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Penname: Tookie83 [ Contact]
Real name: Elizabeth
Status: Member
Member Since: April 07, 2009
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25/f/delaware
loved the Twilight Books
didn't loved the Twilight movie when put up against the book, but on its own the movie was great! lol
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i love this site, there are so many great writers here, is amazing.
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Summary: Edward is an underground fighter using the ring as an outlet for his pentup rage. Bella is a college dropout running from her complicated past. Their paths collide when Edward is beaten and left for dead. Rated M for LEMONS. CANON PAIRINGS. AH. OCC.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 21 Completed: No
Word count: 155821
[Report This] Published: May 04, 2009 Updated: October 31, 2010
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: July 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: I Am The Prince And The Pauper
wow... just wow.. thats awesome.. and she didnt even ask him how much he got or anything.. thats such a Bella thing. I love this story, truely.
Summary: 
Bella is a 25 year old Editor's assistant in New York City. She has been a casual observer in life, never really actively participating in it.
Edward is a 25 year old tattoo artist who enters Bella's life and knocks it off its hinges.
Will Edward be able to open Bella up to life and all it has to offer, or will she shut him out and return to watching the world happen around her?
(Thanks to Shug for the AWESOME banner!!)
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No
Word count: 52545
[Report This] Published: May 12, 2009 Updated: May 01, 2010
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: June 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Moving Forward
so cute... keeping a picture of her tattoo like that
Summary: Bella's a workaholic editor with no time for herself. Edward can't get over an incident from his time as a soldier.
When Bella is in an accident and slips into a coma, Edward rents her old apartment, only to find that her still living spirit is haunting him!
With both Edward and Bella hiding dark secrets from their pasts, can they ever figure out why Edward is the only one who sees her?
A comical and angsty EXB Crossover of "Just Like Heaven"
Categories: AU-Human, Crossover Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No
Word count: 33222
[Report This] Published: May 12, 2009 Updated: September 19, 2009
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: June 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Verisimilitude
i like it, they are getting pretty close Author's Response: =) ya, they are!
Summary: Living on the streets is hard for Bella Swan but not as hard as putting up with Edward Cullen when he drags her into his world of sex, drugs and rock’n’roll. She needs a lucky break and he needs an image make-over. Will they be able to help each other out before they kill each other?
Banner by Shalu
Kick-ass banner by Irritable Grizzzly.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Jacob
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 39 Completed: Yes
Word count: 343376
[Report This] Published: May 14, 2009 Updated: August 20, 2010
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: December 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 23: Reunion
yeah .. your chapters are wwaaaayyy too far away from eachother to have a cliffie like that!
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: January 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 24: Stand-Off
wow... the chapters are coming slow but they are OH SO GOOD. the dynamic between ALL of your characters is so awesome.
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: June 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: The After-Party
OH GOSH...cant wait for the next chapter-- too good... i love their banter
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: September 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Unforgivable
wow, i love this story and was waiting, desperate for another chapter. this was more than i could of hoped for but im uneasy now about whats going to happen... please update soon
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: September 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Aftermath
dammmmmmmmmmmnnnnnnnnnnn.... sheesh...
i just want to say that i f*in love this story, you were able to capture the characters and create a complicated plot line in just 18 chapters and it works.
Summary: A smutty one shot that turned into a two shot that Tochunadu and I wrote just for the heck of it... And hey, maybe we'll add more... Who knows!
Since I have a major thing for Rosalie, sometimes my imagination runs away with me and she ends up naked with Bella... Ah, if only... ;)
Hope ya'll enjoy it!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes
Word count: 8596
[Report This] Published: May 16, 2009 Updated: June 06, 2009
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: June 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Girl's Night - Rosalie's POV
i think you should continue with the story... even if it is just a bunch of one shots
Summary: Bella's life is turned upside down when her best friend's family moves away and her parents are killed in a car accident. What happens when Bella's life is again intertwined with the Cullen's?
Thanks to LoisBlue for the AMAZING banner!
Nominated for an Indie TwiFic Award in the category of: Most Romantic Moment !!!!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Phil, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes
Word count: 85507
[Report This] Published: May 20, 2009 Updated: August 15, 2009
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed 
Date: June 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Hangover
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I THINK YOU SHOULD DEFINATELY PUT IN THE STORY WHERE EDWARD FINDS OUT WHAT HIS RING TONE IS ON BELLAS PHONE!... PROBABLY BEFORE OR AROUND THE TIME THAT FIND OUT THEY LIKE EACHOTHER *** CAUSE YOU KNOW THATS WHATS HAPPENING :) )
I LOVE THE STORY! Author's Response: That would be funny!
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: June 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Surprise/Good-bye
omg.. i love this story and relationship and the nervousness between bella and edward
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: June 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Heart & Soul
oh geez... argh... he must really be on some mission to find himself or he is really stupid not to know she loves him
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: July 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Jacob
oh damn,.. i cnat wait for the next chapter.. that was awesome. im tired of seeing laurent or james as the bad guy... im glad you changed it up
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: July 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Confessions
damn you lol..... he loves her.... yeah!
Summary: Bella Swan has everything... billions of dollars, her own private island, and a beautiful loving girlfriend. What happens when Edward Cullen finds his way back into her life? Can he tame her? Does he want to?
Rated for lemons and (future) violence.
B/R, B/E, B/Jake, B/R/E, R/Em, A/J
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie, Tyler
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No
Word count: 58975
[Report This] Published: May 25, 2009 Updated: August 23, 2011
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: June 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
wow just wow..
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: July 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
that was just weird... it came out of no where and kind of made no sense.. there was no build up... sometimes thats a good thing.. but here it was just confusing as hell Author's Response: Confusing? Have you read the whole story?
The build up? There are hints everywhere and to my knowledge, there's nothing cryptic about any of it. Reread the WHOLE story then let me know if you're still confused.
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Summary: 
Bella Swan applies for the job of PA to the rude, arrogant Hollywood film star Edward Cullen.
Can Bella keep her feelings for her boss in check so she can do her job?
A/H, OOC, luscious and graphic lemons and bad language.
A million and one thank yous to Rachel1313 for the spectacular banner! You are my hero, bb!!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges: Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 52 Completed: No
Word count: 473901
[Report This] Published: May 26, 2009 Updated: March 28, 2011
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: December 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 25: Playing by the Rules
daaaaammmnnn.... way to go Edward .. pulling out the big guns
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: June 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: The Interview
awsome... i love it Author's Response: Hey,
Thanks, i'm so glad that you like it!!
Jax x
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: June 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: First Impressions
awww...now i cant wait till the next chapter..damn damn damn Author's Response: Ha ha!
It's on it's way i promise!!
Thanks for the review!!
Jax x
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: June 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Acting the Part
I LOVE THIS STORY ITS GREAT! Author's Response: Thank u so much!!
I'm thrilled you like it!!
Jax x x
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: March 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 39: Italy (Part Two) - Family and Places
wow, so adorable
Summary: 
It's basically a retelling of Twilight, with a few twists. Edward isn't the only one who can hear thoughts. Bella can also, but like Edward there is that one exception...him. What happens when she learns their secret? And what happens when the Cullen's find out that she already knows? Written from Bellla's point of view.
Set during early 2006.
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Laurent, Mike, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges: Series: The Daybreak Saga
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes
Word count: 89577
[Report This] Published: May 28, 2009 Updated: October 15, 2009
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: July 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: 7: Three
im sooo dying to read the next chapter!
Summary: Bella is a bartender in Port Angeles when a beautiful stranger walks through the door of her bar. Kind of parallel to the Port Angeles chapter in Twilight, except for, um, the ending.
Lovely, fluffy, giant lemon. Very,very NC17 and slightly OOC.
Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 5546
[Report This] Published: June 01, 2009 Updated: June 03, 2009
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: June 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Closing Time
wow , that was good, but i think you should continue the story
Summary: 
One stormy Seattle night, the last person Bella expects to see appears without warning at her door. How will history - hers and his - impact their unexpected and growing friendship?
FitV art by Touchstone.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes
Word count: 97977
[Report This] Published: June 05, 2009 Updated: August 27, 2009
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: July 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: In Which the Cart Is Put Before the Horse
daaaaammmmnnnnn they would be good together if he could lay off the drugs
Summary:  All Human AU – Shy, overprotected Bella Swan lives an unassuming life with her religiously zealous mother, Renée. When she has a chance meeting with town hellion Edward Cullen, Bella begins to realize that perhaps the sheltered life she’s been leading isn’t so much a comfort as it is a cage. 
image by vanessarae
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: No
Word count: 112575
[Report This] Published: June 09, 2009 Updated: December 14, 2009
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: July 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 - A Song in the Front Yard
I JUST LOVE IT KEEP IT COMING
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