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Penname: mldewolf [ Contact]
Real name: Michele DeWolf
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Member Since: April 09, 2009
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Summary:  Carlisle has had it with his children's constant bickering, so he sends the Cullens to Family therapy. Suicidal Edward, Bella's fear of committment, Alice addicted to shopping, Rosalie's hostility, emmett and Jasper's gambling... who will survive?
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Mike, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes
Word count: 65189
[Report This] Published: May 29, 2008 Updated: May 29, 2008
Reviewer: mldewolf Signed 
Date: August 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Boy Talk
That was hysterical!! Great job!
Reviewer: mldewolf Signed
Date: August 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Breaking up is Hard to Do!
GREAT story!! I laughed and laughed w/tears. Great job!
Summary: 
AU Post-New Moon.
Bella never jumped, Alice never had her vision and Edward never came back. Six years later, Bella is struggling to make a new life for herself as a teacher in Rochester, New York. How will she fare when a very familiar student crops up in her classroom? Will she be able to remain professional, or will old ties get in the way?
Edward is convinced that getting Bella back is just a matter of 'persuasion', but Bella isn't prepared to be that cooperative. What's more, she's in the grip of a dark secret which threatens to prevent her from loving ever again.
Bella Swan is slipping under...
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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes
Word count: 124383
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2008 Updated: July 25, 2010
Reviewer: mldewolf Signed
Date: July 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: War in a Waiting Room
This is the first time I've read this story. It's an excellent story and I hope you don't give up on it. I've really enjoyed reading it and will be waiting for the next update. Plus look at the high number of reviews you've gotten on this story. You can't give up on it. Take care.
Reviewer: mldewolf Signed
Date: July 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 22: Epilogue
What a awesome epi! Very different, unusal and wonderful. I really enjoyed it.
This was a fantastic story.
I feel sad b/c Jacob and Bella's realtionship is so strained. I know they "made up" in the end. I just hope it got better from there. Funny, I feel sad over their relationship. I never feel sorry over anything when it comes to Jacob. This is a first, for sure. I'm and "Edward girl".
Thank you for the HEA. I'm soo glad it ended that way.
Summary:
Bella Swan spent the first two years of her life in Forks developing a friendship with Jacob Black that finally turned into something more. As she begins her senior year of high school, a new family moves to town and Bella slowly begins to question the path she thought her life would follow. Sometimes there is a difference between what you think you need and what you never knew you wanted. Takes place during the timeframe of New Moon and Eclipse. J/B at first, but eventually E/B.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: No
Word count: 170230
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2008 Updated: July 19, 2009
Reviewer: mldewolf Signed
Date: May 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 30: Uninvited
Ready and waiting a new chapter. Just thought I'd let you know there are people "out here" that are VERY interested in your story and are ready for more.
Reviewer: mldewolf Signed
Date: May 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 34: Tightrope
AFT!! Defiently!! Lord, I was ready for Bella to get over this pity party. Thank you for that.
As for those who want Edward to suffer more? Whatever, he suffered for more than his share of chapters in my opinion.
I think you did GREAT and can't wait to read more!!
Reviewer: mldewolf Signed
Date: October 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 35: Kissed
OMGosh!! I'm anxious for an update. I love this story and hope you haven't given up on it.
Reviewer: mldewolf Signed
Date: February 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 35: Kissed
7 months? What's up? I'm surprised with as many reviews you've gotten and 35 chapters in that you've given up on this story. Hope that's not the case but I'm assuming it is. That's too bad. I loved this story. It's really disappointing. Take care.
Summary: WRITTEN REWRITTEN REWRITTEN REWRITTEN
After her parents are killed in a plane crash, a young girl is rejected again & again by foster families for being too old. She wishes on a star nightly, but will she find what she seeks? Will the Cullens be that family?
NC-17 for later chapters. Warning" Violence, and sexual aggresion may be part of this story.
Winning Summary:
"I wish I may, I wish I might, have the wish I make tonight." With that one hope Isabella Swan faces life as best as she can. The tragedy of her parents' death, leaves her alone in a system where her age leaves her undesirable for adoption. That is until one day two people come into her life offering her a chance at hope. The Cullen family takes to Bella like a long lost sister. What happens when Bella is taken from the Cullens by a lost relative? Will Bella's hopes be destroyed? What happens when fate steps in years later to reunite Bella with the one's she loved and who loved her so long ago?
Bella knew what she would say, "Don't you want to be my sister?"
Thanks to Mrs C for the above Banner and my beta readergoof for the below Banner!
Thanks to Sleforever for below banner!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: Always Human
Chapters: 40 Completed: No
Word count: 137752
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2008 Updated: April 12, 2011
Reviewer: mldewolf Signed
Date: November 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 26: Joys of the Season
Joys of the Season, indeed!! I love you, I love you, I love you (bouncing/clapping hands.......pulling an Alice)!!
You couldn't have made her go out with a bigger bang. I love it! Yea, Yea, Yea!! Thank you, Thank you, Thank you!!
You made my Thanksgiving.
BUT, I'm a greedy bitch and want more (smirk). Can't wait for the next chapter. I'm ready for things to start healing between Edward and Bella (nevermind the rest of his family). Can't wait! I'm sure it (next chapter) will be great (even if things don't progress between Edward and Bella right now). Just wishful thinking.
Happy Thanksgiving! Have a great one!! You rock, You are awesome!!
Reviewer: mldewolf Signed
Date: October 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Unwanted
How sad!
Reviewer: mldewolf Signed
Date: October 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Homecoming
God, could life be any more cruel? Geez!
Reviewer: mldewolf Signed
Date: October 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Homecoming
God, could life be any more cruel? Geez!
Reviewer: mldewolf Signed
Date: October 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Homecoming
How horrible. Poor Bella. Life really can be cruel. Geez!
Reviewer: mldewolf Signed
Date: October 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Reunion
Yea!
Reviewer: mldewolf Signed
Date: October 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Family
Tanya??? God, I hate her! Always have. She is in almost every story I have read on Twilighted and Edward's girlfriend. God, what a bitch. I can't stand her. I hope she gets what she deserves in the end.
Just venting.
Reviewer: mldewolf Signed
Date: October 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 24: The End's Beginning
Hi! I wanted to say and apologize that I started out and had intended on keeping to review after every chapter. BUT, I got so caught up in the story that I kept forgetting and then couldn't remember what the last chapter was that I had reviewed. Clear as mud?
Anywho, this story rocks and I'm glad my best friend suggested it to me. I can't wait for the next update. Hope it comes along soon.
Ready for Tanya to meet her demise and things between Rosalie and Emmett AND Bella and Edward to start heating up. We're 24 chapters in and hope it's not too much longer.
Have a great weekend!
Reviewer: mldewolf Signed
Date: October 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 25: Secrets
Great chapter! Short, but great. Thank you for acknowledging me in the pre A/Ns. That was nice.
Of course, I can't wait for another chapter. This story is so great that I want it all right now (smile).
Hope nothing happens to that tape Rosalie has. If I were her I would have made a bee line to Edward worried something would happen to it (the tape). I know that more than likely it will stay safe b/c it's w/Rosalie. (Keeping my fingers crossed).
You made my day today by updating. I have 46 stories on My Favs and last week I didn't have an update except for Smut Mondays and FFFs. That sucked!
As for a author coming down hard on a reviewer...that isn't "good business". Know y'all aren't getting paid for this but I guess it depends on how the reviewer phrased things. It might have set the author "off". There have been 3 stories I have quit reading due to them becoming too twisted or hitting close to home (in a sad way). I try to keep an open mind but sometimes it's just too much. Ya know?
Have a great week!
Reviewer: mldewolf Signed
Date: December 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 26: Joys of the Season
Okay, it's been a month since your last update. Where are you?
We miss you, out here in Twilighted land.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Reviewer: mldewolf Signed
Date: July 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 31: Confrontations
Yippee!! Edward knows! I'm soo glad Alice and Rosalie decided to get involved It doesn't seem like they (Edward and Bella) would have figured it out on their own at the rate they were going.
Here's to hoping she isn't too pissed that he picked her lock, again. Hoping he kisses the hell out of her, pledging his love and fucking her right then and there.
Can't wait to see what happens next. Hope it won't be 3 months inbetween updates but if it is, I understand. RL can be a bitch.
Until next time.....
Reviewer: mldewolf Signed
Date: August 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 32: New Beginnings
WOW!! Can't wait for Bella and Edward to keep moving right along. It's about time. I can't wait for them to start having sex. I bet and hope it's gonna be spectacular.
Great chapter!
Summary: Vampire brothers Edward, Emmett, and Jasper are stuck at age 17 forever. Unfortunately, though all of them have lived for over 100 years, they have very little experience with dating girls, especially modern ones. What happens when their vampire powers and inexperience collide? Will the results prevent them from winning the hearts of the girls they love?
If you like humor, angst, and edge of your seat, nail-biting cliff hangers, you'll like this story.
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 47 Completed: Yes
Word count: 108776
[Report This] Published: September 04, 2008 Updated: January 09, 2009
Reviewer: mldewolf Signed
Date: May 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: The Kiss that Said a Thousand Words
Loved this chapter! Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: mldewolf Signed
Date: May 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Sexual Camels
Loved this chapter!! I hope you know which chapter I am talking about. Not sure how this review thing works. I'm sad I'm getting towards the end. Hope you keep writing. Can't wait to read more. Take care.
Reviewer: mldewolf Signed
Date: May 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34: Absolutely
Great chapter!!
Reviewer: mldewolf Signed
Date: May 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36: Futures
Yeah, Tanya's dead!! Can't stand her.
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