven Times

Steph,

I started reading your fic on Wed.  I have been trying to steal time to get into my study on my computer to read every chapter I could before having to do something or take care of something for the family!  Arrgghhh!!! 

I was so captured by your story of Rob & Jen!  I love your characters and  your writing!  Your description of Rob in the Details spread was how I thought he looked.  Was he acting in the shoot?  He did appear so disconnected....was it b/c he was hung over?  The pics of him were gorgeous but sad....Just my thoughts.....

Anyway, I was hoping Jen would still be able to carry a baby to term, but I know life is not all about what we hope to happen, but what reality actually deals to us.  *sigh*

Thanks for sharing your story!  I look forward to your next update and hope it is before I leave for vacay on Friday!!!  *crosses fingers*

dhull (Austin, TX)

 



Author's Response:

hi my dear! Welcome! 

wow! i am always amazed by your fabulous readers that read it in so short a time! amazing!

it warms my heart to hear how much you all love Rob and Jen. it truly means a lot to me!

the Details spread... i hated it. disturbed me... it was shot in december, when he was so worn out from all the New moon publicity... it really hit home to me how tired and worn he must get.i am so happy to see more people view them as i did. sad....

Jen and carrying a child. while i wont say i will go this route, she still has options. there are procedures for removing the scar tissue. it would still be a high risk pregnancy if they went that route. but there is still surrogacy... we'll see what the muse decides... grins.

i'll see what we can do about by friday, no guarantees... but we'll try.

gift is on its way!

MWAH!

steph

 




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