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Penname: sareniity [ Contact]
Real name: serena
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Member Since: April 11, 2009
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hey, i'm eighteen and i live in england. the twilight saga are my favourite books!
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Summary: Her weight had dropped. She felt frailer now, more breakable.
Her skin had taken on a translucent hue. It was strangely disturbing.
Her previously silky hair was always now a knotted, tangled mess.
Her teeth never gave her lower lip a break; It was pulsing from all the biting she'd been doing.
She stopped reading.
She drank coffee in unhealthy amounts.
She slept 3 hours a night.
God. What have I done?
Edward has to deal with the repercussions of leaving Bella.
Categories: AU, New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Word count: 10392
[Report This] Published: August 20, 2008 Updated: October 05, 2008
Reviewer: sareniity Signed 
Date: May 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Blood Lust
Wow this story is brilliant. I love it. You've got the insight to both characters dead on. I always felt that there should have been more to Edward and Bella's relationship rebuild after Italy but SM seemed to glaze over it. Please continue writing, you're doing an amazing job.
Summary: 
What if Bella’s thoughts on the plane flying back to Seattle from Italy take her in a different direction from the plot in New Moon? Just where could a little twist of fate take the characters? An indepth look at Bella's thoughts and feeling at the end of New Moon and into an AU Eclipse.
Canon couples, and rated NC17 just to be safe. I am Bella and Edward all the way, so if you like Bella and Jacob, then I am afraid this is not the story for you.
Dying By Degrees on discussion forum. http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=19&t=9136
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No
Word count: 106997
[Report This] Published: January 03, 2009 Updated: June 19, 2010
Reviewer: sareniity Signed
Date: June 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
This story is utterly brilliant. I love it so much!!! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Is that all the charms or should we expect some from Esme and Carlisle???
Summary: Edward is a lonely vampire who has been waiting for over eighty years to find his soul mate. His sister Alice has never been able to see his true love, but for good reason--she hadn't been born yet. When Alice finally sees her, plans are made to finally make Edward's dream come true.
This is a different version of Twilight, and it's told from Edward's point of view.
A little lemony, but not too graphic. Rated NC-17 for mature themes and language, and possibly for violence in later chapters.
Thanks to Evilangel6714 for the awesome banner!
Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Laurent, Mike, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya, Tyler
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes
Word count: 157222
[Report This] Published: January 06, 2009 Updated: May 21, 2009
Reviewer: sareniity Signed
Date: November 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Man vs. Monster
You are brilliant at writing romance and intimate parts of the story. I can't understand how you got a negative reaction.
Summary: *Comedy* Charlie insists Bella go camping with the Cullens, in order to acclimate herself with the great outdoors. After all, the Cullens are practically revered in town for their family camping trips, so they must know what they're doing, right? *Post Eclipse
Banner by Anne Cullen
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes
Word count: 32070
[Report This] Published: January 12, 2009 Updated: March 25, 2009
Reviewer: sareniity Signed
Date: August 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
This was the most amazing Twilight story ever. It was hilarious!!!!
Summary: What if Edward and Bella acted like regular seventeen year olds? With all the passion, lust, and curiosity that comes with being a teenager. Would Edward be able to keep both monsters in check? And will there be other more disturbing consequences to his lack of control besides just giving in? Can their new love handle anything?
A somewhat OOC re-telling of Twilight (with a few small plot changes) until Port Angeles, AU after that. Canon Pairings, Alternating POVs of Edward and Bella, Rated NC-17 for violence, language, a little alcohol/drug use, sexual acts and assault. If those topics offend you, please do not read.
Beautiful banner by: AchelleDenaliCullen
Categories: Twilight, New Moon Characters: Alec, Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Ben, Billy, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Charlie, Collin, Demetri, Edward, Eleazar, Embry, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Felix, Garrett, Irina, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Jessica, Kate, Lauren, Laurent, Leah, Liam, Marcus, Mike, Phil, Quil, Renata, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Siobhan, Tanya, Tyler, Victoria, Vladimir, Zafrina
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No
Word count: 82752
[Report This] Published: April 08, 2009 Updated: March 11, 2010
Reviewer: sareniity Signed
Date: September 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Heat
I love, love, love this story! The twist with Victoria, amazing! I really hope you continue as i love your versions of Edward and Bella together!!!
Summary: 
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Absolution [noun] - The setting free from guilt, sin, or penalty.
Bella has lost the will to live without Edward, and she makes a drastic decision that becomes the catalyst behind a series of thrilling and terrifying events that will cause both hers and Edward's world as they know it to be turned on end.
In the midst of all of this, can they find it within themselves to absolve their mistakes and maybe become more than they ever thought they could be?
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jared, Jasper, Laurent, Leah, Paul, Quil, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Word count: 49763
[Report This] Published: June 13, 2009 Updated: April 25, 2010
Reviewer: sareniity Signed
Date: August 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Part II: Chapter Three
This was brilliant. I love, love, love this story and can't wait for the next chapter!!! Author's Response: Thank you!
~Ness
Summary: Bella's family is attacked by vampires when she is young, leaving her the sole survivor. Rescued by Dr Carlisle Cullen, she is adopted into his 'vegetarian' family, consisting of him, his wife Esme and their three sons Emmett, Edward and Jasper. Struggling with her trauma, Bella finds herself developing special bonds with each of the Cullen boys.
This story has no Alice or Rosalie (or at least, not as vampires or Cullens).
Thanks to m81170 for the banner.
 
Cheers to the lovely ms_ambrosia and CatMasters for the gifs.
Categories: Pre-Twilight, Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No
Word count: 61118
[Report This] Published: September 03, 2009 Updated: March 23, 2012
Reviewer: sareniity Signed
Date: September 16, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
You are an amazing writer and i love your stories so much!!!
Summary: What if the first time Bella dreamed of Edward she wasn't really dreaming. Would their growing relationship be tainted by what had already occured?
Based on the 'that was the first night I dreamed of Edward Cullen' deleted scene from the Twilight DVD.
Thanks to m81170 for the banner.
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No
Word count: 54658
[Report This] Published: September 20, 2009 Updated: March 23, 2012
Reviewer: sareniity Signed
Date: April 21, 2011
Title: Chapter 9: Careful, Fragile
brilliant, so perfect. love that bella faught back and edward got all protective alpha male on them
cant wait for more
Summary: "Between the good pills, white coats, hallucinations and yes, even the pink elephants; this is one hell of a read." - Les Femmes De Twilight
**Winner for Best AU or Canon WIP in the Indie Twific Awards**
Bella Flanagan is being hospitalized for Dissociative Identity Disorder...Or is Bella Swan being hospitalized? Set after Edward leaves in New Moon...or I'm writing this from an asylum. Rated NC 17 for Graphic language, crude but witty humour, SEX (aka Lemons), masturbation and Canadian spelling.
"Jake is a kid. He's too young and naive to know any better. He's no match for Flanny. She's a shark, and he's a juicy 13yr old surfer in a pink bikini just begging to be chewed up. Sometimes we have to learn the hard way about what not to do. Like busting a psycho bitch out of the loony bin, getting a room, taking pills the crazy girl gives you, and then fucking her... None of those things usually lead to a happy ending. It's unfortunate because each of those things might be ok by themselves!" -Wordslinger (Author of Onside Kick)
**Banner by catonspeed**
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 48 Completed: Yes
Word count: 72913
[Report This] Published: November 11, 2009 Updated: May 31, 2011
Reviewer: sareniity Signed
Date: May 06, 2011
Title: Chapter 43: Assimilation and Disintegration
i love this story its brilliant but i am so fcuking confused right about now
Reviewer: sareniity Signed
Date: May 26, 2011
Title: Chapter 47: Sleep of Death
I am very very confused. This isn't making much sense.
Reviewer: sareniity Signed
Date: May 03, 2011
Title: Chapter 34: Enema
Wow this story is amazing, i love love love it. I'm really hoping it'll have a happy ending though. I want Edward and the real Bella happily ever after.
Summary: Did you read the Twilight series and wonder what it would be like if SM included more...passion? Heat? Lemons of ANY kind? Ever wanted Bella and Edward to have a steamy meadow scene? Smexin' in the shiny silver Volvo? Wished that leg-hitching scene in Eclipse went where you wanted it to? You're in luck...me, too! Join me and my wonderfully pervy mind as we go through the books, sprinkling lemon drops along the way.
AU, OOC, all canon pairings. Rated for sexual situations and language.
Thank you to Readergoof for the awesome banner!
Categories: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No
Word count: 41173
[Report This] Published: January 09, 2010 Updated: November 02, 2010
Reviewer: sareniity Signed
Date: June 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
WOW!
Just wow.
This was amazing. So brilliant. I wished it had happened really in the book. Would have been excellent. Can't wait for more. Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing and rating! I wish it happened this way in the book too...I really wanted to finish the chapter, actually: I would have had Edward take Bella back to the Cullen house and bite her to change her while Em and Rose torched her truck out in the middle of nowhere. Happily ever after! :-)
xoxo Sarah
Summary: 
Candy, flowers and my immense gratitude to mkystich for the most awesome of banners!! And a special thanks to my personal IT guru shyguyunlimitd for help in posting.
Bella and Edward are planning to marry but not all of the Cullens are happy about it. When the Volturi hear of the potential demise of such a strong coven, they swoop in looking for leftover trophies for Aro's collection.
Canon pairings. Rated for lemons.
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No
Word count: 72348
[Report This] Published: January 16, 2010 Updated: May 08, 2010
Reviewer: sareniity Signed
Date: November 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Conversations over Dinner
please update soon, i love this story and can't wait to find out what happens next
Summary: This is my version of New Moon as told from Edward's point of view. The dialogue is borrowed from New Moon when Edward and Bella are together , but the rest is my interpretation of what the story would have been like if Edward had told it.
Categories: New Moon Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Gianna, Heidi, Irina, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Kate, Laurent, Marcus, Mike, Other Character, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes
Word count: 121397
[Report This] Published: January 24, 2010 Updated: February 18, 2011
Reviewer: sareniity Signed
Date: September 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Memories
Brilliant story. Angsty Edward always makes me sad. I'm checking regularly for the next chapter!!! :) Author's Response: Thank you! Many tears were shed while writing this.
Reviewer: sareniity Signed
Date: August 31, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Volterra
This story is brilliant. I can't wait for more!!!!!!! Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Summary:
Alice doesn’t come back to check on Bella after the cliff diving incident. She comes back to collect her for college. The trials and tribulations of Bella going through the motions of school, missing Edward, and finding herself in spite of everything...
Categories: New Moon, Eclipse, Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes
Word count: 28966
[Report This] Published: April 04, 2010 Updated: October 29, 2010
Reviewer: sareniity Signed
Date: October 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: What You Threw Away
I love this story it's brilliant.
I was just wondering where on Bella's body the tattoo was exactly. You never said in the story though i love where the co-ordinates were to. Soo romantic.
Author's Response: Oops...Bella's tattoo is a tramp stamp....
Summary: 
Set during NM. When Edward leaves Bella in the woods, she begins to cut herself. When Charlie can't help her at home, he admits her to a rehab clinic. Can anyone pull Bella out of her depression?
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No
Word count: 7929
[Report This] Published: May 13, 2010 Updated: June 09, 2010
Reviewer: sareniity Signed
Date: June 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
This was brilliant, i can't wait for the next chapter.
Summary: 
Without Bella's love, I can merely exist. Now that I've lost her, I am bound to wander this earth, alone and unchanging for eternity. - Edward, attempting to be noble, leaves again after the Night of Tears. Now Bella must run after him and piece her broken vampire back together. When they reunite, can they begin to open up to each other and through honest conversations, start to build a stronger relationship? Eclipse/AU.
Categories: Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No
Word count: 168167
[Report This] Published: May 28, 2010 Updated: January 23, 2013
Reviewer: sareniity Signed
Date: July 12, 2011
Title: Chapter 13: Letting Go
This story is awesome, i can't wait for the next chapter! Please update really really really soon or my head may expload!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm working on the next one. Not sure when it will be ready but hopefully soon.
Until then,
TMOT
Summary: 
A look at the time SM skipped over in between New Moon and Eclipse. How did Bella get back to her pre-zombie normal?
Bella tells Edward how much he hurt her; the only problem is she tells him this in her sleep. What will Edward do to regain her trust and make this right? How did they overcome the hurt and pain he caused? What effect does this have on the Cullen family? This is a strong Bella, who does eventually get angry with Edward and put him in his place.
A big thank you goes out to FrozenSoldier who made this awesome banner!!!!!!!
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No
Word count: 34210
[Report This] Published: June 04, 2010 Updated: December 10, 2010
Reviewer: sareniity Signed
Date: September 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Flowers
Was it the Carrie/Charlotte/Berger conversation about carnations for the quote?
I love that he's sending flowers and with such meaning. It's so romantic. I hope Bella likes it. Wonder how much that all cost.
Great chapter, i love this story. Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Hey sareniity
WE HAVE A WINNER!!!!!!!!!! You are the only one who got it! Congrats!
Thanx for the stars BTW.
I tried to cost it online and I couldn't, really I wanted to try and get a pick of the flowers but it was a no go, I have to assume he blew as much as Alice on a shopping trip!
Here is the ch 6 teaser (remember it has not be edited by a beta) it is an all Bella chapter. Oh and she is talking to Renee
““But honey, why did you take him back so easily? You should be angry, baby. He needs to understand that what he did was wrong and maybe he needs to eat a little humble pie. He shouldn’t be making decision for the pair of you like that,” Renee was now slipping from ‘Mother mode’ into a more familiar role for us which is “gossipy friend”.”
I’m so happy you took the time to write me a response, it means more than you know!
Thank you.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: sareniity Signed
Date: September 27, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Reckoning
This was great. Trust Renee to be all gushy and romantic, sooo her. Missed Edward though after having so many him chapters and i'm so looking forward to their big talk. Author's Response: Hey Sareniity,
OMG five stars? You all are going to give me a big head! :) Thank you-- I love it!
Thanx I'm happy you enjoyed it. She is a gushy romantic... Bella didn't get it from Charlie LOL.
Their big talk is coming but not quite yet... patience.
Here is the un-beta’ed teaser of chapter seven, this part is in Bella’s POV, I hope you like it and it leaves you wanting more!
““Wow Bells, they’re really nice, who are they from?” Again excitement was in his eyes.
All I had to do was look at the card and my suspicions were confirmed on the envelope was the everyday calligraphy of one Edward Anthony Masen Cullen.
“Edward of course,” I replied automatically, not even bothering to mask the love and adoration in my voice.
Then he grumbled out of the room muttering something like, “of course he sends her flowers now! Thought they might be from Jake even thought it is a big arrangement.””
Thank you for reading and taking the time to review.
Cheers,
~E
Summary:
This is the story of the lives of Carlisle and Esme. Starting with Carlisle's human life and lonely vampire beginnings, then Esme's human life, before looking at how they first met, found each other again, fell in love, married, and built themselves a family.
This story is told in five parts.
Part One: Loneliness and Loss (1663-1921)
Part Two: Together at Last (1921-1922)
Part Three: Broken into Pieces (1926-1931)
Part Four: Growing Family (1933-2003)
Part Five: Everything Changes Again (2005-2006)
Winner of a Hopeless Romantic Award.
Categories: Pre-Twilight, Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, Breaking Dawn, Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: The Stories Behind The Story
Chapters: 93 Completed: No
Word count: 246204
[Report This] Published: June 23, 2010 Updated: November 11, 2011
Reviewer: sareniity Signed
Date: December 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 45: Numb
WHAT THE HELL! YOU CAN'T LEAVE IT LIKE THAT! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED!
Please update immediatly, i need to know. I'm so worried now and things were going so well with Carlisle and Esme's wedding.
Author's Response: It's OK - the next chapter is already written so I'll update as soon as possible.
Thanks for the review :)
Summary: 
The night Rosalie reveals her back-story in Eclipse, Bella has a nightmare where an angel watches her crawl down a street. What if that dream had been a little different? What if it had been the catalyst for an irreversible change in Bella's relationship with Rosalie?
Three weeks after that nightmare (one week after the battle with Victoria), a tentative friendship is cemented between the two when the rest of the family takes a weekend hunting trip. Bella and Rosalie bond over shared pain and dreams, but when the Cullens return from their trip, the new friendship tears the family apart.
While trying to save their own fledgling relationship, Bella and Rosalie must decide if they have the strength to prevent their family from falling into ruin. But who must be sacrificed for the benefit of the rest and who commits the ultimate betrayal?
Banner created by fuzzyltlwingedthing
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Word count: 41618
[Report This] Published: June 27, 2010 Updated: September 25, 2010
Reviewer: sareniity Signed
Date: July 12, 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Simple Pleasures
This story is absolutely amazing and i really hope that you continue it soon!!! I can't wait to find out what happens next!!!
Summary: 
"Bella Swan had become beautiful to me. The pain of that realization stung worse than venom ever could." NOMINATED FOR AN ETERNITY AWARD: Edward's Twilight, but not Midnight Sun. AU detours/missing moments. The slow burn begins with the flight to Alaska.
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: No
Word count: 145354
[Report This] Published: August 20, 2010 Updated: February 20, 2012
Reviewer: sareniity Signed
Date: October 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Evasive Action
Brilliant chapter, i love this story so much. It's Twilight but i love your take on it, Edward seems different but still right in your version. Can't wait for the next one. Author's Response: Thanks so much. There's lots more to come, so keep reading!
Cheers,
~W
Reviewer: sareniity Signed
Date: September 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Charmed
This is brilliant. I love this story, especially the additions like valentines day. I can't wait for more!!! Author's Response:
Oh, thank you! I loved that he tried to give her the rose; he's so sweet.
The next chapter will go to my beta for validation later today, so it should be posted soon.
I hope to hear from you again,
~W
Reviewer: sareniity Signed
Date: September 27, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Strategy
Oooooooh i love this story soooo much!!! Can't wait for more Edward/Bella interaction. You write them so well. Waiting unpatiently for the next chapter!! :) Author's Response: Hee, hee: "unpatient" -- I love that word! Fear not, there is more to come.
~W
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