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Real name: marti annis
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Member Since: April 10, 2009
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36 year old mother of three, one teenage daughter who got me hooked on the whole Twilight series.  Damn her black little soul, which is far too much like mine to make me feel comfortable.


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Perspective by ekimmuh Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2527]
Summary:

Edward seeks out the counsel of his father and brothers after agreeing to be with Bella after their wedding. What will Edward do with that advise and how will he and Bella prepare for their upcoming wedding night.

Thanks to Anne Cullen for this beautiful banner.

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Categories: Post-Eclipse, Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Completed: Yes Word count: 132792
[Report This] Published: October 18, 2008 Updated: March 17, 2010


Reviewer: marti1013 Signed
Date: June 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Nice 'Pretty Woman' reference there! :D  Always enjoy this story, and I'm sorry for not having left a review before now.  Can't wait for more updates.

 

Marti!



Author's Response:

lol. Caught that did you? ;) I really hadn't planned it that way going in but it just seemed to fit the situation nicely. It was just so Edward.

Thanks for taking the time to leave me your thoughts. :)

 
Summary:

 

 

 

After weeks of Emmett teasing Bella, she plans to give him back a little of what he's been dishing out.  This time, Emmett may have bitten off more than he can chew.

 

 

Family humour.  Various POVs. 

 

 

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Thank you, Blondie, for the awesome banner . . . and the instructions on how to use it!

 

 

 


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: Missing Pages Series
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 31879
[Report This] Published: November 10, 2008 Updated: November 21, 2009


Reviewer: marti1013 Signed
Date: November 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - The Instigator

Yay!  A new chapter.  my 14 year old daughter is gonna LOVE this one!  I can't wait until she reads it later!!!!

 

Oh, those three boys.  *sigh*  to be eternally a teenager and worry alternately about adult things, and just being a kid.  forever.  hahahha!

 

Can't wait til the next one pops up!  thanks for the great read,

 

Marti  (and daughter Kierstynn!)

 
Reviewer: marti1013 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Busted

OMFG!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA I'M SO GLAD I FOUND THIS STORY!  OMG..I was laughing so hard while reading my kids were asking what was so funny.  And I'm happy to have been able to let my 14 year old daughter read it, as so much fanfiction is not appropriate for her!  Thank you, thank you thank!  Awesome and I cannot wait for the next chapter

 
Reviewer: marti1013 Signed
Date: August 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Busted

Oh, please more!  This story was so funny, that I let my 14 year old daughter read it, and she loved it too!  Maybe Edward and Bella could pass the wolf wipes down to Nessie in a few decades :p! LOL

 

Awesome job, thanks

 

Marti

 
Mind Over Matter by SubtlePen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1378]
Summary:

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Bella challenges Edward's limits of self control by insisting that he build up his tolerance level to intimacy.

Set in the 6 week 'blank period' at the end of Eclipse / beginning of Breaking Dawn, between the battle, and the wedding.  Bella and Edward expand and deepen their physical relationship in preparation for their impending marriage.


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 70976
[Report This] Published: November 26, 2008 Updated: August 16, 2009


Reviewer: marti1013 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: A boring afternoon

“Just tell me one thing.  Have you given her head yet?”  Jasper was chuckling, thinking he wished he had Emmett’s balls.  I was tempted to rip them off and hand them to him.

 

LMFAO!!! ROFLMFAO!  OMG  That right there caused me to have to do an impromptu clean up of my comp screen. Gotta get soda quick before it dries ya know!

 

Thanks for the laugh, great story!

 

Marti



Author's Response:

i love me some crude emmett.  and some long-suffering edward.  and jasper enjoying the fireworks.  and just think - i gave you an excuse to clean your monitor!  *grin*

 
Reviewer: marti1013 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: A boring afternoon

 

“Just tell me one thing.  Have you given her head yet?”  Jasper was chuckling, thinking he wished he had Emmett’s balls.  I was tempted to rip them off and hand them to him.

 

I could read that line over and over and laugh each time, LMAO!!!  Thank you so much, this is such a good fic!  I love it!!!

 

And I think Edward shoulda done it. Not like Emmett couldn't reattach them :p!

 

Marti

 

 



Author's Response:

i can't force myself to picture E's hands down emmett's pants  (at least, not in THIS fic....), but I LOL picturing emmett waiting for his balls to reattach.....  holding them gently, telling them to 'come on babies, you can do it!'

 

 
The List by Laura Cullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13657]
Summary:

Four weeks before her wedding to Edward, Bella is frustrated. She knows there's little-to-no chance of getting him to bend his rules and boundaries now, but there's no harm in fantasizing about what could happen later. So she begins compiling a list of things that she and Edward can do together once they're happily married. She's surprised to find she might be able to cross some things off earlier than she thought...

Story contains mature themes and is not intended for younger readers.

Thanks to Mandi, aka m81170, for the great banner!


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 187877
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2010


Reviewer: marti1013 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

Okay, one of, if not the hottest Twilight fanfics out there.  Now, if you're still up for suggestions, How 'bout Bella and Edward playing cops and robbers and in the backseat of Charlie's cruiser?  *snicker*...

 

Can't wait for the next chapter.

 
Reviewer: marti1013 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Good-Byes

Uh,  did Eddie forget the condom in the shower scene or did I read it too fast?

 

Awesome story, was seriously glad to see an update on this baby!

 

Good luck on your original work.

 

Marti

 
Reviewer: marti1013 Signed
Date: September 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

Now this has been one of my favorite stories here on Twilighted and although I hate to see it end, I have it on favorites :P!  Awesome job as always and a wonderful ending for our favorite vampires!

 

Marti

 
Aro's Heir by SubtlePen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1912]
Summary:

Aro's Heir

 

Edward, Bella and Alice are drawn into a no-win scenario in Volterra after Edward's attempted suicide-by-Volturi in the Palazzo dei Priori .  Aro confronts Edward to make an impossible choice, with Alice as Aro's unwitting accomplice.  How will Edward's choice affect his reunion with Bella, and what future can they hope to salvage in the aftermath?

Story begins in New Moon, during Chapter 21, "The Verdict," but enters the AU when Aro reads Alice's mind...

AU, but canon through New Moon, with canon pairings.

~*~ warning ~*~  story contains very dark themes, including a sexual assault in the first chapter.  if this subject is a trigger for you, please do not continue. 

If you are a survivor of sexual abuse and need assistance, please contact RAINN http://apps.rainn.org/ohl-bridge/

Disclaimer:  I do not own the Twilight series, nor any of the characters created by Stephenie Meyer. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.

Twilighted Supervisory Beta: psymom        Twilighted Validation Beta: Lion_in_the_Land

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 95553
[Report This] Published: January 28, 2009 Updated: November 25, 2012


Reviewer: marti1013 Signed
Date: September 02, 2009 Title: Aro's Heir

Is there an update in the near future?  I absolutely love this story and keep an eye out for one whenever I log in.

 

Thank,
Marti



Author's Response:

writing furiously...  i so appreciate your patience!  i hope the next chapter will be ready by the end of the week...  thank you so much for sticking with me!

 
Reviewer: marti1013 Signed
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Aro's Heir

OMG I'm so sorry you got hit with the swine flu!  I'm glad you're feeling better and honestly, glad to see an update.  Thanks for making the effort and hope you feel even better!

 

Marti



Author's Response:

i'm on the mend - and all this sick time from work means i can get a little caught up!

 
Reviewer: marti1013 Signed
Date: November 07, 2009 Title: Aro's Heir

An update, yay!  Of course, this is one of my favorite stories, and I'm glad to see something new.  My bestfriend just got into reading 'twilight' fanfiction, and this was one of the first ones I recommended to her.

 

 

Thanks for the great story,

 

Marti



Author's Response:

thank you for recommending me to a friend!  i hope she enjoys as well.  xox!

 
Reviewer: marti1013 Signed
Date: August 22, 2010 Title: Aro's Heir

*jumps up and down, squeeing in enjoyment and not caring if my children think I've gone nuts!*

 

So glad to see this continued and happy that you've returned,  Thank you!!!!

 

A new chapter to read and just start the whole story over now  .

 

Can wait patiently for more,  thank you so much

 

Marti

 
Reviewer: marti1013 Signed
Date: April 04, 2010 Title: Aro's Heir

What the hell set Jake off?  I don't get it!  Am I missing something, cause I've read and re-read the chapter to see why he did it.  Of course, always a great story and patiently waited for the update. 

 

Marti



Author's Response:

do you remember why he phased in front of charlie in breaking dawn?  kinda took it upon himself to share the news that supernatural creatures are all over the place?  :D

 
Blood Lines by windchime Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2468]
Summary:

 

Edward reveals a secret from his human time which leaves Bella shocked and wondering just how well she knows the man she is about to marry.

This is very much an Edward and Bella love story.

Thank you angel-gidget for the banner!

 


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 256624
[Report This] Published: February 07, 2009 Updated: December 19, 2009


Reviewer: marti1013 Signed
Date: August 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Photos and Flatscreens

Please don't let Zeke be Imprinted on Abbey.  Please!  I always appreciate updates on this story, and like long ones as it gives me more to read while playing scrabble :p!

 

Great job, and can't wait for more (even if Zeke does end up Imprinted on her)

 

Marti



Author's Response:

Don't worry, Zeke won't imprint on Abbey.  Thanks for reading and for your review.

 
Reviewer: marti1013 Signed
Date: September 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Full Circle

(("I've always been at your mercy, Bella." He kissed the top of my head. "From the first time I saw you."))   Now this line just exemplifies the entire story!  I love it and although sad to see it end, I look forward to more of your work.  Thank you for this lovely story

 

Marti



Author's Response:

Thank you, Marti, for reading and for your review, it's much appreciated.

 
Summary:

Having stayed in Forks much longer than was wise or safe, the Cullens begin a new life in northern Vermont. Of course, wherever the Cullens go, so does Jacob and his pack. Life is peaceful in the wild, remote wilderness of the Green Mountains until a new family moves into a nearby abandoned estate, causing Alice to have visions of a new vampire coming to the area. This vampire has secrets of his own. And the new neighbors are much more than what they seem.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Nessie, Other Character, Quil, Seth, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: No Word count: 334494
[Report This] Published: February 15, 2009 Updated: October 04, 2010


Reviewer: marti1013 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Changes

HAHAHAHA  awesome!  I live about fifteen minutes from Plattsburgh NY, and go to FAHC so much I know the way in my sleep!  I loved seeing something written close to home.  Very well written so far, and can't wait to read more!

 
Summary:

 

Ever wondered why Jasper and Alice are perfect for each other. He calms her down and keeps her grounded. Duh!

But why is Jasper so attracted to Alice?  What does she fulfill in him?

Imagine a world in which Alice cannot see the future and is a human sophmore living on a college campus, attending school.  She has this creepy guy (who is very sexy but sadly wardrobe challenged) who follows her around all day, staring at her, with a look of pain on his face. 

What does Jasper need from Alice that he can't find with another girl?  And, more importantly, what will he and his friends (who are not quite human) do to make sure he ends up with what he needs?

Hint: lots of lemons may be involved.

And Coming Soon:

 


Categories: AU, Crackfic Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, James, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: The Others...
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 67580
[Report This] Published: March 12, 2009 Updated: February 23, 2010


Reviewer: marti1013 Signed
Date: August 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I found this story on FF and had to look it up!  Love it.  I'm not a big fan of Alice/Jasper stories, but after reading Edward's Treatment, I went back and check this one out, along with your one-shots.  And I LOVE Eddie's Little Secret!  Hilarious.  You definitely have a way of writing with humor

 

Thanks for the great story

 

Marti



Author's Response:

Marti,

I am so glad  you gave the Others series a shot.  The sequel to GLLTSG will be the GLLTVAMPIREG and will have A LOT more B&E.  Basically, a whole bunch of reviewers with your same preferences requested more B&E (repeatedly), so please stay tuned.

I am glad you share my warped sense of humor!  

And, as promised, Bella is in an old Victorian House on a small island off the coast of Maine called Little Cranberry.  Edward is not with her. 

Thanks for the review!

MJ (jajo)

 

 

 
Reviewer: marti1013 Signed
Date: August 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

K, I love the whole Alice/Jasper...but....Edwierd and Bella?  c'mon..please????



Author's Response:

Sequel.  Which will start in 2 chapters.  Promise...

Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: marti1013 Signed
Date: September 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

But, But, But...........okay, I know Alice and Edward don't end up together but holy shite!  What a way to mess with my head!   Now I can't wait for the sequel.

 

btw I'm on yahoo.  tessa_goddess13 :D

 

Now, to get my bestfriend into Twilight fanfiction so I can chat about stories with her :p!

 

Thanks, awesome as always...btw, I really kinda don't like Jasper's mom and dad, but adore Alice's.



Author's Response:

Abs need to pimp the stories out.  ;p

Thank you for your trust, I truly appreciat it.

And its ok to hate the in-laws!

I will email you prologue separately.  Thanks for the review!

 
Summary:

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All told from Edward's POV, The Acclimation Diaries, chronicles Edward’s struggles with learning to control himself and taking things one step at a time as he acclimates himself to Bella sexually in preparation of their impending wedding night.  Can he keep his desire in check or will he snap?

 

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A companion story for my one-shot, “Show Me”

TAD Banner by: falconcranelove

Indie Banner by: AngstGoddess

 


Categories: Eclipse, Post-Eclipse, Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 84817
[Report This] Published: March 19, 2009 Updated: September 19, 2009


Reviewer: marti1013 Signed
Date: June 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Naughty Bella, Dirty Edward

Heavens, if I thought it would be even remotely socially acceptable I’d wear her panties like a gas mask every day.

 

Now that line right there!  That made me have to clean my computer screen! I love it, that and the Mission Impossible CD.  But not have Esme going mental over the damage... Rosalie since the garage is her domain, LOL!!!



Author's Response:

LMAO!!  One of my most favorite lines of the chapter!!  Sorry 'bout the 'puter screen ;-)  Thanks for reading babes!!  *MWAH*

 
Reviewer: marti1013 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Soixante-Neuf

hahahaha!  I'm so glad I took enough French to understand the title! :p!  Loved it, and am always looking for an update for this story!

 

Thanks for writing it

 

Marti



Author's Response:

LMAO!!  Gold star for you babes!! 

Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to review!!  You rock!!  *MWAH*MWAH*MWAH*MWAH*

 
Reviewer: marti1013 Signed
Date: June 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Only Words

Personally, I'd like to see them join the mile-high club, but that goes against canon  *pout*.

 

Great story,  Loooooove it sooo much and can't wait for more chapters!

 

Marti



Author's Response:

Don't get too pouty Marti, I'll talk with Edward and see what he has to say.  It's his story so he gets the final word on what happens ;-) 

Thank you so much for taking the time to reading babes, you are so awesome!!  *MWAH*

 
Reviewer: marti1013 Signed
Date: July 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: It's Time

Okay, haven't even read chapter 15 yet...I giggled that there was an update. GIGGLED!  My kids think I'm nuts!  hahahahahaah....



Author's Response:

This, right here, totally made my day!  *MMMMMMMMMWAH*

 
Reviewer: marti1013 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: It's Time

Mega-fucking-hot!  Loved it, absolutely...and think, lucky Bella gets 3 more weeks of THAT!  Great work, of course.

 

Always watching for an update,

 

Marti

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much Marti, you just make me smile with your reviews!!  Stay tuned bb!!  *MWAH*

 




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