I've been waiting for what seems like forever for this chapter.

Next one please. (:

You know...I'm wondering. Could it ever be Bella who dies? That'd be a turn of events...But then we'd all miss Bella.

Now this is an interesting read. I've been reading for a while. But I feel like I should leave a comment now.

I do quite like how you've made Tom quite horrible to Kristen. I'm guessing if it weren't for Nettie though...another female in the mix, he wouldn't be so horrible. But who knows the real reason? Maybe he's just a bitchy guy.

I do think even if Rob's going through a lot himself, he should know about Tom. It'll be nice though to see if Marcus does some meddling. I half expected it to be Sam at first, but ah nice idea for it to be Marcus instead. :]

I'm quite glad it ended like that, between Kristen and Michael. Although Kristen seems to have fallen for Rob, I think Rob wasn't in the picture, the reason for her dumping Michael. Michael didn't get Kristen plus he was a jerk. Worse than a jerk. I wonder if Nikki did have a thing with Rob too, or was it just something that Nikki made up and kept on talking about. It'd be a surprise, a nice one, if Nikki just made it up and remembered to drag that story on, to make it believable. And Kristen believed it and didn't question it. Is it true or is that something we'll find out later?

Kristen doesn't seem to be having an easy time at all. Rob's friends against her, except for Marcus. Kristen losing everything. But losing the things she doesn't need. So I hope Rob can wake up and smell the coffee, that she's there for him, and he can now be there for her too. I hope it doesn't backfire. I'm worried though she'll be hurt in future chapters by Nikki's constant texts, which makes me hope it's not true. But we'll see.
Tom needs to piss off too, it'll be a twist if Rob lost his friendships in order to be with Kristen. Sacrifice the best friend for Kristen who could be the love of his life. I don't think there's ever been a story like that. I shall wait and see what this story turns out like though. :):)

Keep up with the brilliant story. The lovely happenings with characters. And these long lengthy chapters. And please get the next one up soon!

Carry on with it. (: When do you think the next chapter will be added?

I adore this story, truly. It's emotional, almost. I just get this impression that Bella can see herself not surviving this disease. Talking about heaven. You wouldn't really discuss heaven if you thought you were going to live. :( I wonder if Edward picked up on that?

I love how Edward and Bella grow closer these past few chapters. And you had me, when you included the Bella comment on "I hope you're ready to lose your shirt". I thought it was going to turn into strip poker! Now that would have been something! I wonder if Bella wants to achieve one goal before she dies. The goal where she and Edward take a huge step forward in their relationship...if they had one. You know what she wanted in Eclipse, and couldn't get in Breaking Dawn. I can't word it, lolz. (: But yeh. That. I wonder if she secretly wants that.

Oh this is so complicating. She knows she's going to die. Edward's a vampire, and is worried about turning her into one, but at the same time doesn't want her to die. But how can she survive? Some people do, but I wreckon Bella won't. Which will keep this fanfic emotional throughout. Also Bella is the patient and Edward is the doctor. He's in love, and she is. Right. And doctors aren't supposed to fall in love with patients. Can you imagine if Bella and Edward get caught being very close to one another?

I love your fanfic. (:

You are doing a brilliant job. I wish you could update every day, but that's not so easy. I love your story. <3

Hate?

I think she could be quite attracted to him. :D When's the next? God, I hope he doesn't wait as well, and leave it up to marrying her, to sleep with her! Lol, bring Isle Esme, before they ever get married. :)

:( It's not enough for me! C'mon, it's time to get them to confess their love! 20 chapters, and it's been so slow!

If he doesn't tell her tonight, Alice can have permission to lock them in the same room for days, or months. :)

Well next stage after the kiss is what I'm now waiting for, Edward's had to wait a lof for Bella, and she for him to let go of his emotions. And now they've shared a few kisses, I'm guessing he wants way more.

Carry on please with this. (:

It's sad, but amazing!

Please, please Bella wake up!

Edward. stay with her too! She can't be scared of him, I know he's a male and males ruined her life. But there must be something else right?

Oh gosh, update soon please.

I loved this, I've been waiting and so have many others for this. Be proud? Okay. 'Cause this was a brilliant start again.

Could you update much more faster please? (:

This fanfic is the most interesting one I've seen. I'd love to see your chapters, like in two days ;O

I loved all of this chapter. (:

The rose, wow. I didn't know about that meaning. You learn something new everyday. And I did. Thank you. Then the ending. Oh my, I loved the little smiles between Edward and Bella. He got to move closer to her. I'm so happy.

When is the next? This story is my favourite Twilight one over here. I cannot wait a week. Two days?