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Penname: Charvie [ Contact]
Real name: Charvel
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Member Since: April 07, 2009
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Summary: 
For True Edward Fans. An in-depth, accurate portrayal of the heart, mind, and soul of the beloved Edward Cullen as he deals with the complex themes and events taking place during Eclipse. RATED T FOR TEEN, ALTHOUGH CHAPTER 8 CONTAINS SENSUALITY. CANON. EPOV.
Categories: Eclipse Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Word count: 64609
[Report This] Published: August 24, 2008 Updated: November 07, 2008
Reviewer: Charvie Signed
Date: October 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Theme from Chapter 22 - Fire and Ice - Part Three
Summary: Bella Swan is twenty-seven years old, newly single, and mom to an adorable Kindergarten student with a knack for accidents. On a typical, fall afternoon, she experiences the shock of her life during a casual conversation with her son. When an unexpected revelation leads to the most emotional reunion imaginable, how will Bella reconcile the path her life has taken with the past she never chose? Takes place nearly ten years post New Moon. Canon - AU. ExB

Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No
Word count: 61197
[Report This] Published: October 19, 2008 Updated: November 27, 2011
Reviewer: Charvie Signed
Date: June 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
This is just such a wonderful story. Its so origial! Everytime I read it I get warm fuzzies! Thanks for continuing and I can't wait for the coming chapters
Reviewer: Charvie Signed
Date: November 27, 2011
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
YOUR BACKKKKKKKKKKKKKK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is such a heart warming story, Its like hot chocolate before bed.....
Summary: 
Four weeks before her wedding to Edward, Bella is frustrated. She knows there's little-to-no chance of getting him to bend his rules and boundaries now, but there's no harm in fantasizing about what could happen later. So she begins compiling a list of things that she and Edward can do together once they're happily married. She's surprised to find she might be able to cross some things off earlier than she thought...
Story contains mature themes and is not intended for younger readers.
Thanks to Mandi, aka m81170, for the great banner!
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes
Word count: 187877
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2010
Reviewer: Charvie Signed
Date: August 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
This story has been my guilty pleasure for the past months and it will be a shame to have it end, but I have one question...did I miss when Edward found out about the blood carlisle drew... I could swear I have read all the chapters...do I still have to weight? This is the number I have been waiting for...lol
Summary: 
After the Cullens leave Forks and make the move to New York, Carlisle fights to keep his family together as Edward's pain threatens to tear them apart. Ithaca is the story of a son's quest, a father's love, and the unique family struggling to stand behind them both...

This is the Cullens' New Moon.
Ithaca starts one month into the Cullens' time away from Bella, and will follow New Moon to its end. Carlisle and Edward narrate in alternating chapters. Follows all known canon.
Categories: New Moon Characters: Carlisle, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes
Word count: 118422
[Report This] Published: February 19, 2009 Updated: December 07, 2009
Reviewer: Charvie Signed
Date: October 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Because Moving Hurts
WOW!...This is the best New Moon from The Cullin's perspective I have ever read on this site or any other! Great Job! Author's Response: Thank you!
Summary: ATO for short. This is an alternate New Moon. Edward and the Cullens are gone. A vindictive Victoria takes away all that Bella has left, including her humanity. Bella must leave Forks, but where can she go when she has no one left? All vampire. EdwardxBella
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Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: No
Word count: 134491
[Report This] Published: August 10, 2009 Updated: January 08, 2011
Reviewer: Charvie Signed
Date: November 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Beautiful Liar
I'm enjoying this foray into AU. Don't forget that Edward still has yet to confess that he had been trying to kill Vicoria all along...that oughta count for some healing points for Bella right? (Ok it probably would for me but I don't think I have the energy to be mad a someone like Edward for long)
Keep going the story is really interesting
Summary:

Banner compliments of CrimsonIceGoddess - YOU ROCK my dear!
   
It is amazing how quickly life can resume normalcy after a traumatic event. It's not that the inhabitants of the scenario don't know they are rebounding, but the force of the universe pulls them back into its patterns without their consent. Everything will not be the same, but the normal routine is enhanced, flavored by the bittersweet taste of change or loss in any form.
Bella told me she had once envisioned our lives as the complex pattern of a rug, the colors and textures intermingling, each individual but, when placed together, producing a beautiful creation. If challenged, I would have most likely used a musical analogy. I would have compared our lives to experiencing a musical performance by one of the masters.
Beethoven...Bach...or if you wanted a little strife, Wagner. Most at one time or another had performed their masterpieces within European chapels. I could envision the rise and fall of the notes, as they would weave their spell. The light in the building as it filtered through stained glass, creating a dizzying array of colors. The smell from beeswax candles permeating the room. Modern musical halls lacked this perfect simplicity. Yes...this would have been my analogy.
Little was I to know that Fate had much in store for me. Before she was through with me, I would barely resemble the boy I'd been...
What happens to the Cullens after the Volturi left. Edward and Bella begin life together and face both heartbreak after their lives are irrevocably changed by losses of family and friends, and immeasurable joy as the events of their lives unfold.
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 80 Completed: Yes
Word count: 388303
[Report This] Published: August 30, 2009 Updated: September 01, 2011
Reviewer: Charvie Signed
Date: September 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 66: Beyond
I have loved everything about this story... From beginning to end. Thanks
Summary:  This is Breaking Dawn from Edward's POV, using the same scenes and dialogue but with new scenes added as well -- the latter of which are entirely the product of my over-active imagination. New scenes include the lemons sorely lacking from the original.
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: No
Word count: 194511
[Report This] Published: November 16, 2009 Updated: September 07, 2010
Reviewer: Charvie Signed
Date: December 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Isle Esme
Thoughts? Really really good. So often people write Edward and Bella out of character in this scene...but you did a great job, very believable ;)
Summary: A loving, romantic completion of the first honeymoon night for Edward and Bella. I tried to make the story blend with SM's style so this chapter could sound like a "lost" piece of book
The story begins just after the line in Isle Esme chapeter: "Forever,” he agreed, and then pulled us gently into deeper water." It ends just before the next line where Bella is waking up with the sun.
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 2507
[Report This] Published: December 10, 2009 Updated: December 22, 2009
Reviewer: Charvie Signed
Date: December 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-The First Night of Forever
Not Bad! Actually one of the best of these I have read...very SM, incharacter, and believable. You don't see that all the time....you should do the scene in the Cottage as a second to this one Author's Response: Thank you, I am looking forward to writing the cottage scene,
Summary: This is my version of New Moon as told from Edward's point of view. The dialogue is borrowed from New Moon when Edward and Bella are together , but the rest is my interpretation of what the story would have been like if Edward had told it.

Categories: New Moon Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Gianna, Heidi, Irina, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Kate, Laurent, Marcus, Mike, Other Character, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes
Word count: 121397
[Report This] Published: January 24, 2010 Updated: February 18, 2011
Reviewer: Charvie Signed
Date: September 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Discovery
I can't thank you enough for having this chapter set in Hinton...I'm a long way from home and its nice to see towns I recognize in suprising places...also you are doing a fantastic job with this story...keep up the good work Author's Response: Aww - I had fun playing on Google maps, trying to map our Edward's route. When I saw Jasper National Forest, I couldn't resist.
Summary: 
An unexpected discovery reveals that Edward lied when he left Bella. Now, Bella is determined to find a way to contact him, and in the process she learns more than she ever knew about Edward Cullen.
An Edward and Bella love story.
Thank you Mothlights for the fantastic banner!!
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes
Word count: 178682
[Report This] Published: February 17, 2010 Updated: November 12, 2010
Reviewer: Charvie Signed
Date: January 04, 2011
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Epilogue: A Winter's Day (angelicwish)
I have read bloodlines, and now this...I can't tell you how much I enjoy your stories! Thanks for another great one! Author's Response: Thanks very much!!
Summary: After the Cullens leave Forks, a twist of fate lands Bella in Chicago in 1918. She thinks it's her second chance... a chance to build a life with a human Edward. But when she finds him, he's not quite what she expected... and Bella has some hurdles to overcome to create the future she's hoping for.



Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes
Word count: 286468
[Report This] Published: February 17, 2010 Updated: June 05, 2011
Reviewer: Charvie Signed
Date: October 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose
I love it....this is exactly the way it has to be! absolutly perfect....thanks for writing
Reviewer: Charvie Signed
Date: November 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality
Omg! Oh how I wish that the next capter was here. I can't wait!
Summary: A stranger, a blank book and Audrey has found herself in the world of Twilight with a new past. Will Audrey's presence change the story? As days end, pages are written and Audrey discovers that her days within Forks and with Edward are numbered.
 


My thanks to writegina2, vampireyouth and FhionaBridge1504, respectively, for the amazing banners that appear above.
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: No
Word count: 156945
[Report This] Published: February 21, 2010 Updated: March 11, 2013
Reviewer: Charvie Signed
Date: July 25, 2011
Title: Chapter 29: Fact is Fiction
What I can't believe is that I just started this story today and here I am left with a cliffie! Its like the worst thing that can happen right when you are totally 'sucked in to a piece of fiction' for it to be over! I will just have to wait with everyone else. The story is fantastic! I love everything about it! Keep up the great work
Summary: Edward leaves Forks and Bella behind after the incident with Tyler's van. Now, five years later, he finally returns to his family and the Pacific Northwest. While picking up his latest Swedish automobile, he is confronted by a very familiar scent. Will Edward be able to fight the pull his singer has on him a second time? Or will he stick around long enough to find out What Drives Her?
AU after Chapter 4 of Twilight, Original Characterizations, Canon couples.

Banner by Jen!

Banner by TAmmyAZ!
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Embry
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: No
Word count: 246355
[Report This] Published: June 04, 2010 Updated: November 13, 2011
Reviewer: Charvie Signed
Date: December 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19: Choosing Sides
Another excellent chapter. I really love this story. Its so cannon but so not! I love that Author's Response: Thank you. "Canon, but not." I like that. :-) There really should be more catergories for us to describe our stories, to be honest. This is "AU but not" as well. Either way, I'm glad you liked the chapter! Ginnie
Reviewer: Charvie Signed
Date: December 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: In The Sun
This is such a great story. I love how in different situations the characters behave the same. Its like an execise in fate...no matter what the characters do the big events that are supposed to happen will. I'm just curious to see which big events you consdier fated.... :)
Reviewer: Charvie Signed
Date: December 31, 2010
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21: Anger, Denial & A Dog
I love love this story! I can't get over how in character all of the personalities are! I get the feeling that you are trying to shove the whole series into one, and honestly I like it. I wonder if you will deal with the breaking dawn stuff??? also did Jacob really imprint? Cuz I fee l really bad if he did...
Reviewer: Charvie Signed
Date: March 14, 2011
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24: Changes
AHHH so good! Will Seth and Edward be friends in this story too? Because that is probably my favorite non E/B Relationship in the whole series... here is hoping Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I agree about Edward & Seth, they just make me all melty in BD. Such a nice change from the rest of the wolves.
Be sure to check your email for a teaser from me! (vgmay@hotmail.com)
:-) Ginnie
Summary: After years of surviving in her arranged marriage, Bella hears some news that shatters all of her hopes and dreams. Can she and Edward discover what it means to be together after all? Set in the modern day. ExB
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes
Word count: 220375
[Report This] Published: September 17, 2010 Updated: April 26, 2011
Reviewer: Charvie Signed
Date: November 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Requests
This is officially the only All Human story I have ever enjoyed....my goodness, well written, and suprising....I have been team edward so faithfully since I finished the Twilight...it feels like he cheated on me! lol.... well done I look forward to more Author's Response: Wow! With all the wonderful stories out there, this feels like really high praise. Thank you so much! There is lots more to come and I do update once a week.
Summary: 
The first few months after the change were always the most difficult. Instincts rule over rationality. Since raging thirst is never far from a newborn’s mind, it often makes for careless choices.
The girl would need supervision. A patient teacher to guide her and keep her out of trouble. I didn’t just feel obligated to fill this role, I yearned to fill it.
*Nominated for a Vampies Award, in the category: Bloody Newborn - best characterization of a newborn vampire. (It didn't win, but it was an honor being nominated. Thank you.)
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No
Word count: 79936
[Report This] Published: October 14, 2010 Updated: October 14, 2011
Reviewer: Charvie Signed
Date: January 08, 2011
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9
Summary: 
Banner by the awesome Frozen Soldier! She is amazing!
 
We had survived the Volturi and were finally able to enjoy life without fear...until new threats arose. These were more sinister than any before...because the most terrifying one came from within me...
The lead figure took a few long steps toward us, and I felt Bella stiffen beside me and heard her gasp of pain. Hands moved toward the cowl of the robe, pushing it backwards. The moonlight made a valiant attempt to shine through the clouds highlighting him as the angel he’d always seemed. Bright red eyes scanned the group as a sneer claimed his face, twisting it. He looked toward the assassins beside him, after one last cold look toward us, he gave his order. “Destroy them.”
The family tensed at the callousness in his voice.
“Edward…” Bella breathed out from beside me. Pain laced through her voice.
The figure hesitated only slightly as the weak light framed his bronze hair and the scar along his cheek. Then as he turned away, the robed figures dashed past him toward us.
“Henry!” my family screamed around me as we braced for impact. “Remember our training,” I shouted. “And if possible bring Edward back alive…”
Sequel to Harvest Moon, my Shimmer Award, Vampie, and Twilighted OC Character award winning story.
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Heidi, Jacob, Jasper, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 59 Completed: No
Word count: 342662
[Report This] Published: October 15, 2010 Updated: May 19, 2013
Reviewer: Charvie Signed
Date: May 20, 2011
Title: Chapter 19: Slave
Scary! Yikes.....
Summary: 
Banner Credit: Twisted in Masen
Isabella Swan is an antique document specialist. When the papers she is working on lead her overseas, she finds herself immersed in the mystery of the enigmatic Edward Masen. What secrets will she find as she explores the documents and letters of the elusive Cullen clan and what does Edward want her to find out about him?
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Word count: 35294
[Report This] Published: February 05, 2011 Updated: April 11, 2011
Reviewer: Charvie Signed
Date: March 23, 2011
Title: Chapter 7: In the Clean Room
Yikes what is Bella going to do when she finds out that he has known everything about the letters all allong? Why is he so insistnant on her being the one to work on them when he already knows everything about them?...looking forward to finding out
Summary: Edward Masen and Bella Swan are beginning to settle into their new lives and careers together when the unthinkable happens. Can Edward’s hazy memories bring them back together and stop him from acting upon instinct?

Thanks to @Fallanydeeper for the banner.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No
Word count: 53114
[Report This] Published: February 12, 2011 Updated: June 27, 2011
Reviewer: Charvie Signed
Date: April 27, 2011
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16
that was like cookies and milk at the end of this really stressful day! Thank you! I love where you are going with this story!
Reviewer: Charvie Signed
Date: February 18, 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2
Im really excited to see where this goes! This is one of the most creative directions I have seen in a long time. Keep up the good work Author's Response: Thank you so much! We are definately trying to be different and creative with this idea. The next chapter will be up soon. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review... we really appreciate it!
Summary: AU Post-New Moon. NOTE- AU Hybrid Vamps:

Banner by Mehek18
Set in 2010, the supernatural world is in a crisis unprecedented, its' very structure challenged by a force yet to be seen. As this new threat sends ripples of discord and panic throughout the ranks, a young vampire and her two children, twin beings as different as light and dark, struggle to remain hidden in the shadows; away from the world they belong to.
But not for long: Embittered by the desperate state his father left him, his mother, and his sister in five years prior, Tony Swan yearns for purpose; an opportunity to let out who he truly is. No more lies. No more veils. He won't have to wait long-as his sister grows normally, he inches closer and closer to adulthood, mind and body rapidly maturing despite the few years he has walked this Earth. And yet, throughout all this, one key fact remains forgotten by the young hybrid: fate's plan is never simple.
And in a world where monsters of human and marble flesh exist, how can it be?
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Pulling to re-write:
Well, technically not pulling, but definitely re-writing.
I’ve given it a lot of thought. I was actually going to do this once I got the 13th chapter of my main WIP out (So it wouldn’t that bad of a shock, after all I already warned of a hiatus on its way), but so far I haven’t been able to churn out anything that could pass as a chapter that’s “in- character” in regards to the present version of my fic. It’s just…not working. No matter how hard I try to write ch.13, I keep going back to my old copies of chapters one, two, and three and re-writing them. Hell, I’m already on ch.4.
I’ve looked at my early chapters, compared them to the most recent ones, and realized that the flow, the tone of the writing itself, doesn’t match. I had a completely different mindset when I began, still figuring things out, still not setting things in stone, and throughout the experience I learned a lot. More so if I hadn’t posted in the first place. A huge learning experience, I guess you could say.
It made me remember why I wanted to write this story in the first place, and that because I was under the impression I had to conform to a framework because it was fan fiction, I put what I really wanted on the back burner in order to write/focus on what I thought was supposed to be written/focused on.
And then I finally had an epiphany: I don’t have to follow any sort of guideline. I can write what I want to write. I don’t have to have the story closely tailored around Edward and Bella, or any of the other canon characters, I don’t have to write from certain POV’s in the first place because the truth is, my story, as someone commented after looking over a past chapter I’d written, is “not really about Twilight.” And that’ s the truth. Resent isn’t about Twilight, at least, not completely.
To the person who commented, thank you, by the way. You know who you are.
Now, you may ask, “why post a wip in the first place?” well, the truth was, I didn’t think the fandom would still be around once I completed Resent. It was 2010, the twi-craze was already dying down somewhat, and I thought it would be risky to take my time and finish the story first before posting. I thought I was working on borrowed time. Plus, I wasn’t sure if the twist I had going with my main oc’s. would be received well.
The reviews and the fact that a good number of us are still here kind of blows those pre-conceived notions out of the ballpark, to my sweet relief. What I said in past thread posts still stands: as long as the story is posted, it is not abandoned. Hiatus maybe, but not abandoned. The fact that it is still there means that I’m still a part of the fandom. If I ever decide to flounce, there is no way in hell that I would ever leave any of my writing’s unmonitored on the internet. If I ever decide to discontinue, you readers will be the first to know.
I’m leaving the current copy of Resent on ff.net, twilighted, and twcs for these reasons, and also because I know there are some who still enjoy re-reading the posted chapters. I’m sorry if this is upsetting. I know the update schedule for this fic has been somewhat tumultuous and nail-biting, especially with how things were left the last chapter, but I feel like if I don’t say something now, I’m going to end up posting something bland and soulless. Once I’ve written enough of the new version (or completed it) I’ll pull the old version and start re-posting.
I won’t hold it against you if you flounce, just don’t tell me that you are.
Again, I’m sorry about this guy’s, but my gut is telling me this is something I have to do.
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No
Word count: 81816
[Report This] Published: February 20, 2011 Updated: August 24, 2012
Reviewer: Charvie Signed
Date: May 11, 2011
Title: Chapter 5: See no evil
THANK YOU! I've been waiting for them...Poor Edawrd still in HighSchool... Author's Response: :)
To be fair, this is Edward's first year back after his self-imposed exile...Already its proving to be eventful ;)
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