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Penname: stoptodream [Contact]
Real name: Tees
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Restoration by texbelle Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1151]
Summary:

Ten years ago, circumstance interrupted their destiny.  Now it's time for everyone to go back to Forks for their 10 year high school reunion to face their past with hesitation, hope and maybe even regret.  Can they reclaim what was lost?  All human.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 166805
[Report This] Published: May 06, 2008 Updated: June 01, 2010


Reviewer: stoptodream Signed
Date: May 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Are You The One?

JR is James isnt he? NOOO, and he has keys, access codes the whole bit!

Oh gosh what is going to happen.

great story, great chapter

 
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AU-Human.  Manwhore Edward bets Emmett that he can remain abstinent for 40 days and nights - or lose his beloved Volvo. He's convinced it'll be a piece of cake. Of course, that was before sex kitten Bella moved to Forks, and set her sights solely on the delectable Edward Cullen.  NC-17 for extreme profanity, and ridiculously smutty sexy time.

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 71906
[Report This] Published: October 09, 2008 Updated: May 14, 2009


Reviewer: stoptodream Signed
Date: May 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Dead Money

I'm guessing that its going to be jake as a rival or james as a rival. or something like that.

 
Readjusted by muggleinlove Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 986]
Summary:

Bella is a single mom who was jaded by her exhusband, Mike. She is struggling to put her life back on track when she meets Edward. Edward is a hot shot corporate lawyer who has sworn off love and kids. What happens when the two meet at a club?

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes Word count: 92990
[Report This] Published: February 23, 2009 Updated: July 13, 2009


Reviewer: stoptodream Signed
Date: April 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ahh just found this! love it!

Can't wait till he finds out about the son! Update soon, hopefully?


Anyway love it!

 
Summary:

Bella meets a musician by night, med student by day, named Edward Cullen.  Sparks fly instantly, but will she stay once she learns about Tanya?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Jessica, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 16857
[Report This] Published: March 14, 2009 Updated: June 14, 2009


Reviewer: stoptodream Signed
Date: May 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Rock n Roll Boy

If I were Bella I would feel cheated, definitely.. I don't think this will go okay especially if she goes to his shows and there is Tanya cuddling up Edward. I think this is great but I can feel that it is going to take a lot more for them to get together and it's selfish of Edward to want Bella to do that. Is there a Jacob in the story or a nice James? Make him feel as she'll feel?

 
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Seeking to escape a dangerous memory from her past, Bella moves to Forks her junior year with every intention of getting a fresh start.  With a little self-assurance and a whole lot of attitude, she shakes things up at Forks High without even intending to.  When a mysterious new student turns her world upside down, will Bella have the strength to resist him, or is she destined to repeat her old mistakes?  Will he be able to save her when the past catches up with her?

Rated NC-17 for criminally hot cars, graphic sex, and language...

 

 


Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 82359
[Report This] Published: March 15, 2009 Updated: July 23, 2009


Reviewer: stoptodream Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - The Bitch is Back

oh damn it!
Please update soon. Argh! I'm seriously beginnning to hate this edward, at first, I thought that he had a good reason or maybe some sort of explanation to what he did, but more and more I can't think of anything that could possibly explain that and deserve forgiveness. arrrgh!

Although I do like how you wrote this chapter.

 
Summary:

Bella and Edward have been best friends since high school. One drunken night changes their relationship forever and two friends find there was a lot more hiding below the surface.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, James, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 24470
[Report This] Published: March 18, 2009 Updated: August 11, 2009


Reviewer: stoptodream Signed
Date: May 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i love the way you wrote this story, love the characters. Please update soon.

 
Savage Love by ebatcl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 109]
Summary:

When in high school, Bella was in love with Edward but then dumped him unceremoniously. Now, after ten years, Edward is back and he wants revenge. But is everything really as it seems? Who is Victoria? How are Rosalie, Alice, Emmett and Jasper involved in this? What about Carlisle and Esme? And how exactly is Edward able to keep a grown-up Bella as a sex-slave? * Canon couples. Contains lemons and BDSM - DO NOT READ IF YOU FEEL DISTURBED BY SUCH RELATIONSHIPS.

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Categories: AU, AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 6843
[Report This] Published: March 21, 2009 Updated: August 24, 2009


Reviewer: stoptodream Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I can without a doubt tell that this story is shows major potential, but I'm confused because I don't see how Alice's past with Victoria has to do with the agreement between Bella and Edward. I don't understand how a mother could sell an adult against their free will, i.e Bella's situation.
Finally what the fuck happened to Edward? That's Edward isn't? I mean I guess I could see the revenge in this, but I wouldnt ever consider doing that if I was in the situation that's described in the Summary.

Please update soon, maybe chapter 2 will answer some questions about Bella & Edward?

Author's Response:

Hi! First, thanks for the review. Second, yes it is Edward. I see a lot of you get confused about that. Now, the story is not as simple as it seems from the summary. It contains dark themes like rape and prostitution. As for Edward's behavior and Alice's past, well as the story progresses you will see that all of their lives are linked together. That is how they came to be members of the same family, as they are all adopted siblings  or related by marriage. Hope that clarifies some questions. Hopefully, I'll be able to answer the rest as the story progresses.

 
Summary:

 

Edward left Bella, forcing his family to stay away from her. Six years onwards, the Cullens are a mess without Bella and Emmett decides to get away from his angry, angst ridden family and let loose. What he finds in the meanest biker bar in Seatle will send shockwaves through his entire family.

 

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Categories: New Moon Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes Word count: 112765
[Report This] Published: April 07, 2009 Updated: December 04, 2009


Reviewer: stoptodream Signed
Date: April 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love this Bella. Love it.
Can't wait till Eddie boy sees this. It'd be soo funny if the rest show up at that club, see bella in action and everything.

Update soon, please!

Author's Response:

It's going to get crazy cool soon!!!!

Thanks!

 
Reviewer: stoptodream Signed
Date: April 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Is this story going to be only from Em's POV or others?

Just curious.

Author's Response:

Emmett's POV for a few more chaps then Bella/Izzy and then it criss crosses between Edward and Izzy's.

Hope it helps!

 
EverClear by Chandler Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 872]
Summary:

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It's been almost 5 years since that terrible day in the woods. Bella and Edward have both struggled with the devestating aftermath of their last conversation. Both have found solice in music, only in ways neither of them could have imagined. Can they find their way back to one another or is there just too much that time will not erase?


Categories: AU Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: No Word count: 119923
[Report This] Published: April 09, 2009 Updated: April 06, 2010


Reviewer: stoptodream Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Atlanta fucking Georgia?

Ohh, love it. I was actually listening to My Immortal, hmm, then Call Me, when you're sober came on, got goosebumps as I was reading this. You should have Bella play that as one of their songs on the new album. at the concert? Hmm idk just a suggestion.

I love how you're writing this. Update soon, please. Love it.

Author's Response:

You never know what might be on the album. Thanks for the review, it means the world to me. I love that you can already feel how the music is going to affect the story.

 
Reviewer: stoptodream Signed
Date: May 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5-Paperweights

I seriously cant wait till the concert. You're a wonderful writer, very vivid. & Bella knows that Edward bought the house? I had to skip back to chapter 2 for that.

But wow, this is an awesome story.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind words! Concert's coming, but we have a little more info we need before we get there. Hang on, it will start to move quickly from here.

 
Never Come Home by roroduff Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 284]
Summary:

Bella doesn't hear news of Edward, months after he left for war, and begins to lose all hope of her love's return.

When she finds a letter she was never meant to read, how will she deal with the news she's been longing for? And when an eager stranger offers his help, will he do more harm than good?

  "Only one person could pull her from the darkness, and I wasn't him."

 

Angst filled tale of those who are left behind, and maybe a happy ending.

Various points of view throughout.

All Canon after a little heartache.

 


Categories: Pre-Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 37098
[Report This] Published: June 30, 2009 Updated: June 08, 2012


Reviewer: stoptodream Signed
Date: July 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Forgive me.

It somehow reminds me of the notebook and another movie about a man going to war to be thought dead and then sha bam coming back...idk seems good though. Is Jake going to be the new guy or yeah?

Well please continue and good luck

Author's Response:

Thanks babe!

im not quite sure yet, i was toying with the idea but am not really decided !!

Than for taking the time to review!!

 

Love Rósin =)

 
The Ties That Bind by yesyov Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 513]
Summary:

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What happens when your past collides with your present and changes your future forever? Come read The Ties That Bind.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Other Character
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 52 Completed: Yes Word count: 367368
[Report This] Published: August 13, 2009 Updated: May 04, 2011


Reviewer: stoptodream Signed
Date: September 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ahh whats the note say?
good start!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the positive words.... as for the contents of the note?  you will need to stay tuned....





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