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Summary:

 

Bella Swan spent the first two years of her life in Forks developing a friendship with Jacob Black that finally turned into something more.  As she begins her senior year of high school, a new family moves to town and Bella slowly begins to question the path she thought her life would follow.  Sometimes there is a difference between what you think you need and what you never knew you wanted.  Takes place during the timeframe of New Moon and Eclipse.  J/B at first, but eventually E/B. 

 

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: No Word count: 170230
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2008 Updated: July 19, 2009


Reviewer: willistongirl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 27: Survival

Wow. i always liked New Moon because it showed a lot about Bella's mind and this was just as good. I think that hearing Edward's side of the story could be very interesting and I was wonder if I could have it? Besides that request I would just like to say that I really like this story because of the fact that Edward and Bella aren't just getting together instantly, and it's not some crazy sexual tension "i'm not good enough for her, I'm not good enough for him" pity party kind of not getting thing. It's an actual story with real conflicting emotions. You describe their emotions really well.

 
All My Loving by LollirotXoX Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary: AU. We'd only spent a few spare months of my college life together. It was expected to find someone to be your sweetheart through school, and that's all it would be. Nothing serious. But something told me this was different. Bella was for real.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 9032
[Report This] Published: July 17, 2008 Updated: August 10, 2008


Reviewer: willistongirl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue - Girl

Oh my gosh you have to continue writing. You're plot, style of writing and the descriptions of the what's going on through the character's eyes are so well done. I absolutely love it.

 
Summary:

Bella is a witness in peril. Emmett Cullen is the deputy assigned to protect her. When the witness protection program proves unsafe, Emmett has Bella pose as his brother Edward's fiancée. ExB. AU/AH.

 

 

Hiding in Plain Sight

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 138506
[Report This] Published: September 14, 2008 Updated: June 14, 2012


Reviewer: willistongirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Thursday, March 20, 2008

One of my favorite stories. Not so much angst that it gets irritating but with enough plot to keep me interested. It's the perfect balance. I absolutely love it.

 
Reviewer: willistongirl Signed
Date: June 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: June 7 - June 13, 2008

I'm really glad you updated, I love this story. Please continue to write, even if I'm the only one to read it. I really want to know how it ends.



Author's Response:

thank you!

 
Reviewer: willistongirl Signed
Date: January 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: June 20 - June 24, 2008

I thought you had stopped writing!

Thank you so much for updating, I love this story.

 
Dream With Me by everwondering Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 59]
Summary:

Edward Cullen is literally the man of Bella Swan’s dreams. For the past 12 months, Bella has spent every single night dreaming of a man she's never met. But what happens when she's forced to wake up and face reality? Will Edward be there waiting for her?

A lemony one-shot.

Dream With Me


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3783
[Report This] Published: September 26, 2008 Updated: September 26, 2008


Reviewer: willistongirl Signed
Date: February 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Dream Come True

that was so cute!

wat in the world would they tell people when asked how the two of them met?

I loved it.

 
Summary:

Marve's Edward meets Wish_girl's Bella in high school. Hilarity and hijinks ensue.

 

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Categories: AU-Human, Crackfic Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 88732
[Report This] Published: September 29, 2008 Updated: December 14, 2008


Reviewer: willistongirl Signed
Date: December 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Between Love and Hate

Wats up with Carlisle? I really want confrontation between him and edward, (maybe esme) i dont really get their relationship. LOVE THE STORY!

Author's Response:

The relationship our boy has with his parents is sort of a lack of one. He, and Bella both, in this little fic are feral children. Really. Feral. Children.

Confrontation would probably never happen because in these sort of cases especially (Neglect of a sort), silence is the big enabler. 

 
Summary:

Edward's family hire Bella Swan to break the heartbreaker's heart in hopes to have him see the error of his womanizing ways. Bella realizes that they have a little too much in common and is having a little too much fun with this subject. EXB Lots of lemons later.

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 43 Completed: Yes Word count: 322353
[Report This] Published: October 21, 2008 Updated: September 13, 2011


Reviewer: willistongirl Signed
Date: December 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Assignments & Introductions

haha, i love it!   :D  the police are exactly what we need to make this a little more awkward.  

 
Secret by Twilighter620 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 223]
Summary:

As crime tarnishes the image of Seattle, Edward Masen lives as the disillusioned, hot-shot, Lieutenant of the Seattle Police Department's S.W.A.T. team. He soon realizes his fascination with the Seattle Weekly Journal's investigative reporter Isabella Woods - but all is not as it seems with Ms. Woods and her identity. Will Edward be able to change his ways and finally fall in love in a city that's tumbling to pieces?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No Word count: 111243
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2008 Updated: May 26, 2009


Reviewer: willistongirl Signed
Date: August 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Please write more. Its been forever!

 
Summary:

 Challenge Contest Picture Chasing Fire

 

"Whoa rein it in there girl, I said to myself as a slightly amused expression came over the perfect face I had just been ogling, Only this morning you were a married woman and now you're fantasizing about licking tonic water off a complete stranger? Get it together man!"

 A married woman? A sexy stranger at a bar? Tonic water? Now tell me you're not just a little bit interested, go on, tell me... 

***Written for the Official Twilight Challenge: Girl Power, Ghouls and Gorgeous Guys 


Categories: ORIGINAL FICTION Characters: Other Character
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 9904
[Report This] Published: November 03, 2008 Updated: November 03, 2008


Reviewer: willistongirl Signed
Date: March 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Fire

no i loooove it! please continue. i read your closet one and loved it so i checked out your page. you stories are great. i love that you dont try to make them all twilighty by using the character's from the book's names. its refreshing. please continue this one. its great so far.

 
Summary:

Take me in the Closet 

Truth or dare, sex education, and one wicked little girl lovingly dubbed lil' red! What could be more silly?

*Won Honorable Mention for Twilighted's second original fiction contest: Silly, Sexy and Supernatural*

 Honorable Mention

 


Categories: ORIGINAL FICTION Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3037
[Report This] Published: November 27, 2008 Updated: November 28, 2008


Reviewer: willistongirl Signed
Date: March 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

oooooooh hot. i love it!

 
Summary:

Bella is a princess. Her bodyguard Edward is an old childhood friend and has been in love with her since they were kids. Now that they are older, though, he is keeping things professional, but will he admit his feelings? Will Bella realize she loves him?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 20312
[Report This] Published: December 15, 2008 Updated: May 27, 2010


Reviewer: willistongirl Signed
Date: February 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

awwwwww...its so cute.

and it didnt have all the annoying "he doesnt want me" "she doesnt want me" crap leading up to it.  i love it.

 
Taking Chances by Evenstar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1306]
Summary:

 

Amazing new banner by SoapyMayhem!!!! Thank you so much sweetie! You're fantastic!

 

Summary:

Robert has two more days in London before he has to return to his hectic life in LA. He has no intention of letting himself anywhere near emotional attachment. Despite this, he finds himself unable to resist the brave invite of a beautiful girl at a nightclub in Soho, thinking it would be a one night thing only.

 


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Categories: Other Characters: Other Character, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: Taking Chances - Stories and outtakes
Chapters: 32 Completed: No Word count: 289305
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2009 Updated: May 05, 2011


Reviewer: willistongirl Signed
Date: August 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - A Voice On The Phone

Yay! I'm so glad you updated. Please keep writing, its great!

 
Summary:

Doctor and Nanny

 

Nine months out of the year, Dr. Carlisle Cullen is an upstanding citizen of Forks. But since his wife died and left him to raise their two sons alone, he's developed a bit of a perversion that plays out for the three hot summer months. Carlisle may hate himself for what he does, but he's beginning to think he's falling in love with the nanny.

 

Carlisle/Bella, AU-AH

A small series of related one-shots- dirty lemons

 

Thanks to my Twilighted Beta NoMoreThanUsual


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Carlisle
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 16350
[Report This] Published: March 09, 2009 Updated: April 14, 2009


Reviewer: willistongirl Signed
Date: March 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Confessions of a Conquering Cullen

i love this. y did it end. u cud have an actual story here instead of just a simple two-shot.

 
Chastity Child by alie Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 55]
Summary:

The rest of the night was a blur of clothing being removed and skin. She tasted sweet and moist, like fruit. I should have known then, that I would fall for her. Edward Cullen realizes he's fallen for his long time sex-friend Bella Swan.

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 12519
[Report This] Published: March 15, 2009 Updated: May 04, 2009


Reviewer: willistongirl Signed
Date: March 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Acceptance

i love it!

 
Revelations by R3M3MB3R M3 Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

Twilight. Jasper's POV

The night Edward drove Bella home from Port Angeles and told her everything, but on the Cullen end.

Written before I read Stephenie's "Midnight Sun"

Jasper's POV because I thought it would be interesting.

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"You have no idea how she smells, Jasper. Her blood-" his eyes were wide and wild, "it's like it calls to me. But I refused to do that. To Carlisle and Esme."

"And so you went to Denali." The corner of his mouth twitched.

"You make it sound like I ran away."

"Didn't you?" I inquired. He laughed again-that same hard frustrated laugh.

"I suppose I did, didn't I?" Suddenly, his eyes became very dark and intense. "But if I had stayed...Bella Swan would be under a gravestone right now."

Revelations

Feedback would be appreciated ^_^


Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Carlisle, Edward, Esme, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1687
[Report This] Published: March 26, 2009 Updated: April 02, 2009


Reviewer: willistongirl Signed
Date: April 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Revelations

so sweet. its probably my favorite piece of writing so far (and i've read quite a few) i usually don't like the ones where people confess things that are personal, but you make edward so vulnerable and jasper so understanding, all of it is just great. cant wait to read For Bella.

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen is a hot, bad, gangsta fella who is a new kid in the Chicago underworld. But refusing to pay his respects to the big, ruling Godfather, his arrival is not welcomed. Bella is said Godfather’s estranged daughter who fled his father’s world in an attempt at a normal life.

Both men keep clashing and bumping heads, Edward’s power grows rapidly, men are tired of the old regime, and so a sort of gangster war ensues. Bella is caught in the mayhem when she becomes a prisoner in the hands of her father’s most hated enemy and rival. With Bella as a prisioner, Edward knows her father will have no choice but to do as he is told.

But does Edward have other motives to capture Bella?

**There is rape involved in one of the later chapters. If that topic offends you, please do not read** 

 

Thanks to the awesome Caius for my banner! I absolutely love it!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No Word count: 56590
[Report This] Published: June 06, 2009 Updated: June 14, 2010


Reviewer: willistongirl Signed
Date: August 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12- Trust

I love this story. Happy ending please?



Author's Response:

Oh, definitely, just for you! ;)

 
Reviewer: willistongirl Signed
Date: August 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Imprisonment

I was reading other reviews and everybody hates Charlie. in my opinion hes just looking out for his daughter and doing his job. He doesn't know about Edward and Bella. He just wants his daughter safe.

 
Summary:

Bella Swan has moved home to Forks. It's only a matter of time until she crosses paths with Edward Cullen, her former best friend and first love. They parted on bad terms years ago, and both thought that they had moved on... All-human, LEMONS.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Completed: No Word count: 132849
[Report This] Published: August 04, 2009 Updated: April 11, 2010


Reviewer: willistongirl Signed
Date: August 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue / Carlisle's News

yes please do!

but please dont let jessica be pregnant, then edward would have to leave her for bella (cuz they always end up together) and then i would look back at this story feeling sorry for jessica and hating edward. and that would suck.

 
Summary:

VeganElla

Bella is a vegan and an activist in the extreme. When she climbs into a stranger's window to escape an opposing viewpoint, who knows what sparks will fly?

Rated NC-17 for mild sexual content, and 51 (or more) words and phrases I would never say in front of my mother


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4015
[Report This] Published: October 01, 2009 Updated: October 20, 2009


Reviewer: willistongirl Signed
Date: October 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: oneshot

can you please continue this story? at least a couple more chapters? it would make me very happy and i'd love you forever!

 
Summary:

Dr. Bella Swan goes to court to fight a traffic ticket and meets Officer "Do Me Hard" Cullen.  Alice, Bella's pot-smoking, future-telling roommate, suspects there is more to the relationship than just one night of heated passion.  The man in uniform is interested yet Bella remains doubtful.  A story of finding love in the city that never sleeps.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 29073
[Report This] Published: December 01, 2009 Updated: December 17, 2009


Reviewer: willistongirl Signed
Date: December 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: In Court With Food Then Sex?

loved it!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Good to know you loved it!  Thanks for reviewing!

 

xx

 

LaraIsAwkward

 
Episode by BoydBlog Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 869]
Summary:

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Bella Swan is a writer that is on a trip of a lifetime. Edward Cullen is a famous actor, whose life is a blur of film-sets, hotels and screaming fans. A destined encounter and a battle of mind over matter erupt amongst sensual music and a shared longing.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Edward, Emmett, James, Jasper, Jessica, Laurent, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 48 Completed: No Word count: 265821
[Report This] Published: January 02, 2010 Updated: February 05, 2013


Reviewer: willistongirl Signed
Date: January 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Breve

oh my god! i love this story!



Author's Response:

Thank you!! I love hearing that people love reading Episode! Luv BB xx





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